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Servant Class: Rider
True Name: Zhuang Zhou
Aliases: Zhuangzi, Chuang-Tze
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Attribute: Earth
Strength - E
Endurance - E (EX)
Agility - E
Mana - E
Luck - D
Noble Phantasm - A+
Appearance: He seems to be an old and frail man, very much the image of a Daoist sage. He wears dignified clothing that, much like him, presents a sense of age. While in many ways being the stereotypical aged Chinese scholar there is always the distinct impression of distance and surrealism around him. He carries no obvious weaponry and is almost always composed in his manner. Often there will be at least one butterfly in his immediate environment.
Personality: Little can be said on the personality of one whose very existence is doubted. He generally comes across as respectful but slightly condescending, but this is almost immediately overshadowed when one realises the absolute disbelief of his character. His fabled scepticism almost rivals Phyrrho and he shows absolutely no regard for anything he can decide is "appearance". This can even include the commands of his Master or attacks from enemy Servants, though when in danger he will likely take a more... practical, approach and avoid their attacks. Ultimately he is a mystery who is more of the concept of a sceptical philosopher than the possibly existent person, completely embracing a lack of care for worldly appearance. While he claims that he hopes for some kind of certainty in the world, and that this would be his wish for the Holy Grail, it seems possible that instead he would make his Noble Phantasm Zhuangzi consume the world, although he'd claim the world is already like this.
Likes: Disregard, Butterflies, Allegories
Dislikes: Authority, Certainty, Moths, Those who try to differentiate themselves from nature
Talent: Doubt
Natural Enemies: Alan Turing, Hugues de Paynes, Gottfried Leibniz, Soujuurou Shizuki
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance (False) (B): A skill which negates magic that is targeted at the Servant. Though this would usually cancel spells with less than three verses and aid in resistance against High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals this Servant possesses a skill which differentiates itself from regular Magic Resistance by merely distributing the directed magic into the surrounding environment. As such it isn't as strong as it initially appears.
Riding (D): Allowing the Servant to effectively ride any manner of beasts or vehicles, at this rank he doesn't ride with above average proficiency and only the more conventional creatures and vehicles can be used.
Personal Skills:
Information Erasure (D): The removal of information regarding the Servants true name, abilities and appearance from the records and memories of all eye-witnesses, including opponents, following the conclusion of an engagement. With this rank information on Rider stored in text will mysteriously disappear, additionally even the more exact records (such as video) becomes muddled and confused. Though quite a good deal of information is erased the surrounding environment still contains some evidence that could lead to the Servants true identity, although that may be difficult considering Zhuangzi having a distinct effect on the environment.
Independent Manifestation (A): An extremely powerful skill that permits an unsupported manifestation into reality, releasing their Master from mana expenditure. It grants the privileges of a confirmed existence, resisting time manipulation Thaumaturgy and the instantaneous imposition of death. It is usually reserved for Grand Servants or Beast class Servants but due to the unique nature of this Servant he is especially difficult to remove from the world once being summoned, and whether or not he was being summoned from the Throne of Heroes in the first place is questionable.
Noble Phantasm
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I forgot to put this postscript in, sorry. I was surprised that I couldn't find a Zhuang Zhou Servant as he's the only possible Chinese heroic spirit I could think of off of the top of my head. This sheet is a bit of a mess and once again it's all based around a Noble Phantasm, still I hope that if someone does Zhuang Zhou in the future this sheet might help them a bit. Sorry to have wasted anyone's time who read this far, please have a nice day
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Class: Caster
True Name: Uathach
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Earth
Strength: C
Agility: B
Constitution: C
Mana: A++
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+
Legend
Tactics
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Notes
Overall this is a really awesome sheet for a character I didn't really know much about. It does remind you that Cu is a bit of an ass sometimes though... The skills are well done and even though the links between the character and the first Noble Phantasm are somewhat thin that's no different from what Nasu comes up with, and the second one is most certainly befitting of the character
I've officially run out of ideas. Happy Mother's Day?
"What? I told you to wait for me before you summoned a Servant."
"Well, the thing is, I'm not sure this is really a Servant."
Class: Berserker
Identity: Heracles (Lily)
STR: C
END: D
AGI: E
MGI: B
LCK: B
Class Skills
Child's Innocence (A): A skill that replaces Madness Enhancement. Berserker is an infant, and as such is
placed in the Berserker class due to having no concept of social constraint, culture or self-censorship.
Like Madness Enhancement and Bravery, this skill negates mental interference up to an equivalent rank.
"Where did you get a baby?"
"It's not mine! I wasn't even in town that week!"
"What?"
"We weren't even going steady!"
"I think you're fixated on the wrong problem."
Personal Skills
Warm Embrace of the Milky Way (A+): Berserker was nursed by Hera, and drank so much of her divine
milk that he acquired great strength and power. In addition, he enjoys the protection of Athena, patroness
of heroes. STR and END are increased by two ranks each and fighting skills have already emerged.
Divinity (B): Berserker is a child of Zeus, the King of the Gods, and a mortal woman.
Blossoming Journey (EX): A blessing towards the babe who is destined to become one of the world's
greatest heroes. Even as an infant, this is evident. His journey is filled with hope and wonder, and
those who fight alongside him and protect him are more likely to succeed.
Equipment: Aside from his brute strength, Berserker keeps the corpse of a massive snake clenched
in his fist. It is rather heavy, and he has somehow become quite adept at using it as a flail.
"This is... why would you let a child play with something so morbid?"
"Don't start with me. You try telling him he can't play with his favorite toy."
"It's starting to smell, that can't be healthy. Oh my, that's a strong grip..."
Noble Phantasm
Galanthis~Super Cute Magical Polecat Guardian (B, Familiar)
The reason for Berserker's current appearance is that it was the only way for his familiar to be summoned.
Due to her circumstances, she did not ascend to the Throne of Heroes and so the only way she can manifest
is by tethering herself to Berserker and being summoned as his Noble Phantasm. Even as a baby, Berserker
still carries more fame than her, and since Galanthis is connected to him as the one who made his birth
possible, this is the most expedient way to manifest in this world. Galanthis takes the form of a weasel,
cursed to live as an animal by Hera and the Fates. However, Hecate, the goddess of magic, took pity on her
and made the weasel her sacred animal. In essence, she made Galanthis her familiar, though to say she is
"just a familiar" would be to claim Heracles is "just a baby". Time in Hecate's presence and tutelage has
elevated her to the level of a Divine Beast. Though she had no magecraft experience, she has since learned
enough to put her just below the level of some of Hecate's most powerful students, such as Medea or Circe.
She is Berserker's guardian beast, using powerful magecraft to ward off any who would do him harm. She
would surely qualify as a Caster in her own right if she was not bound to her master Hecate.
"Oh, you finally found a babysitter?"Background
"Yeah, I left him in the care of the Mozart siblings."
"You mean the musical Casters?"
"Yeah, they love kids, and you know what they say: "Mozart makes babies smarter"."
"But don't you remember what happened to that kid's last music teacher?"
"Excuse me, I need to make a call."
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"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Wow, that baby Herc sheet is amazingly creative. I think that babysitting job would be itself tantamount to one of the twelve labors...
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Zhang Zhou: Hmm, maybe I'm a bit of a philistine when it comes to Chinese culture but I'd basically known nothing about this guy other then his butterfly statement (which I only had a vague inkling some Chinese philosopher had said). Still, this is definitely an interesting sheet. The NP is creative (even though the tie to his actual philosophy again feels a little tenuous) and he sounds like he'd make for an rather unusual (in a good way) character in a Grail War.
The only thing I can say is that I can't see a reason for him to be summoned as Rider. Even in his NP, there's no connections with 'riding' anything in particular, so Caster would seem a more fitting Class for him (as the standard Class for scholars, philosophers and the like). Also, what's with that extensive list of Natural Enemies? Seems rather unnecessary, especially since most of them (Turing? Payens?) don't appear to have any link to the man himself.
...And the only Chinese hero you could think of? Really? I'd expect one of the Three Kingdoms lads to come up first in that category, which is not to say you were wrong to search for someone more original, of course...
Uathach: Dang, I thought of making a sheet for her - even as a Homunculus Caster but I doubt I could do better as I probably would have been closer to that mainstream bit you managed to avoid. The whole thing is really solid and creative.
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Sorry, I really should stop with ruining this thread as these sheets are wasting people's time at this point. However I will defend the list of Natural Enemies as the only thing on the sheet that makes rational sense.
Each person listed as a "Natural Enemy" of Rider (you're right, it's entirely the wrong class sorry) is someone who calculates (Turing, Leibniz), has a distinct faith that overrides appearance (De Paynes, Leibniz) or is Souji who just doesn't seem to care. They are characters who I believed would be effective against him. Sorry to have been a bother like this i'll just stop I'm sorry to have wasted your time.
Huh. It actually sounds like you put a fair deal of thought into that. Sorry for doubting you!
Also, no offense but can you please drop the self-deprecatory shtick? Your sheets may not be the greatest things since sliced bread, but they're not nearly as lowly as you seem to think.
And if your next post is apologizing for being so apologetic I will seriously shoot myself... (Okay, not really, but still)
So, I've been pondering writing up a St. Ladislaus Servant sometime after coming across him online. One legend in particular caught my eye of him apparently cutting apart a valley/mountain with his sword. Needless to say, this is totally badass and very much Noble Phantasm material, but I can't find any legendary sources on it whatsoever. The only source I could find was this book (as well as one by Jules Vernes, but the page in question appears unavailable for public viewing), which is itself completely unsourced and so hardly helpful (and googling Ladislaus in conjunction with the valley of Thorda gets me pretty much nothing of relevance).
At this point, I'm thinking it may not be even a real legend at all given the complete and total lack of any information, but it's intriguing enough that I'm still curious. Any help?
I don't think you know how to properly research a topic. Look for cited sources. Find those cited sources.
There's your information.
In my 5 minutes of searching, I found several, but they're all dated 1980s or older. If you want to know more about this guy, best to find a book detailing the lives of various Hungarian Kings (as those are where he's featured in those sources I mentioned)--he seems prominent enough to appear in one of them for more than 1 paragraph. Also, spin it, look up the history of Hungary and make him the representation of the people, or the country, or something, in the form of a Heroic Spirit. I dunno, that's all the help you're getting from me.
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Similarily, because now I'm somewhat interested, I dug some more and found this: Midst the Wild Carpathians and The Slaves of the Padishah, both by Mór Jókai from the 1890s or so. It's a romance or something. A dude named Ladislaus is featured in each, as different characters, but whatever, one of them looks like he's a kick-ass hero, and well, here's the blurb at the beginning:
Az Érdély arány kora = Midst the Wild Carpathians, the first novelOriginally Posted by gutenberg, fuck yeah motherfucker
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So, take one of these characters--or both--and combine them into the Ladislaus king dude as one character. One representation.
Or just use the name itself, Ladislaus, as the embodiment of Hungarian heroes or something and just mash them all together because it looks like there are several running around who're related to Hungary's history, whether they be real or not, to create something good enough to be a 1-star tiered Servant in Grand Order.
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It's not a lot of work, you're just lazy.
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Archer
Sugawara no Michizane
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
STR: B
END: D
AGI: C
MAG: B
LUCK: D+
NP: B
Class Skills
Magic Resistance (C): Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects prana, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Independent Action (C): The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the mana supply from one's Master. At higher ranks, it is also possible to remain for extended periods of time in this world without an established contract. It is both useful and troublesome depending on the disposition of the Servant and the rank of Independent Action. Acting in autonomy from the Master's mana supply, the Master can concentrate their own mana on large spells, or the Servant will be fine even in the case they can’t supply energy due to injury. The downside is that they can be harder to control and keep by their side, making the only true way to command them is by utilizing Command Spells. It is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for one day without a Master.
Personal Skills
Divinity (C): The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above has reached the throne of a god. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defence' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. Raised to the status of a god after his death, it is only natural that Sugawara no Michizane has this skill. It might be a lower rank than expected, but this is due to the presence of the Avenger skill; to strengthen one is to weaken the other, and Sugawara prefers to keep the two skills in a state of balance.
Avenger (C): Representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate loathing and resentment. When receiving damage, mana generation is increased. As one of the Three Great Vengeful Spirits, Sugawara possesses this as a personal skill, though it is weakened as he is not in the Avenger class.
Prana Burst (Thunder) (B): The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with prana and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of prana. With this skill, the expelled prana produces a lightning effect. By wrapping oneself in electricity, it becomes possible to flash across the battlefield in a clap of thunder.
Kami’s Blessing (A): The ability of one who has divine governance over scholarship. As the god of learning in the Shinto pantheon, Sugawara has the ability to instantly teach skills to others, so long as he has mastered the skill himself. He is especially fond of instructing others in the art of archery, of which he was a master.
Noble Phantasms
Dazaifu Tobi-umeThough Your Master is Lost, Forget Not the Spring
Anti-Army, B: The miraculous, which, on the occasion of its master’s banishment from the Imperial Court, uprooted itself and flew to Sugawara’s new home. Ascending to the Throne alongside him, it now serves as Sugawara’s transportation and main Noble Phantasm. An elegant and beautiful plum tree with, naturally, the power of flight. It has become similar to a Divine Beast – a Divine Plant, and it has what Sugawara calls a ‘warp drive’; by absorbing prana and charging itself, it can tear across the land in an instant, arriving almost as soon as it takes off. It is a hardy being which can weather all sorts of blows, and its branches and roots will act to shield its beloved master as he rests in its canopy.flying plumTobiume
Fujiwara's Blood CurseVengeful Kami’s Lightning
(Anti-Army, C): The reason Sugawara no Michizane became feared as a vengeful spirit, then revered as a god, the mysterious deaths of his adversaries by lightning strikes shortly after his death. Taking the form of his bow, he uses his arrows as guides for monstrous lightning strikes, even from clear skies. Seconds after his arrow hits a target, it will be struck by lightning capable of tearing up the ground and reducing flesh and bone to ash. Not as powerful as it first appears, as it is a simple curse, and as such is a magical effect, with all the weaknesses that implies. Synergizes well with Prana Burst, and Sugawara likes to charge the guide arrows with electricity, resulting in a double shock.
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Eh, maybe so. Don't really feel I have it in me to churn out another Servant right now, I was just spitballing ideas for the sake of it. In any case, I feel you're overthinking things a tad. I was intending to base the sheet off of the actual Hungarian king Ladislaus (with mythical embellishments, of course), not some weird conceptual agglomeration of all Hungarian heroes.
There's really nothing constructive I can comment for this sheet as it's already really good. Both the Noble Phantasms are cool although I still have trouble understanding Japenese culture (flying Plum tree). Although I'm glad to see a teaching related Servant who isn't lawful in alignment.
Hm... I've been thinking, since No-Name Assassin is a candidate but not an actual Hassan, is it still possible to summon the rejects in a Grail Wars like the Moon Cell Holy Grail War and the False Holy Grail War)? Let's just say I'm planning one of my sheets.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
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