Create-A-Servant 2

[King of Padoru]

How about "Acceptation"? Something like "I'm fine with how things are going for me, so there's no point in thinking if they are better or worse compared with how they are for others"

[the god of world-0]

I think the counter part to pleasure would be "abstention" renegading all pleasures, with does actualy brings a certain final boss in mind.

[Kabalisto Koga]

All this discussion also makes me wonder what a hypothetical set of seven Virtues to oppose the seven Beasts/Evils would be.

Since we evils we've seen so far are Regression, Pity, Pleasure and Comparison I'd say the opposing virtues would be Progress, Empathy (putting yourself in someone else's shoes rather then looking down on them), Chastity (Pleasure is similar enough to Lust that the original counterpart virtue works here) and... honestly I don't have enough grasp on "Comparison" as an evil to really say what its opposite would be. Egalitarianism?

Maybe Selflessness to live without the focus one oneself or Balance/ moderation to hold balance,not crave over the neccesary minimum ,not use more force as nesccesary ,my second Beast idea resolve arround this idea just besides.tokorode lust or pleasure aren't sins per se only the "modern" three religions have marked both as sins during on the side the ancient cultures had a much natural relation to it ,like Gilgamesh said to kirei that to feel pleasure isn't a sin and that there is no direct connection (and of course I know kireis definition is insane)

[RoydGolden]

tokorode lust or pleasure aren't sins per se only the "modern" three religions have marked both as sins during on the side the ancient cultures had a much natural relation to it ,like Gilgamesh said to kirei that to feel pleasure isn't a sin and that there is no direct connection (and of course I know kireis definition is insane)

Pleasure being an Evil is a little weird, yeah. I doubt Nasu would say that refusing to enjoy anything ever is the way to living a good life. I can only imagine it specifically refers to extreme or uncontrolled pleasure, rather then all pleasures in general. (Kind of like how in all but the most extreme sects of Christianity, Lust doesn't refer to all sexual attraction but only that outside of a proper romantic relationship)

[MoonCell]

Mahou Shoujo Caster

Spoiler:

Faceclaim: "Normal Girl Morgan"
Source: Toei Animation

Class: ​Caster
Other Classes: Alter-Ego.
True Name: Morgan Lily
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Avalon
Parameters:
STR: E-/A
END: E-/B
AGI: E-/A
MGI: E-/EX
LCK: E-/E+
NP: EX/A++

Height/Length: 1,45 m
Weight: 40 Kg
Likes: Nature, the other fairies, magic, playing pranks;
Dislikes: Evildoers, her destiny, her father.
Talents: Learning, making friends;
Natural Enemy: ​Merlin, Uther Pendragon;
Attribute: Earth;
Traits: Servant, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish.

Passive Skills:

Spoiler:

*Territory Creation: D
It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. Given this form of Morgan is that of her young days as a carefree fairy princess in Avalon, her power comes from nature itself, and not from a workshop or temple. She still can prepare something like a “magical dollhouse” where she can recover faster, but not much more than that. After coming into contact with Magical Girl culture, she says that it’s her “secret base”.

*Item Construction: A+
It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. Morgan is naturally able to find and manipulate natural components for the sake of crafting potions and talismans with effects varying from simple healing to pseudo-immortality, from something that slightly boosts magic attack power to a literal magical grenade. Her young form isn’t prone to hard work, though and instead she uses this skill together with Adaptive Magic so that when fighting and she needs an item it will be made by itself, as long the components needed are present. She explains it like this: “After all, when a magical girl is in danger, a new power-up item always comes to the rescue! (*¯︶¯*)”

Personal Skills:

Spoiler:

*Favored Princess of Avalon: EX
A Curse that represents Morgan’s destiny to become the witch that will lead to the fall of Camelot. Britain was destined to ruin, or else her timeline would be pruned. She had no choice, said the fairies of Avalon to her once. Morgan didn’t believe it, she genuinely thought that once she was crowned queen of both Avalon and Britain she would join both and lead them to prosperity. However, when her sister pulled the Sword from the Stone, Caliburn, and became King, she understood. The world itself didn’t want her to rule. A wave of emotions took hold of herself after that: what should she do? Should she hate her sister for usurping her birthright? Should she hate the world for leading her country to disaster? Should she hate Merlin for leading Artoria to that path? In the end, she decided that she would do all of that and none at the same time. If the universe needed her as a villain, so be it. She took the part she denied for so long and in the end, Camelot fell. But after being evil for so many years, and her soul darker than the pitch-black abyss, seeing her sister near death after the Battle of Camlann finally made her realize that her role was done. The guilt sunk in, the thought of the years spent only for that bloodbath instead of doing what she liked as when she was a kid lashing at her heart with violence. Desperate to make up for all that, to relieve herself from those feelings, she accepted Artoria into Avalon, hoping her sins could be understood, trying to recover that gentle happiness from her young days.

Morgan Lily recognizes that her lifepath was inevitable and pities her older self. By accepting the path of the Magical Girl after her summoning and swearing an oath to justice, this skill’s effect was modified from “degrading the moral, luck and overall good characteristics of those around her” to “being the one that will be the ruin of all evil – Mahou Shoujo Magical Witch Morgan!” (her words), apparently switching the effect to gaining a + modifier against enemies that challenge the order of the world (those with Chaotic and Evil alignments). If this is just talk or actual truth, there is no way to know. A perceptive Master, however, may notice that she becomes weakened after using the skill, meaning what actually happens is that she probably turned the curse to herself in order to modify it, and her being Chaotic Good means she is also negatively affected. If you are her Master, be sure to pamper her for this, she deserves it.

*: Queen of Elementals: A
The legitimate daughter of King Uther, Morgan inherited from him a special kind of supernatural blood which was thought would die with him. It is the blood of the first fairies that arrived to the British Islands, leading to the people of Avalon, the elementals, naming her their queen. She ruled together with other eight: Moronoe, Mazoe, Gliten, Glitonea, Gliton, Tyronoe, Thiten and Thiton, the “Fairy Sisters” representing the other races of the magical island, the elementals of fire, water, earth, air and their variations. Her authority as leader of the Council of Nine and her primordial blood gave her aptitude to the use of all elements, which is represented through this skill.

As Morgan Lily is a more inexperienced aspect of Morgan her dominion of the elements isn’t at its fullest, so she can’t cast complex spells. Instead, she operates this skill during combat as a Mana Burst of the desired element. She can also combine different types to obtain new effects, but this use is much more mana-consuming. By combining all four she can unleash an attack that is comparable to a Noble Phantasm in power, unleashing the fifth element of “Void” or “Ether”, but it not only greatly drains her, but might even seriously damage her, turning it into a resource even more drastic than a Noble Phantasm. This iteration of Morgan calls it “Magical Witch – Finaaaaaaal Staaaaaaar Boooooombeeeeer!!!”

*: Adaptive Magic: B+
The primeval curse that lurks in the British Isles, a blackened Magical Energy which represents the savage disposition of the Planet, from where the archetypes of the many wild beasts, both magical and not, originate. The first fairies of Avalon were born from it and had the power to control it, which Morgan inherited.

Its original name is Ancient Curse of the Island, but Morgan Lily changed it to sound friendlier. Its effect is that of adjusting and modifying the magecraft of its user so that survival is assured. It can enhance physical parameters with mana, make spells more effective and even change the world itself around the user so that the conditions for victory are met. Prolonged usage however has a degrading effect on the user’s mind, which turns them as vicious and cruel as a hungry predator. As such, Caster only unseals it when she is in dire situations, keeping it otherwise sealed. Its adaptation speed is quick, so the best strategy against it would be fast and overwhelming attacks, such as the blast from a Holy Sword.

It can be said that Morgan’s use of this power in her lifetime is what changed her from “accepting her role” when Artoria drew the sword to full on “sadistic witch” years after.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Spoiler:

Le Fay
Lady of Avalon


Morgan with Le Fay​ activated (Source: Toei Animation)

Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: EX
Range: 1
Max Targets: 1

It’s Caster’s own blood, the blood of the First Fairies of Avalon, born from the Abyss of Primeval Beasts, guarded by the two Dragons of Britain. At first looking like a normal human, even so that Uther never even noticed her power, when her natural instincts are triggered her fairy heritage is unleashed, obtaining magical abilities beyond the best human mages.

Originally a constantly-active type Noble Phantasm which allowed her to bypass Magic Resistance and boosted her MGI and AGI stats by one rank, after assuming the Magical Girl persona she suppressed her fairy characteristics so that she could look like a normal girl. In her suppressed form she is only a little stronger than a normal human (like, 2x an adult) and her spiritual foundation is so weak she can’t be identified as a Servant, which is very helpful in identification missions.

When Caster needs to fight she activates her blood, or, as she calls it, “Mahou Shoujo Form” through the command “Magical Witch, Shine On”, which encloses her in a protective Bounded Field where a transformation sequence happens, gaining a frilly dress, boots, accessories, a new haircut and fairy wings, finally becoming “Magical Witch Morgan”. This whole thing is obviously not necessary, she could simply unleash her power and be over with it but, given her love of Magical Girls, a wise Master would let her do as she pleases, and, after all, special effects make everything better.
The protective bounded field is quite sturdy and is able to withstand attacks up to A-rank and Noble Phantasms up to C-rank, weakening those of higher ranks. When asked why all this work only to protect the whole sequence when she could materialize the clothes and other thing instantaneously and such a powerful bounded field is a burden on her Master’s magical energy she would answer: “But transformation HAS to be a free action! Can’t I do it Master...?” (｡•́︿•̀｡). If you are said Master and are still against it after such cuteness, you are a monster without salvation, simply as that.

In her new form, Caster’s sudden burst of fairy power brings her parameters up much more than what this Noble Phantasm is able to do when constantly active, boosting them from E- to the values as indicated in the parameters section, meaning not only she can rely on her vast array of magical skills but also fight on close quarters equally with most Heroic Spirits from the Knight Classes. The transformation, however, can’t be kept forever. The curse from Favored Princess of Avalon weakens her when using this power, and her parameters will drop the more time she stays transformed. It tries to compensate with the bonus against Evil and Chaotic enemies, but it’s not enough in long fights. When the curse takes full effect, her stats will return to those of her normal Caster form (STR: E, END: E, AGI:C, LCK: E, MGI: A+), but she will be too tired to fight, and will suppress her blood again so that she can transform once more after a good rest. Given this, her best combat method is to carefully study the enemy while using little power to then unleash her best spells once she gets hold of some advantage. If it fails, however, a safe escape route should be assured, else...

Gambateinn
Beyond Reality, I Shape the World

Morgan using the wand (Source: Pretty Cure Wiki, HCP ep 34)

Type: Anti-World
Rank: A++
Range: Caster’s Field of Vision
Max Targets: All ones Caster can see

Gambateinn means “magic wand” in old norse, and is, effectively, Morgan’s magic wand.

Made from the wood of one of the sacred Apple Trees of Avalon, it can be said that the concept of Avalon as an utopia that guards the Planet from external menaces is carried inside the wand.

The name of the wand is not actually Gambateinn, it is a generic term that Morgan applied to it as a word that carries Mystery, a word of the gods, given both the British and Norse gods carry the same basic origin.

Its original name is Avalon Fortuna, the “Treasure of Avalon”, a title given by the Council of Nine to their leader, and which led to a syncretism in some tales of Morgan with the actual goddess Fortuna. Morgan changed its name in the present because she thought it wasn’t “fit for a Magical Girl” and also in order to make her identity more difficult to discover (not that the great witch Morgan of all people becoming a Magical Girl wouldn’t already confuse the heck out of enemies).

The fact that the name Gambateinn already carried Mystery within itself and its relation to Caster’s gods made possible the activation of the Noble phantasm without demerits, similar to a certain Golden Boy and his Axe.

When activated, this Noble Phantasm becomes a catalyst to the Ancient Curse of the Island in its world-altering effects, allowing the rewriting of the texture of reality without the interference of the Counter Force and protecting the user from its mind-altering effects. It can be said that the wand “recreates the utopia”, slowly transforming the surrounding environment to fit to its holder’s desires. It is a conscious manipulation of reality, different from the skill’s effect, where the world alters itself to what it judges best for victory.

This Noble Phantasm can’t act on the concept of “human”, who wandered off from the path of Gaia, so only what is considered part of the “natural world” can be modified: plants, animals, microorganisms, minerals, etc...

The magical energy consumption depends on the scale of modification Caster wants to operate: changing a pebble to a poisonous spike doesn’t cost much but changing a forest to an army of warrior trees takes a lot. Overall, Caster only uses this Noble Phantasm to perform a finisher attack she dubbed Twin Dragon Vortex – Magical Collapse, an Anti-Fortress strike where Caster summons the avatars of the Dragons of Britain to unleash the pure Black Energy of the Primeval Curse, similar to what Artoria Alter can do with Excalibur Morgan. It’s her version of the classical purifying attack from every possible Mahou Shoujo anime, she limits its use exactly so that she can keep being in character.

Lore:

Spoiler:

Morgan Lily is Morgan before Uther died and Artoria took the Sword from the Stone. She still isn’t the Witch of Ruin, she still loves everything and everyone, the perfect princess.

It’s the Morgan from when she still lived in Avalon with the other fairies taking care of her while her father was at war; when Merlin taught her the basics of magecraft; when she played happily with the creatures of the forests. It was her from before they told her the truth: she would bring the end of Britain, else it would be the end of the world.

Morgan at first rejected it. How? She would never be able to do it! She loved Britain and its inhabitants, she was their princess! When her father died however, and she wasn’t nominated regent, instead letting the Sword select the King, she started to realize there wasn’t a choice. Everything was going so that her ideal kingdom would never happen.

When asking Merlin and her fellow student Vivian on why they didn’t nominate her King, Queen, or whatever, none of them supported her. She was astonished. Everyone seemed to want her as an evil witch. She separated herself from her teacher and her friend and went into a self-imposed exile.

After seeing her bastard sister Artoria being nominated King, however, Morgan finally snapped. The world itself was conspiring against her. She wanted to be good from the depths of her heart, but no one would let her even try! If that was the case she would destroy it then, that’s what they wanted! She would make Camelot a living hell, destroy the British and make them know that it was their fault for not giving her a chance.

She manipulated Artoria, the Knights, her Children, the King’s so-called Wife and everyone else her Sister Loved. She created an Homunculus to bring his reign down, and eventually succeeded, each step of her evil path the curse of the island making her more and more of a cruel and powerful witch.

In the aftermath of the Battle of Camlann, however, her role was over. Britain was over. And so, the effect of the curse slowly faded. She remembered her original self, that she only wanted the good for her country and that she rejected her destiny, only to fall into it all the same. Overwhelmed by these feelings, as a last act of gentleness before exiling herself, definitely this time, she welcomed her dying sister to Avalon, hoping they could understand each other one day, when Artoria never actually resented her.

Morgan is still alive in Avalon to this day, and, like Artoria, isn’t part of the Throne of Heroes. Morgan Lily is actually an Alter-Ego, a piece of her personality that was dominant in her legends before her role as bringer of the ruin of Camelot was cemented in later tales. Being a facet that was “discarded” by the present Human Order, it was able to be registered in the Throne and summoned under a Caster-class container.

Personality:

Spoiler:

A cheerful and optimistic girl, even knowing the atrocities her adult self did. She learned to accept what happened and moved on, while still carrying a little of self-pity on not being able to become the ideal princess she always wanted to be.

After being summoned and coming into contact with Magical Girl culture, she became enamored. “Young girls using Magic to go against the evildoers!” It was her dream come true.

Morgan Lily adopted the identity of Magical Witch Morgan, “Master’s own Magical Girl which will bring punishment to the evil servants who wish to take the Holy Grail!”.

She likes to fight, finding joy in defeating those truly evil and in fighting good opponents who put up a fair fight. She also likes nature, and is always asking to go around parks, botanic gardens, biological preservation areas, etc.

She gets bored easily and is also a bit hotheaded, leading to a certain difficulty in grasping delicate situations. Being a princess, her being a bit spoiled is a given and she will be always looking for attention, especially from her dear Master, be it man or woman, boy or girl.

She loves presents, and it’s a way to keep her quiet enough to have a little peaceful time, until she gets bored again.

Her wish for the grail is to reincarnate,so that she can keep being a Magical Girl that defeats evil and finally be able to live the life she always desired

Relationships:

Spoiler:

Adult Morgan: “Oh my poor adult self, don’t be sad... We both know what we did was needed, I don’t loathe you, I swear! Hey, want to play with me? I can make a super cute costume for you and... Wait, come back, me!

Artoria: “Sister is that you? After all, I think you truly have the bearing of a king. I know my older self would never say so, so I will do it myself. *whispers* We’re really sorry”

Artoria Lily: “The sister just after becoming a king, huh... She doesn’t seem to know everything I did, and we are around the same age so... Heeey! Artoria, let’s find some bad guys to split their balls!”

Merlin: “Pervert sensei is here! Hohoho, this will be fun... *evil grin*”

Vivian Lily: “Magical Witch Duo – Dark Morgan ☆ Light Vivian HAS... COME!!”

Gawain/Gareth/Gaheris/Agravain/Mordred: “Don’t call your mom cute, it’s embarrassing! What am I saying, don’t even call me mom!!! I’m just 15, I’m too young to be a mother, a Magical Girl CAN’T be already a mother!! AAAAAAAAAAH!!!! *runs away*”

Prisma Illya: “I... I can’t believe it!! A TRUE Magical Girl!! Can you give me a sign, and a photo, and a signed photo, and a handshake, and a signed photo of a handshake, ooooooooh...” *faints*.

Creator Notes:

Spoiler:

This idea started with “I want to do a historical Magical Girl Servant”, but as no other better candidate came to mind I went with Morgan. Some of the Nasuverse Arthurian lore may be inaccurate, such as the nine queens of Avalon which probably aren’t a thing and Morgan herself being a queen of Avalon also. It’s both a joke sheet and a serious sheet, where there’s the whole Mahou Shoujo shenanigan while also expanding lore about things like the Primeval Curse which Fate!Morgan actually has but wasn’t touched much upon by official sources. Also, Mahou Shoujo and Magical Girl are used interchangeably here, please don’t be mad just because I used both. That said, once more, enjoy!

[RoydGolden]

Morgan Lily: This is a really cool sheet (about to go for a walk now so I haven't read the whole thing) but from what I understand your portrayal of Quantum Time Locks seems a bit off. QTMs only fix an outcome in history after the fact (meaning it can't be changed by time-travellers), so the idea of Britain needing to fall or else the timeline would be pruned doesn't really make any sense.

That's just my understanding (other people are free to pop in and correct me I'm wrong) and the rest of the sheet is great, so you could probably make it canon-compliant with a bit of tinkering.

[Dragolord09]

I'm guessing that a "Vivian Lily" Sheet is next to be created?

[King of Padoru]

First of all, I love how cute this sheet is. Second, that's an OP magical girl, but then again, we're talking about Morgan. I'd make her be completely invulnerable during the transformation sequence, but that's a minor detail.

I wonder how she'd react if she met my "magical girl".

[Der Ritter]

>Not using a Saberface for her appearance
This sheet is trash!
But also it's good, and fun.

[MoonCell]

Morgan Lily: This is a really cool sheet (about to go for a walk now so I haven't read the whole thing) but from what I understand your portrayal of Quantum Time Locks seems a bit off. QTMs only fix an outcome in history after the fact (meaning it can't be changed by time-travellers), so the idea of Britain needing to fall or else the timeline would be pruned doesn't really make any sense.

That's just my understanding (other people are free to pop in and correct me I'm wrong) and the rest of the sheet is great, so you could probably make it canon-compliant with a bit of tinkering.

The idea was I going with is that the outcome locked in most universes is preserved while the different ones are pruned. The fairy queens and Merlin, with their clairovayance, could see most timelines were walking to Camelot falling, so they guided theirs to the same happening, preserving it.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Holla die Waldfee this is a big sheet ! And a quite entertaining ! I think with my Future Morgan profile i go a more Carmila/Medea route compared with this here . One Question what would become her personality if she is forced to use adaptive Magecraft for a long time ?

[Kabalisto Koga]

And thank you ive got some Clues for my own Morgan profile ,as King of padoru said i should practise some more like with Warriors and kings i would like to ask everyone here which ideas would you have for the following persons as Servants: Pharaohns: Hatschepsut,Cheops/Chofu,Djedfre,Echnaton,Others: Montezuma,Nicholas Tesla(Caster),Agrippina(neros mother),Yudhischthra,Thor,Fenris(Berserker),Saladi n,Bernhard Heuvelmanns(Remake). I am thankfull for every suggestion,hint and tipp !

[Shiki-pon]

Here's a few suggestions:
Cheops/Khufu at least has a pretty easy Noble Phantasm in the form of the Great Pyramid of Giza. It's also somewhat interesting that there are no depictions of Khufu making an offering to the gods (unlike with most other pharaohs since), and it has been suggested that he may have tried to ban worship in temples. Depending on how it's handled, it could be represented by a Skill or a Noble Phantasm (I'd lean on the former, since going with a single NP is almost always wiser than giving a Servant undeserved multiples). He's also reputed to have been evil (partially thanks to the aforementioned closing of temples), so there's that.
Montezuma (actually Moctezuma) depends heavily on which Monty you're going for. The famous ruler of prosperous Aztec Empire or the guy who presided over the Spanish laying waste to said Empire.
Fenrir's abilities depend on whether this is the young Fenrir (or some approximation thereof) or Fenrir at Ragnarok. Either way, he might benefit from a Skill that allows him to shrink to manageable size, so he doesn't have to tower over skyscrapers and whatnot. Monstrous Strength is a given. As for his NP, the younger version of Fenrir might have a "growing" NP where he increases in size and strength, as well as Gleipnir (which would obviously be detrimental). Ragnarok-Fenrir would probably have something to do with slaying a god, maybe Demonic Mutation as well, given that he's mentioned as leaking fire from his eyes and nostrils.

Something like that.

[King of Padoru]

Make Hatshepsut have a skill that makes her an inverse trap. Also, something related to her claiming that Amun was the father of the Egyptian people

[Crying]

If you want to turn Fenrir into a waifu, I recommend MGE's Hellhound as a faceclaim - it fits pretty well imo.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Here's a few suggestions:
Cheops/Khufu at least has a pretty easy Noble Phantasm in the form of the Great Pyramid of Giza. It's also somewhat interesting that there are no depictions of Khufu making an offering to the gods (unlike with most other pharaohs since), and it has been suggested that he may have tried to ban worship in temples. Depending on how it's handled, it could be represented by a Skill or a Noble Phantasm (I'd lean on the former, since going with a single NP is almost always wiser than giving a Servant undeserved multiples). He's also reputed to have been evil (partially thanks to the aforementioned closing of temples), so there's that.
Montezuma (actually Moctezuma) depends heavily on which Monty you're going for. The famous ruler of prosperous Aztec Empire or the guy who presided over the Spanish laying waste to said Empire.
Fenrir's abilities depend on whether this is the young Fenrir (or some approximation thereof) or Fenrir at Ragnarok. Either way, he might benefit from a Skill that allows him to shrink to manageable size, so he doesn't have to tower over skyscrapers and whatnot. Monstrous Strength is a given. As for his NP, the younger version of Fenrir might have a "growing" NP where he increases in size and strength, as well as Gleipnir (which would obviously be detrimental). Ragnarok-Fenrir would probably have something to do with slaying a god, maybe Demonic Mutation as well, given that he's mentioned as leaking fire from his eyes and nostrils.

Something like that.

Thank you Shiki-pon for you suggestions,i will make Chofu as a Berserker with a relation to Mahes (war god of the old egypt) ,i havent know it existed more as one Moctezuma in this case i would like to hear about both your ideas,i will have Fenris a "practical/pragmatic* fixed size but with Nobelphantasm that let him grow to a extent.

Make Hatshepsut have a skill that makes her an inverse trap. Also, something related to her claiming that Amun was the father of the Egyptian people

Yes ,I will make her have a heavy connection to Amun-re , just to be shure a inverse trap is a crossdresing girl again,right ?
I will think about it but a gender related skill is fix notified and planmed.

If you want to turn Fenrir into a waifu, I recommend MGE's Hellhound as a faceclaim - it fits pretty well imo.

I hadnt it in mind but you infected me with this idea bro,i will make a convetional and a "full mega wife version"!

Thank you three for your ideas and suggestions ,should you have some additionally ideas please tell me them !

[King of Padoru]

If you don't want just a cross-dressing Hatshepsut, you can always use a futa-spell like Artoria and Merlin did

[Shiki-pon]

Thank you Shiki-pon for you suggestions,i will make Chofu as a Berserker with a relation to Mahes (war god of the old egypt) ,i havent know it existed more as one Moctezuma in this case i would like to hear about both your ideas,i will have Fenris a "practical/pragmatic* fixed size but with Nobelphantasm that let him grow to a extent.

Uhh... I'd suggest you don't connect Khufu to any specific deities, least of all one whose worship started around a thousand years after Khufu's reign... So maybe don't. Or then this Khufu you're making was spectacularly long-lived.

As for the Moctezumas, the first (2nd emperor of the Aztec Empire overall) would probably have something to do with the Aztec Flower Wars (more or less ritual warfare meant to get sacrifices), given that he seems to have started the tradition.
The second (9th emperor of the Aztec Empire) managed to grow the Empire to its largest size, but then the Spanish arrived and pretty much took over. Moctezuma II apparently got killed by his own people later on. By reputation he was a weak ruler, and he is most known for getting captured by the Spanish.
Oddly enough, there's a mythological figure among certain Amerindian myths named Montezuma who seems to have elements of both Moctezumas. I guess either Moctezuma could draw some power from this (very, very minor) hero-god. Another note regarding the Moctezumas is that apparently Aztec rulers spoke in roundabout/overly polite ways that required an interpreter to translate to their subjects.

[King of Padoru]

About Cheops, beside what Shiki has said, it'd be very stupid that he had powers from a god when he didn't worship any. A curse that affects negatively his status as a divine punishment would be better

[Kabalisto Koga]

About Cheops, beside what Shiki has said, it'd be very stupid that he had powers from a god when he didn't worship any. A curse that affects negatively his status as a divine punishment would be better

Well i can say as egypt mythology is one of my more going into detail subjets compared to britain legends or grek mythology is that many deities are just early forms of ra or others and it must be said that even now we dont know all like from many kings of the old egypt we know only their names,but what i wanted to say that i had intentionally in mind to make him draw his power from mahes but how would if I make him be possesed by him ? In a foreigner like way ?