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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Royd unironically endorsing moe guro
    For shame
    Now now, it's not as if I'm actually showing her getting crucified. I even dethorned (literally) the Crown to make things a little less gory.

    I have many fetishes, but guro is not one of them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I have many fetishes, but guro is not one of them.
    Damn.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Also, views on Ęthelflęd?
    If she was an actual Servant the amount of porn would be high.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    If she was an actual Servant the amount of porn would be high.
    It would fit her personality given her love of scandalous love affairs. And her 'sempai' infatuation with Nero and Jeanne could make for some hot Yuri.

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    On an another note (and it feels a little blasphemous to include this directly below porn speculations), I wonder how a 'Lily' version of Jesus could work? It'd be when she was younger and her powers hadn't fully ascended yet, nor matured to the point of claiming the title of 'Messiah'. (What I'm describing probably goes against Christian doctrine in like two dozen ways, but whatever...)

    One could use the (apocryphal) Infancy Gospels for inspiration, with stuff like shaping bird familiars out of clay and an NP based on taming a horde of dragons. Plus something to do with the Star of Bethlehem, which symbolized Jesus' birth and is thus more properly associated with his younger self. Seems a little interesting, in any case...

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    On an another note (and it feels a little blasphemous to include this directly below porn speculations), I wonder how a 'Lily' version of Jesus could work? It'd be when she was younger and her powers hadn't fully ascended yet, nor matured to the point of claiming the title of 'Messiah'. (What I'm describing probably goes against Christian doctrine in like two dozen ways, but whatever...)

    One could use the (apocryphal) Infancy Gospels for inspiration, with stuff like familiars out of clay birds and an NP based on taming a horde of dragons. Plus something to do with the Star of Bethlehem, which symbolized Jesus' birth and is thus more properly associated with his younger self. Seems a little interesting, in any case...
    Ya want Jesus Lily?

    Read this (x)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    If she was an actual Servant the amount of porn would be high.
    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    It would fit her personality given her love of scandalous love affairs. And her 'sempai' infatuation with Nero and Jeanne could make for some hot Yuri.
    Well I guess I had it coming.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Damn.

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    If she was an actual Servant the amount of porn would be high.
    Isn't that the best kind of approval.

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    Indeed. And man. Jesus is...um. Yeah.

    Dissappointed there's no mention of that time Jesus cursed a fig tree tho

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    I have a dumb fic idea to take two random Servants from here and just have them fight each other or canon Servants.

    Basically, badass versus in a narrative format.

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    Too much work though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    I have a dumb fic idea to take two random Servants from here and just have them fight each other or canon Servants.

    Basically, badass versus in a narrative format.

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    Too much work though.
    That'd be cool to see. But yeah probably too much work. plus my dialogue is even worse than my regular writing

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    I have a dumb fic idea to take two random Servants from here and just have them fight each other or canon Servants.

    Basically, badass versus in a narrative format.

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    Too much work though.
    Who out of interest?

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    Quote Originally Posted by JetKinen View Post
    Isn't that the best kind of approval.
    I'll still take it.

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    Martha refuses to babysit Jesus Lily because he keeps bullying Tarasque and murdering children for messing up his sand castles

    Archer Jesus Lily with the Gifts of the Magi might actually be interesting, I'm being infected with genderbend degeneracy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Martha refuses to babysit Jesus Lily because he keeps bullying Tarasque and murdering children for messing up his sand castles

    Archer Jesus Lily with the Gifts of the Magi might actually be interesting, I'm being infected with genderbend degeneracy.
    The more people talk about this, the more I actually want to write it up. Expect another sheet from me in the next couple days!

    Not sure if the Gifts of the Magi would really be NP-worthy, to be honest though. Weren't they just stuff like myrrh and frankincense?

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    obviously, its magic myrr and incense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    The more people talk about this, the more I actually want to write it up. Expect another sheet from me in the next couple days!

    Not sure if the Gifts of the Magi would really be NP-worthy, to be honest though. Weren't they just stuff like myrrh and frankincense?
    You turned Christ into a loli.
    I have faith in your abilities.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JetKinen View Post
    obviously, its magic myrr and incense.
    Yeah, from a quick search it does appear like the three gifts had (unsurprisingly) esoteric significance of some sort, though just what seems rather contested.

    I could probably scrounge up something NP worthy from that with a little effort (and research).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    You turned Christ into a loli.
    I have faith in your abilities.
    ...I appreciate the compliment?

    Also, I might actually want to find a more mature FC for my current Jesus sheet, since Jesus Lily (should she be made) is going to be full-on loli.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    I'm being infected with genderbend degeneracy.
    I've made a load of servants and I've only done three proper genderbends. Technically I did two more but one was a pseudo servant while the other gender bend was canonical.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post

    Also, I might actually want to find a more mature FC for my current Jesus sheet, since Jesus Lily (should she be made) is going to be full-on loli.
    Good call. I want biblical canon out-of-control kid jesus.

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    @Ęthelflęd: Didn't pay attention to the Stats (rarely do), but I really liked the character. That "False Avalon" snippet really did its job.
    @Jesus: Meh. The Touhou fandom did it first and better.

    Also, please, use tags or something. Forum thread posts really shouldn't be that absurdly large.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Good call. I want biblical canon out-of-control kid jesus.
    Since it's apocryphal I would hardly describe it as Biblical 'canon'. Also, for some reason I can't find any female Jesus artworks that aren't loli...

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    Finally curbed my laziness enough to write up a sheet. I still have Catherine II in the works, but don't really have a good idea what to do with one of her NPs. In any case, I was really surprised to find out that no one did this guy yet.

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    Source: (X)
    Class: Rider (Alternatively Saber, Archer or Caster)
    True Name: Ivan Tsarevich
    Alias: Tsar's Son
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Origin: Russian folklore
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    Russia



    Height/Weight: 171cm/59kg
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Riches, beautiful women, adventure
    Dislikes: His brothers, evil monsters
    Talent: Being taken care of by others, messing shit up
    Natural Enemy: Kashchey the Immortal
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Human
    Armament: Armor, Sword, Birdcage, etc.

    Class skills:

    Magic Resistance:
    (C)
    Measures one's capability in defending against attacks or weapons containing magical properties. It is a different skill from resisting magical energy, as it cancels spells all-together. At this rank, the owner can cancel spells with a chant below two verses. However, he cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. Normally, Rider would possess a much higher rank due to being a hero who has numerous legends in which he faced powerful sorcerers and beasts of magical nature - but due to not being summoned into the Saber or Archer class, it seems his Magic Resistance has dropped in effectiveness. In particular, in Russia he is famous for his rivalry and grand battles against the evil sorcerer Kashchey the Immortal alongside having fought other witches and dragons, therefore due to his own adventures he has developed a high magic resistance naturally impossible for a Servant of his class.

    Riding: (A+)
    Measures one's ability to use vehicles and beasts as mounts. At this rank, creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon-kind. Having been summoned into his strongest class, there is no doubt that Rider is a hero who has great feats of taming or using various Phantasmal Beasts as his mount. Some of the mounts he possessed in life include a large magical wolf who could shapeshift and speak, a flying magical horse given to him by Baba Yaga, a magic rug similar to that of Aladdin's legend, etc. Despite his low parameters, as far as his prowess as a Servant of the Rider class goes, there is no doubt that he is a top tier Servant - truly embracing the notion that Riders are Servants who depend on powerful Noble Phantasm(s) rather than close combat.

    Personal skills:

    Deus Ex Machina: (A)
    A term used to describe a plot device in which a seemingly unsolvable problem is suddenly solved by the intervention of a new character, event, ability or object. It is a personal skill of Rider's who's stories were famed for their ridiculous ways of granting a happy ending to Rider. Upon his manifestation in a Holy Grail War, Rider will be under the constant protection of mysterious forces that not even he can comprehend. The applications of this skill are as follows: whenever Rider finds himself in a dangerous situation which he cannot escape out of himself, his LCK stat will be raised accordingly to defy fate and achieve a result most favourable for Rider - if the situation calls for it, he could even receive such a high ranking in the LCK parameter that it will no longer be measurable and thus deemed EX rank in value. Because of this, under normal conditions Rider's LCK parameter is nil and entirely obscured on his parameter sheet. Rider himself is too foolish to realize it, but perhaps the mysterious force that watches over him with such care could be one of his many sorceress wives or even the evil witch Baba Yaga herself.

    Mystery Killer: (A)
    Describes one's talent when it comes to fighting enemies of supernatural origin and consequently prevailing in battle through adequate means. The stronger his enemy's Mystery is, the more capable in battle Rider will become - but at the same time he has absolutely poor compatibility with Servants of modern origin or even Servants that are similarly mystery killers like him because Rider himself is a hero who's rank of mystery is ridiculously high. Rider is famed for battling against many supernatural beings during his life such as the powerful Sea King, faeries, dragons and most importantly, the evil sorcerer Kashchey the Immortal who's origin is anything but human. In various stories, his actions resulted in the defeat of non-human entities, granting him a high rank in this skill.

    Avaricious Foolishness:
    (B)
    A skill that denotes the weakness of one's mental fortitude when it comes to being swayed by pretty things. Though his resistance to attacks of magic origin is high, Rider himself can be with no mistake called a complete fool who is easily swayed by shiny things, therefore his mental fortitude in resisting any type of incitement aimed at him is as poor as it can be. In numerical value, you can say it's easily a clear zero. His sanity is not lost, but he will quickly become disobedient and try to obtain any shiny item or pretty woman he sees even when being strictly told of the consequences, making him a pain in the ass type Servant for his Master. After-all, Rider is someone who often disregarded words of warning in his legends and tried to have his way with things, giving his wives and friends massive headaches. At the same time, this skill has it's benefits for Rider himself because it can be said to have the same capabilities as the Archer class skill Independent Action of the same rank.

    Awarded Hero: (A+)
    A skill that denotes the existence of a hero who was born to receive. From the moment of his birth, Rider is loved by many and he will never find himself desiring an item, for his wives and allies will make it a personal task to give Rider whatever he desires. For Rider, this skill has a particular way of being applied. Whenever he desires something, Rider will only have to wish for it and afterwards go to sleep. After he wakes, he will see that the item he wished for has appeared mysteriously. More-so, this does not necessarily limit itself to small objects because at this rank, Rider can indirectly affect the state of the modern world through his wishes. For an example, if he wished for a bridge on a location that does not have a bridge, after sleeping he will wake up to the bridge being present. This is the crystallization of Rider's legends in which his wives granted him anything he wished for as long as he asked for it and spent a night sleeping.

    Charisma: (E)
    Natural talent to command an army. Leadership skills increase, but the morale of troops decreases extremely. Charisma is a rare talent, but in rare cases, there are things that can affect the personality development of the owner. In the case of Rider, this resulted in a ''Perfect Prince'' whom no one can leave alone as they will likely feel an uncontrollable urge to take care of him - as seen by how his wives were quick to pander to any of Rider's wishes as long as he gave them a sad glance. You could quite literally say that Rider is the personification of the notion that ''little brothers are more loved by their parents'' that many older siblings carry - considering Rider himself was the youngest of the three and his legends always ended in the most happiest result for Rider himself but very unfortunate endings for his two older brothers. Hell, not even the evil Baba Yaga could resist taking care of Rider.


    Noble Phantasm(s)


    mеч-кладенец
    Self-Swinging Sword of Steel


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C+
    Range: 1~2
    Max. Target: 1 person

    A fabulous magic sword that can be found in many old Russian tales of folklore. It is one of the numerous magical artifacts gifted to Rider in his tales. Upon his summoning as either a Servant of the Rider or Saber class, this sword is granted to him as one of the many Noble Phantasms he can choose from. It is a sword that acts as if it was sentient and had it's own will. As such when he wields this sword - no matter the lack of his own talent or the capability of his enemy's talent - the sword itself will force Rider to swing at the enemy in angles most favourable in the situation. By seemingly it's own will, the sword analyzes the situation, finds the most suitable measures of counter-attacking against the enemy and makes Rider swing it accordingly - because of this, no sword swing is wasted despite Rider's own lack of skill.

    When he is summoned as a Servant of the Saber class, the sword would retain it's ability to slay dragons and be adequalty boosted by his enemy's draconic attributes - the more he battles such enemies, the more the sword will absorb the mana of his enemy and release it in a scorching wave of flames similar to that of a dragon. On a side note, the sword itself seems to be derived from the sword of Theseus because in it's nature, it is the same ''hidden sword'' meant to be found by a hero, for an example, under a rock. Due to this, if Rider were to fight with Theseus - despite his own's swords capabilities - there is no doubt that this sword would be broken by it's predecessor.


    Баба-яга
    The Little Humbacked Horse


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 2~30
    Max. Target: 150 people

    Simply named after its original owner, this is the magic horse given to Rider by the evil witch Baba Yaga in his quest to defeat the wizard Kashchev the Immortal - who similarly owns a magic horse to rival Rider's own. In another tale, is it the little humbacked horse that helps Rider become a hero and earn the hand of a princess from another land. It is a magnificent black horse that has attached four large wings to itself - an evil phantasmal existence that has clear advantage against other phantasmal beasts of it's nature as it was given to Rider with the purpose of slaying Kashchev's own magic horse. Though he also has a magic rug, this is Rider's preferred mount when it comes to aerial combat.

    Because it is the finest steed owned by Baba Yaga, this horse is deeply imbued with black magic to triumph over it's enemies. As such, it possesses a natural talent to enter something akin to an ''overdrive'' mode in which it's whole body is coated with black flame-like mana to charge and rip-apart it's enemies. Perhaps it is no different than the Mana Burst skill possessed by numerous heroes. And again, it is no secret that the flying magic horses that can be found appearing in Rider's legends were inspired by the older Pegasus who can be found in Greek myth. Because of this, Rider would lead a losing battle against Pegasus should he meet a hero that rides it in battle. Even so, this man eating horse would be a dangerous beast to face by anyone that crosses Rider's path.


    Пряжа Болл
    Path-Finder of Convenience


    Type: Anti-Concealment
    Rank: D
    Range: - (Varies on situation)
    Max. Target: - (Varies on situation)

    A ball of yarn that was given to Rider by an old man during one of his quests. It is a magical ball that will never run out of thread no matter how much of it is spread out. It's purpose is quite convenient to say the least. As a Noble Phantasm, it primarily functions as a path-finder for Rider. Upon the activation of it's true name, the knot of the ball will suddenly fly into a distance and show Rider the path to the object of his search as long as said object isn't located in a place that cannot be reached by normal means - such as alternate dimensions.

    The thread of the ball is visible only to Rider himself - though it doesn't take much effort for a Magus to sense a line of magical energy spreading out. Even so, the thread cannot be cut as it will simply reform itself and lead Rider to his desired path no matter what his enemy does. It is a ball completely similar to that of the thread of Ariadne granted to Theseus in Greek mythology. On the other hand, as far it's battle usage goes, it could be said to be quite the useless Noble Phantasm, but even then it has some uses. This is because Rider has developed a fighting style with it similar to that of Medusa - in which she entangles a certain area with her hair to prevent the enemy from escaping. It could be used as a type of spider net to stop enemy Magi from running away. It's completely useless against Servants though...



    Серый волк
    Shapeshifting Lycan


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: A+
    Range: 1~20
    Max. Target: 40 people

    Rider's dearest friend and his most powerful mount crystallized as a Noble Phantasm. A large, gray wolf that is capable of speech and possesses extreme strength and swiftness in combat. It is the wolf that ate Rider's horse during one of his tales and, in order to make up for it, decided to travel alongside Rider and help him in his tasks. It's true appearance is that of a beautiful woman. An entirely loyal companion, she has a tendency to bicker with Rider but she would never go against him. When summoned as a mount, her battle capability is so vast that she could easily tear apart a normal Servant in half. Furthermore, when summoned in forest locations specifically, her knowledge of the forest is strong enough to use the cover of trees to her completely advantage - leaping from one tree to another at incredible speeds while using them as platforms to bounce off of.

    Additionally, it is no secret that she is able to shapeshift into anything she desires, but her battle capability greatly decreases. She is the Noble Phantasm Rider is likely to use in ground battles and is, perhaps, the biggest reason for Rider's great combat strength. There is, however, another trump card that she possesses as a last-ditch countermeasure against the enemy. Should Rider ever receive a fatal injury while she is still alive - even if Rider is long dead - she can activate her true name and sacrifice her physical body to reset Rider's HP and bring it back to a 100% state. A crystallization of the part of their legend in which she revived Rider after his brothers had him killed and ripped to shreds.


    Жар-пти́ца
    Bird of the Faraway Land


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B+
    Range: 1~40
    Max. Target: 200 people

    In Slavic folklore, the Firebird is a magical beast from a faraway land that glows brightly like the sun and is the subject of numerous stories in legend. An extremely powerful offensive Noble Phantasm possessed by Rider, but it's true name can be activated only once. When it is not activated, this Noble Phantasm manifests as a small birdcage carried by Rider with a flickering flame in the middle of it. It can be used to illuminate dark places so it's usage can be quite convenient, but it's true purpose is for combat after-all.

    Once he releases it's true name, the doors of the birdcage will open and out of it will be released a large phoenix-like bird. A mighty Phantasmal Beast which's single feather can be said to contain enough explosive power to blow up a single apartment room. With a shriek, the bird will sky dive towards the opponent and upon contact burst out into a large wave of flames that can easily burn the surroundings to a crisp and scorch the earth. Similar to dragon-fire, though it is powerful, it's might is not concentrated into a single point but rather it's spread out across a wide range area so it's purpose is more-so for battles against armies than an individual. This is because an individual can defend with more ease against the flames by only contracting their defense to a single point - themselves.


    Lore
    One of the main heroes of Russian folklore. Usually depicted as a protagonist of many stories, he is often cast into a struggle against Kashchev the Immortal. Along with Ivan the Fool, Ivan Tsarevich could be said to be a placeholder name rather than the identity of a single hero due to the name of Ivan Tsarevich being used as the subject of various tales of heroism without direct relation to one another.


    Personality
    Rider is a cheerful individual who always desires adventure. He is a foolish person who doesn't consider the consequences of his actions and has a tendency to mess things up. He lives his life in a happy manner, indulging in riches and pretty older women on every turn. He has an annoying-type personality that makes him unable to sit calmly or listen to his elders. Always seeking adventure and causing troubles for his Master.

    He could easily be called the typical annoying little brother you wish you didn't have. More-so, he has a tendency to depend on others and look down on people, but at least he is a good and brave individual at heart. His wish for the Holy Grail is quite simple actually... All he desires is to be resurrected so he could enjoy another life chasing around adventure and women. In truth, he sometimes thinks of desiring to find out the truth of his legend - which life had Rider truly lived? There are so many stories about him that he himself is no longer aware of which story he comes from. But he would never wish to find that out from the Grail, simply because Rider is an idiot. Being held in the past is too ''depressing and difficult'' for Rider so he'll just wish for another life and make himself a new story he is sure of that he lived through.


    Tactics
    Because of Rider's personality, he needs to be clearly watched over or he just may go and get himself captured or killed. The Wolf could certainly help watching over him, but not even she has the control over what this ''idiot'' will do next. The most suitable tactics would be bribing Rider into your plans and making good usage of his Noble Phantasms in battle. It would also be wise to keep him out of reach from servants like Medb, since he'd fall in love with her and become her slave the moment he meets her.
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    This is an undeniably cool and well-made sheet, just like always, but 5 personal skills and 5 Noble Phantasms feels somewhat excessive to me.

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    Ivan: ...The king hath returned! Seriously though Adlet, your sheets are always some of the best around here so it's nice to see you've come back after a hiatus.

    With his insufferable personality and constantly relying on others, Ivan almost sounds like a more heroic version of Shinji Matou so I'm kind of morbidly curious how he would get along summoned by the latter. The five Noble Phantasms are a bit much, but you clearly intended him to be a "Rider Servant with tons of NPs and weak stats" like Perseus or Astolfo, so it's alright I suppose. Awarded Hero sounds like it could be kind of ridiculously broken if it really lets him wish for anything he wants the following day, though.

    I can only presume that doesn't include the likes of other Servant's Noble Phantasms? I think that Skill suffers from something of a lack of clear limitations.

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