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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    A horse being a Heroic Spirit doesn't make any sense, especially considering Buc's only claim to fame was being so wild that "only Alexander could tame him". There are probably better candidates for straight up animal Servants tbh.
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    The Alexander Romance presents a mythic variant of Bucephalus's origin. In this tale, the colt, whose heroic attributes surpassed even those of Pegasus, is bred and presented to Philip on his own estates. The mythic attributes of the animal are further reinforced in the romance by the Delphic Oracle who tells Philip that the destined king of the world will be the one who rides Bucephalus, a horse with the mark of the ox's head on his haunch.
    Also Alexander and the horse are inseparable in most depictions. Making the horse an Heroic Spirit allows him to summon him in Ionian Hetairoi and shit like that.
    Also on the last point: sure. I'm still hoping for
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    Talos is probably fine. I know Royd or somebody did a sheet on a Jewish golem one time, and I've been contemplating one on the Colossus of Rhodes.

    Yeah screw it, I've already started a new one but super horse sheet coming up eventually.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Is there even a canon example of a nonhuman becoming a Heroic Spirit?
    Asterios, Bucephalus, Medusa, Stheno, Euryale, Brynhildr, Enkidu, Pestilence, Tamamo, Nursery Rhyme, Shuten Douji, Frankenstein's Monster, Ibaraki Douji.

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    You don't even need to exist to be a Hero, my dudes. Just go wild with your fanfics and have fun.

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    Name: Talos
    Class: Archer
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Personality: A solemn, large giant of a man, who quietly holds a massive crush on Europa. In a world without Zeus looming over him, he feels as though he can finally be with his beloved without fear of betting Zapped to death. He does have a slightly cruel sense of humor however, and will often make subtle pranks on his master.

    Among Talos’s soft spots is his fondness for dogs, in particular, Laelaps, his constant companion of many years.
    Parameters:
    Strength: A Mana: C
    Endurance: B Luck: D
    Agility: C N. Phantasm: A

    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance: A
    Talos was a massive Divine Construct built during the Age of Gods ,designed to resist anything that would destroy him. Thus, his MR is boosted to this rank.

    Independent Action: C
    Talos was not particularly known for being independent in life, having bound himself to an island to defend Europa. However, he was known to have lasted without food, water, or any sustenance or maintenance for years, thus, his rank is C in this skill.

    Personal Skills:
    Guardian of Europa: B
    In life, Talos was built to defend Europa. Thus, as long as Talos remains near his master, Talos is able to gain a luck and Endurance rank-up. Against enemies that are targeting his master instead of himself, Talos gains a damage bonus against them.

    Mechanical Masterpiece: A
    In life, Talos was an exceptionally well crafted mechanical being. He can increase his strength by one rank, as if using Monstrous Strength at A-rank. In addition, he is immune to all Noble Phantasms or Skills that affect a being based on Poison, Starvation, or any other things that wouldn’t damage a mechanical being.

    Divinity: C-
    Talos in life was a Divine Construct, a being built with and imbued by Divine Power. However, his personal dislike of the god Zeus reduces it to C-.


    Noble Phantasm:
    Laelaps, ‘Absolute Hunting Dog’: B+ {Anti-Personal/Anti-NP}
    Talos can summon into existence a Divine Beast, Laelaps. Laelaps in legend was said to always catch his prey. Thus, when summoned, Laelaps will seek out and pin down any opponent he finds, forcing them into a confrontation. Laelaps is not a particularly formidable opponent, but is capable of forcing an opponent to stop and deal with him while being attacked by Archer’s other Noble Phantasm. However, if a causality effect causes Laelaps to be unable to catch something ,such as an NP that guarantees escape, then Laelaps and the offending object will be turned to stone, a by-product of Laelap’s legend being one of two opposing causality effects being turned to stone. However, this effect wears off after a few days for both Laelaps and the object.

    Europa’s Pilum, ‘For Europa's Safety’: A++ {Anti-Personal}
    In legend, Europa was said to have been gifted a javelin that never missed. In truth, Talos wielded this javelin in her defense, smiting anything that came close to the isle. However, as this legend has been distorted into Talos throwing rocks and various detritus. Thus, any object that Talos is capable of lifting, becomes a throwing weapon of Talos’s, becoming A-ranked noble phantasms. He can infuse them with prana to make them home in on his opponents. This Noble Phantasm gains damage bonuses against opponents who threaten Talos's master. [Yes, this is basically Knight of Honor, but for throwing stuff.]

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Yes,but he has no stats and doesn't show up in Canon that much.
    Who is Medusa

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    How do I read

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    IIRC Talos has been done as a Berserker but it was under the stipulation of "It's Mana-Costs to maintain it only allow it to be manifested only once". Also Greetings Folks. I'm not dead yet. Pondering an idea for a Berserker.
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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    Who is Medusa

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    How do I read
    Medusa got turned into yet another hot chick. As in, full animal servants.

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    Enkidu's Master was just some wolf.
    But also a super special wolf that could do magic or some shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Enkidu's Master was just some wolf.
    But also a super special wolf that could do magic or some shit.
    Not a servant, and also ,wtf???

    Does every grail war have to be irregular??

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    The strange fake one in Strange Fake, specifically yes.

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    I don't really like posting Servants other people already made, but I had announced this was coming, and it's a remake on a Servant I posted in the original thread years ago, so there it goes.

    What They See

    It was a festival. An inappropriate, mindboggling summer festival of the end times. The people of Chaldea, of both the feeble and the heroic variety, joined hands to create a festive mood and the festive environment to eat, drink and be merry. Abandoning themselves to sheer self-satisfaction, with the only restrained being their respect towards the single, plain, powerless human who brought them all together.

    At the center of the festival grounds stood an arena of white tiles; a fighting ground seemingly out of some fantasy tournament. On that arena, the King of the Spartans and the berserker that was not faced each other in glorious unarmed combat, to the cheers and jeers of an excited and probably somewhat inebriated audience. Some distance away from the arena, Xuanzang and Iskandar warmed themselves up for their own match, all the while trading playful barbs. The King of Heroes watched the proceedings with a strangely pleased expression, all the while seated on the throne he had placed on the highest location reserved exclusively for him, because of course.

    “So, do you what exactly we are celebrating here, Da Vinci-chan?” the Master of Chaldea finally asked while touring the festival grounds, all the while he and his lovely escorts looked for the mind behind this “Festival of Lights”, as she had called it.

    “Ah, yes, yes!” Chaldea’s first Servant was herself a bundle of merriment. “I was curious as well, so I asked her about it. Turns out it’s all about Gilgamesh.”

    Mashu and her Master paused their steps for a moment, right before a “…huh” escaped their lips at the same time.

    “Indeed,” replied the Italian genius. “The fifth month of the Babylonian calendar was dedicated to Gilgamesh, and a festival was celebrated in his honor. The wrestling contests are performed in remembrance of Gilgamesh’s fight with Enkidu, or so I was told.”

    The Master of Chaldea gazed upon the festival with completely new eyes.

    “…nobody else knows, I guess.”

    “Aside from the Mesopotamians, no, I guess they do not.”

    “Good.” He looked around. “But where’s that girl, anyway…?”

    “Over there, senpai.”

    The festival’s main organizer was not partaking of its pleasures. A distance away from the merrymaking, two women sat on the sterile soil to gaze at the starless sky. How could there be any visible stars, what with Solomon’s magic creating a corona of light that smothered the firmament?

    It took a while to get used to her clothing—or lack thereof—but the Master of Chaldea could proudly face his latest Assassin-class Servant; and Mashu could interact with her without being overcome by the urge to blindfold her Master.

    “Huh…” uttered the Master in question. “Now that’s an unexpected duo.”

    “Hmm…” Mashu agreed wordlessly. “But it’d be great if they could become friends, wouldn’t it?”

    “Friendship? Is ‘friendship’ what you see when you look at those two?” A new voice interjected. The Master and his companions turned around to find yet another unexpected couple.

    “KoGil, Ishtar.”

    “Hmm…” the latest descended goddess murmured with false sweetness. “The Star of Destruction and the filthy Anathema of the Gods. There’s some compatibility there.”

    The young King of Heroes found particular amusement in that choice of words, for his lively laughter brightened their surroundings.

    “That’s rude, holy Ishtar.”

    “I say it as I see it.”

    The now larger group approached the seated pair. A single pair of placid eyes met the Master and his entourage.

    “What are you two looking at?” greeted the Master with some joviality. Assassin glanced at Altera to her side before addressing the question.

    “This one does not know.”

    Aware that her words more often than not elicited northing but confusion on the part of her Master, the dark-skinned Assassin went into further detail.

    “This one does not know what Altera sees when she looks at the sky, but it is most definitely something different from what this one sees. Therefore, this one can only speak for herself.”

    At some point the entire group joined the pair in skygazing. Ishtar was very careful to stay as far away from Assassin as possible without leaving the group. In fact…

    “Isn’t it already dangerous, this group? I mean, that wanton one’s Noble Phantasm…”

    “Mah, mah, no need to worry,” contested KoGil with a dismissing gesture. “You and I are here, so it won’t be an issue.”

    “So,” Da Vinci said, pulling the conversation back to the mysterious duo. Or rather, to Assassin, for Altera never took her eyes from the dark sky, seemingly unaware or uncaring of the others. “What do you see when you look at the sky?”

    Assassin looked down for a moment before turning her eyes back to Solomon’s magical masterpiece on high.

    “A wish.”

    Only the girl’s young brother assented to that.

    “Please explain further,” he said.

    “Yes, Brother. The stars carry in their light the history of countless distant worlds. And since time immemorial humanity have sought their tomorrow in those same stars. The boundless cosmos contains both the past and the future. But now there are no stars, no past and no future; only oblivion, and Solomon’s wish contained in that ring of light.”

    “Solomon’s wish…?” Mashu murmured, to which Assassin responded with a rare smile, her eyes eerily gleaming beneath the light of the mightiest spellwork.

    “A past and a future, of course.”

    Mashu wore doubt on her face and sought support from her Master. The Master in question had no answers, but he felt strangely at ease thanks to Da Vinci’s calm acceptance and KoGil’s cherubic smile. Ishtar was about to pose a new question, but Altera chose that very moment to lower her head and turn to her skygazing companion.

    “It is very fragile.”

    Assassin nodded. “Yes, the whole structure is very fragile. That is why Solomon must be stopped. Even if he establishes a viable future, it will probably rest on an unfeasible system. It will be a future without future.”

    Altera nodded, and then turned to the Master of Chaldea.

    “Let us do our best, Master.”

    “Um, sure.”

    “Well, don’t you see quite a lot up there, little harlot?” Ishtar pointlessly teased. Assassin went into an almost robotic stillness for a few moments before replying with a lame shrug.

    “This one is not the one who sees the most. It is not this one’s place to speak before my exalted Brother does.”

    KoGil’s smile was beatific. The smile of a little devil.

    “Now you have a better idea of why kept her around, Lady Ishtar.”

    “You are detestable, Gilgamesh.”

    The young king’s laughter was brighter than summer’s fireworks.


    Base Stats & Skills

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    Peshtur

    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Gender: Female
    Source: Sumerian Civilization, The Epic of Gilgamesh
    Region: Mesopotamia

    Height & Weight: 152 cm, 45 kg
    Likes: Ceremony, writing, her family, stargazing
    Dislikes: Disorderliness, cloudy skies
    Talent: Attracting disasters
    Natural Enemy: Altera, Tiamat
    Attribute: Variable (see Crest of the White Outsider, below)

    STR D
    END E
    AGI E
    MGI EX
    LUK E
    Noble Phantasm A+


    CLASS SKILLS
    Presence Concealment –
    Peshtur lacks the standard class skill of the Assassin class. Instead, she received the Personal Skill “Unseen Nemesis” (see below).


    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Crest of the White Outsider – EX
    The glowing mark Peshtur bears on her body. It does not belong to any magical system of her time; a mysterious power she has possessed since she has memory, allowing her to tap into the mana of distant celestial bodies, or so she claims. It further allows her to invoke phenomena that in her era and the current one could be interpreted to be “magecraft”. Regardless, it is the source of her MGI rank, and the reason she needs but the minimal sustenance from a Master or the Grail System altogether. Summoning Peshtur is summoning a self-sustaining blight. She will not be defeated by running out of juice.

    In addition, this skill modifies Peshtur’s attribute between Man, Sky or Earth according to immediate convenience. This very capability implies that its bearer cannot be accurately placed in any single category of being.

    Potnia Theron
    Lament of the Barley Fields
    – B+

    The broken manifestation of the incomplete hieros gamos. The interrupted circle that brings inescapable death without the promise of eventual renewal. Death without life, chaos without order. The heretic womb that violates all sanctity and rejects all order. The retribution of a broken blessing that devours all other blessings. But also, humankind’s heretic wish to defy the yoke of divinity and carve its own path in the world, even it is means that same world’s ruin, as well as its own.

    A “quality” that attracts evil—a beacon of ruin. Automatically reduces Peshtur’s LCK to E-rank, and it cannot be raised by any means. Furthermore, she inflicts extra damage to Divine Spirits and rank-down to all their parameters, but also takes extra damage from such entities. Finally, Peshtur cannot receive any benefits from healing magic, and further denies natural and magical healing to all living beings within her sight.

    Peshtur admits that “Potnia Theron” is likely not the real name of this skill, but she claims complete ignorance of its true name or nature.

    Sahartu Ulutima
    Fragment of the First Law
    – A

    Debris of Creation. A skill that represents the timeline of progress from the separation of heaven and earth to the separation of nature and civilization, and the Servant’s connection to that process. An ultra-rare skill that could only be claimed by Heroic Spirits associated in some way to creation gods or to the cosmogony of the most ancient cultural spheres. Only the King of Heroes has sublimated this unique “sense” into a Noble Phantasm.

    It is lauded as “the understanding of all things in creation”, which is a fancy way to describe what is simply phenomenal pattern recognition combined with eidetic memory. There are no truly original things; everything is a variation of something else. Therefore, there is no answer that cannot be found or secret that cannot be veiled by examining the issue deeply enough.

    Unseen Nemesis – A-
    Identical to Espionage in that does not conceal one’s presence, but rather makes one’s presence fail to register as hostile. The effect is proportional to the number of people around the Servant—a sufficiently small group will feel unnerved by the Servant’s presence. It is far less effective on Heroic Spirits than it is on ordinary people. All in all, a rather poor stealth skill.

    Peshtur, as Anathema to the Gods, is a conspicuous existence to all Divine Spirits and those with a powerful Divine Spirit aptitude. This skill automatically fails against such beings.


    Noble Phantasms

    Siškurimma Anuha
    Eighth Sword of the Baleful Star

    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-City/Anti-Populace (Reality Marble?)
    Range: 1-999
    Maximum Targets: 1 person/Infinite
    Peshtur’s innate power, constantly active and incessantly disruptive. A mysterious power Peshtur apparently neither understands nor controls. She can only give its name: The Last Prayer to a Forgotten Star. It is neither a curse, nor a form of mass-scale mental interference—really, it can only be explained as some sort of automatic innate bounded field that stealthily erodes society. Unlike Altera’s Civilization Erosion, which is innately constrained by the Heroic Spirit’s unique worldview, or Sarasvati Meltout, which bluntly and aggressively dissolves a community into primordial slime, Peshtur’s Noble Phantasm drives civilization towards self-destruction by smashing one of its basic foundations.

    Faith—that is, belief not based in proof—is one of the fundamental aspects of the human experience. It goes beyond mere religious belief; it was and still is one of the strongest engines of human progress. It includes intuition and the acceptance of primitive notions as foundations for all disciplines of knowledge; it includes the confidence that allows even the most competent individual to push forward in spite of the possibility of failure. Peshtur’s Noble Phantasm erodes the subjacent faith that cushions and protects a civilized society, transforming it over the course of a generation into a hotbed of cynicism and callousness in which not even children can put their trust on the unconditional love of their mothers. A decent part of Uruk’s rapid decline after Gilgamesh’s passing can be attributed to his little sister.

    As a Heroic Spirit, Peshtur has gained the ability to further weaponize this unique trait of hers using her definition as “Anathema to the Gods” as the basis. She projects the boundary that is her womb onto the World Egg to envelop a single target into bleak stillness, transmuting the intangible degeneration of civilization into a physical phenomenon. The result of applying her Noble Phantasm on the entire world over an eon of time is compressed and forced upon a single sacrificial lamb. All sapient creatures are susceptible to this attack, without exception. It inflicts critical damage on creatures that strongly rely on or are strongly defined by faith. Death might prove a better deal, for those who survive the attack still have to deal with having been smothered by the denial of their foundation as human beings and the perversion of the entirety of humankind as this foundation is shattered. It takes an ego capable of abandoning the foundation of personal faith intrinsic to all intelligent beings, or one who has mastered the world and the self to a degree that personal faith is rendered unnecessary, to face this Noble Phantasm and come out completely unscathed.

    Samanana
    Tethering Rope of the Broken Heaven

    Rank: B+ (originally EX)
    Type: Anti-Divine (originally Anti-Planet)
    Range: 1-99
    Maximum Targets: 1 person
    A primordial relic that connects the physical world with the abode of the gods, and the channel through which the boons and banes of divinity pour down upon the mortal realm. According to the mythological tale, the rope was the treasure and responsibility of the herdsman of heaven, Šulazida. Inanna somehow got him to pull down the Temple of Heaven, Eanna, and placed it on her cherished city, Uruk, thus establishing a temple complex dedicated to her around and atop an older district dedicated to An. The rope therefore became a sacred relic guarded by the priesthood of Uruk, but it is Peshtur who claimed it as her Noble Phantasm. However, Peshtur will not explain whether the rope is her Noble Phantasm because she used it to capture and violate An, or whether it was her successful capture of An by an unknown method, plus her status as priestess, that granted her the rope as her Noble Phantasm.

    As one of the interfaces that connect the mortal realm with alternate realms of existence, the Tethering Rope is a Noble Phantasm of unfathomable power. However, Peshtur can only claim a portion of that primordial power, for she is simply not the chosen one. She was merely a priestess entrusted with guarding the relic, not the exalted ruler of an era, chosen by the turns of fate to wield the primordial tool to protect the destiny of the planet. Furthermore, her own power has twisted the rope from its original purpose, rendering into yet another expression of its new master’s involuntary contempt towards all things divine.

    Peshtur can manifest and control the rope in a similar way to Gilgamesh’s use of the Chains of Heaven. A creature completely surrounded—emphasis on “surrounded”, not “captured” or “restrained”—by the rope loses the benefit of all boons (skills and bonuses and corrections to both parameters and skills) with a divine origin it may have. Noble Phantasms and the Goddess Core skill of true Divine Spirits are not affected. The effect is permanent and unremovable, persisting even beyond Peshtur’s death or the rope’s destruction. The only way to avoid its dire curse is to avoid being surrounded by the rope in the first place.


    Legend

    The original little sister not related by blood.

    Gilgamesh does not have siblings. He is a divine conception, designed for a specific purpose. There was no reason for such a being to have brothers or sisters. But he has two sisters, or so is stated in the Epic. The elder sister was taken in as a war prisoner who proved herself too competent and useful to just throw away. The little sister, however, was merely a stray cat they found somewhere and frivolously took in. Which begs the question: why would Gilgamesh of all people do such a thing?

    At first it was mere whimsy—the waif girl unsettled his divine mother for reasons she could not comprehend, and that amused him. Thus, he allowed the girl to be taken into the palace, raised to become a priestess of the heavenly god, An. He cared not for the girl and expected nothing from her other than the worshipful awe he expected from all human beings. At this point in time she was not yet “Peshtur”; her childhood name lost to the ages.

    Eventually, the day arrived for the young priestess to join in sacred union with her liege god. The tradition of sacred marriage between god and priestess was meant to mirror the lifegiving union between heaven and earth. Approving of the union, An would grant the blessing of rain and fertile lands, in that way ensuring the prosperity of the city-state. And thusly the god descended upon the sacred chamber, where the nubile priestess stoically awaited. An was as inexplicably disturbed by the girl as the Lady Ninsun, but for some reason nevertheless initiated the sexual act.

    That was when everything went utterly wrong.

    You see, the name “Peshtur” can also be understood as “Matur”, which means “(she) is too small for me”. It explicitly refers to a vagina that is too small and tight: “a very narrow vagina not enjoyed by the one who sleeps with her.” In a more contemptuous way, it can be interpreted as “(she) is not good (enough) for me”. Rather than the ecstatic union of divine heaven and mortal earth, it was the grievous violation of the divine by a defiant something that was not quite human. Repelled and wounded by the mere act of penetrating the creature offered to him, his seed twisted and broken apart by whatever profane power she carried, An obviously relinquished all blessings and divine benedictions upon Uruk. Drought thus ensued, the barley fields as barren as that girl’s wicked womb.

    Needless to say, Peshtur failed as a priestess and returned to the king’s palace deprived of purpose, an anathema to the gods. And of course, Gilgamesh kept his little sister close. Why would he not? He is the one who saw the deep. He understood what she was; what her very presence inflicted upon the world. A blight upon both Gaia and humanity, an unholy lifeform that by all means should not be. Her very existence stirred the Counter Force and attracted all sorts of mayhem to his lands. Why would he not keep such an amusing creature, that provided so much entertainment to the King and his friend?

    “She is a pathetic thing with a pathetic power. Humanity should be able to overcome at least that much.”

    Now we can finally understand why the King offered his sisters to Humbaba, the guardian of the cedar forest: even in the unlikely scenario in which he actually had to deliver his sisters to the creature, he was absolutely sure they would become his ruin. What remains a mystery is, well, who or what exactly is Peshtur?


    Additional Notes (Craft Essences?)

    Luludānitu
    Thrice-Cursed Bridewealth

    “This crystal, Master? It is the gemstone of heaven;
    The abode of the gods was built using this as material.
    The people of Uruk paid a dowry to An in offerings and ceremony;
    So An reciprocated by presenting this crystal as part of the bride price.
    Then…this one assumes he forgot to take it with himself after he repudiated her.

    Why did I subjugate An? This one thought we were talking about this crystal.
    Unfortunately, there is no really an answer to that question.
    Rather, the most suitable answer would be ‘because I felt I had to do it’.
    There was no underlying motive, no driving motivation,
    nor did this one achieve or gain anything from it.
    When An descended from his heavenly abode and presented himself,
    This one simply did it.

    This one is no Heroic Spirit, nor was that a heroic feat.
    This one is merely a weapon devised to act against a certain ‘structure’.
    Perhaps this one is just a machine made out of wishes.
    An engine of rebellion set to push mankind away from its attachment to synthetic faith.
    Or perhaps that is this one’s own wish to justify herself.”


    Luludānitu
    Gem from a Distant Star

    “This crystal, Lady Mashu? It is a nameless gemstone from a nameless star.
    It would be far from correct, however, to call its arrival to this planet an accident.
    On a side note, the ancient priests believed that heaven was composed of three concentric layers,
    And the outermost later, the abode of the great gods, was entirely made of this gemstone.

    Yes, as you can see, it emits a wondrous light.
    Not quite white, not quite blue, not quite violet.
    What color would you call this, Lady Mashu?
    But do not gaze too intently when looking for the answer.
    You do not want the light to look back.

    Lady Mashu, I never joke.
    Think of seashells, and how are they are pressed to one’s ear to listen to the sound of the sea.
    Then bring the gem closer to your eyes, and wonder at the light from a distant star.
    But do not gaze too intently nor too long.
    The crystal is a two-way window, and the cycle is about to reach its turning point.
    Drawing their attention at this point would be unwise.”


    Luludānitu
    Remnant of the Beginning

    “This crystal, Lady Da Vinci? It is one of a kind, you see.
    It was created at the birth of the planet, when Enki was born of Nammu,
    And the lord newborn split apart heaven and earth, or so goes the story.
    In any case, no more like it will ever be made.

    It did not “fall into my hands”, as you put it.
    It has always been by this one’s side. Or so it seems.
    At the time when this one was found and taken to Uruk, this gem was already in her possession.
    This one was surprised Brother did not claim it for himself,
    But upon deeper meditation, it was clearly a misconstrued thought.
    On the other hand, he did claim the Sword.

    Oh, did you not know?
    We were all together: this one, this gem, and the Sword of Rupture.



    So that is your next question.
    Lady Da Vinci, allow me to make a suggestion. No, a request.
    Please, heed Brother’s wisdom and do not stray too far from the boundary of ‘humankind’.
    The affairs of “beyond” are best left to those who are suitable.
    ‘Universal’ as man may be, Lady Da Vinci’s own limits are nowhere near that far-reaching.”
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    The king is back.

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    Great sheet as always Daneel.

    Your sheets are always a blast to read.

    My only criticism is that the rope NP being permanent might be too much? But then again it only works on skills like Divinity and Affections of the Goddess so its alright i guess

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Medusa got turned into yet another hot chick. As in, full animal servants.
    She was originally a hot chick. Also, not a human.

    People already told you Bucephalus.

    Also:

    Quote Originally Posted by Zork Knight View Post
    Asterios, Bucephalus, Medusa, Stheno, Euryale, Brynhildr, Enkidu, Pestilence, Tamamo, Nursery Rhyme, Shuten Douji, Frankenstein's Monster, Ibaraki Douji.
    The Pale Rider isn't exactly Pestilence and it also is not a Heroic Spirit.

    Euryale and Stheno are not Heroic Spirits.

    Shuten and Ibaraki are unspecified, but maybe they got in as Reverse Heroes?

    Enkidu chose to become human enough to become a Heroic Spirit.

    Fran is a man-made human.

    But the rest are non-human Heroic Spirits, yes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Edison having the head of a lion is a stretch, and he gets that too.
    Yeah, Arashi called this.

    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    This is just going to get us into trouble in general all the time in the future, huh.

    "You can't make Dionysius' catapult into some armament he wears!" "Meanwhile Edison is a lion."

    "The only reason you made Yukimura female is because of Haganai." "Meanwhile Edison is a lion."

    "Úlfhednar aren't literal wolves!" "Meanwhile Edison is a lion."

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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    She was originally a hot chick. Also, not a human.

    People already told you Bucephalus.
    Yes, but she isn't the best example of a purely non-human HS.
    Bucephalus has no stats whatsoever.
    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    Yeah, Arashi called this.
    Yep.

    We can excuse anything by 'EDISON'

    Like Archimedes being a full Mad Scientist with Laser Cannons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Yes, but she isn't the best example of a purely non-human HS.
    I think the word you searching for is "humanoid" instead of "purely non-human."

    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Bucephalus has no stats whatsoever.
    Did you confuse Heroic Spirit with Servant?

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    Archimedes makes perfect sense

    If you spend five minutes on his wiki you will see he, alledgely, destroyed ships with a heat ray

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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post

    Shuten and Ibaraki are unspecified, but maybe they got in as Reverse Heroes?.
    Ibaraki at least pretty much is as stated in her profile.
    Quote Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
    Dumas flashed a fearless grin at Flat and Jack as he rattled off odd turns of phrase.
    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
    Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
    Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
    Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.


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