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    Who would I summon in a hypothetical Grail War? Hmm... I'd probably go with either Don Quixote (2.0) or Vercingetorix. They both have exuberant, lively personalities that'd be fun to get along with and are powerful enough that I'd have at least a reasonable chance of winning the War. Plus they're both seriously cute girls so...

    As for my least favorite Servant? I'd go with my Simon Bar Kokhba is one of the ones I'm least satisfied with overall. I still like the basic idea and some parts of her NPs, but the personality felt clunkily written and the sheet as a whole was honestly rather rushed. Might rewrite it someday, if I'm struck with inspiration...

    My least favorite Servant(s) to actually summon would be just about anybody Evil-aligned, likely to either massacre innocents or stab me in the back the moment I'm no longer expedient.

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    Whelp, finally finished Rickenbacker. This is probably the last pilot I'm going to do, though. It's not easy making them different.

    Her personal history could probably use some work, given that she's remembered as male in history (i.e. hiding her gender a la Arturia), though a lot of gender-flips don't even give that much justification.

    "Which of your Servants would you summon for the HGW?"


    Probably Longinus. Rickenbacker would end up dragging me into everything, and I'd be way too tempted to defenstrate Voss.

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    Edina V. "Eddie" Rickenbacker

    Class: Rider
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Origin: United States Military- Aviation
    Region: Colombus, Ohio

    Parameters
    Strength: E
    Endurance: D
    Agility: A
    Mana: D+
    Luck: B
    NP: B+

    Height/Weight: 166 cm / 66 kg
    Gender: Female
    Likes: Racing, mechanics, adrenaline rushes, golfing
    Dislikes: Being looked down on, sexism, prejudice in general
    Talents: Golf, engineering, and flying
    Natural enemy: Pale Rider
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Human, Female
    Addresses self as: boku
    Armament: Colt Model 1903 Pocket Hammerless pistol

    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Riding: (B)

    The ability to ride modern vehicles and use animals as mounts. However, due to existing in a modern era, Rickenbacker is incompatible with magical beasts of any type. Almost all vehicles and mundane animals can be handled with consummate skill. Maneuvers that should be borderline impossible can be performed with some effort.

    Magic Resistance: (E)
    Cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat. This is only a feature of her class, as Rickenbacker had no contact with magecraft in life.

    Personal Skills:

    Eye of Mind- False: B
    A natural talent to avoid danger on the basis of an innate 6th sense, intuition, or prescience, where accuracy of instinct has been augmented by experience - somewhat overcoming the problem of visual obstructions that appear in the course of combat. The difference between Eye of the Mind (True) and Eye of the Mind (False) lies in that the former is an ability that humans can obtain through accumulation of experience. The 'False' version is superficially similar, but in fact represents a natural instinct that cannot be obtained regardless of effort or experience—even though experience can refine its accuracy.

    Capable of calm analysis of battle conditions even when in danger and deduce an appropriate course of action after considering all possibilities to escape from a predicament. So long there is even a 1% chance of a comeback, this ability greatly improves the chances of winning. Rickenbacker's quick reactions to changing circumstances in combat and powerful natural instincts that allowed her to become one of the greatest pilots despite a lack of experience both play into this ability.

    Clairvoyance: C
    A visual ability that is also called 'Eagle Eye'. This is generally a must-have ability of the Archer class. It is also frequently used during scouting. Simply looking from a high location is sufficient to fully survey a town and search for enemies. In addition, Clairvoyance will affect the accuracy of bows. It connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this Skill have acquired abilities such as precognition ('future vision') and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight (X-ray vision and so forth). It is a Skill furnished on the flesh.
    Capable of keeping track of fast-moving objects within a range of four kilometers. This skill derives from having been a pilot in the era before radar, forcing her to rely solely on her eyes.

    Bolt From the Blue: B
    The ability to attack suddenly and without warning. A servant with this Skill will have the initiative whenever they attack first, even if the opponent is on guard against such tactics. It is a cousin and opposite to Aesthetics of the Last Spurt, which grants the advantage to the one who moves second. As a B-class skill, Rickenbacker will have the ability to take initiative even from a disadvantageous position, provided she attacks first. Derived from her primary tactic of attacking from above and out of the sun, seeming to appear from nowhere and strike before the enemy has a chance to react.

    Protection from Arrows: A
    The ability to deal with projectiles, an increased defense against ranged attacks by predicting the projectiles' trajectories through exceptional means, such as hearing the sound of air being cut, or sensing the killing intent of the enemy.

    Rickenbacker is capable of avoiding all projectile attacks aimed at her through incredible natural instincts and the ability to track and calculate attack angles on the fly. Never once was she wounded in combat, and was only forced to take leave of the skies due to illness. Even should an attack be otherwise unavoidable, her ability to maneuver and connive a way out will find a way to defeat the attack.


    Noble Phantasms


    SPAD S.XIII
    Sky-Searing Flame Born Aloft
    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B+
    Range: Self, 1-50
    Max Target: 5

    The most elite fighter used by the United States in WWI, the SPAD was originally produced by France's Société Pour L'Aviation et ses Dérivés aviation company. Known for its incredible speed, surprising durability, and excellent handling in the vertical arena, the SPAD quickly became a favorite of American pilots in 1917-18 when they joined the war. The SPAD was also one of the first aircraft to pack incendiary ammunition, intended to set planes, with their wood and fabric construction, alight, making it much easier to kill opposing aircraft, as well as make it possible to bring down sturdy observation balloons.

    The SPAD S.XIII gives Rickenbacker a powerful battle mount. When using this Noble Phantasm, her Agility increases to A++, and her usual E-rank strength is replaced by that of a B+ Noble Phantasm thanks to the powerful machine guns of the SPAD. Unlike the Noble Phantasm of Werner Voss, the SPAD S.XIII is sturdy, and capable of flying with serious damage, and as such increases Rickenbacker's endurance to C-rank. In addition, bullets fired by the SPAD S.XIII have a 1/6 chance of setting the opponent on fire for continuous damage should they land, as every sixth bullet in the Vickers .303 was an incendiary round. Damage stacks with increasing hits, making tanking this Noble Phantasm a poor idea at best. The one weakness of this Noble Phantasm is the cost of maintaining it; given the fighter's poor range in life, the Noble Phantasm drains the Master's prana at an accelerated rate, and can only be maintained for a maximum of three minutes. When that time is up, the Noble Phantasm must be dissolved regardless of either Rickenbacker's wishes or her master's, and cannot be summoned again without at least six hours of rest.

    Machinist's Perogative
    Conception and Creation of Motor Vehicles
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E- to D
    Range: N/A
    Max Targets: 1

    As a young woman, Edina was extremely interested in mechanics and automobiles, taking engineering classes even while struggling to help support her family after her father's untimely death. She went into racing and repair of professional race cars, and was a 4-time competitor in the Indianapolis 500. She was later trusted by her company to design and build a race car in an English design for American races. During her tenure in the Army Air Corps, she also spent most of the early months as a mechanic before she proved that she could fly rings around anyone else.

    This Noble Phantasm is essentially Gradation Air for automobiles only. It lets her summon a car that she has blueprinted out or one that she used in life as a simulacrum of the real thing. The specs of the vehicle in question will be roughly the same as in life, unless extra care is taken in their design and construction, in which case they will be D-rank Noble Phantasms. An ability of convenience more than combat function, they can nonetheless be used for quick transportation, escape, and even mild offense at a much reduced prana cost compared to the SPAD S.XIII. All vehicles summoned by this ability are compatible with her B-rank Riding ability, allowing Rickenbacker to empower them to a limited extent.


    Lore
    Edina Rickenbacker was born in Columbus, Ohio, to Swiss German-speaking immigrants. From childhood, she loved machines and experimented with them, encouraged by her father's words: "A machine has to have a purpose".

    In what was to become one of the defining characteristics of Rickenbacker's life, she nearly died many times in events ranging from an early run-in with a horse-drawn carriage, to a botched tonsillectomy, to airplane crashes. Her first life-threatening experience occurred when she was in the "Horsehead Gang", a group of daredevil kids from her hometown. She lived near a mine, and they decided to ride a cart down the slope; it tipped over and almost crushed them.


    Her schooling abruptly ended in grade seven after the accidental death of her father on August 26, 1904. However, some sources claim that her father died after an altercation with another man in Columbus. Rickenbacker found jobs to help support the family, but driven by an intense admiration for machines, Rickenbacker taught herself as much as she could, including enrolling in a correspondence course in engineering. She aggressively pursued any chance of involvement with automobiles.

    During the War years, prior to the U.S. entry in the war, Rickenbacker raced for the Peugot and Maxwell racing teams, as well as managing for another team. She spent time in England designing a car by English standards for American races, but was scrutinized heavily by British intelligence and ridiculed by many for her Germanic heritage; this led to her hatred of prejudice of all kinds. She, however, altered her name (removing the "h" from the original spelling of Rickenbacher and replacing it with a "k"), which would soon become the way most Germanic immigrants would spell the name in America. She also posited the idea that race car drivers would make good pilots (as they were used to high speeds and cramped, difficult to control vehicles), but was ignored.

    Upon U.S. entry into the War, Edina entered as well. Allowed entry due to her mechanical expertise, she was passed over for pilot training repeatedly, but eventually showed herself too brilliant to be held back. She accrued a total of 26 confirmed aerial victories, the most of any American pilot during the war. Known for staging attacks on heavily armed and escorted observation planes and balloons, she developed a reputation as a tenacious and deadly flier. She earned three Service Crosses, one of which was later upgraded to the Congressional Medal of Honor, making her the most highly decorated airman in U.S. history. Post-war, she would go on to assist in pilot training and civilian aviation development, running her own aerial transport service until WWII, where she would assist in operations as both a figurehead and war hero and as a "face" operative for U.S. Intelligence. She passed away from illness in 1973 while visiting Switzerland, and was later interred in her hometown of Colombus, Ohio.


    Personality
    Strong-willed and opinionated, Rider will butt heads with just about anyone if she's given cause to argue. While this would normally lead to difficulty with her Master, her natural smarts and winning smile will often carry the day, and she'll drag them along for the ride. Using Command Seals to force her to do things she doesn't want is a terrible idea, and will usually backfire horribly. She gets spooked easily, but will power through it, as she was known for the mantra "Courage is doing what you're afraid to do. There can be no courage unless you're scared."


    Tactics
    Rider is best suited to hit hard and fast, doing damage as quickly as possible and trying for a quick victory, much as she did in life. If that is not possible, hit and run tactics, like most of her class, are the best option, as extended combat with her primary Noble Phantasm is not possible.
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    Rickenbacker: A cool aviator sheet that you've made, and definitely an improvement from Voss! If there was one thing I can nitpick is her Mana parameter. Unless the Servant is a Caster (doesn't always apply), usually those who lived near the modern age have low rankings, usually D or E.
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    Rickenbacker: Looks... Pretty cool, actually. I liked the Machinist's Perogative, a shame it's not called Unlimited Engine Works. So, if the cars summoned are some type of Gradation Air-made objects, can Rickenbacker 'break' them?

    On a very unrelated side note, I'm making a Gajah Mada sheet. It's pretty wank, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zh1212 View Post
    Rickenbacker: A cool aviator sheet that you've made, and definitely an improvement from Voss! If there was one thing I can nitpick is her Mana parameter. Unless the Servant is a Caster (doesn't always apply), usually those who lived near the modern age have low rankings, usually D or E.
    Thanks. I think I prefer Edina too. And yeah, that's fair. I figured since her secondary NP is basically psuedo-Magecraft, it'd be a tad higher, but I guess D+ would be better for that. I'll edit it to that.

    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    Rickenbacker: Looks... Pretty cool, actually. I liked the Machinist's Perogative, a shame it's not called Unlimited Engine Works. So, if the cars summoned are some type of Gradation Air-made objects, can Rickenbacker 'break' them?

    On a very unrelated side note, I'm making a Gajah Mada sheet. It's pretty wank, though.
    Believe it or not, the beta name for it was Unlimited Motor Works (after BMW, Barvarian Motor Works). So it kind of was, and I probably would have stuck with the name if I'd given her a reality marble And hmm... I honestly didn't think about that. I would say technically yes, but functionally no, because unlike a blade, there are a lot of moving parts to a car, so it'd be way more likely to explode before doing anything. So it'd probably only work if she tried it as a suicide move. Though she may be able to break a part of the car, like the front hood or the grill, and have that change somehow, but I don't think it'd do much that way.

    Given that Gajah Mada is kind of an Indonesian Alexander the Great, he kind of has to be xD
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    Quote Originally Posted by EonADS
    Believe it or not, the beta name for it was Unlimited Motor Works (after BMW, Barvarian Motor Works). So it kind of was, and I probably would have stuck with the name if I'd given her a reality marble And hmm... I honestly didn't think about that. I would say technically yes, but functionally no, because unlike a blade, there are a lot of moving parts to a car, so it'd be way more likely to explode before doing anything. So it'd probably only work if she tried it as a suicide move. Though she may be able to break a part of the car, like the front hood or the grill, and have that change somehow, but I don't think it'd do much that way.

    Given that Gajah Mada is kind of an Indonesian Alexander the Great, he kind of has to be xD
    ... I guess I have the Unwitting Revelation skill after all. I was about to type Unlimited Motor Works but it sounded off to me.
    I see, I see. I had this idea where Rickenbacker can just create a car, put it in a strategic place (bridge, building, etc) and just detonate the vehicle. I might be watching too much /Zero.

    Yeah, and an Archer Gajah Mada was made on the old thread. To be honest, I'm going to look like stealing some ideas from that, but let's see how weirdly balanced wank I can make. I'm making a Saber Gajah Mada, if you're curious.
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    Servant Lancer:

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    True Name: Psyche

    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Alternate Classes: Archer, Caster

    Strength- E
    Agility- C
    Endurance- B
    Mana- B
    Luck- C+
    NP- B

    Personality
    A plucky and optimistic girl, believing that love and hope can shine through in even the darkest of tragedies. While her earnest belief in human goodness verges on naivete at times- especially to those she's related to by blood- Lancer in general is a perceptive and astute woman difficult to fool. She is also incredibly resilient and tenacious in the face of suffering, willing to journey to the underworld and back for those she loves.

    As can be expected of someone who sacrificed so much for love Lancer is a passionate romantic, whatever maturity her demeanor possessed scattering hopelessly the moment love and romance enter the picture. Rather than chasing romance herself (her heart is reserved solely to Eros, after all), she enjoys taking the role of a "matchmaker" much like how her husband is seen in popular culture. As a matchmaker, Lancer is relentless and more than slightly obsessive in her mission of uniting others in love. Rivalry, instinctual animosity, family grudges spanning over a thousand years; Lancer will let no obstacle stand in the way of bringing together her desired couples.

    Perhaps unsurprisingly, summoned in the modern day she has also taken a fondness for fanfiction and the idea of "shipping".

    Having suffered greatly in life, Lancer shows motherly compassion to those who have been through adversity- particularly in love. Even though hers was a life overflowing with tragedies and curses, she does not regret anything. After all, if not for such a life- she never would have met her beloved Eros. Therefore she does not consider it a curse, but the greatest blessing in the world. Love is entwined with sadness, and will surely come as a reward to those willing to brave the hardships of life. At least, that is Lancer's adamant belief.

    Since she does not regret her life, Lancer harbors no personal need for the Holy Grail. Her wish is instead a purely selfless one- to insure that all those who struggled, suffered and sacrificed in the name of love are awarded with the happy endings they deserve.

    Likes: whirlwind romance, happy endings, Cupie-chan❤
    Dislikes: sad endings, when love goes unrewarded, pessimists
    Talents: perseverence in love, matchmaking (wanted or not), ...wax-play?
    Natural Enemy: Aphrodite, her sisters, Demon who loves Bad Ends


    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance- B-
    Spells with a chant below three verses are cancelled. Proves difficult to affect even by the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. Having confronted the supernatural on numerous occasions in her legend and always triumphed through a mix of divine aid and her own tenacity, Lancer possesses a high rank in this Skill.

    However due to the circumstances of her legend, Lancer's magical defenses suffer a penalty against spells originating from the Underworld.


    Personal Skills:

    Golden Rule (Body)- A
    Connotes possession of a pure and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. At this rank, it has surpassed earthly beauty to reach the level of a curse (fascination). Any who gaze upon Lancer are enthralled like moths to a flame, overcome with feverish passion and desire.

    Those with strongly disciplined minds, an innately pure and chaste nature or Skills guarding against mental interference at rank C or higher should be able to rebut her charms. It's worth noting that Lancer herself feels no pride in her overwhelming beauty, viewing the attraction it garners her as far closer to a curse.

    Divinity- C+
    Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. While Lancer had no true godly blood in life, her lover Eros begged for her to be allowed entrance into Olympus after her death. The gods heeded his request and Lancer was deified as the goddess presiding over the human soul, living out the rest of eternity alongside her adored husband.

    Even while alive, her great beauty led many to view Lancer as a human incarnation of the goddess Aphrodite. Though Lancer herself rebuked such impious praise at every chance she got, the conflation in her legend has been sufficient for her to be granted a higher level of Divinity than she would otherwise possess.

    Lover's Pursuit- B+
    A Skill for those who showed valiant perseverence in love. While fighting or journeying in the name of love Lancer obtains a rank-up to all parameters and a bonus to resisting mental hindrance such as pressure, weariness and despair. Even physical injuries and fatigue can be ignored, mimicking Battle Continuation at a low rank.

    After being abandoned by her lover Eros, Lancer wandered the lands of Greece for many months in hopes of finding him again. Suffering from heartbreak and wracked by the pains of pregnancy, she continued to trudge across barren fields and dank swamps- never once giving up on reuniting with her beloved. When offered three (later, four) impossible tasks by Aphrodite in order to prove her love, Lancer accepted the trials put before her without hesitating.

    For the sake of love she will surmount any obstacle, bear any burden and endure any indignity. Such is the resolve of a maiden in love.

    Princess Of Loveliness- EX
    A charismatic nature in regards not to leadership, but the ability to charm people around her. At this rank, Lancer's talent to charismatically inspire sympathy and favor in her surroundings can only be conceptualized as a divine mystery. Not merely knightly individuals, but animals and even inanimate objects are drawn to protect and aid her.


    Noble Phantasms
    Kerí Psychís
    Smoldering Sting Of Love
    (B, Anti-Unit)
    Lancer's Noble Phantasm and sole weapon is a simple waxen candle of the finest quality, lengthened and fashioned into the shape of a spear. A solitary flame blooms at the tip, burning inexhaustibly without need of fuel. It is the very same candle that in legend spilt burning wax on the shoulder of her divine lover Eros, dealing an agonizing wound which symbolized the broken trust between them.

    Having dealt an excruciating wound that temporarily shattered the love between Lancer and her godly husband, this Noble Phantasm carries both the concepts of "affliction" and "severing magical bonds", entwining the effects of a certain Celtic spearman's lance and Colchian princess' dagger. Despite its seeming frailty, strikes from her weapon will inflict scorching wounds that burn into the target's central nervous system, corroding their spiritual essence from within. Much like the pain of lost love, injuries left by this spear continually grow and fester- defying treatment both mundane and magical. Even the healing arts of Apollo prove helpless to soothe them.

    Secondly, those stricken by her
    spear
    candle
    will find their ability to supply Mana to outside sources severely crippled. Bounded Fields and Reality Marbles quickly lose stability and collapse, while familiars or magical constructs such as those created through Projection Magic crumble away like sand without Mana to support their existence. However the contract binding Masters and Heroic Spirits is exempt from this, being upheld by the Greater Grail itself.

    The only boon that can heal the damage dealt by this Noble Phantasm is "the power of love" in Lancer's words. Spending time with one they love more than anything will slowly alleviate the injuries of the afflicted, making them more responsive to treatment and healing Magecraft. Just as Eros finally recovered from his lovesickness upon reuniting with Lancer, so too does the presence of one's sweetheart work wonders in tending to the torrid wounds of passion.

    It should be noted that Lancer herself is just as vulnerable to the effects of her Noble Phantasm and thus must exercise great care in handling it.


    Persefóni Katára
    Concealed Curse Of Slumber
    (A, Anti-Team)
    The box supposedly full of magical beauty which Lancer retrieved from the queen of the underworld Persephone as her final task to prove herself worthy of marrying Eros. However, Persephone- who bore a long-standing rivalry with Aphrodite- had infused the box not with beauty but a potent curse from the underworld itself, bringing eternal slumber to any who opens it.

    By an unfortunate twist of fate, its curse instead befell Lancer herself. Beset by self-doubt on the final leg of her journey, she sought to use the box to rejuvenate her own disheveled appearance from months of wandering the wilderness of Greece. Instead an infernal sleep overcame Lancer, placing her in a deep and unmoving torpor. Only the last-second intervention of Eros himself who pled with the gods to have Lancer converted to one of their own saved her from an untimely and miserable end.

    That box is Lancer's second Noble Phantasm, still bearing the somnolent curse from when she originally received it. A beautiful box fit for a goddess, made of wood with delicate golden trim. Once opened, the box belches forth foul Stygian mist- the essence of the underworld- that forms a cloud over her surroundings, extending roughly ten feet in all directions before dissipating. Those within that range must pass a Luck check, else they fall into a deep and irrecoverable slumber. Once affected, the target immediately loses all consciousness and their bodily functions will gradually shut down- essentially undergoing the process of death in slow motion.

    Only a powerful healing Noble Phantasm or Magecraft at the level of the gods can rouse the target from their dark sleep. By its nature as a curse this Noble Phantasm can also be guarded against by Magic Resistance, providing a chance of recovery with rank A or higher negating the mist's effect entirely.

    While this Noble Phantasm is powerful it is also indiscriminate, posing just as much danger to Lancer herself or her allies. Flinging it open and then running like Hell is the most straightforward option, but even that is obviously risky. The best option would be if Lancer could someone trick the opponent into opening the box themselves while she is safely outside its area-of-effect. However few participants in the Grail War would be so foolish as to open a gift bestowed by an enemy, while Lancer is too honorable to pull such a trick on one who has already earned her trust.

    Once its contents are unleashed, this Noble Phantasm is wholly emptied and becomes nothing more then a mundane box without phantasmal properties.



    Key Words/Craft Essence


    A Maiden's Secret
    "The boy looked into the older man's eyes, marvelling at their feral intensity.
    The man stepped forth, wrapping his muscled arms around the younger boy's supple waist.
    Whispering words of love into the boy's ear, the man's lips drew ever-closer to those of his partner...
    Passion and desire overflowed wildly, a savage and ecstatic climax of emotions."

    Voila and presto! My masterpiece Ritsuka x Beowulf fanfiction is finally complete! Now to just hit send and ignite the hearts of readers worldwide with eros...!

    ...O-oh hi Master! I d-didn't see you come in.
    You really should knock before just barging in like that you know... n-not that I have anything to hide of course!

    T-that text on my computer screen? You saw it?
    Y-you and Beowulf doing... t-this and that together?
    Master wait, I can totally explain!

    As the bride of Eros, uniting people in love is simply one of my divine duties.
    So, in a way you can think of this as practice!
    By depicting love in all its myriad forms, I learn more about how to guide lovers in reality.

    That deadpan look...
    Y-you didn't buy my explanation at all, did you Master?!?

    F-fine... I'm a shamelessly rotten girl who cooks up perverted BL Doujinshis to satiate her own lust!
    ...Are you happy now, Master?
    Are you satisfied having prowled through a maiden's darkest secrets so shamefully?!?

    H-huh...?

    ...You don't mind?

    As long as I'm doing something I love, you're okay with it even if you don't feel the same way?
    R-Ritsuka, you really are way too kind...
    Even if you're not my beloved Cupie-chan, I'm lucky to have someone earnest and gentle like you as my Master.

    ...

    ...

    But seriously, please knock next time.
    Not that I mind Master's presence, but it's rude to intrude on a maiden in her inner throes of passion.




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    So, this is a sheet that's been in the works for quite a while. I really feel quite satisfied with it, having worked on and touched up quite a few things. The only other Psyche sheet I've ever seen was the one by Funderful on the old thread and while I was inspired in places (such as the name for her Lover's Pursuit Skill) I tried to go for my own take as well.

    As you can obviously see, I've also decided to experiment with a new formatting style (inspired mainly by Adlet and Funderful's). Feel free to tell me how it looks, y'all! And of course, comments and critiques are always welcome.

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    Psyche: Another good sheet from you once more! Honestly, I've never think of the candle as an NP, but you definitely nailed that one. As for the format of this sheet, I would say it's much better than the previous versions, with the portions bracketed giving it a more organized feel.
    The best part of this sheet is the Goddess of the soul being a closet-fujoshi.
    The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zh1212 View Post
    Psyche: Another good sheet from you once more! Honestly, I've never think of the candle as an NP, but you definitely nailed that one. As for the format of this sheet, I would say it's much better than the previous versions, with the portions bracketed giving it a more organized feel.
    The best part of this sheet is the Goddess of the soul being a closet-fujoshi.
    Thanks! And I'm really glad you liked the formatting, since I liked it a lot more as well. May even go back and adjust some of my old favorite Servants to fit the new style... And as to the candle NP... the only alternative I could think of would be giving her Eros' bow and arrows of desire, which is both kind of obvious and something I'd already seen done in Funderful's Psyche sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Thanks! And I'm really glad you liked the formatting, since I liked it a lot more as well. May even go back and adjust some of my old favorite Servants to fit the new style... And as to the candle NP... the only alternative I could think of would be giving her Eros' bow and arrows of desire, which is both kind of obvious and something I'd already seen done in Funderful's Psyche sheet.
    Understandable, as the Arrows of Desire and the Coma-Box were the closest things relating the Psyche.

    Oh, since your interpretation of Psyche is a self-proclaimed Matchmaker and consoler of Love, how would she react to my Ulrich Von Liechtenstein? As the latter is a heartbroken knight who was spurned by his Lady in the worst way possible.
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    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Psyche: You never cease to amaze me with these sheets. The candle lance is a bit unexpected, but it fits.

    And I thought I'm the only one that likes Psyche because she's a closet fujoshi.

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    On the subject of relationships and burnt bridges, I wonder how will Izanami react to her.
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    Psyche: First off, that Lyndis picture you used is gorgeous, Royd. Great choice. Part of me wonders how she would use the Coma Box after she has emptied it. I mean, magic box. Gotta have some kind of extra utility.

    The whole Closet Fujoshi section had me laughing a lot. That and the "...waxplay?" bit under "Talents". My sides hurt now xD

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    ... I guess I have the Unwitting Revelation skill after all. I was about to type Unlimited Motor Works but it sounded off to me.
    I see, I see. I had this idea where Rickenbacker can just create a car, put it in a strategic place (bridge, building, etc) and just detonate the vehicle. I might be watching too much /Zero.
    See, I always figured that breaking an NP required direct contact with it. EMIYA never, for example, shoots a sword and herds his opponent towards it before breaking it as a trap. It requires that you shove a lot of prana into it, if I remember correctly. So I think only a Caster could potentially Break their NP at a distance.
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    Quote Originally Posted by EonADS View Post
    Psyche: First off, that Lyndis picture you used is gorgeous, Royd. Great choice. Part of me wonders how she would use the Coma Box after she has emptied it. I mean, magic box. Gotta have some kind of extra utility.

    The whole Closet Fujoshi section had me laughing a lot. That and the "...waxplay?" bit under "Talents". My sides hurt now xD
    The Lyndis picture was a large part of my inspiration to write up the sheet, actually. I had the candle = spear idea before then, but seeing it depicted visually helped a lot. And I'm glad you appreciated the humorous aspects I tried to insert in. Speaking of which, did y'all get that Urobuchi is listed amongst her Natural Enemies?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Speaking of which, did y'all get that Urobuchi is listed amongst her Natural Enemies?
    Madoka is no tragedy. PRAISE THE GODDESS

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    The movie is a tragedy. Way to destroy a perfect ending.

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    Rickenbacker: Considering she relies on hit-and-run Rider tactics that B rank in luck is going to come in useful, although the second Noble Phantasm does make some sense I imagine it's more or less to keep her doing things outside of using the SPAD as that is her best chance at killing a Servant. Get in close use the SPAD and then fly FLY AWAY!!! I'm mainly pointing out the Second Noble Phantasm as I don't know if being proficient with machines would give you a Noble Phantasm related to them but that's probably just my ill informed opinion talking sorry

    Psyche: So is the entire point of this Servant to make fighting against her the least pleasant thing possible? Removing the ability for a Master to transfer Mana to their Servant (although admittedly, if she got a hit at a Master she better kill them) and making everyone die slowly all seems pretty unpleasant. It is however confusing how she will win the Grail War without use of Persefoni Katara as her Strength is E rank... or she could just wait it out I guess? Although that Craft Essence resonates with me when making sheets -_-

    As the person who asked the question that got somewhat out of hand to begin with (I did mean dislike as a character by the way, sorry I didn't make that clear) I should probably answer it myself. If I had the choice of which Servant to summon from my own list it would probably be Wittgenstein... although his Noble Phantasms were horribly messed up. However if that choice was expanded to include other Servants I'd say Royd's Alan Turing sheet as overall he reminds me of people I know. The Servant I'm least happy with making is obviously the Beveridge sheet (it's a mess) and the Servant I'd least like to summon would definitely be my Lancer Merridew, irrationality of that kind is one of my least favourite things to encounter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    The movie is a tragedy. Way to destroy a perfect ending.
    It has a very nice KyoSaya moment. 'Nuff said.

    On a totally unrelated note, I kinda finished my Saber Gajah Mada sheet. Very wank. Will upload tomorrow if nothing disrupts my schedule.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sherlock1110 View Post
    Psyche: So is the entire point of this Servant to make fighting against her the least pleasant thing possible? Removing the ability for a Master to transfer Mana to their Servant (although admittedly, if she got a hit at a Master she better kill them)
    Erm, I specifically noted it doesn't sever the Master/Servant contract. That's what makes it different from Medea's Rule Breaker.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    It has a very nice KyoSaya moment. 'Nuff said.
    From what I've heard, it also has a crazily badass Homura x Mami Equilibrium-esque gunbattle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sherlock1110 View Post
    Sorry, I wasn't thinking clearly, please forgive me sorry.
    It's okay. (And totally predictable you'd make a reply like that, but what can ya' do?)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zh1212 View Post
    Oh, since your interpretation of Psyche is a self-proclaimed Matchmaker and consoler of Love, how would she react to my Ulrich Von Liechtenstein? As the latter is a heartbroken knight who was spurned by his Lady in the worst way possible.
    Psyche's perceptive enough that she'd very quickly see through his 'boastful knight' persona into his inner heartbreak. Probably she'd try to play the therapist or hook him up with other girl. (Or both)

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