sherrinford, should you really put the hound of god in the same speed tier as the guy who defied reality with his technique and the fastest hero?
Just waiting for more info about Affections of the Goddess to polish a couple of old servants
Meanwhile:
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Skills
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Noble Phantasm
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Nothin' special, just a Black Servant slayer.
Oh, and you might want to check the Nasuverse Lore here.
Last edited by Zork Knight; June 9th, 2014 at 08:44 PM.
I've always been shit at servants backstories, but fuck it here we go.....
Class - Assassin
Alignment - Chaotic Neutral
Identity - Caine - the first murderer
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Caine was the first modern human, borne from Adam and Eve. Despite being born outside of Eden ,Caine, brought up on the stories of eden , believed that he could somhow make this new world into an eden of its own. And so Caine set out to revitalise this new wasteland.
lo and behold he planted forests and fields. But then a second son of adam came about, Abel. At first Caine loved him more than anything, but suddenly he found beasts on his newly planted lands who would devour any hope of new life for caines plants.
Every time he would plant a new life , Abel would create somthing that could consume it.
The tree's he fostered where eaten by beasts who begat more beasts, the grassland he had nurtured would be consumed, even when he made himself a home of wood, he would find small beasts feasting upon it.
Despite all of this Cain bore Abel no ill will, for Abel bore no ill towards Caine. His actions had no malice , no anger......Abel just did....
Then came the day when each of them offered a sacrifice, Caine who had nurtured the earth, Caine who had tried to stop the advent of beasts, Caine who had tried to create an Eden outside of Eden. And yet the lord favored Abel, Abel who's beasts consumed his grasslands, Abel whose beasts consumed his trees, Abel whose beasts were slowly consuming his home.... and suddenly anger was born.
''Abel who had stood in my path, Abel who had his beasts eat my crops and yet abel is the one who gets the lords favor..And so what better a sacrifice, what better to send to god than the one he loves the most''
And thus the first murder/murderer was born.
Str - D+
End - A
Agi - C+
Mag - D
Luck - E
Skills
Natural Body - EX
Caine, son of Adam is the first human who assumed the modern shape upon which all future humans are based upon.
At EX rank Caine gains a + 1 to all physical statistics (str/end/agi) and these statistics cannot be decreased by effects either mental or physical.
Caine's body is the archetype from which the majority of the current human population decends, to devalue his body, would result in a degradation of the body of most of modern mankind.
Wanderlust - E--
This ability represents the servants need, and or want to see the world with his/her own eyes regardless of the information granted due to summoning in the era.
Caine has not desire to wander the earth, however due to a curse from his god, Caine is condemned to wander, he is incapable of staying still and must constantly move, even whilst sleeping he will constantly toss and turn. Even whilst fighting he must constantly move even if such a movement would leave him in a disadvantagous position, in addition he is unable to assume spirit form
Mystic Face - A--
Caine bears upon his face the mark, anyone who views this will be instilled with an instinctual fear and distrust of Caine, as such (unless the mark is covered) no sane master would enter into an alliance with someone who has such a servant.
Presence Concealment - C
Caine's presence concealment does not render him above or under others vision, instead all those who view him will see him as a simple crop farmer unless his actions prove him otherwise.
This ability will be negated for the one who views ,or has viewed, the mark upon Caines face.
NPs
Kinslayer (First Murder) - B
An always active Noble Phantasm gained from his slaying of Abel, whilst fighting against someone who is , or was, blood related to Caine (In even the slightest), Caines ability to kill them increases.
This ability manifests as a rank up to all parameters and a tiny chance for any attack of Caines to become a critical strike.
Avenged Sevenfold (The Wrath of god) - E - EX (Anti Unit)
'whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold'.
A destructive curse bearing the full brunt of a gods power. The damage of the attack that kill's Caine will be, and shall be instantly inflicted (times seven) upon the inflictor.
Last edited by Brolaire; June 11th, 2014 at 05:50 AM. Reason: Ranks too high
My body cannot handle 4 EX rankings.
They are there to put his stats up at modern tier, as the first modern human i could have just went high base stats, but i decided to toss in - stat+ skills to make it higher, rather than just going high base.
Fair enough, gave Kinslayer the auld switcheroo to NP to get rid of the EX. rather than EX wanderlust I tossed it down to E -- to represent his (Non consensual) wandering.
Natural body, i'm hesitant to change as he has the first human shape/body (at least according to my wank).
Apparently Greek Heroic Spirits have best versality in terms of summoning Class. Why is that so?
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil,
Must give us pause: there's the respect
That makes calamity of so long life;
They get royalties for inventing democracy in the form of higher class availability.
My first sheet, it's not much descriptive but has stuff needed. I might make it more flavorful once I'm sure it's good.
Will work on Lancer version soon, I need feedback on this one first:
Name: Bolesław Chrobry
Class: Saber/Lancer
Bio: Bolesław I Chrobry (Bolesław I "the Valiant" or the Brave) (Czech: Boleslav Chrabrý) ( Polish (help·info); 967 – 17 June 1025), in the past also known as Bolesław I the Great (Wielki), was a Duke of Poland from 992–1025 and the first King of Poland from 18 April 1025 until his death. He also ruled asBoleslav IV, Duke of Bohemia from 1002 to 1003.
He was the firstborn son of Mieszko I by his Czech first wife, Dobrawa, daughter of Boleslav I the Cruel, Duke of Bohemia. He was named after his maternal grandfather.
Bolesław I was a remarkable politician, strategist, and statesman. He turned Poland into a country that was not only comparable to older western monarchies, but also elevated it into the European elite. Bolesław conducted successful military campaigns in the west, south and east. He consolidated the Polish lands and conquered territories outside of modern borders of Poland such as Slovakia, Moravia, Red Ruthenia, Meissen and Lusatia as well as Bohemia. He was a powerful mediator in Central European affairs.
Bolesław was an ally of Holy Roman Emperor Otto III who may have crowned him rex. Following the death of Otto III in 1002, he carried out a series of successful wars against the Holy Roman Empire and Otto III's cousin and heir Henry II, ending with the Peace of Bautzen in 1018. In the summer of 1018, in one of his most famous expeditions, Bolesław captured Kiev, where, according to legend, he notched his sword when hitting Kiev's Golden Gate. Later a sword called Szczerbiec ("Notched Sword") would become the ceremonial sword used at the coronation of Poland's kings.
Bolesław also managed to establish a Polish church structure with a Metropolitan See at Gniezno, independent of the German Archbishopric of Magdeburg, which had tried to lay claim to Polish areas. During the famous Congress of Gniezno he officially freed himself of tribute to the Holy Roman Empire and finally, at the peak of his reign, he had himself crowned as King, the first Polish ruler to do so.
He was an able administrator; he established the so-called "Prince's law" and built many forts, churches, monasteries and bridges. Bolesław established the first Polish monetary system, of a grzywna divided into 240 denarii, and minted his own coinage. He is widely considered one of the most capable and accomplished of the Piast rulers.
Summoned as Saber class Servant:
Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: C
Luck: C
NP: C+
Class and Personal Skills:
Riding (B-): Bolesław was famed for his heavy physique to the point battles horses could barely carry him, thus he gets penalty to riding vehicles and mounts that are not sturdy.
Magic Resistance (B): His Magic Resistance is both increased because of being summoned as Saber class Servant and due to magical formulas carved on his sword that give him a degree of protection against magecraft
Charisma (B): Suitable for a king of a country
Military Tactics (C): Bolesław was a remarkable strategist who waged successful defensive campaigns against Holy Roman Empire. Gets a bonus when defending against Anti-Army Noble Phantasms.
Noble Phantasm (C+): Szczerbiec (''Jagged Sword'') is a coronation sword linked to Bolesław's legend of notching it when felling down Golden Gate of Kiev. Legends are conflicting on its origins, either it was handed down by an angel to Bolesław or a holy sword forged from remnants of much older one, gifted him by Emperor Otto III along with a fake Spear of Destiny It is classified as an Anti-Gate Phantasm due to legend, and it gets a bonus against defensive Noble Phantasms.
Last edited by Kat; June 16th, 2014 at 08:43 AM.
Question: would something from Lovecraft be put here or in the Modern Fiction Servant thread?
Little column A, little column B?
I would say there. His works are post 1900.