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    Quote Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
    Dumas flashed a fearless grin at Flat and Jack as he rattled off odd turns of phrase.
    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
    Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
    Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
    Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.


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    Constructman: That's a pretty dang good Rothschild Servant. I have to admit, I never imagined he'd be a Heroic Spirit, but it's certainly interesting to see. I like how his NP literally powers him up the more wealth he acquires. Reminds me a bit of Fitzgerald's power from the Bungou Stray Dogs series.

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    Alright, here he is. Hopefully I didn't make him too powerful. I changed up his historical life a bit to include some of the canon Nasuverse things we know about the Nazis such as them being involved in the Third Holy Grail War and Hitler wanting the Holy Grail for his Third Reich so I'd appreciate if you read the ''Background'' part. It turned out much longer than expected though. Anyways, I might do Stalin next if I get creative enough to do him too. But finding a fc for him that isn't his real life appearance will be a pain in the ass...

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    Class: Lancer (Alternatively Caster or Berserker)
    Name: Adolf Hitler
    Alias: Führer of the Third Reich
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: Austria, Germany

    Strength - D
    Endurance- D
    Agility- C
    Mana- B
    Luck- A+
    NP- A++

    Height/Weight: 175cm/65kg
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Himself, immortality, the Aryan race, animals, sweets, Henry Ford
    Dislikes: Hebrews, animal cruelty, death, modern art, smoking, alcohol, traitorous subordinates
    Talent: Manipulation, genocide, painting
    Natural Enemy: Heroic Spirits of the Bible, Joseph Stalin, Darnic Prestone Yggdmillennia
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Human
    Classification: Anti-Hero
    Armament: Spear, Pistols

    Legend

    The Fuhrer of the Third Reich that ruled over Nazi Germany during the 20th century. He initiated the beginning of World War II and oversaw the policies of the Nazi Party that resulted in deaths that count up to roughly 11 million. Hitler is considered one of the 20th's Century Three Big Dictators along with Joseph Stalin - his rival and Mao Zedong. Born in Austria during the late 19th century, Hitler was one of the six children born to Alois Hitler and Klara Polzl. While he was three years of age, Hitler's family moved from Austria to Germany. From there, the dark days - that eventually shaped him into a monster who seeked revenge against human kind - began.

    Personality:

    He appears to be a very polite and well mannered man at first glance. Because of his manifestation with a perfect Aryan body, he will come off as the dream gentleman of every young girl ignorant about his real identity and true personality. He speaks in a polite, aristocratic manner and does not fail at leaving strong impressions. Though, heroes of the Good alignment will feel clear discontent at speaking with him from the first moment even if they themselves do not know why.

    Under the layer of his polite and calm stature, Hitler is in fact a ridiculously arrogant and cold man. His arrogance can be compared to that of a certain Babylonian King - for he will dismiss any loss of his and be quick to blame it on others, proclaiming them to be ''incompetent, worthless traitors''. He possesses strong belief in racial superiority and doesn't even think of members of other races as ''humans'', often referring to them with ''little rat'' in a very condescending manner that paints a clear picture of dark ambitions underlying beneath his eerie smile. Disturbingly enough, even when he commits clearly inhumane acts, Hitler will not realize that what he is doing is evil in any form of the word and will only think of himself as the champion of the Goddess Longinus who was sent to purify the world of honest Germanic men by slaughtering all the ''demons'' hiding in human skin - other races.

    Ironically, he will proclaim any form of resistance to him and attempts to kill him as the ''cowardly'' actions of an utterly evil individual who feels no shame or remorse about oppressing and killing honest, hard-working men (such as himself and other Aryans). Under such conditions, he will develop an immensely aggressive, furious and self-righteous stature. A true hypocrite without even realizing he is one.

    Despite his polite behaviour in normal conditions, Hitler is in fact an unrivalled pervert who dreams of ''Aryan'' women in sick ways and pushes his undying ''love'' to them, constantly complimenting them without actually loving them as people. He is merely appreciating their outer features, with no care given about their inner good points. This is because Adolf Hitler could never truly love another human being - for the sole object of his ''pure'' true love is his own spear, Longinus. Since Longinus is a living entity, Hitler strongly believes Longinus is a Goddess that has picked him as her champion, therefore he obsesses over his weapon and shows disgusting love towards it. Much like Gilgamesh, he will not dirty his beautiful weapon against those not worthy of it's judgement.

    His main tactic in Holy Grail War is to sit in the shadows and slowly manipulate other participants into joying his cause, using his Charisma (Distorted) skill to paint himself as a kind father or a great friend who truly wishes the best for his companions in the minds of the people he is manipulating. Since Hitler is well known for his strong force of personality that could instill downright fanatical worship towards himself into the minds of other people as if he were truly the Devil, this tactic is likely to be effective.

    His wish for the Holy Grail is to create the long-lasting Fourth Reich - the successor of his old Third Reich. Because he believes that the 1000 year old reich he would rule in was in fact the Fourth Reich and not the ''premature'' Third Reich. This is, however, not particularly true because Hitler is merely dismissing his loss during the WWII, saying the Third Reich was only a ''start'' of his legacy.


    Class Skills:

    • Magic Resistance (D) - Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy. Hitler has no legends of facing magic in life and as such, his Magic Resistance is gained only due to the Lancer class container albeit at a low rank.


    Personal Skills:

    • Mental Pollution (A) - A skill to represent an individual possessing a distorted personality. Hitler was a known racist and white supremacist. He believed in the ideology of a superior race and caused the death of roughly 11 million people for the sake of his beliefs . To this day, he is remembered as one of the most evil men in history. At this rank, the skill works as a mental super-armor to mental interference. An additional effect for Hitler - someone who despised human beings, but loved animals from the bottom of his heart - is that if he is summoned into a Grail War that has a Heroic Spirit heavily connected to animals such as Tamamo-no-Mae (foxes/jackals) and Atalanta, he will likely attempt to please any of their requests.
    • Innocent Monster (A) - A skill possessed by Servants who had their existence distorted by the monstrous reputations they have acquired during or after life. In occult stories and rumours, Hitler is largely believed to be the Anti-Christ prophesied by the Bible. It is said that prior to the start of WWII, Dietrich Eckart, Hitler's mentor, received a vision that he will meet a man that will go down as history's Anti-Christ. This, apparently, proved to be true as a younger Adolf joined the Thule Society, which's inner members were said to be composed of Satanists practicing Black Magic. There he met Eckart, the man who would become his mentor and be one of the most influential figures in his life. Eckart spent no effort in training Adolf in the arts of Satanic magic and beliefs, preparing Adolf for his historic role. It was said that the Holy Church even attempted a long-range exorcism ritual on Hitler that ''somehow'' failed.
    • Charisma (Distorted) (A) - A rank worthy of someone who was considered to be a charismatic monster that united a continent and manipulated the masses for the sake of his cruel ideology. Though, in Hitler's case - due to the special effects of Innocent Monster - the skill has been distorted. As such, his Charisma will only pull the hearts of those that possess the Evil alignment. To them, Hitler's words - which are the words of the Devil - will sound like a kind father or mentor's worries. They will readily believe what he says, easily convinced by his words. If Hitler says that by doing him a favour, they will be granted their biggest desire, they will undoubtedly believe him. However, to those of the Good alignment, Hitler's words will have an effect that will make them feel disgust and hatred just by hearing the man speak. He will have extreme trouble of convincing anyone of the Good alignment to believe a single word he says. Those of the Neutral alignment might be inclined to listen to Hitler's words, but they will not readily accept them.
    • Devil's Luck (A) - In life, Hitler was an extremely lucky man who escaped death numerous times. He survived 42 attempts of assassinations towards himself and was even saved by a priest while drowning as a baby. In WWI, while being held at gun point, his attacker suddenly decided to spare the young Hitler for seemingly no reason. It is as if a more powerful force was watching over Hitler. Though, due to his title as the ''Anti-Christ'', it could be argued that the term ''Devil's Luck'' is quite literal in his case. As a skill, most assassination or ambush attempts at Hitler will be foiled because he gains plus corrections and a strong sixth sense when dealing with them. Either by Hitler gaining knowledge of such attempts before-hand or it being a simple mistake on the enemy's part.



    Noble Phantasm(s)...
    Blitzkrieg Thunderous Warfare (Anti-Army) (D) - A method of warfare developed by the Nazis. As a Noble Phantasm, it's an useful Noble Phantasm that can be activated without the usage of it's true names and at a quick interval. It does not take up much mana and it's efficient due to the fact that the Noble Phantasm cannot be defended against. This is because the purpose of Blitzkrieg is to overwhelm the enemy before a proper defense could be put up. As such, even if a Servant were to activate a shield-type Noble Phantasm, Blitzkrieg will manipulate the time frame to a state where it was fired off artillery before the shield was placed. Defenses such as the Heracles' God Skin that are constantly active on the body of it's user and are essentially part of them cannot be bypassed by Blitzkrieg. This is because Blitzkrieg is supposed to be activated at a time where a defense is not already placed prior to Blitzkrieg's activation, so it could take the enemy by surprise. If the enemy's defense is their own body, Blitzkrieg would be unable to apply it's effects and therefore it cannot be activated against such enemies.

    There is another gaping weakness of this Noble Phantasm. Since it is a method of warfare between modern humanity using machines developed for the sake of defeating modern civilization, it's power in a Holy Grail War which summons heroes of folklore is heavily reduced. All Heroes with the Earth, Sky or Star attribute will be heavily resistant to the damage dealt by this Noble Phantasm to the point where some of them will even be able to heal the injuries caused right after taking a direct hit. But Servants that are of the Man attribute or normal humans will be hit with the full power of the Anti-Army damage possessed by this Blitzkrieg. Their death is certain should they take a direct hit. On a side note, Blitzkrieg causes an intimidating side effect on the enemy, causing them to fear the other party and be under a strong impression that defeat might be possible. This does not work on Servants, but human Masters who don't have the mental fortitude to resist the fear can be overwhelmed.



    Holocaust Gate to the Devil's Realm (Reality Marble) (B) - The event which is considered to be the most evil deed committed in human history. Although it was not a direct project of Hitler's and he denied any relations to it in life to the point where he never once stepped foot into the concentration camps, due to the fact that he ordered it, it is still a Noble Phantasm possessed by him. It is a Reality Marble that summons the concentration camps where millions lost their lives. The inside of the Reality Marble is a spawn nest of the despairing undead that have lost their life during the Holocaust. They will attack any living soul aside from the Master of the Reality Marble at sight. They are overwhelming in numbers, possessing undead troops that count in the millions. But they are pathetically weak. The victims of this Reality Marble were nothing but innocent people who died in inhumane ways and ended up as wraiths that cannot pass on from the despair that ended their lives. While they are still stronger than regular humans, their power against Servants is not tremendous as single units. However, they can form into bigger entities like a single organism to raise their battle capacity in order to be able to fight Servants to some extent. Even possibly defeat them or kill their Master - but that is unlikely.

    As cruel and monstrous this Reality Marble is, it is actually not it's purpose to defeat the enemy. Since Hitler has never once stepped into the concentration camps that Nazi Germany created, it is impossible for himself to enter this Reality Marble in the first place. Instead, once casted, what takes his place inside is a body double that is much weaker to him in power. Because of this, Hitler's preferred tactic of battle against allied teams is to send one pair of Master and Servant inside of the Reality Marble in order to separate them from their allies so he could focus on fighting one enemy at a time then defeat the weakened Master and Servant pair inside of the Reality Marble once he has dealt with the first task.

    Holocaust cannot be activated to individuals possessing blonde hair or blue eyes as it is a project meant to purify humankind so it would be unsightly for it to contain a member of the Aryan race.



    Longinus Lanze Spear of Destiny (Anti-Divine / Anti-Fortress) (EX) - Hitler's most powerful Noble Phantasm and the reason he was summoned under the Lancer class. Available only under the Lancer and Berserker classes. It is the Holy Lance that pierced the side of Christ and is regarded in the same light as King Arthur's Rhongomyniad - another anchor of the planet. In rumour, it is theorized that Adolf Hitler conquered Vienna where he took possession of the Holy Lance and stored it in the hall of Saint Katherine.

    The spear possesses unimaginable power. It was stated that whoever wields this spear will possess power to conquer the entire world, but on the other hand, whoever loses it will also lose their life. Hitler's suicide was rumoured to be a consequence of him losing Longinus. This is due to the fact that the Longinus was taken by the U.S. soldiers during the bombardment of the Church of St. Katherine on 30th of April, 1945 - and Hitler committed suicide only a few hours later. Another popular theory is that once Hitler witnessed the spear in Vienna, it called out to him - showing him his destiny as the victorious commander of the Third Reich. He quickly became obsessed with it, returning to the display of the lance in Vienna numerous times.

    And when he was granted the possession of the spear, he was spiraled down even further into madness. He declared that the war could begin in earnest and quickly began conquering outside nations. Ravenscroft claimed that Hitler - who had possession of the spear - was being further manipulated by the evil entity residing within the spear. He referred to it as a hostile and evil entity that was something akin to the Anti-Christ. While Hitler was a madman even prior to taking the spear, it certainly did not help his dark personality.

    Having been coated in the blood of the Christ, the Holy Lance possesses immense power against those that are of Divine descent. It can be considered an one-shot kill to anyone who possess Divinity - much like Vasavi Shakti. It's power is tremendous against those that do not possess Divinity as well, being unable to take on the spear without equal amount of power. Longinus was said to be able to show it's owner their own future as long as they hold the spear so as long as Hitler is in possession of the spear, he will have Clairvoyance at the level of the Lion King - another owner of one of the holy lances that is the world's anchor. Under the Berserker class, this effect is lost due to Hitler's mindset which was already distorted from beginning being affected even further by Mad Enhancement, making him unable to tell clear pictures and use said Clairvoyance to his advantage.

    Longinus is said to be a spear intertwined with all of mankind's desires. Because of this, when facing Servants that have a particularly strong desire for the Grail, the Holy Lance is powered up even more proportionately to the desire of the enemy. The only weakness of the spear is that it is a double-edged sword. Should Hitler become unable to use his beloved spear in any way possible, either due to the lack of mana or having his NP locked away by an effect of an enemy's ability, he shall lose his life due to not being able to summon Longinus anymore. Mana will leak out violently and he will eventually disappear from the world.


    Background...
    Early Days | Hitler's first encounter of the Holy Lance

    As a child, he clashed with his drunkard father frequently and was often beaten by him. However, the young Adolf managed to retain his sanity by focusing on his hobby; painting. That is until his brother, Edmund, died 8 years after they moved to Germany. Following his brother's death, Hitler became detached and introverted, while his father's dislike for him being involved in fine art rather than business grew by day. At some point, the young Hitler became immensely interested in German nationalism, heavily rejecting the notion of Austrian-Hungarian authority. It was this nationalism that would go to become the motivating force of his life. It could be said that this is when his anti-semitic views also began to flourish as Hitler found out about rumours of his father's true descent. Alois was an illegitimate child of what was believed to be a jewish man. For Hitler who despised his father more than anything, this would become the first clear motivation for his hatred towards the jews.

    After the sudden death of his father three years after the death of Edmund, Hitler's mother allowed him to drop out of school after two years. Moving to Vienna, he became a casual labourer and a watercolour painter. He applied to the Academy of Fine Arts twice, and was rejected both times. Out of money, Hitler had no choice but to move to a homeless shelter where he remained for several times. A few years later, his mother eventually became heavily ill. Her treatment fell into the hands of a jewish doctor and she was eventually deemed untreatable. Despite Hitler's begging, his mother's doctor was unable to save her and only caused her unnecessary pain with his examinations. Hitler - who did not tell his mother that he failed his entrance exam - fell into a deep wormhole of despair. He had nothing left and suicide was his only option, but he was far too afraid to go through with it.

    It is during his times in Vienna that his destiny trully started to unfold. In 1908, Hitler was led to what would be known as his first encounter of the Longinus Lanze exhibitioned in the Weltliches Schatzkammer Museum - which was secretly owned by the Magus Association from the shadows. From the first time he saw it, Hitler was immersed in it's beauty. His first impression of the spear which was filled with immense fascination quickly became an obsession. Hitler visited the museum numerous time just to look at the spear as the saving point of his teenage days. To him who felt like all the odds were stacked against him and thought of suicide numerous times, the spear that radiated unmatched beauty was the sole shining point of his life.

    The spear - that was possessed by numerous great emperors including the great Charlemagne and Constantine - eventually became the central pivot of Hitler's life when one day, it decided to answer his yearning. It showed him a vision of his future. That single vision fulfilled all of Hitler's deepest desires. He - who put immense importance to his German nationalism - would eventually became the leader of the Third Reich that would make Germany prosper for 1000 years. It told him he would become an immortal leader who would oversee the remainder of his country to the end of days.

    World War I period | Hitler joins the Thule Society | His first meeting with the Magus Association

    Once the World War I outbreak happened, Hitler's strong feelings towards German nationalism and knowledge of his future that was foretold by the Holy Lance led him to join the German army as a soldier. He was present in some of the more singificant battles and was even wounded in some of them. Once Germany surrendered in 1918, Hitler became extremely bitter. His passionate love towards Germany gave birth to a deep hatred towards the jewish people who he held responsible for Germany's loss in WWI. This was because of a popular theory during that time that the jewish people stabbed the Germans in the back and were highly unloyal to their nationality.

    When he returned to Munich after WWI, he continued working as a German intelligence officer and continued adopting anti-semitic ideology. Eventually he was invited to join the Thule Society, which marked his first encounter with the occult after his encounter with the Longinus Lanze. Hitler was overjoyed to find out that magic was indeed real and that the spear's promises were not mere lies as he was heavily interested in the occult. There he met a man named Dietrich Eckart who would eventually become his mentor and have Main Kampf dedicated to him.

    Dietrich Eckart - who was a high-priest of sorts of the Satanic cult of the Thule Society - knew of Hitler before-hand as he received a vision prior to the WWI that one day after Germany's loss in WWI, a young man would join the Thule Society and punish the ''evil'' Hebrews that brought shame to the name of Christ and the German people. This young man would go down as the ''Anti-Christ'' prophesied by the Bible. Eckart wasted no time and effort in sweet-talking Hitler and introducing him to the ideas led by the Thule Society which would later be re-established as the Nazi Party.

    Hitler was trained to be an excellent Magus who was well-versed in the knowledge of Witchcraft practiced by the Thule Society. His charisma would lead him to gain many allies within the Thule Society and he became the center-point of it's ideology. In order to gain public appeal, the Thule Society re-established itself as the Nazi Party and had Hitler personally design their banner. His speeches eventually started to attract big masses in a beer-halls and he quickly became a person of importance when he became chairman of the Nazi Party.

    Because of this, Hitler was eventually brought along to a meeting with the Magus Association which swore to pursue the Root. Due to the nature of the Thule Society (now Nazi Party) which didn't want to cooperate with the Magus Association by merging with it, the Magus Association thought extremely lowly of the satanist cult and only felt as if they were a small nuisance not worth paying attention to yet. This, however, changed once Hitler stepped foot into the Clock Tower as one of Nazi Party's officials. His first meeting with the Magus Associations' higher-ups and the speech he gave them left an lasting impression.

    The Magus Association was divided in their opinions. Some thought he was a fool who merely had a good tongue on him, while others thought he was an immediate threat that should be dealt with. However, due to the divided opinions they never took immediate action to squash him, but they still made sure he would be knocked from a position of power and waited for their first opportunity to do so.

    This happened when Hitler and the Sturmabteilung (the Nazi paramilitary organization) stormed a public meeting at a large beer hall in Munich and declared a revolution that will be the start of a new government. Catching wind of this, the Magus Association quickly dispatched support to the German government - unbeknownst to them - and the revolution was squashed quickly, while Hitler was arrested after three mere days of the revolution's start for high treason. There he wrote his book Main Kampf. The book shed light on Hitler's highly disturbing racist ideology.

    Hitler's rise to power

    However, Hitler's ideology and the Nazi Party weren't squashed by the Magus Association's poor attempts. The age of the great depression of Germany was Hitler's opportunity to finally fulfill the vision Longinus showed him. Due to the public becoming increasingly open to extremist opinions, Hitler manipulated the masses with his charismatic behaviour into appointing him as the Chancellor. Using his newfound power, he formed a de facto legal dictatorship. The Reichstag Fire Decree, announced after a suspicious fire at the Reichstag, suspended basic rights and allowed detention without trial. Hitler also engineered the passage of the Enabling Act, which gave his cabinet full legislative powers for a period of four years and allowed deviations from the constitution.

    Having achieved full control of the government, Hitler and the Nazi Party quickly suppressed any opposing political establishments. Soon everyone opposing the Nazi Party was pushed into disbanding and the Nazi Party was established as the only legal political party in Germany.

    He punished any military opposition and in an event called the Night of the Long Knives, all of Hitler's political enemies were rounded up and shot. The day before Hindenburg (Germany's president at the time) died, the cabinet abolished the office of president and combined it's power with that of the chancellor, making Hitler into head of the state and supreme commander of Germany's armed forces.

    Beginning of World War II | Hitler steals the Longinus Lanze | Holocaust

    Once Hitler became the most powerful person in Germany, the time for the prosperous Aryan Race of the Third Reich to rise has arrived. Thirty years after his first encounter of the Longinus Lanze, he returned to Vienna to oversee the annexation of the Austrian land. However, his real goal laid elsewhere. Hitler used his army to raid the Museum in which Longinus Lanze was kept, waiting for his arrival. The Magi sent from the Magus Association to oversee the safety of the Longinus Lanze were unable to fight Hitler directly in public and not having the forces to defeat his army, they had no choice but to retreat for the time being.

    Hitler was finally reunited with his beloved lance which was calling out to him as it's new owner. The moment he grabbed the lance, Hitler was excited from the bottom of his heart, knowing that now the war could finally begin in earnest. The time of revenge against the Jewish people drew close and Hitler would soon establish himself as the main culprit of WWII.

    Having escorted the Habsburg crown jewels and his Holy Lance back to the Nazi's favourite city; Nuremberg, Hitler declared to the Nazi Party that the war would soon begin. As such, he along with other European leaders signed what was called the Munich Treaty later that year. The treaty granted the Sudetenland districts to Hitler in exchange for him sparing the rest of Czechoslovakia. However, instead of being satisfied, this success only fueled his hunger for further expansion of the Third Reich. Afterwards, he formed a non-agression pact with Stalin - who was a Magus with connections to the Magus Assocation - that wanted to use Hitler as a way to cut himself off from the Magus Association and focus on his goal of dominating the world and building the perfect Red Army crossbreed with Phantasmal Beasts in orer to raise their physical prowess and lower their thinking capabilities so they would be easy to control. Even though Hitler knew of Stalin's connection to the Magus Association, he too decided to use Stalin as a way to further his own goals.

    In September 1st, the WWII officially began when Nazi Germany invaded Poland. In response, both Britain - influenced by the Clock Tower - and France declared war on Hitler. However, the wrath of the Magus Association is not the only thing Hitler brought on himself as shorty after starting the war, Hitler began his purification of the human race through the project called Holocaust.

    Hitler commanded the establishment of around 20,000 concentration camps during his rule. Though, the orders regarding the Holocaust were never written in paper format and Hitler denied all connections to the mass killing of the jews, deliberately giving vague answers on the topic. All the commands were given up close and personal from the mouth of the Fuhrer himself. Having learned about Hitler's Holocaust project, the Holy Church was enraged to say the least. The Pope declared him as the Devil's container and attempted a long range exorcism. The ritual had no effect. It was by that time that the Holy Church knew Hitler was a heretic who needed to be dealt with at once. Along with Magus Association, the Holy Church sent out support to any country oppossing Hitler.

    In response to both the onslaught from the Holy Church and the Magus Association, Hitler formed a pact with an enemy that desired the destruction of the Holy Church and the Magus Association as much as he did; the Dead Apostles. Now that he had strong allies and Stalin had betrayed the Magus Association, Hitler was ready to move on and conquer more land. He escalated his actions by invading Norway, Denmark, France, Luxembourg, the Netherlands and Belgium. Starting to think of the Magus Association as a nuisance, Hitler ordered a bombing raid on Britain with the goal of invasion. Due to his formal alliance with Japan and Italy, the United States were discouraged to come help Britain fight off the invasion.

    Darnic Prestone Yggdmillennia | Third Holy Grail War

    It was during this time that Darnic Prestone Yggdmillennia decided to approach Hitler and Nazi Germany with the intention of having them back him up as a Master in the Third Holy Grail War. Knowing that the Fuhrer was heavily interested in the occult and led experimentations for creating potions of immortality, he was under the impression that Hitler would jump at a first chance to grab the Holy Grail - which is an item similar to his beloved spear. Promising him the Grail for his Third Reich, Hitler was convinced by Darnic - who worked under the Magus Association's nose without their knowledge - to send a large military force to an allied country like Japan.

    Darnic participated in the war as a member of the Nazi Party and eventually even fought Zouken Makiri for the sake of obtaining the Grail in the name of Hitler. Pressed by the involvement of Hitler, the Einzberns committed an act of foul play which was a formula for the situation to take on an extremely chaotic turn. In the end, both the Tohsaka and Makiri families had no ways of resisting the forces of the Nazi Party and along with Darnic's help, they found the location of the Greater Grail and started transporting it from Japan to Nazi Germany.

    Darnic arranged a way for the Nazi Party to transport the Grail through Trifas to Nazi Germany, but once they arrived to Trifas, he betrayed the Nazi Party and slaughtered all the German soldiers and magi that he fought alongside of, disappearing with the Grail ''without a trace''. Once Hitler learned of this, he was infuriated. Had he not been waging war against the rest of the world, he would have gone after Darnic for a chance to skin the ''traitorous rat'' alive by his own hand. Unfortunately for him, Hitler was not the only one aware of Darnic's plans and location. Stalin - who was a rival of Hitler and was in an non-aggression pact with Germany - knew about it too.

    He vaguely threatened Hitler to not back off from the war and go after the Grail, implying he would break off the non-aggression pact. Once again, Hitler was infuriated. He was unsatisfied and wanted to eradicate the traitors. His anger built over time and the Longinus tempted him into further falling into his darkest desires... and that he did, because on June 22, 1941, Hitler finally violated the non-aggression pact with Stalin.

    Hitler's final days | Legacy

    Sending an unexpected force of 3 million armed men into the Soviet Union, Hitler took Stalin by surprise. The invading force of Nazi Germany seized a huge chunk of the Soviet Union's land until their advance was stopped outside of Moscow. Shortly after, Japan - Nazi Germany's allies - sent an attack force that crushed the United States' Pearl Harbor in Hawaii. Hitler was now at war against a coalition that included the world's largest empire (Britain), the world's greatest financial power (the U.S.) and the world's largest army (the Soviet Union). Even the Magus Association and the Holy Church were still breathing at his back.

    Facing such odds, Hitler's judgement became increasingly erratic. Believing that his Holy Lance would not lie to him and that he would indeed see to live a thousand years of his Third Reich, he became increasingly confident and insane about his military tactics. Nazi Germany and the Axis could not sustain Hitler's aggressive and expansive war. Deciding there is no longer a victory possible, the Dead Apostles broke off the pact with Hitler and escaped back to their homes. Hitler's army was starting to fail to obtain any military success and they suffered crushing defeat in the Battle of Stalingrad and Battle of Kursk.

    Eventually the Western Allied Forces landed in northern France and german soldiers began to realize defeat was inevitable. Soon after the Allied forces invaded Germany and bombed the church of Saint Katherine in which the Longinus Lanze was being safely stored in, taking away all of the stolen Nazi treasure.

    Hitler - who had lost Longinus - finally realized victory is no longer possible and a few hours later committed suicide along with his wife, Eva Braun. His body was burned behind the Reich Chancellery in a small bombed out garden and the only thing that was left of him was the legacy of an evil madman who caused the death of millions.


    Misc. Notes & Thoughts
    1. To address some of the conflicting things said about Longinus in Hitler's background story as opposed to the description of the NP given in his sheet, I actually did that on purpose. While Hitler could indeed possess Clairvoyance at the level of Lion King due to wielding a world anchor himself, the reason why Longinus did not show him his defeat at Stalin's hands was simple. Longinus is a living entity and it only showed him what he desired at the time so it could tempt Hitler into becoming it's new owner. Even if Hitler did see his defeat, he probably would have dismissed it much like Gilgamesh did because he'd find the part of the vision where it states he'll be an immortal leader of Nazi Germany far more believable...

    2. Hitler's desire when summoned into the Holy Grail is to obtain the Holy Grail for his Nazi Germany which he was unable to in life due to Darnic and reinstate the Third Reich in the form of the new Fourth Reich. Even now he denies the fact that he lost to Stalin and truly believes that the prosperous rule of Germany that Longinus showed him was actually not the Third Reich... but the Fourth Reich he would eventually establish with the help of the Holy Grail.

    3. While making the sheet, I had my friend help me with some of the stuff about it and well, we scrapped quite a bit of things. The first and most silly thing we scrapped was making the sheet into a genderbent Hitler using this as the faceclaim. My friend wanted me to do that and he almost convinced me to do it because I was unable to find a good faceclaim for Hitler due to the fact that pretty much all anime nazi art I found was either nazi chicks for most part or white haired dudes. Though, I went back to Senshinkan and decided to use one of it's villains as the faceclaim for Hitler because that was actually how I imagined Nasu!Hitler to look like aside from the fact that he doesn't exactly have a nazi uniform (which is why I hesitated in using him in the first place).

    The other scrapped ideas were including his skills under the Caster and Berserker classes with an additional Mein Kampf NP under the Caster class, but uh, I already wrote an essay on him and this got way longer than I expected it to so I scrapped that. The skills I was gonna give him are Witchcraft under the Caster class and Totenkampf (which was something similar to Battle Continuation) in the Berserker class. I also thought of giving him something like Imperial Privilege under the Caster class, but didn't particularly think the idea through in all honesty.

    4. There is actually in fact a lot more to the Aryan ideology of the Nazi Party, but Hitler liked to state that Aryans were people who possessed blonde hair and blue eyes so I just based his weaknesses against people possessing those traits instead of going further specifics since that wouldn't make his weaknesses too strong and I wanted to make Hitler a Nobunaga-type Servant. Super powerful against certain types of Servant and super weak against other types of Servants.


    Feedback is always welcome. If you feel like he should have a rank in something higher or lower, then I'll change it if it's for a good reason. Also if you see any grammar mistakes do point them out because I'm sure I made a shit-ton of them.
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    Holy crap, you weren't lying when you said this guy was over-the-top. As one who did a fairly wanked Hitler sheet myself, yours just blows mine out of the water completely in that regard. That said, it's not bad (take this from someone who's likely more tolerant of OP chuuni shenanigans then most around here). I'll try to give some feedback, though the whole thing is so large as to make that a slightly intimidating prospect (I just about skimmed Background, for instance).

    If he's Lancer, he shouldn't have Independent Action as a Class Skill. Magic Resistance is the only Class Skill Lancers possess. If you must, give him it as a Personal one but since he has more then enough Skills already and it's not really an important part of his legend I'd suggest simply scrapping it outright. Other then that, his Skills are mostly interesting and well-chosen, particularly Charisma (Distorted) and Devil's Luck. For the latter though, I'd suggest it should be something more like 'declining the effectiveness of assassination attempts' rather then an absolute immunity as described now. Also, Golden Rule seems mostly extraneous to his legend so I'd suggest nixing that one since he has enough Skills already.

    Him having four NPs is pretty out-there, given even great mythical heroes like Arturia or Gilgamesh only had two or three. I'd suggest scrapping Swastika since it seems like the least flavorful of the bunch, simply ranking him up against certain types of foes with a rather convoluted list of exceptions.

    Blitzkrieg... so it's some kind of causality-fucking attack that strikes before the target puts up their defense? One thing I can see is that you don't ever actually specify what form the NP takes. I presume artillery-fire of some kind, but is it an actual gun that he carries, just fires out of thin air or what? Interesting that we both went with a Blitzkrieg NP for our respective sheets, while I went with a 'consecutive multi-attack' like Tsubame Gaeshi to echo the principle you went with something based around bypassing defense like Gae Bolg.

    Holocaust NP is obviously rather edgy but whitewashing it would leave a bad taste of it's own so I see why you included it. In any case, the imagery of despair-filled ghouls lashing out at the living is certainly evocative. I could imagine a more noble hero like Arturia being utterly sickened and annihilate the Reality Marble altogether, giving the souls a last respite of peace as cleansing, sacred light washes over them. Mentioning how the ghouls can gather together to form bigger ones is a suitably grotesque touch, and reminds me a bit of the 'Fused Colonies' from Kabaneri Of The Iron Fortress. Was that one of your inspirations?

    Longinus Lanze is hax as heck, but it's weaknesses make it seem fairly balanced to me, at least after a quick perusal.

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    I also realize that this Hitler would utterly crush my Winston Churchill Servant. Even my own would pose an up-hill battle with Longinus Replica's destiny-alteration, but yours is on another level altogether. I wonder how hax Churchill would have to be to be a fitting rival for this guy? Maybe calling upon the entire might of the British Empire as a Reality Marble?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Holy crap, you weren't lying when you said this guy was over-the-top. As one who did a fairly wanked Hitler sheet myself, yours just blows mine out of the water completely in that regard. That said, it's not bad (take this from someone who's likely more tolerant of OP chuuni shenanigans then most around here). I'll try to give some feedback, though the whole thing is so large as to make that a slightly intimidating prospect (I just about skimmed Background, for instance).
    Well uh yeah... I tried to summarize the background bit by not going into too much details, but it turned out big as all hell nonetheless.

    If he's Lancer, he shouldn't have Independent Action as a Class Skill. Magic Resistance is the only Class Skill Lancers possess. If you must, give him it as a Personal one but since he has more then enough Skills already and it's not really an important part of his legend I'd suggest simply scrapping it outright. Other then that, his Skills are mostly interesting and well-chosen, particularly Charisma (Distorted) and Devil's Luck. For the latter though, I'd suggest it should be something more like 'declining the effectiveness of assassination attempts' rather then an absolute immunity as described now. Also, Golden Rule seems mostly extraneous to his legend so I'd suggest nixing that one since he has enough Skills already.
    That's what I thought about Independent Action at first too, but checking back, it's not that irregular to find Servants with class skills that aren't directly related to their class. For an example, Medusa, Astolfo and Serenity all have Independent Action despite not being Archers and this is most likely due to the fact that they liked to do their own thing while Stheno - an Assassin - had Magic Resistance (but I think it's because of her Goddess skill so she might not really be a valid example). I'm down for scrapping it though if it's really unnecessary. Also Golden Rule was something I was iffy on in the first place because I just wanted to give him something related to the immense gold Nazi have acquired during the Third Reich so I'll scrap it because I don't really have an idea for a better skill. Only reason I gave it to him is because Darius got it by pillaging Babylon too iirc.

    Devil's Luck, alright. That's fair. If it makes him too strong I'll scrap it.

    Him having four NPs is pretty out-there, given even great mythical heroes like Arturia or Gilgamesh only had two or three. I'd suggest scrapping Swastika since it seems like the least flavorful of the bunch, simply ranking him up against certain types of foes with a rather convoluted list of exceptions.
    Gilgamesh has three on paper but thousands in practice and Artoria also had around 5 NPs (but well, only two were really usable in a Grail War), but I guess I see the point you're trying to make. Though, I kinda am not sure about scrapping it all together because his Aryan ideology is quite the massive part of his life and I need something to represent that.

    Blitzkrieg... so it's some kind of causality-fucking attack that strikes before the target puts up their defense? One thing I can see is that you don't ever actually specify what form the NP takes. I presume artillery-fire of some kind, but is it an actual gun that he carries, just fires out of thin air or what? Interesting that we both went with a Blitzkrieg NP for our respective sheets, while I went with a 'consecutive multi-attack' like Tsubame Gaeshi to echo the principle you went with something based around bypassing defense like Gae Bolg.
    Didn't really think it was necessary to say what form it takes at the time of writting the sheet, but imagine it as basically portals opening behind him (kinda like GoB) and tank guns popping out of them and then firing off tank shells. It's kind of a mix of Nobunaga's artillery NP and Gil's GoB visually.

    [Holocaust NP is obviously rather edgy but whitewashing it would leave a bad taste of it's own so I see why you included it. In any case, the imagery of despair-filled ghouls lashing out at the living is certainly evocative. I could imagine a more noble hero like Arturia being utterly sickened and annihilate the Reality Marble altogether, giving the souls a last respite of peace as cleansing, sacred light washes over them. Mentioning how the ghouls can gather together to form bigger ones is a suitably grotesque touch, and reminds me a bit of the 'Fused Colonies' from Kabaneri Of The Iron Fortress. Was that one of your inspirations?
    Well making a Hitler sheet can be considered edgy in the first place so I'm fine with Holocaust being called edgy, considering it's not exactly... a happy event. And actually yes, Kabaneri was my inspiration for the ghouls gathering together thing. Though, my foremost inspiration for that was Darius' elephant being made out of bunch of soldiers. I only thought of the merging as a second effect because otherwise the RM seemed far too weak and Hitler's goal of keeping the enemy in there while he deals with another task in the living world seemed rather pointless to me.

    Longinus Lanze is hax as heck, but it's weakness make it seem fairly balanced to me, at least after a quick perusal.
    Made Longinus hax because it's supposed to be a big holy artifact like the Holy Grail and it was mentioned as another world anchor like Rhongomyniad.. and well, Rhongomyniad is kinda reeeeally powerful in Camelot so I had to think of something around it's level.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I also realize that this Hitler would utterly crush my Winston Churchill Servant. Even my own would pose an up-hill battle with Longinus Replica's destiny-alteration, but yours is on another level altogether. I wonder how hax Churchill would have to be to be a fitting rival for this guy? Maybe calling upon the entire might of the British Empire as a Reality Marble?
    That was kind of what I was aiming for with this sheet. As in I was making him an extremely powerful opponent against Servants of the MAN attribute kinda like how Nobunaga is against Divine Servants while at the same time being kinda weak to Servants that come from folklore and legends since for the most part Holocaust wouldn't be that strong of a NP against them, Blitzkrieg would be pathetic against them and Swastika - if it worked on them - would only give him the physical power to match them but not the skill so he could easily be defeated by Servants on his physical strength level regardless.

    Which only leaves Longinus as the strong NP against them and well, Longinus is Longinus.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    That's what I thought about Independent Action at first too, but checking back, it's not that irregular to find Servants with class skills that aren't directly related to their class. For an example, Medusa, Astolfo and Serenity all have Independent Action despite not being Archers and this is most likely due to the fact that they liked to do their own thing while Stheno - an Assassin - had Magic Resistance (but I think it's because of her Goddess skill so she might not really be a valid example). I'm down for scrapping it though if it's really unnecessary.
    Medusa had it as a Personal, not Class, Skill though. Don't know about the others. I think some from Grand Order though should be taken with a grain of salt though, since it's more likely just to fit more Skills into the available format rather then anything to do with lore.

    In any case, it seems unnecessary since he has enough Skills already.

    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    Devil's Luck, alright. That's fair. If it makes him too strong I'll scrap it.
    I wasn't saying to scrap it, just to tone down the effects.

    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    Gilgamesh has three on paper but thousands in practice and Artoria also had around 5 NPs (but well, only two were really usable in a Grail War), but I guess I see the point you're trying to make. Though, I kinda am not sure about scrapping it all together because his Aryan ideology is quite the massive part of his life and I need something to represent that.
    What? Far as I know, Arturia only has 3: Invisible Air, Excalibur and Avalon. Fair enough regarding Gil, though he's obviously an exception in that regard.

    Also, not literally every important aspect of the Servant's life needs to be made into an NP/Skill. Some stuff is inevitably going to be left out, by Class or just to keep them from being too dang powerful. Like Medea not having her dragon-pulled chariot.

    If you try to include everything a figure could conceivably have, you'll wind up with sheets that are grotesquely bloated and OP. As it is, you're skirting the lines a little. No offense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Medusa had it as a Personal, not Class, Skill though. Don't know about the others. I think some from Grand Order though should be taken with a grain of salt, though since it's more likely just to fit more Skills into the available format rather then anything to do with lore.
    Well I mean it's kinda clear when GO is trying to fit in skills for the sake of fitting in skills (such as making NPs into skills or giving new skills through Strengthen quests). But New SQ skills are still canon anyways, so no actual need to be too worried about it. I'll scrap the skill though.



    I wasn't saying to scrap it, just to tone down the effects.
    Eh, I'm dumb. I meant to write I was gonna change it's effects up a bit.


    What? Far as I know, Arturia only has 3. Invisible Air, Excalibur and Avalon. Fair enough regarding Gil, though he's obviously an exception in that regard.
    Caliburn and Rhongomyniad are her NPs too, but they're not usable when summoned under the Saber class much like Avalon is not. Caliburn because she lost in life and Rhongomyniad because it's a Lancer class NP. So that counts up to 5 NPs in total throughout all of her classes so far. Well, 6 if you count the holy dagger Carnwennan that's gonna make it's way into GO sooner or later most definitely... But she doesn't have it as a NP yet so can't really use it as an argument.

    Hitler doesn't really gain any NPs aside from Main Kampf so he has 5 in total, but yeah, he does indeed have more NPs than Artoria in one class.

    Also, not literally every important aspect of the Servant's life needs to be made into an NP/Skill. Some stuff is inevitably going to be left out, by Class or just to keep them from being too dang powerful. Like Medea not having her dragon-pulled chariot.

    If you try to include everything a figure could conceivably have, you'll wind up with sheets that are grotesquely bloated and OP. As it is, you're skirting the lines a little. No offense
    That is most definitely the NP Rider Medea would have under the Rider class though. And Heracles from SF has pretty much all of his 12 labour NPs which does lead me to believe some stronger parts of their legend/story is a NP worthy thing. Hitler's ideology is definitely a stronger part of his life. Plus, if I really wanted to make everything notable about his life or skill a NP, there was the shit about his control of mass media, night of the long knives, the Axis powers, etc. etc.

    I mean if he's too overpowered even with the NP working against him while fighting Japanese, Chinese, northern Italians, Germans, Finns and anyone with blue eyes or blonde hair then alright I'll scrap it. I thought the NP wasn't really powerful because the only actual positive effect it has on him is give him power to match someone like Mordred in physical strength alone whilist she would still beat him due to being far more skilled and experienced in combat than he is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Medusa had it as a Personal, not Class, Skill though. Don't know about the others. I think some from Grand Order though should be taken with a grain of salt though, since it's more likely just to fit more Skills into the available format rather then anything to do with lore.
    FGO doesn't use "available format" at all, because gameplay is just divided between passive skills and active skills, some of which are class and some of which are personal and some of which aren't skills at all but support NPs.

    Astolfo and Serenity have IA as personal skills in their profiles from outside of FGO.

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    Well, if we're doing OP servants may as well dump this one here. Probably a better fit for Grand Caster but hey, feel free to tear the sheet apart.

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    Class: Caster
    True Name: Scheherazade 'Queen of Stories'
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: Persia
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Human
    Armament:
    None

    STR E
    END: E
    AGI: D
    MGI: A
    LCK: A++
    NP: EX

    Height/Weight: 168cm/58kg
    Likes: Her sister, cliff-hanger endings
    Dislikes: Mysoginistic Tyrants, Abrupt conclusions
    Talent: Never-ending stories
    Natural Enemy: King Shahryar, The morning day

    Class Skills:
    • Territory Creation (A) - Creation of a 'Temple' superior to a Workshop is possible.
    • Item Construction (-) - At the cost of the acquisition of the summoning ability by means of the Noble Phantasm, the "Item Construction" skill is lost.


    Personal Skills:
    • Bardic Inspiration (A) - Through stirring words or music together she can inspire others and grant them temporary bonuses. The power of these bonuses is directly linked to one's ability to perform. At this rank, one can inspire a large audience big enough to fill a palace and capture the hearts of those who listen.
    • High Speed Divine Words (B) - Can cast High-Thaumaturgy-level Magecraft at the speed of One-Line spells.
    • Librarian of Stored Knowledge (A++) - An ability that makes it possible for a clear recall of knowledge from memory with a successful Luck check, even if the information perceived in the past was not consciously acknowledged at the time. She call recall upon any subject that could be categorised as a part of a "story". Upon examining a servant and viewing one definite detail - the heroic spirit can be fully recognised. If the Heroic Spirit is from Arabic, Persian, Indian, Turkish, Egyptian or Mesopotamian history or folklore, the recognition is almost instant.


    Noble Phantasm

    Kitāb Alf Laylah Wa-Laylah The Arabian Nights (Anti-Reality) (EX) - "Man decides to act, action becomes reality, reality becomes a story - inspiring men to act. "

    Stories hold a certain magical presence transcending space and time. Scheherazade told the persian king stories ranging from romances, adventures and fantastic epics; yet, she would never end them. She always ended the stories early with promises of more the next night. The king was enraptured with them and delayed her execution for 1001 nights until they eventually married. This Noble Phantasm is the crystallisation of arguably the most famous stories of mankind and Kitāb Alf Laylah Wa-Laylah cannot be considered a true single Noble Phantasm but instead a multitude of over one thousand Noble Phantasms combined into a single glorious legend.

    Scheherazade is able for a limited amount of time, able to summon specific figures and items from these tales and has dominion and control over them all. These items and beings count as Noble Phantasms of their own right, with their own mana supply cost to use. Summoning more famous characters from her tales as Heroic Spirits such as Ali Baba and the Forty Thives, Morigana the Clever, Aladdin and Sinbad are far more costly. The legendary Djinn of the Lamp has such power that the mana upkeep required would almost kill her upon summoning it. The only thing that comes close to a 'Limitation' with this Noble Phantasm is that like Scheherazade's stories, each legend can only be called upon once and only one at a time, however with her enormous arsenal this is hardly a problem.


    Lore

    A legendary queen and the storyteller of One Thousand and One Nights.

    King Shahryar found out one day that his first wife was unfaithful to him and had her executed. Naturally, he did only what an insane and powerful tyrant would do and resolved to marry a new virgin each day as well as behead the previous day's wife, so that she would have no chance to be unfaithful to him. Three years and a thousand dead women later he was introduced to Scheherazade, the vizier's daughter.

    Against her father's wishes, Scheherazade volunteered to spend one night with the king. Once in the king's chambers, she began to cry and wish to give her beloved sister, Dunyazade a final goodbyes. After Dunyazade entered the royal and embracing her sister, she at the end of the bed and watched as the king took his wife's maidenhead before the three fell asleep. However this was all a part of a ploy to ensure the survival of both sisters.

    Creepy as the moment was, you'd probably do stuff you didn't want to in order to avoid execution. Decapitation sucks.

    After the three shared a night, Dunyazade woke early and asked Scheherazade for a story and her sister continued until morning as she was scheduled to be executed. The king was so enthralled he postponed the execution of Scheherazade for one day to finish the story the next night. The next night, Scheherazade finished the story and then began a second, even more exciting tale, which she again stopped halfway through at dawn. Again, the king spared her life for one more day so she could finish the second story. After surviving via enthralling cliff-hangers after 1001 nights and 1000 stories, Scheherazade told the king that she had no more tales to tell him. During these 1,001 nights and three sons later the king had fallen in love with Scheherazade whom had educated him in morality with these stories. He spared her life, and made her his queen.

    Scheherazade is the ultimate storyteller and she loves nothing more than indulging a captive audience - finding nothing more satisfying than the amazed listeners of her stories. She will often tell tales of anything between legendary heroes and common events that happened to her the other day but has the ability to make even the most mundane scenario sound interesting.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    The first and most silly thing we scrapped was making the sheet into a genderbent Hitler using this as the faceclaim. My friend wanted me to do that and he almost convinced me to do it because I was unable to find a good faceclaim for Hitler due to the fact that pretty much all anime nazi art I found was either nazi chicks for most part or white haired dudes.
    Ahem.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Funderfullness View Post
    Ahem.
    Spoiler:
    He would have probably pushed me off a cliff if I used that as a faceclaim for Hitler.

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    Ah hello folks I've been lurking and decided to at least make myself known. Anyways time to make a horrible first impression.

    Bird of Hermes- I love the idea of this Noble Phantasm however if I may say something. The Noble Phantasm doesn't seem to be OP enough to be considered strong enough for a shot at Grand Caster seeing as how the items and spirits are only for a limited time and you even mention that the Djinn would kill her the moment it would be summoned. Though perhaps there's a legend amongst the rest that would may compensate greatly compensate for the lack of accessibility to the Djinn in the Lamp. Overall I like the sheet. Definitely a high class Caster.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    Caliburn and Rhongomyniad are her NPs too, but they're not usable when summoned under the Saber class much like Avalon is not. Caliburn because she lost in life and Rhongomyniad because it's a Lancer class NP. So that counts up to 5 NPs in total throughout all of her classes so far. Well, 6 if you count the holy dagger Carnwennan that's gonna make it's way into GO sooner or later most definitely... But she doesn't have it as a NP yet so can't really use it as an argument.

    That is most definitely the NP Rider Medea would have under the Rider class though. And Heracles from SF has pretty much all of his 12 labour NPs which does lead me to believe some stronger parts of their legend/story is a NP worthy thing. Hitler's ideology is definitely a stronger part of his life. Plus, if I really wanted to make everything notable about his life or skill a NP, there was the shit about his control of mass media, night of the long knives, the Axis powers, etc. etc.
    I meant in any particular Class. And King's Order (which lets SF's Herc use all the stuff from his twelve labors) is specifically noted as "crushing the very conventions of the Holy Grail itself" so it probably isn't a good example to use. He'd have some of the stuff depending on Class, but not all of it under any normal circumstance.

    You can keep the NP if you want (and it's good to see you already heeded my other suggestions) but I'm just saying four Noble Phantasms, when all but the absolute strongest and most famous heroes from myth only have about 2~3 comes off as unnecessary wank in a sheet that's already pushed to its limits in that regard.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Funderfullness View Post
    Ahem.
    Spoiler:
    Hitler wasn't blonde, though. I think that's important to show how absurd the whole 'Aryan Ideal' was.

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    Hermes: That Scheherazade Servant is pretty damn good. And the FC is masterful. (where'd you find it?)

    She's a little wanked maybe, but not in a bad way and it fits that one of the world's greatest storytellers would make for a pretty damned powerful Caster, I'd say. Even with the limitation of only being able to call upon any given legend once, having one thousand and one NP worthy summons makes her almost Gilgamesh-tier. Still not complaining, though. I mean, it does fit. Not to mention, in a straight-up fight Gil could still blitz her with his treasures that continually respawn while hers would (eventually) wear thin.

    Her personality also sounds quite entertaining. Like she has a more benign version of Shakespeare's 'treat everything like a story' complex.

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    Ah hello folks I've been lurking and decided to at least make myself known. Anyways time to make a horrible first impression.
    Nice to see you!

    Does this mean I can expect some Servant sheets from you in the future?

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    RoydGolden- I would assume so however it will be long intervals though since around page 30 I've been contemplating a servant idea. Probably going to attempt to piece something together tonight though will admit I can't guarantee a post time. Thank you for the welcome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Hitler wasn't blonde, though. I think that's important to show how absurd the whole 'Aryan Ideal' was.
    Neither was Okita; that's how Saberfaces are. I could photoshop her hair and eyes brown and add a toothbrush mustache, but that's too much effort for a dumb joke.
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