a name of high recognition should not rely on extra class shenanigans
at least in most cases
good thing i have no clue about this part of history
a name of high recognition should not rely on extra class shenanigans
at least in most cases
good thing i have no clue about this part of history
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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RULER
"Mediator, you say? I suppose that does make this the lesser of two nuisances."
Last edited by Random; May 27th, 2022 at 02:38 PM. Reason: i fucking suck at proofreading lmao
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i love the color scheme for some reason. Time to update my own format a bit with new stuff.
Sheet itself is fine, pretty powerful NP, gives me Kamera vibes
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Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Source: Prismsmasher
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Joseph Bologne
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: France (18th century)
Parameters:
STR: B
END: D
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: C
Height: 165cm
Weight: 145lb
Likes: Fencers, music
Dislikes: Racism
Talent: Writing music, fencing
Natural Enemy: Marie Antoinette
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A sword that is also a violin bow
Catalyst: The manuscript to one of his opera
Class Skills:
Item Creation (False) C: He isn't capable of creating items, but he is able to patch this up by simply utilizing this to summon music-related items from his Legion St-Georges.
Territory Creation (False) C: As he is not a magician, he can't create a standard territory. However, every member of the legion St-Georges has a mini-Bounded Field enwrapping them, which fuse as they move closer to each other. The territory encompassed is a Music Hall, weaker then a Workshop.
Personal Skills:
Fencing A: He was renowned as an extremely skilled fencer, incredibly fast. This is a skill that permits him to more easily use the sword, and grants him rank-ups to Strength and Agility whenever he is facing down a single servant.
Protection of the Music Gods (Fake) B: Due to being a great composer of his day, he gains a fairly high rank of this skill, enabling him to more easily hear music. In addition, any heroic spirit with music-related anecdotes in their noble phantasm will have their true name found out very quickly by him.
Nature of a Rebellious Spirit D: He joined the French Revolution so as to be able to remove the racist laws. However, he was removed from being able to do it after only a short time, though in that short time he gained much acclaim.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Legion St-Georges
Violins, Play Fortissimo
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The sublimation of two groups he played a major part in, the Legion St-Georges and the Concert des Amateurs. When invoked, it summons a set of glowing figures, the violin section of the Concert des Amateurs, who due to the fusion also wield swords that are violin bows. They are capable of playing music that is able to sway the emotions easily of anyone who hears, but they can also be tasked to attack Saint-Georges' enemies with their bow/swords. It is this noble phantasm that places him within the Caster class.
Lore:
Joseph Bologne, the Chevalier de Saint-Georges was a famous fencer, violinist, and music composer. He was known to be incredibly fast and skilled at fencing. People were shocked when he was in the violin section of an orchestra, as they only knew him for fencing, but he became concertmaster and then music director of that orchestra. When the french revolution began, he chose to fight for the revolution, but because he continued playing music while the revolution was going on, he was removed from it, and tried to apply for it several more times but failed.
Personality: A competitive and friendly person. Whenever he meets someone new, he wants to fence with them, and is exasperated that people don't think he is capable of fencing because he is a Caster class. His goal is to end all racism, but he believes it would be made pointless by wishing for it, so instead his wish for the holy grail would be that he could have remained in the french revolution. Then, he believes, he would have been able to end racism.
Relationships:
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart: "A pleasure to speak with you. What is your favorite technique for composing opera?"
Chevalier D'Eon: "Ah, my dear Chevalier. How have you been? Shall we have a sparring match? Yes, I'm a caster. No, I won't lose here."
Marie Antoinette: "You claim your kingdom was so beautiful, when you trod on so many of your citizens?"
Last edited by jishara; June 2nd, 2022 at 09:52 PM.
Bologne: Pretty good take on a more martial-inclined Caster. Swordsmanship in itself doesn't feel like the kind of thing that's worth classifying as a Skill though. Given he was a duelist and it is an important part of his legend I'd give him a more unique Fencing Skill that grants bonuses while using a sword in single combat. His NP being a military legion fused with violin concerto is a cool bit of imagery. Reminds me of what I did with my Gabriele D'Annunzio.
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Foreigner of Oneness:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Damascius
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Alternate Classes: Caster, Ruler
Strength- D
Agility- E
Endurance- D+
Mana- EX
Luck- C
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Existence Beyond The Domain- EX
A Skill inherent to the Foreigner Class, asserting one's existence outside of time and reality. Foreigner is partially resistant to physical and mental damage, as his true self exists far beyond the reality perceivable by humans. This defense can be bypassed if the attacker themselves is connected to "something beyond man", like by possessing the Divinity Skill. Foreigner is connected to Azathoth, the god who dreams at the very center of existence. Thus he's afforded the very highest rank in this Skill.
Divinity- B
Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. At higher ranks one reaches the level of a Demigod- a mixed-race of divine and mortal. Foreigner is host to an entity he worships as "God" and whose fitful dreams birthed all creation, thereby possessing a rank worthy for an ambassador of divine will.
Insanity- N/A
A Mental Pollution-like skill gained from contacting an evil god that can easily erode the fragile common sense and morals of humans. However, the main qualification for the Foreigner class is to defy this erosion, either by maintaining their integrity as they descend into madness, or instead of being consumed by madness, they consume the madness itself. Due to being overwritten by his God Is One Personal Skill, this hallmark of the Foreigner Class has been lost.
Personal Skills:
God Is One- A++
An absolute belief raised to the level of a Personal Skill. Having devoted himself to serving a god he recognizes as utterly one and beyond human knowledge Foreigner is immune to any effects that would induce wavering or division in his thought-processes. Additionally at this rank the traits of his god are partially ascribed to Foreigner's body, rendering him a "single indivisible being" and thereby granting resistance to attacks that would sever his "oneness" such as slashing or piercing damage.
High-Speed Incantation (Eldritch)- C
The capacity to recite spells at high speeds. Being a mathematician as well as a Magus Foreigner achieves this result by compressing his spells into mathematical formulae, greatly streamlining their casting-time. In this Class his incantations will contain bizarre and incomprehensible symbols that strain the mind and sanity of those who hear them and warp the fabric of reality around Foreigner, although he himself is unaware of this finding them perfectly logical.
Last Counter-Offensive Of Paganism- D
A Skill Foreigner possesses from allegedly authoring the Pseudo-Dionysian Corpus that was sometimes considered the last gasp of Pagan mysticism against the encroaching tide of Christendom. Foreigner's presence passively strengthens spells, mysteries and artifacts originating in the Age of Gods while weakening those from past the death of Christ. However he has a low rank as it's unclear whether Foreigner actually had any role in penning the text, this being merely a disputed theory.
Noble Phantasms
So here's a Foreigner remake of my old Damascius Servant. Had a few ideas that I wanted to put into the original but wasn't sure how to write at the time. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 25th, 2023 at 10:57 PM.
Hi Royd, thanks so much for your feedback. I really like this Damascius! Especially NP 1 works very nicely.
Last edited by jishara; May 27th, 2022 at 04:57 PM.
Damn. Immediately after Euclid gets me hyped, someone posts an Azathoth connected Servant. I might have to pause the Grand/Beast thing to post my Foreigner now hahaha.
I like Damascius but he seems pretty straightforward for a Foreigner. I feel like a key part for them is "fear of the unknown", and in every canon case, exactly what they can do is left kind of vague. Qliphoth Rhizome and Friday the 13th aren't exactly clear on what's happening, just that it's horrifying, and Hokusai and Van Gogh both make use of "alien geometries" and vague concepts like imaginary number art. I think that bit of flavor helps with the fact that it's tough to write something truly horrifying. Bringing it back to Damascius, his abilities don't carry quite the hlmysteriousness that canon Foreigners have. With his stated abilities he just seems like a glorified Caster. Logoi Paradoxoi is a good example of the horrific mysteries, but it seems like a much more minor part of his kit. I do really like the idea of combining the "all is god" (basically the root) thing with Azathoth, as well as him reaching into Azathoth to get whatever he needs.
I dont remember the first version but i am personally not a fan of this one. It feels kinda generic because azathoth is generic. I wouldve liked it more if you chose some other outer god or even none at all. I believe you couldve pulled off a francis e dec vanatos style foreigner here.
The choice of god makes the sheet lack flair. You made him eldritch but without style. Like giving some servant Magecraft as a skill and not telling us what kind they practice.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Source: Bayanghitam on Deviantart
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Tlahuicole
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Tlaxacala (16th century)
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 190cm
Weight: 180lbs
Likes: Honor
Dislikes: Dishonoring himself or his tribe
Talent: Bringing honor
Natural Enemy: Christopher Columbus
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A pair of tomahawks as tall as him
Catalyst: A statue of him
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement EX: He was never known for having gone insane in life, but his obsession with honor has taken him over in this saint graph. He is understandable, but genuine communication between him and anyone is nigh-impossible.
Personal Skills:
Military Tactics C: He was known for his incredible capabilities at leading armies. At this rank, he becomes far more capable at devising tactics for armies.
Release of the Captive A++: Montezuma released him, an act which had no precedent in the history of the Aztec empire. This manifests in a passive ability that causes him to, every time he is able to hit a certain amount of glory, gain a single guaranteed escape. However, he will rarely use this, because he usually thinks it besmirches his honor.
Battle Continuation B: He lasted through many mortal wounds inflicted for a fairly long time before finally succumbing. At this rank, he can still fight, even with deadly injuries, for a short time. But after that, he will succumb to them.
Noble Phantasm(s):
A Glorious Death
A Warrior Is Not Honorless
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 0m
Max Targets: Self
The sublimation of his refusal to have his honor stained, despite its beneficiality. It activates whenever Tlahuicole is in a situation which would strip him of his honor, whether it be accepting charity or assistance from another master, dying dishonorably, or any other thing he associates with stained honor. He flies into a rage, wildly swinging his weapon with massively boosted strength until the stain on his honor has been prevented.
Lore: Tlahuicole was a Tlaxacalan warrior who commanded his armies bravely. So when he was captured and brought in front of Montezuma II, he offered to release him, a first. But he refused to be released, so Montezuma sent him to fight an enemy of his in an attempt to stall his death. He won very easily, and returned successfully, but refused to either return to his people, with his honor besmirched, or be a traitor and work for Montezuma. So Montezuma begrudgingly had him tied to the stone of combat to fight an onslaught of the empire's best warriors. He killed eight and wounded twenty before finally falling, when a priest then exalted his name and sacrificed him.
Personality: A fierce warrior. He cares deeply about the honor of a warrior, thus he hates anyone who does not show honor. He loves working with and meeting brave warriors who are actually honorable. His wish for the grail is that he was never captured, so that he would never have aided the enemy by fighting the other group.
Relationships:
Christopher Columbus: "Honorless, greedy, cruel. You are what I hate most. Shall we battle? Winner destroys the other."
Geronimo: "Ah, a brave warrior. I deeply respect your power and honor. Would you like to discuss your favorite weapons?"
Marie Antoinette: "Oh honorable queen, your virtues have shone through. I deeply respect your courage and willingness to do what is right."
Last edited by jishara; June 10th, 2022 at 12:03 AM.
Tlahuicole: Very one-note character you have going on, although I guess it's explained by the Berserker Class and don't know enough about his legend to say how you might flesh him out. Does his NP have any effects except provoking him into a rage? Like does it boost his stats or anything?
"...Stats
Ah, so you're my Master.
Unfortunately for you, I'm not well suited for any particular task.
It would be greatly appreciated if you would grant me an early retirement to your Servant archives.
...
What's that?
Spatial shortage? Burning? Being fed to other Servants?"
...
Congratulations Master~☆!
Servant of class Foreigner has answered your call!
So long as our services are required, we shall begrudgingly do our best to serve you~☆"
Foreigner
Strength: D
Endurance: A
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A
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Last edited by TresserT; June 9th, 2022 at 02:10 AM.
Huh...a man and his waifu pillow makes for a surprisingly deep servant.
"Here we are. Out with the old, in with the new. Alright, partner, We're going West."
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True Name: Columbia
Class: Archer
Alt. Classes: Rider, Watcher
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Region: North America
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: B+
Agility: C
Mana: C
Luck: C
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance D
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Steady erasure of the previously high levels of mystery with the further colonization has resistance be much lower than expected.
Independent Action C
The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master; the ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master. Once a largely independent entity left to her own devices, she has become much more tied to the people, limiting her freedom.
Divinity D-
A skill that measures one's aptitude towards the divine. In the age where mystery is at an all time low, her divinity is also affected. She is in a unique as a representative of the divine yet also a sign of human progress.
Personal Skills:
Shifted Iconography C+
A skill that marks the change in portrayal that one undergoes in regards to visualization of their concept. Related to Innocent Monster. Summoned at the point from which she first depicted, she can truly take on the persona of the one who forwarded the progress and exploration of America, for better and for worse. Grants her the skills Manifest Destiny and Hero of Uncharted Lands (False).
Manifest Destiny A+
A motto prevalent during the days of American expansion. A belief of spreading the ideals of the east into the west, to remake the texture that settled within this stretch of land. A belief believed to be sanctioned by divine providence at the behest of the Goddess Columbia. A skill that changes objects into usable items such as tree bark into paper or iron in bullets or a revolver. She is limited to the time period of westward expansion.
Hero of Uncharted Lands (False) A
A Skill that denotes one explorer's feat of accumulating fame in distant lands, far from their own homeland. However, in this case, it is infamy. The one conceptually marked as the guide that paved the way for Westward expansion, inviting all to come. She would be entirely responsible for the acts of those she brought into this once unsettled wilderness.
Noble Phantasm
Personality
Bond CE
Creator's Note: Here's the next in line for the Columbia series
I remember from Paul Bunyan's FGO event that Goddess Columbia is a bunrei (Divided Spirit) of the Roman Goddess of Freedom, Libertas (enshrined in the Statue of Liberty). This one is an interesting take, but I feel like you're focusing on the Manifest Destiny stuff a bit too much.
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oh wait, she's part of a series? didn't remember any previous Columubia sheet, but she's an interesting figure to make a sheet for, so I'm looking forward to your alternate take on her.
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Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
Day 1 of Fate/last call Servantposting. Is it a bad idea to start right now? Probably. But by virtue of the fact that you're reading this post, I'm sorry to say that I've already done it.
FALSE SABER
"Forget my name. Burn my story. I don't care, I'll live forever, because I forged this world with my own hands."
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This is an interesting servant, I think she and my Mpu Gandring have a lot in common. Though, I excited on how she is going to played out in fate/last call. I also have an image that she would like in a similar way to Fiore from Apocrypha
Random how do you make bars?
A tag team between Mpu Gandring and False Saber would be absolutely terrifying, my god. Imagine the two of them hammering away at a single project like a cursed sword together.
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Oh, I just paste the █ character over and over to make a big long line.
█████████████████████████, see?
Each one is coloured individually to make the gradient effect.
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