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    The problem with trying at write a being "beyond human comprehension" as a character is that you must make it identifiable to the reader. At which point the conceit that this being is "beyond human comprehension" fails. These sort of things work best as background events and phenomenons. The less attention paid to them the more effective they are. Making them a character is about the worst thing you can do.

    All of your OC's feelings and motivations are recognizably human. "His" ascension beyond the bounds of humanity is largely a arbitrary statement. To me the time abyss sort of character never really works. Just my opinion though.

    MEoDP kills anything with a recognizable death. Archetype:Earth is just that...Archetype:Earth. She's close enough to being the Ultimate One of Earth that it doesn't matter that she isn't. If this OC of yours does not have a death that Cool!Shiki can recognize then it's about at the same level as Archetype:Earth which is...not right I guess.
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    Like I said before, It DOES have a death, but the death simply dont accept him because of the "gift" from the reaper. And his Power realy are arbitrary, because It was a "joke" from the reaper. To put It simply, the reaper Just wanted to see what would happen.
    Initialy, the only skills he had was immortality and "force flow", but he lived too long and the things scaled quickly.
    And... Yes, I agree with your opinion about "beings beyond comprehension cant make a good character", its Just that It was so cool...
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    You know, if your like more original concept characters you can try the create-a-mage thread, there you are not bound by heroic spirit rules

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    I am also br huehuehue


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    You know, if your like more original concept characters you can try the create-a-mage thread, there you are not bound by heroic spirit rules

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    I am also br huehuehue
    Thanks, I Will think about It
    PS: the Hue never end
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    Quote Originally Posted by Criarino View Post
    Like I said before, It DOES have a death, but the death simply dont accept him because of the "gift" from the reaper. And his Power realy are arbitrary, because It was a "joke" from the reaper. To put It simply, the reaper Just wanted to see what would happen.
    If that's the case then it really doesn't work in a Nasu setting. It'll do much better in a original setting of your own creation. This is a problem of square peg, round hole, and all that.

    Death doesn't really seem to be a choice in Nasu.

    Keep developing your own setting though. Could be interesting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    It's pretty solid. Only issue I can think of is that he has 5 personal skills, which is a little much.

    Personally I would get rid of Dragon Slayer and just give his sword NP a bonus versus Dragons like Siegfried's Balmung.

    The Golden Apple NP is interesting and can be a major liability. Which is always fun.
    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    His sword already has an anti-dragon bonus actually, which just makes the Skill even more unnecessary. Not even getting into the fact that most -slayer Skills are basically just added to fill Skill slots in GO...
    Okay, removed it. I also updated his personality section.

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    Servant Rider:


    True Name: Ganymede


    Alignment: True Neutral


    Strength- E (D)
    Agility- C (B)
    Endurance- D (B)
    Mana- B (A)
    Luck- B (A)
    NP- A+


    Personality


    Rider is a young wise boy, who has no very important desires for the Grail. During his life he spent much of his time on Olympus serving the gods, because of this he is quite curious about the way humans live demonstrating some innocence in some respects. Ganymede has been disciplined by the gods to understand his desires, although this is not a skill it can be said that the young boy is well proficient in etiquette lessons, speaking when he should and behaving in the most elegant way possible. He is very observant.


    He misses Zeus and will sometimes mention it to his master. Despite being a servant for most of his life, Rider hates serving people who are not Zeus. The only reason to serve the other gods was because Zeus wanted to. An intelligent master will notice this and will do his best to enjoy it.


    Your desire for the Grail? He wants to be with Zeus again and thinks that the Grail would be a good way to serve Ambrosia to his lover.


    Gender: Male
    Likes: Zeus, Romance between boys
    Dislikes: Be tricked, Jealous women, Hera
    Talent: Serving
    Natural Enemy: Hera


    Armament: Amphora


    Class Skills:


    Riding (A+) - Ability to ride animals. At this rank, even creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.


    Magic Resistance (C): A skill that grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. At this rank, cancels spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.


    Personal Skills:


    Affections Of The Gods (A+) - Denotes the boosting of parameters due to possessing divine favor. Ganymede caught the eye of the king of gods Zeus, and was spirited away to mount Olympus to serve as his cupbearer where he was beloved by all the gods. Upon beginning battle, receives a Rank-Up to all stats (including Luck and Mana) for the duration of the engagement.


    Rosy Cheeked Adonis (A+) - Lay like a cute boy who charms people. A magical effect of fascination that works on both men and women, but can be shortened so long that there is a will to resist. Complete avoidance through magical resistance ability is possible. Called "the fairest of the race of mortals" by the homero poet, with the beauty that can enter even the gods themselves. As a Homosexual god, Rider is able to manifest a unique ability over this ability. It is possible to fortify this ability against men, but its effect against women loses part of its power.


    Divinity (B+): the measure of whether one has the fitness of the Divine Spirit or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level decreases when the very classification of the Heroic Spirit as a Monster, Demonic Bait increases. It may also decrease due to unwillingness to the gods. It also has an effect that reduces the special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Rank of Divinity. He may break with abilities such as the Protection of Faith and the Enlightenment of Santa Fig. As the son of a naiade, a descendant of Zeus, the lesser god of homosexual love and association with the God of Aquarius of Egyptian Mythology, the Knight has a moderate classification of this ability


    Noble Phantasm:


    Aetos Dios - Thunderbird (A+)


    The Divine Eagle that brought Ganymedes to Olympus. As a servant of the Rider class, Ganymede can summon her.
    A Thunderbird of the highest possible rank, a divine beast that was once mistaken for Zeus himself. It is said to have borne the ray of Zeus in the era of the Olympian gods. Having borne the radius of Zeus Aetos Dios is able to use it in battle, even if it can not enjoy 100% of its power as the God of the Greek Gods.
    (Imagine an eagle carrying a luminous "spear" that shoots rays)


    -Defensive Capability: The enemy attacks disperse when they collide with the power of the ray emanating from their body, most of the time the attacks do not even reach it due to the released charges.
    -Speed: Incorporating the power of the elemental divine weapon, its speed increases dramatically, being able to travel quickly to great distances.
    -Versatility: The discharges released from your body can be fired from different angles to reach multiple enemies at the same time. But its greater capacity by incorporating the radius of Zeus is the territorial advantage it acquires. The divine beast is able to incite the weather to a massive storm and the rays generated by the storm can be absorbed as prana increasing the beast's durability and not overburdening its invoker.
    It can be said that this beast is "sovereign" against aquatic enemies.


    Ambrosia- Food of the Gods (B +)


    The drink of the gods that Rider served in life to the gods of Olympus.
    Rider invokes a large cup containing the drink, when ingested the body is purified in its initial state, ignoring curses, poisons, wounds and mana wear (although in the case of mana the process is usually more time consuming). Another skill is the perfume bestowed by the drink. The smell of Rider will be similar to tasting a sweet drink. It's a great tactic to lure enemies to traps, combined with Rosy Cheeked Adonis the effect tends to be more powerful. The effect of the drink remains in the body for 24 hours, decreasing its effects over time, however, granting the benefits above. Depending on the degree of divinity of the individual the effect may be more powerful or weaker. It is not recommended to take large amounts of the drink, because even a god can suffer from its side effects.
    Because it is a divine drink, the result is not satisfactory when ingested by mortals, so that it can be applied offensively, acting as a liquid that corrodes the flesh independent of the resistance of the individual.
    The use of this drink is limited to the amount of liquid present in the glass, but a simple sip would already be enough to restore the body.


    Aquarius - The Water Bearer (B +)


    Zeus transformed Rider into the constellation of Aquarius, which meant "Water Bearer". Thus the divinity that dispensed the drink to the gods in the sky became the spirit that presided over the adequate supply of water on earth.
    In Egypt, Aquarius was declared to cause annual floods on the Nile. and because of these associations, Rider is able to manifest this noble ghost.
    Riding his Amphora to the skies, Rider is able to provoke a raining massive that hinders the movements of the enemies and decreases the parameter of Agility. If this Noble Phantasm stays active for too long, immense areas will be flooded.Rider is able to control the water's directions to the offensive and defensive. It is possible for him to walk on the waters.
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    I've changed a few things in their NPs, skills and parameters.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    If that's the case then it really doesn't work in a Nasu setting. It'll do much better in a original setting of your own creation. This is a problem of square peg, round hole, and all that.

    Death doesn't really seem to be a choice in Nasu.

    Keep developing your own setting though. Could be interesting.
    Thanks! I will keep working!

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    Has anyone made an Alexander Graham Bell sheet?

    I feel obliged to make one after seeing this fan art...

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Has anyone made an Alexander Graham Bell sheet?

    I feel obliged to make one after seeing this fan art...
    Well, honestly, a Graham Bell that can extract magical energy from telephone/internet waves like if they are a kind of ley line, or whose NP are related to the use of smartphones would be a really nice servant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hakuro View Post
    Well, honestly, a Graham Bell that can extract magical energy from telephone/internet waves like if they are a kind of ley line, or whose NP are related to the use of smartphones would be a really nice servant.

    That you would be very powerful in modern setings


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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    More servant like artemis would be cool
    I want you to know I blame you for this. Thanks~ <3


    Class: Caster
    True Name: Oracle of Delphi...?
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral

    What you expected

    What you got
    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: D
    Agility: A
    Mana: A+
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: A

    Lore:
    Spoiler:
    The Oracle of Delphi, or Pythia, was among the most famous of the god Apollo's priestesses, a position created when he slayed the great monster Python, a fearsome and terrible giant serpent sent to kill Apollo's mother Leto before she could conceive him and his sister. In vengeance, he hunted the beastly earth spirit upon adulthood, ultimately chasing it to its own cave where he slayed it with a mighty volley of a hundred arrows. The creature's rotting body left behind a dangerous and magical miasma. It was soon discovered that those who were exposed to the miasma developed convulsions, frenzy, and prophetic trances. After the death of many men and women trying to take advantage of the corruption Apollo had unleashed, it was decided that a single woman would be appointed to watch over the cavern and use its power wisely - the so-called Pythia of the House of Snakes. The priestesses risked their life to moderate and restrain the influence of the Python's miasma, suffering for wisdom to give to others.

    At first, the position was held by young, chaste virginal priestesses of high birth - the first of which is believed to be Phemonoe, the daughter of Apollo. However, as the reputation of the oracles grew, more and more came to see the current oracle, and word of their wisdom and beauty became widely known. Eventually, one man, a Thesslian named Echecrates, attempted to seize the oracle for himself, abducting her for his own illicit purposes. After that, the position was limited to elderly women, virgins in clothing only and valued only for their learning and wisdom.

    As for Phemonoe, she was known to be every part Apollo's daughter - beautiful, clever, and a skilled poet, the inventor of hexameter verse. It is believed the delphic maxim "Know thyself" inscribed at the Temple of Apollo has its origins in Phemonoe's poetry. As the original Pythia, she is without a doubt the most likely candidate to be called upon by those seeking to summon the Oracle of Delphi's saint graph.

    ...And her father will have absolutely none of that, after Echecrates' assault and the scandal that followed. An overprotective father, a beautiful daughter, and a vessel he won't allow her to be incarnated in. By combining these traits, the Servant Caster is summoned, with his daughter safely snuggled by his side as a cute, elegant, incomparable and smart as a button little baby snake. Don't you agree?


    Class Abilities:
    Item Creation
    Rank: A
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. At this rank, with the knowledge, arts, and medicinal abilities of Apollo and his followers, it is no surprise that Caster is able to create powerful healing potions, panaceas, poisons, and divinely enchanted artifacts.

    Territory Creation
    Rank: A+
    It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. At this rank, creation of a temple, superior to a workshop, is possible. While the process takes longer than the establishment of a typical temple, and the qualifications for its location are more strict, once the conditions are satisfied Caster is able to recreate an omphalos containing the miasma of the slain Python and the breath of the earth, crafting a self-sustaining, empowered temple on the level of a Noble Phantasm. However...

    Personal Skills:
    Clairvoyance
    Rank: -
    Because it is a skill belonging to the flesh, Caster is unable to exercise this ability, having co-opted the saint graph without taking on the appropriate form. However, by listening to the guidance of the young, cute snake that rests around his neck and shoulders, it is capable of being unofficially exercised at rank A+. At this rank, in addition to superior visual perception, prediction of the future and even limited mind reading is possible.

    Affections of the Gods
    Rank: EX
    A Skill that denotes one being loved by a god. In this case, the affection is from Apollo, the suspected father of the priestess Phemonoe. In order to prevent her from being harmed, Apollo is forcibly summoned instead by allowing his status as a Divine Spirit to decline to the point it can manifest in her Saint Graph. However, as compensation, Apollo can only exercise his power as a normal Servant, and is limited by being reduced to an inappropriate class.

    Alluring Nightingale
    Rank: A+
    A mesmerizing kind of Skill possessed by those with a beautiful natural voice. Ordinarily it works as a charm magecraft-like effect towards those of the user's opposite sex, but at this rank, gender is no barrier to the efficacy of this ability - Caster seems no stranger to romances of any type. Evasion is possible by means of a Magic Resistance Skill. Even without Magic Resistance, one can abate it to a modest extent so long he or she maintains a will to resist.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Gnothi Seauton -
    And Stay Away from my Adorable Daughter!
    Know Thyself under the Sun God's Light

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: A
    A composite Noble Phantasm born from Apollo's vengeance and the prophetic foresight of the Oracle. Arrows of concentrated sunlight, shaped through the authority of Apollo and the music produced by his lyre. Much like his twin sister, despite using wholly unsuited means and stance, Apollo's skill is such that none of his shots ever miss. To avoid his Noble Phantasm requires not speed or agility, but the fortune to overturn divine fate or outside intervention on the target's behalf. However, as he is not able to display his archery to its full potential, the potency of his shots is only slightly stronger than a normal Servant.

    ...Had that been the end of it, that is.

    It is by borrowing his daughter's foresight that this Noble Phantasm takes its current form. Should a target be caught in the light of Caster's sun bolts, even if it is not a direct hit, he may mark that target with his light. By following Phemonoe's visions, it is possible to predict exactly where the marked target will be at a given moment in the future, with a reliable measure of accuracy. Using that information, Caster is able to identify up to one hundred 'probable locations for the target', and utilizing a limited expression of his abilities, he can bend space such that a volley of arrows is changed from "fired together at that moment" to "fired individually at the targeted moment" in time. A Noble Phantasm that unfairly hounds and harrasses the target, promising no rest or relief from the possibility of a single random arrow coming their way at any moment.

    As a god of the sun, Caster achieves this feat using the questionable logic that he may have fired each shot at any time the sun was passing overhead. As such, it is only usable during the day. A recreation of the sun god's feat of slaying the Python with a hundred arrows transformed into a petty tool of overbearing fatherly pressure.
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    Human Form


    Class : Caster
    Identity : Alexander Graham Bell, King of Telecommunication
    Origin : Scotland
    Alignment : Neutral Good


    PARAMETERS
    STR : E
    END : E
    AGI : D
    MGI : A+
    LCK : B
    NP : EX


    PERSONALITY
    Caster is diligent, ambitious and aspiring, the type of man that would do his best to achieve his dreams and to realize his ambition. He is very sociable, communicative and polite towards others and he shows great interest in education and science. Caster is also a strong believer in Eugenics, believing that humans deemed with physical or mental defection since birth, or what he called a "defective variety of the human race" should be eradicated by using compulsory sterilization methods, though he has good intention on this, that is, to allow them to integrate with the wider society, instead of creating a “special group of defective humans”. Caster’s wish to the grail is to realize his dream of a world with no discrimination where everyone is ‘connected’.


    Likes : Experiment, human speech, mohawk dance
    Dislikes : Court patent challenges, “special community”
    Talents : Inventing, phonetics, elucidation
    Natural Enemies : Adolf Hitler, Elisha Gray (Rival)


    HISTORY
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alexander_Graham_Bell



    CLASS SKILLS
    Territory Creation : B++
    A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. At this rank, creation of "Bell Labs”, a laboratory more or less equivalent to a “Workshop”. The Bell Labs was once known as the Volta Laboratory, created by Caster himself using the funds he received from the Volta Prizes. In its early years, it was mainly focused on the analysis, recording, and transmission of sound. Later, various researchers working in this laboratory is credited for the development of the laser, the transitor, the CCD, information theory, C and C++ programming languages, and various other inventions and science developments.


    Within this territory, it is possible for Caster to build a global-scale ‘network’ that allows him to ‘connect’ himself to every single electronic devices in Earth, this allows for a maximum, global-scale utilization of his Noble Phantasm. Because of this, this territory is technically more powerful and superior than a “Workshop”, and thus gained 2 plus modifiers.


    Item Creation : C+
    A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. Caster is famous for the inventions as well as the progenitor of many items that is still used and is constantly being further developed and improved to this very day.


    The most famous among his inventions is, of course, the telephone, he is also famous for the invention of photophone, which would later be improved to the concept of "laser" and "fiber-optic communication". Caster is also known to be very innovative and creative from young age, as a boy he had managed to 'invent' a rather complex automaton that could "speak", albeit only a few words.


    With this skill, Caster is able to manufacture automaton familiars, based on his aircraft design of the AEA Silver Dart, which embodied all of the advancements found in the earlier machines. This familiar serves muliple purposes for the maximum utilization of his wide-ranged Noble Phantasm. Aside from this familiar, Caster also is capable of manufacturing various mechanical items and automatons for practical uses.


    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Phonetics Mastery : EX
    A skill that denotes one's knowledge about the study and of the sounds and human speech or, in the case of sign languages, the equivalent aspects of sign. It is concerned with the physical properties of speech sounds or signs (phones): their physiological production, acoustic properties, auditory perception, and neurophysiological status.


    Caster learned most of this knowledge at young age from his father, Professor Alexander Melville Bell, a famous phonetician and elocutionist that invented the Visble Speech symbols. With this ability, Caster is able decipher Visible Speech representing virtually every language, including Latin, Scottish Gaelic, and even Sanskrit, accurately reciting written tracts without any prior knowledge of their pronunciation.


    In his later years, Caster had improved this ability to the point that he had surpassed his father on this subject. He also is known to has largely contributed in the education of deaf children and had dedicated most of his life to teach the deaf to speak normally without the need of using sign language, thus enabling their integration within the wider society from which many were often being excluded.


    Upon becoming a Servant, this skill has been augmented with his Noble Phantasm to the point of a super-human mastery which has entered the realm of mind-reading. With this skill, Caster is able to not only forcibly read other's mind, but also can bypass Presence Concealment equivalent to A ranked Presence Detection. Due to his Noble Phantasm, this skill also functions similarly to A ranked Eye of the Mind (False), which allows Caster to avoid danger and bypass visual obstructions or illusions.


    "He dedicated his life to the penetration of that inhuman silence which separates and estranges"
    --Helen Keller


    "...to ask the value of speech is like asking the value of life."
    --Alexander Graham Bell


    Golden Rule (Wealth and Knowledge) : B
    A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth and knowledge. Caster's invention of telephone wouldn't have succeeded and recognized if he wasn't backed up with with financial and resources supports, either by his families or from peoples who felt indebted to him, who also is responsible for the advancement of deaf-mute educations.


    The telephone he invented also becomes one of the most successful products in history, and he also has received many awards and prizes from various groups for this achievent that would later becomes the turning point in the history of human communication. Also, despite not being a natural born genius, Caster compensated his lack of knowledge with his fast learning capability. With this skill, not only that he can gain vast amount of wealth in a short time, he can also obtain informations and knowledge more easily. In Caster’s case, his Noble Phantasm allows him gather informations this infinely more efficient.


    "The most successful men in the end are those whose success is the result of steady accretion."
    --Alexander Graham Bell


    Clairvoyance (Metal) : D
    A special kind of Claivoyance skill limited only to the detection or perception of metal substance. In Caster's case, he received this skill because he is also credited as the developer of one of the most early version of metal detector. Like the name suggested, this skill allows Caster to detect metal substance, though only limited to 5 meters radius. Useful for detecting concealed weapons, or for treasure hunting.


    Single-Mindedness : C
    A skill that denotes the ability to immerse oneself in something, exhibiting a superhuman degree of focus. It is demonstrated when performing actions like calculations, planning, and building. Also improves his Item Construction Skill. Despite being the inventor of the telephone, Caster never had a telephone in his own room because he felt that the presence of telephone means intrusion of outside world, which would only disturb his focus on his experiments.


    NOBLE PHANTASM
    Bell System
    Age of Information - Reverberating Chimes of Communication
    Rank : EX
    Type : Anti-Mind
    Range : Unknown
    Maximum Targets : Unknown


    "The telephone rings, it jingles our psyches, jangles our nerves. We are seduced and soothed, rattled and betrayed by it. Wherever it is-on the desk or street corner, the high seas or highway, in our bathrooms or briefcases-it has, for a machine, an allure like no other"
    --Stern Gwathmey


    A Noble Phantasm that represents the concept of “global communication” that is conceived through Caster’s 2 main inventions, both which has greatly influenced the science of telecommunication and how modern society communicate. Having invented the telephone and photophone, devices that would be the key for the developments of various other devices that would contribute greatly in starting a new age, the “Information Age”.


    This Noble Phantasm manifested in the form of various machinations that has been transplanted into Caster’s body upon becoming a Caster-class Servant, which resulted in his body being half-human and half-machine, a cyborg, representing the future of the world that is envisioned by modern society that is credited to Caster because of the infleunce and impact of his inventions that contributed to the dawn of the “Information Age”.


    This Noble Phantasm bestows Caster with various abilities, ranging from “mind-reading” and “telepathy” to “mind-control” and ”mind-breaking”. By ‘transmitting’ phantasmal signals and ‘connecting’ himself with other’s mind, Caster can freely read their entire thoughts and can also ‘send’ his own thought to the target. The ‘target’ is not only limited to one or two persons, even a crowd or masses of people’s mind can be read without overloading Caster’s own brain, by ‘storing’ the collective thoughts information inside a device transplanted within Caster’s body that can store up to 100 zettabyte data, 1 zettabyte equal to 1 trillion gigabytes.


    The voice of one’s thoughts were slightly different from one’s speaking voice. It was just like
    one’s voice sounding different when played back on tape or when communicating through telephone.


    Because this process of “mind-reading” and “telepathy” is conceptually different from magecraft that utilizes similar effect, no matter how high one’s Magic Resistance, they cannot stop Caster from ‘connecting’ himself into their minds and only mental interference resistance or willpower with similar effect can resist the effect that this Noble Phantasm can potentially make.


    Caster is capable of not only “mind-reading” and “telepathy” done between himself and the target, but he can also ‘send’ or ‘redirect’ one’s thought to another person, whether consciously or unconsciously, making them to have limited telepathic ability. This ability is extremely dangerous if used carelessly and if Caster is summoned under the ‘Berserker’ class with Mad Enchantment, he will gain a skill that lets him to turn himself into a “loudspeaker”. It meant that any humans near Caster—as Berserker—would be able to read the minds of other humans in the vicinity. This Noble Phantasm also allows Caster to disturb or sabotage the telepathic communication between Master and Servant.


    Though the range in which Caster can ‘connect’ himself with the target is limited to around 100 to 200 meters, he can infinitely expand this range by utilizing familiars that will act as addition ‘transmitter’, or by operating his “Bell Labs” territory which allows him to build a worldwide ‘network’ which allows the usage of this Noble Phantasm on a global-scale. Because of this, the usage of this Noble Phantasm must be handled really carefully to avoid a global confusion.


    This Noble Phantasm also allows him to convey a “compressed information” into another’s mind, which is potentially able to break their mind and psyche. With a true name release, he is capable of continuously sending waves of “compressed information” into a target’s mind by ‘shooting’ a giant beam of light with compresses information stored in it, destroying their psyche and literally killing them with information.

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    The "oracle of delphi" is realy cool, mythologicly speaking, he always was the moré active sibling and now that we know "orion" it almost certain he would do something like or worst than that.


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    @Apollo

    Overprotective dad sounds like a fun guy... y'know untiil you on his daughter and all that. Gnothi Seauton, though it makes one expect an Archer class servant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    What have I done...


    Something horrible. Now go to the corner and reflect on your sins.


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    Any thought on the mind-reading telepath Graham Bell sheet?
    I-it's not that bad, r-right?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Any thought on the mind-reading telepath Graham Bell sheet?
    I-it's not that bad, r-right?
    Better than my ideal of omnicient modern god
    But, seriously, i like it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Any thought on the mind-reading telepath Graham Bell sheet?
    I-it's not that bad, r-right?
    Anyone who could fight using Cute Cat videos (I'm choosing the most benign option here) is a-okay in my books.

    Of course that information overload attack is superficially similar to Arael the 15th Angel (Sir Mind Rape) so it's a lot creepier by default.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sunny View Post
    Overprotective Dad...
    The whole idea is funny enough that Affection of the Gods EX gets a pass...even accounting for OOC.

    I mean the only other Oracle of Delphi sheet I've seen was kind of plain...and summons Python as a temple guardian for some reason.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    Anyone who could fight using Cute Cat videos (I'm choosing the most benign option here) is a-okay in my books.

    Of course that information overload attack is superficially similar to Arael the 15th Angel (Sir Mind Rape) so it's a lot creepier by default.

    Ah, cat vídeos, the good side of the internet
    it's a complet downhill from there


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