On it, if you can gave a basic ideas on what side I could add a bit more to it. Also I got a bit confuse on your last statement can you dumb it down for me just a bit. So I can understand
On it, if you can gave a basic ideas on what side I could add a bit more to it. Also I got a bit confuse on your last statement can you dumb it down for me just a bit. So I can understand
Last edited by Ismail2002; December 31st, 2021 at 08:20 PM.
He's the third Imam of (most) Shi'a denominations, so he could use a skill that reflects his spiritual primacy (maybe some sort of Magic Crest denoting his inheritance from the Prophet). You mention that he represent his follower's defiance against tyrants, so maybe in addition to Avenger, you could add some sort of Anti-Tyrant skill. Also, his death is arguably the most important event in his legend, so perhaps he should have some Skill or NP that activates when he dies or something along these lines.
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Just tidy it up, like this.
"The great painter of Greece, Apelles answers your call... At least that's what I'd like to say. How unfortunate that you were to summon me in this Class, as a mere fallen artist whose brush can only conjure scenes of tragedy and despair. Yet somehow, I sense that you've chosen to put your faith in me even knowing the curse I've been saddled with. That makes me happy, truly. My patron... I can only pray that when you meet your end it is a gentle death, and I promise to stay by your side depicting your last moments."
Foreigner of the Deepest Black:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Apelles
Alignment: True Neutral
Alternate Classes: Lancer, Caster
Armaments: Paintbrush and the Blackness.
Strength- D
Agility- D
Endurance- D+
Mana- B
Luck- C-
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Existence Beyond The Domain- A
A Skill inherent to the Foreigner Class, asserting one's existence outside of time and reality. Foreigner is partially resistant to physical and mental damage, as his true self exists far beyond the reality perceivable by humans. This defense can be bypassed if the attacker themselves is connected to "something beyond man", like by possessing the Divinity Skill. Housing a fragment of the Blackness from the Stars, Foreigner's body itself becomes a "brush" to dye the world in the ominous color he witnessed.
Divinity- B
Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. At this rank, it's suitable for a Demigod- a mixed-race of divine and mortal. The Blackness from the Stars is not a god, yet as a primeval being that existed since the beginning of the universe its status surpasses all but the highest of them. A compromise affords Foreigner this level of divinity.
Insanity- N/A
A Mental Pollution-like skill gained from contacting an evil god that can easily erode the fragile common sense and morals of humans. However, the main qualification for the Foreigner class is to defy this erosion, either by maintaining their integrity as they descend into madness, or instead of being consumed by madness, they consume the madness itself. As Foreigner's distorted mentality is better expressed through his Calumny Skill, this has been lost.
Personal Skills:
Presence Concealment (Atelier)- B
A reclusive and nervous individual, Foreigner was known to obtain feedback for his work by secluding himself in his atelier and eavesdropping comments from passersby. Whenever someone pointed out a detail amiss he would secretly correct it that very night. This Skill serves as a composite of Presence Concealment and Territory Creation, allowing Foreigner to suppress his presence to a nadir so long as he's in an area he designates as his painter's studio. A perfect ability for an eccentric artist who'd rather be undisturbed in his work.
Atramentum Astra- A
The blackest shade of ink in all the world. Foreigner was known for using a special black varnish in his paintings to both preserve and soften their color, creating an effect that was hailed by the historian Pliny. However its recipe was kept zealously guarded and lost with Foreigner's own death, making the true nature of his ink a mystery.
In truth he found a mysterious scrap of amorphous pitch-black material one night while staring up at the sky for inspiration to his work. Entranced by the marvelous pigment that stood out even amidst the starry night Foreigner learned to extract it to use in his paintings. Unbeknownst even to Foreigner himself this was actually a fragment of darkness from the stars, creating a shade of black that didn't exist anywhere in the known universe.
This Skill allows Foreigner to manipulate all the color black in the universe through his brush. He can expel waves of inky darkness (with a faint starry pattern) from it, dive into shadows and enter a pocket dimension through them as well as refill his brush by drawing in sources of black from his surroundings. In the darkness of space where effectively infinite "black" exists this Skill would reach its full power allowing Foreigner to dye the world itself as his canvas.
Calumny- B+
Falsely accused by a jealous rival Antiphilus Foreigner almost faced execution by his patron King Ptolemy himself. However the light of truth shone through at the last moment as the conspiracy was uncovered and Antiphilus given to Foreigner in slavery for his treason. This became the inspiration for Foreigner's famous allegorical painting "Calumny" that depicts an innocent youth menaced by four figures of Ignorance, Envy, Treachery and Deceit.
While this was only a brief episode that he overcame due to the Foreigner Class manifesting Apelles at the lowest moments of his life it's been brought forth as a Personal Skill. Resentment, slanders and ridicule perpetually swirl around Foreigner, yet those very unsightly emotions become the ink dying his brush that he wields to cut a path through the dismal wastes. Even if the only scenes he can paint are full of darkness and despair, he will continue to lift his brush while praying for a light at the ends of the distant horizon.
Similar to the Avenger Skill Apelles is empowered in proportion to his own negative emotions and those directed at him, sublimating his own suffering into the impetus for his artwork. His brushstrokes grow fiercer and more vigorous as if every strike were meant to banish his inner demons. However this induces a severe instability in his mindset as he constantly hears voices in every shadow accusing him and criticizing his work.
Noble Phantasm
So here's the Foreigner sheet I'd been talking about. Thought I'd try my hand at an alternate Class of Apelles and it was a toss-up between this and Assassin but ultimately I decided to emphasize the "otherworldly dark" angle. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 21st, 2023 at 10:41 PM.
Starting the new year with a Foreigner by Royd? Yes, thats good.
Neat little connection, reminds me of your other painter Foreigner, just less creepy. I always like it when you can add seemingly unrelated terms into skill names for a servant, like Sub Rosa or now Atramentum Astra. Overall nice start in the new year
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Source: Gesta Danorum.
Class: Lancer.
True Name: Mithotyn.
Alignment: Lawful Evil.
Place of Origin: Scandinavia.
Face Claim: Kain, Blood Omen 2: Legacy of Kain.
BACKGROUND: Some have said that the Norse gods were not Divine Spirits originally, but humans who ascended to such a state through the power of their sorcery and the worship of their people. It’s also said that there was a time when Odin, dishonoured by Frigga, abandoned his kingdom in shame; and that at such a time, a sorcerer of unknown origins called Mithotyn pretended to be a god and tried to seize the devotion of the Norse in order to usurp Odin’s rule.
That is the legend, but it is not the truth.
Some say he did not seek rulership for himself, but merely to restore proper worship of the gods by replacing indiscriminate offerings and sacrifices with tributes and appeasements directed to specific deities. They say Mithotyn sought not to replace Odin, but to ensure he didn’t greedily devour all of his followers’ faith and instead shared it with his brethren, as was only just and proper.
That is not the truth, but it is closer to it.
It is true that Mithotyn sought to destroy worship in the gods, but not for power; not for himself, at least. The truth is that Mithotyn loved the idea of humanity, but despaired at the reality of human beings, vulnerable and fearful. What he wanted was to elevate all of humanity to the status of gods, for all human beings to see and acknowledge the divinity in themselves.
He failed. His words fell on hateful ears, his actions seen as courting the wrath of the gods. He was run out of Norse lands and forced to take refuge among the Finns, but even there he was hunted and, finally, executed.
That was not the end of his story, however, for nothing is as bitter as love turned to hate - even the hollow love of one who would be a saviour; such a force is strong enough to make even the dead wake in their graves. In his living death, all those who came near his barrow died sudden deaths. The stories aren’t clear if he slaughtered all those people himself, or if it they died from a miasma that spread from his grave; regardless, it was certain that he wanted to punish the living for his murder. It was only after his body was taken out of the mound, beheaded, and staked through the breast with a wooden spear that he was forcibly put to rest, his story ended.
Until now.
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: B
LCK: E
NP: A+
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance – A-.
Due to a combination of his Class container, the strength of his legend as a sorcerer who defied the Norse god of magic, and his current existence as a haugbúi (“barrow-dweller”, an undead creature), Mithotyn boasts of a surprisingly high Magic Resistance for a Heroic Spirit of the Lance. However, his nature is a double-edged sword in that it renders him more vulnerable to spells that specifically draw on the power of the sacred and the divine, particularly spells that target existences understood as “undead” (even if they originate from different Thaumaturgical Foundations); against those spells, his Magic Resistance is useless.
Personal Skills:
Staves Creation – C++.
The Skill to create sacramental wooden staves with which blood is sprinkled on the altar and the worshippers during a blood sacrifice; as long as he has the magical energy, Mithotyn can instantly create as many of these staves as he desires. Made from the branches of the sacred tree at Uppsala, these staves are strong, sturdy, and deadly, possessing enough mystery they can stand even against the weaponry of legend wielded by Servants. They are his main weaponry and can be used even as thrown weapons, although they start disappearing shortly after leaving his hands.
Norse rites of worship are intrinsically tied to Mithotyn’s legend, but not as acts of devotion to the gods; rather, regardless of his real motive, they were acts of opposition. As such, the staves he creates have inherent anti-Divinity properties, being especially effective against enemies associated with the gods in proportion to the level of association.
Undead Walker – B.
A Skill denoting one’s existence as a draugr or haugbúi, a revenant. In Mithotyn’s case, it’s been weakened by the uncertain nature of his barrow-curse in the legends: did he really return as an undead killer, or were the deaths caused entirely by sorcery that lingered after his death? As such, he doesn’t have any of the powers commonly associated with the undead in Norse tales, such as bewitching eyes or shapeshifting, or even the monstrous strength of such creatures. However, myth and truth both agree that his power lasted beyond death; thus, Mithotyn is granted an undead body that allows him to continue fighting with no penalties regardless of the state of his body and even after suffering fatal wounds, as if he had the Battle Continuation Skill at Rank A.
Witchcraft – B.
Knowledge of seidr, the shamanistic magic of the Norse people, even older than the Rune Magic of the god Odin. It teaches a wide variety of spells, but its specialisations are blessings, curses, weather control, divination, communion with spirits, and illusions. While Mithotyn’s full sorcerous might isn’t displayed in the Lancer Class, he is still a powerful mage, capable of feats that would amaze any modern magus; however, his magic has been warped to fit the legend of “Mithotyn, the barrow-dweller who defied Odin”, and thus deeds such as “saving your Master from life-threatening injuries” might prove themselves beyond him at the most inopportune times.
Noble Phantasms:
Terror ZoneA Land the Gods Left Behind, A Sky of Cloudy Fears
“Even in his death his abominations were made manifest, for those who came nigh his barrow were cut off by a kind of sudden death; and after his end, he spread such pestilence that he seemed almost to leave a filthier record in his death than in his life: it was as though he would extort from the guilty a punishment for his slaughter.”
- Saxo Grammaticus, Gesta Danorum, Book I (trans. Oliver Elton)
Type: Barrier.
Rank: A.
Range: 1-10.
Max. Targets: 50.
By invoking this Noble Phantasm’s true name, Mithotyn recreates the spear* which was used to forcibly put his barrow-curse to rest (the real reason why he is summoned in the Lancer Class) and releases said curse once more unto the world.
* Feel free to imagine this scene as him pulling the spear from his breast Utena-style.
What Terror Zone does is create a Bounded Field composed entirely of curses made manifest through Mithotyn’s magic. While inside this area, which covers over a dozen metres, all living things are targeted by his rage and hatred and suffer continuous damage as the mass of curses attacks their life forces directly. Regular humans will die almost instantly as all their life-sustaining processes shut down, and even magi won’t fare much better (even the strongest Circuits can’t reject that much energy all at once). Servants can somewhat resist the damage depending on their END and MGI Parameters and assorted Skills, but unless they have some form of immunity to curses, even they can’t withstand such an assault for long as the energy that composes their spiritual bodies is continuously shaved off.
“Face claim” for Terror Zone: High Lord Wolnir, Dark Souls III.
Those who survive the initial onslaught will soon discover Terror Zone has another aspect to it, one reflective of the uncertain nature of Mithotyn’s barrow-curse in the legends: did he really return as an undead killer, or were the deaths caused entirely by sorcery that lingered after his death? Just as it’s impossible to know if those deaths were caused directly by Mithotyn or by his curse, it’s impossible to know if Terror Zone is a mass of curses or Mithotyn himself; thus, the Bounded Field created by this Noble Phantasm is simultaneously considered a part of the existence known as Servant Mithotyn. While inside this area, Mithotyn can display an ability close to True Magic by sidestepping in between space (in practical terms, teleporting), which allows him to both evade and deliver attacks at a speed that can be matched by few even among heroes of legend. Even abilities that sense his presence can’t help; the entire Bounded Field is perceived as if it were Mithotyn himself.
When fighting in this manner, Mithotyn usually wields the spear which once defeated his barrow-curse (although he can also use it in combination with one of his staves at the same time). This spear is a deadly weapon that is nearly on the level of a demonic sword of legend in terms of piercing and striking power; moreover, as the physical manifestation of the legend of his killings, it can’t be destroyed as long as Servant Mithotyn still exists. However, exactly because of those legends, it can be stolen and used against him; not as a way of invoking Terror Zone, but as a weapon, one that would be extremely lethal to him.
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My entry for the latest MCaS contest. Figured I'd also share it here!
Last edited by SpoonyViking; August 17th, 2022 at 06:52 PM.
For such an ultra-metal servant its only expected it appear in both threads.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
True Name: Odysseus
“Building the future and keeping the past alive are one and the same thing.”
Alignment: Neutral Good
Class: Archer
Place of Origins: Ithaca, Greece
Traits: Brynhildr's Beloved, Greek Mythology Males, Humanoid, King, Male, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
Attribute: Earth
Parameters:
STR - C
END - A
AGI - B
MGI - B+
LUK - EX
NP - B
Class Skills:
Personal Skills:
Noble Phantasms:
Notes
Last edited by Bugs; January 2nd, 2022 at 04:59 AM.
holy shit. Thats great. Every skill, every NP is nicely weaved from his story and just encapsulates his whole journey perfectly.
I hope you will release more of the time capsule you call google docs, because I wanna see more.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Legitimately a better Odysseus than canon Odysseus.
Top-level creator's note
Saber of the Kraton
-- Prophecized Hero of the Java War --
Class: Saber
Other Classes: Rider, Lancer, Caster, Assassin
True Name: Diponegoro
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: Indonesia (19th century)
Parameters:
STR: C
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: A
Likes: Traditional dishes, smoking and collecting cigarette brands, strategy games
Dislikes: Civilian casualties, politics, failing other people's hopes and expectations
Talent: Guerrilla warfare, inspiring others
Natural Enemy: Hendrik Merkus De Kock
Armament: Sword, daggers
Catalyst: A letter to his family, his weapons
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Lore
Description
Relationships
Bond CE
Creator's Notes
Last edited by BnEl15; January 2nd, 2022 at 01:05 PM.
I knew you were working on something big. Your radio silence is always a hint that you finish a sheet.
Guess you are working on a Sg or LB or whatever. Looking forward to that one too.
So many trying their hands on this stuff. Good times to be reading here.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
My favourite part of that Odysseus is the gundam unicorn gif.
(As someone who recently binged gundam unicorn)
Last edited by NINE-lives; January 2nd, 2022 at 03:14 PM.
Ave, stranger.
I address this letter to no particular person. I have written a great deal of letters: some to my learned friends in Rome, historians and philosophers. Some to less-learned but not therefore less-beloved friends, such as Martialis. Sometimes I have even had the pleasure of writing to Emperors.
I mention this not to brag, but merely to establish this: if I wished for this letter to be read, I would have known where to send it. But I do not wish for this letter to be read. That said, I found myself needing to write it nonetheless.
If you, stranger, have somehow found this in the scraps that I have asked to be scattered and burned upon my death, it speaks to some higher force pointing you towards this thing. Allow me to hope that it will absolve you, then, of this higher power's attentions, much as I wrote it to absolve me of my experiences in the incident of my uncle's death.
First, I must tell you that if you have ever read my letter to Publius Cornelius Tacitus, or the account he has composed on it, you have a generally accurate reporting of the facts such as I know them. However, this reporting is woefully incomplete, missing one crucial fact.
The volcano erupted; this is true. From the highest tip of the Vesuvius an enormous cloud of unusual shape appeared. What my uncle, in his last moments before departure, swore me never to mention is that the cloud writhed with a ghastly rhythm, like a living thing.
Yes, I am still sure of what I saw that day. That enormous plume of deadly-hot ash took on horrible, terrible shapes which I cannot bring myself to recall, even on the rare occasions I am brave enough to remember the event at all.
My uncle, upon seeing this damned thing, shared my fear, my horror. But, quite differently from me, he also had a keen interest in this phenomenon. It was this same interest in all knowledge that drove him to wrote the Naturalis Historia, this same interest that drove him to collect every facet of knowledge that man had ever gathered; this same interest that was to lead him into the disaster, in order to study this most horrifying of beasts, and to lead him to be recorded into the books of history forever.
The beast I refer to, which my uncle told me with forced gaiety he hoped to record in the final pages of his encyclopedia, is one not of this Earth. Of that I am sure, and ancient records that I have found confirm this - it is something from beyond the stars. If, as the motto goes, 'per aspera ad astra' - through suffering we reach the stars - then I shudder to imagine what we will find there...
Here the letter abruptly cuts off. At its edges it is singed, rendering the rest of the text illegible.
The Adventure of the Velvet Room (Sherlock Holmes/Persona) (SB, FFN, AO3)
Blog with all of my Servants so far.
once I read the intro line with Uncle, I knew it is about Pliny. I considered making him a Foreigner too, tho for another reason. I luckily discarded the idea.
An interesting take on him. I would personally not do this God, because it is pretty recent (1988), but ignoring that the connection is neat. Tho if there is no real connection between them other than mere glimpses, then imo he would be on the foreigner-level of Gilles.
Still, nice sheet.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Hi first time posting in this thread and I really like making OC Servants and have some I've created already so... yeah!
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Region: Scandinavia
Gender: Female
Height: 145cm
Weight: 37kg
Likes: Handsome men and beautiful girls who are easily manipulated, being praised, causing pain
Dislike: Feeling Pain, being ignored, her half-brother
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: E
Agility: C
Mana: A+
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: A
Class Skills:
Item Construction: CBecause she lacked focus on the creation of items, Caster's capacity in Item Construction is largely limited to the production of objects that assist in Necromancy.
Territory Creation: AA magus from the Age of Gods, Caster has an excellent capability to create a temple for use as her personal base of operations.
Personal Skills:
Necromancy: A
A skill pertaining specifically to the resurrection and manipulation of the dead. At a rank of A, permits the free manipulation of all corpses Caster is able to acquire regardless of their nature. In order to take revenge on her family on behalf of her mother, Caster warped the island of Oland into a nightmarish land of corpses and slaughtered her half-brother and his companions. Only a single man survived.
Elven Grace: C
A skill which denotes Caster as one who possesses the inhuman blood of the Elves of Norse Mythology. A fascination-type effect of particular intensity. Caster's manipulations are all the more coercive and require considerable mental fortitude to resist. Caster's mother was a beautiful elf who was violated by her father, and on discovering the true nature of her parentage she swore vengeance for this act of brutality.
Affinity for Spirits:C
The capacity to naturally summon and command numerous spirits, including low-ranking elementals. Caster's army was not merely composed of the dead, but also of numerous spirits and other entities she had coerced into her service.
Noble Phantasms:
Darkness Nightmare Capital
Oland
Rank: B
Type: Bounded Field
Range: 1-60
Maximum Number of Targets: 1000 people
A bounded field that recreates not the land of Oland itself, but rather the conditions and status of the island as it was during Caster's brief reign. Rather then seeing it as a kingdom to govern, Caster instead saw it as yet another tool to be utilized by her for the purposes of revenge. The kingdom was warped into a dark land of shadow and cold filled with corpses and monsters. A nightmare capital of the dead that existed for the sole purpose of slaughtering Caster's half-brother, Hrolfr Kraki. Requiring considerable time to establish due to its nature as a replication of a kingdom that has long disappeared, Oland's chief benefit is in allowing Caster to summon portions of her undead army at will. Rather than being restricted to the raising of modern dead, or of what human undead she is able to conjure, this Noble Phantasm permits the manifestation of undead wyverns, giants, trolls, and even an undead dragon. Of course, her undead are far weaker then they would have been while alive, but that certainly does not mean they do not pose a considerable threat. Within the bounded field there is no light, and temperatures are well below freezing. A luck check is required for Servants to avoid a rank down in physical parameters. The terrain within the bounded field is also considered to be Caster's kingdom, permitting her a Staging Ground bonus.
The Elven Princess's Heinous Maneater
Great Quilled Boar
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Army:
Range: 1-50
Maximum Number of Targets: 100 People
The greatest and most terrible monster among all the abominable creatures in Caster's army, which saw the battle that ended with the dead of Hrolfr Kraki and his companions. An abominable maneater, the Great Quilled Boar is a phantasmal beast that subsists on devouring flesh. Its skin is composed of interlocking quills, and in its eye sockets there burns fire. It is capable of unleashing its quills as projectiles, and its razor sharp tusks and thundering hooves can destroy even sturdy targets. Even its teeth are a sharp as swords, and its hunger for human flesh drives it on and on to search for victims. Indeed, the monster barely heeds Caster's commands, and instead will seek out humans to devour when summoned. This renders the abominable creature barely controllable, and thus Caster is reluctant to summon it unless she finds it absolutely necessary.
Lore: A half-sister to the legendary Hrolfr Kraki, of the Hrolfs Saga Kraka. She was born as a result of Hrolfr's father, Helgi, violating her mother. As a baby she suddenly appeared as if abandoned before her father, who reluctantly had her raised as part of his family, having forgotten his act of brutality entirely but understanding that he had some kinship to the child. As a child, Skuld was uniquely gifted in regards to her charm and in the practice of Scandinavian magecraft, or seiðr. Without any knowledge of her origins, Skuld was an innocent girl who regarded the world around her without malice, though she did grow increasingly aware of her own ability to manipulate others she did not knowingly intend to cause harm. This changed when she entered her teens, and had an encounter with her mother. Whether she questioned her mother on the matter of her birth, or if her mother simply told her, Skuld learned of her true origin and was horrified. Her horror became anger towards the human side of her family, and she began to plot to take revenge on behalf of her mother. Whether her mother intended for this outcome or simply desired to see her daughter is impossible to know.
Securing her marriage to Heoroward, she began to turn him against her half-brother, who reigned as King of Denmark while Heoroward ruled as a lower King of the island of Oland beneath him. While she was not entirely without affection for her husband, she viewed her use of him as a tool to be a priority over her marriage. Convincing her husband to aid in her rebellion, Skuld used Oland to build a great army of undead, spirits, and phantasmal beasts. She cloaked the island in darkness and cold in order to hide her forces from the mainland, and eventually launched an attack on the King of Denmark and his companions. Though they fought long and hard, Skuld's necromancy allowed her to raise the dead over and over and eventually she slew Hrolfr and his companions with overwhelming numbers. However, her husband perished in the same battle. She was not without remorse over his death, but the satisfaction of having claimed victory far outweighed what ever grief she felt.
Her victory was short-lived, as a single man among Hroflr's companions survived, and planned revenge with the Queen of Sweden. After a brief rule of Denmark, Skuld was deposed and captured. Her last moments were in utter agony as she was tortured to death, cursing the blood of Denmark and Sweden's royalty until she breathed her last.
Skuld is a cruel and callous princess, fitting the image of a clever and confident young rich girl who uses her charms to destroy others. She is arrogant and confident in herself, a wicked seductress who will eagerly use others to achieve her goals without a second though. Both the living and the dead are considered to be tools by her, albeit in different ways. And yet in spite of all this, she is perhaps far too eager to seek praise and appreciation from her Master. In spite of deriding them as her subject who should be serving her, she will also insist they praise all she does. Masters who do so, and do not act in a manner she disapproves of, will find themselves earning the Elven Princess's good graces surprisingly easily. Those she takes special liking towards may even be raised to the level of a 'special' subject whom she takes great care towards. Even those Skuld feels some level of affection towards will still find themselves targets of a girl who both seduces and mocks, a sadist who enjoys making others squirm, and a manipulator whose words could always have a double meaning.
In spite of this behavior as a confident seductress, Skuld is surprisingly self-conscious about her own petite figure. It is best not to mention such things to her.
Notes: I actually can't find the source I got the Great Quilled Boar from anymore, which makes me wonder if it was ever part of the myth in the first place. Still, I'm kind of reluctant to get rid of it since I think it suits her lore well.
Last edited by VitaVitaAR; January 2nd, 2022 at 07:28 PM.
For your first sheet that is really impressive! Your doodle too, looks good! Been a while he had someone that made their on FC
You have a nice style of writing, formatting is simple yet unique (i suggest a line of space between skills), you get to the point and paint a nice picture of your servant.
A job well done.
You already use imgur, so use the bbcode function and show us your art. If you are still shy about it you can hide it in the SPOILER tag instead.
Looking forward to more of you works
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Thank you! I really really enjoy making original Servants, so it really makes me happy the first one I've posted on here has come out so well. There's something about interpreting myths and history as part of the Nasuverse that's just really fun.
What lore? That Nasu once played Demonbane and said Nyarly is just like BB? Aka a bragard that loses to human dick
I really don't remember anything aside from "I am a genius! Oh no!" Twinmyniad. Which happens like all the time BB tries playing villain, she overshoots and fucks it up because she gets arrogant and because she wants to lose and be proven wrong deep down
He is a trisckster who likes to drives humans to self-destruction just to test them and who sees BB as a kindred spirit. He's willing to lend power just to mess around with humans. His host possesses the trait of eroding reality. He is connected to eclipses/dark side of the moon and the Third Eye. He has autorithy over manipulating time and gaining luck. He's able to peek into our universe despite being outside of it... I think that's pretty much it.
As i want to be finding back to my creative paths here is a servant inspired by an article in a history magazine i read during the last days \/
"Albert Johnson"
(Faker)
" I am Albert Johnson , further intel is not neccesary"
Height: 184 cm
Origin: Canada ?
Alignment:Variable
Attributes: Variable
Weapons: shotgun, Rifles,several Knifes ,a Machete , a Axe , traps ,spiked boots , a heavy backpack, plus ... ?
Other qualifying Classes:Assassin,Berserker,Watcher ?
Likes:Soltitude , being unbothered , untouched dense forrests
Dislikes:being bothered , being forced to interact with other
Compatible Masters: Kiritsugo Emiya,Maiya Hisau
Parameter :
Strenght: D+~B+ Endurance:C~A+ Agility:C+~A+ Luck: E~A+++ Mana:C~B++ NP:EX
Demeanor withhin a Grailwar
Skills
Noblephantasm
Notes Explanations
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; January 5th, 2022 at 09:24 AM. Reason: typo
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