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Lancer of the Mexica
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Servant Class: Lancer
Alternate Classes: Caster, Berserker
True Name: Nezahualcoyotl
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: America (15th century)
Armament: Spear, shield
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: C+
LUCK: B
NP: D
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Last edited by Shiki-pon; September 21st, 2019 at 09:23 AM.
A great profile shiki-pon,where habe xou found the Picture ? and could you make probably also a Caster bec ause i want know her Caster capabilities espeally which Magecraft types or more characterisitics hers is ?
and i have never heard this Interpretation of a aqueducts as a spear congratulation !!
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I found the faceclaim pretty much by accident (google image search, if anyone cares), searching for another faceclaim.
As a Caster, she wouldn't have magecraft at all (since she qualifies as an artist/architect). Probably something of divine origin, given her status as tlatoani.
Edit: Also, I prefer not to make multiple versions of the same Heroic Spirit, if I can help it.
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"Serpents of Dionysus, bear your fangs! Swallow all who dare raise their weapons in defiance of the Queen of Conquerors!"Alignment: Neutral Evil
Rider
Olympias
Source
STR: D+
END: E+
AGI: B
MAG: B
LUCK: B+
NP: A+
Class Skills
Riding (A+): Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding. All vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.
Magic Resistance (C): Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. A sufficient rank to cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Personal Skills
Divinity (D+): The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above has reached the Throne of Gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. A descendant of the demigod hero Achilles, the divine essence remaining in her blood is boosted by her claims that she slept with the god Zeus to father her children.
Charisma (B): A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. Despite being a woman largely untrained in military matters, Rider has the charismatic ability to manipulate warriors as an army. A natural ability for warfare runs through her veins.
Sadistic Constitution (B++): A Skill that augments one's aggression in battle. It appears to be a positive Skill, but the longer its owner stays in battle, the more their abusive disposition will grow, causing them to lose their usual composure. It's possible to say that this is just one step short of the Skill that causes Berserkers to go insane. The more one attacks, the stronger one becomes, but on the other hand, one's defensive abilities drop. It seems Rider inherited her ancestor’s naturally aggressive personality, and as a worshipper of Dionysus and a follower of his maenads, her savagery has only been furthered. It will not be long before she loses all composure in the heat of battle, attacking indiscriminately whilst gleefully laughing.
Golden Rule – Body (B): A Skill that denotes the possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill whose body shape does not change despite how much caloric intake was taken, there is no effect on the owner's Strength parameter.
Noble Phantasms
Orgias WheelWheel of Heaven’s Liquor
Lady Olympias’s war chariot; a gift from her patron god, Dionysus. A leader of a orgiastic, snake worshipping cult of the wine god, the chariot is a symbol of her authority. Constructed from vine-wood, decorated with beautiful carved leaves and fruits of olives and grapes, pulled by two great wyrms and with serpents wrapped around the wheels. The dragons pulling the chariot can fly through the air and along with their savage teeth and claws, and instead of flame or poison, they breathe a thick mist that causes intoxication and unconsciousness. The chariot also comes with an inclusive fully stocked wine bar, such convenience!
Via BacchanaliaDistant Dance of Revelry
Anti-Army, A+: The actual Noble Phantasm of Queen Olympias, a high-speed charge performed with Dionysus’s chariot. Drawing a suitable distance back from her opponent, she spurs her dragons into a full charge, urging them to their full speed. The opponent is mangled beneath the dragons’ claws, and torn apart by the fangs of the serpents adorning the wheels as they lash out wildly during the charge. The exertion of the dragons causes them to pant heavily, coating the area in their alcoholic mist, spreading chaos and confusion across the battlefield. It is said that the maenads would tear those who interrupted their secret rites to shreds, with this attack carrying the symbolic strength of the punishment visited upon those who committed that blasphemy.
Due to the main factor of her legend being ‘the mother of Alexander the Great’, it seems her abilities as a Servant have been deliberately modelled after her son’s.
Zeus ThunderGod’s Embrace
Anti-Unit, C: A Noble Phantasm that makes use of her son’s claim to be the son of Zeus. Her womb is infused with his divine lightning, allowing her to birth true demigods, great heroes who have power of his thunder. She can use this magic of this ability combined with a man’s semen to create an army of lightning-powered homunculi, not unlike the original form of a certain evil dragon. In its true form it allows her to create a modern day Hero alike in calibre to her eldest son, but she does not possess this ability as a Servant, and would need to fully incarnate to make use of it.
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Interesting sheet. Nice to see that somebody remembers Dionysos had a connection to spectacular violence through the maenads. Though it does feel that she doesn't have much of her own going for her, given that her NPs are just extensions of Alexander's and Iskandar's. Then again, seeing as he was her greatest achievement, that's fitting.
I also like that you made her skillset very unique despite not using any unique Skills at all.
Not much else to comment, seeing as this is quality material.
That's a pretty cool Olympias sheet. You took a nicely different take then mine in making her NPs mirror Iskandar's and emphasizing the "follower of Dionysus" aspect. My only critique is that I feel like you could've emphasized her relationship with Iskandar a bit more in her personality section. Seeing as she's listed as his natural enemy in Iskandar's profile and all.
Alright. I've been lurking for a long time and finally decided to get my hands dirty with my first sheet. It's probably terrible, but I hope to improve! I am also doing this on a phone so formatting may be a little wonky.
Rider of The Labyrinth
Class: Rider
Alignment: Neutral Good
Attribute: Human
True Name:IcarusIkaria
Origin: Greek Mythology
Armament: Wings
Parameters
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: B
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: B
Likes: Her father, Ariadne, birds
Dislikes: King Minos, her legend, the Sun
Class Skills
Riding: E
She never actually rode many creatures, Phantasmal or otherwise, during her lifetime, much of her childhood and early teen years spent locked in a tower with her father, kept away from the outside world. The only thing she can truly ride are the wings on her back. She would prefer not to.
Magical Resistance: D
An inherent skill of the Rider class that allows Ikaria to resist lower level spells and magecraft. Her mere presence in the Age of Gods and proximity to a being such as the Minotaur gives her a decent amount.
Personal Skills
Mana Burst (Sunlight): D
Ikaria’s fate was sealed by the burning rays of the sun melting the wax that held together her wings. Now, she is able to reproduce the Sun’s unyielding wrath and use it as a weapon against her opponents, setting her wings ablaze and slinging the flames from them, though not without damaging herself in the process. Her legend is often associated with the similar tale of Phaethon, son of Helios. She would prefer not to use this skill.
Father’s Gift: B
The wings she was given by her father, burned and melted onto her back, letting her potentially evade attacks. However, each usage of the skill causes her wings more and more damage, especially if used in the daytime.
Pitiful Existence: A
A beautiful young girl that lived as the apple of her father’s eye. Most find it impossible not to pity such a sad looking girl, even more so if they know her true name, making even the most hardened warriors reluctant to fight her. Her pathetic parameters and fighting ability only add to it.
Noble Phantasm
A Child’s Hubris
Icarus
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Ikaria’s legend is one of the most well known in the world, the tale of her fall reaching the farthest corners of humanity, encapsulated in the collective consciousness as a prime example of childish pride and naivety.
For the first time in her rather short life, Ikaria was truly free. Launching into the air was her first taste of freedom in years, and she was overcome with joy. Such overpowering joy washed the warning words of her father from her mind as she soared higher and higher. Even as the wax melted, even as her feathers molted, Ikaria was happier than she'd ever been before. Now she and her father could live happily. Now they could be free. And then she fell.
This Noble Phantasm acts as a crystallization of that moment. Wiping away Ikaria’s self-control, the girl is essentially forced into the air, taking her enemy in her arms and flying vertically towards the sky. Slowly, her body will be overcome by flames and her wings will fall away. She soars with the paralyzed opponent into the sky, aware of her actions but unable to prevent her mistake. Once they reach 1000 meters, Ikaria begins to fall, screaming as her body burns and eventually crashes into the ground in a massive explosion. This Phantasm is guaranteed to kill her after its use.
Lore
Ikaria, also known as Icarus, was the daughter of the genius, Daedalus. From a young age, Ikaria and her father were imprisoned in a tower on Crete by the tyrant, King Minos, after her father constructed the Labyrinth to contain the Minotaur. Her mother had died when she was young, so the only family she knew was Daedalus and she was all that remained of his beloved wife.
For years, Daedalus toiled on the Labyrinth, building it to even grander scale as the Minotaur continued to grow in size and monstrosity. While he worked, Ikaria remained in the tower, alone with only the birds perching on the windowsill for company. However, her loneliness would not last forever. Soon, the princess of Crete, Ariadne, began to visit the tower, curious about the young girl she saw staring into the sky everyday. The princess was horrified to discover why Ikaria and her father were locked away, already knowing of her monstrous half-brother, but never imagining her father’s own cruelty. From then on, the princess did her best to visit the young girl in the tower and the two became fast friends, sisters even. That changed when Theseus arrived.
Ikaria watched sadly from their tower as Theseus sailed away with the Princess, but also a certain happiness. Perhaps with the Minotaur dead, she and her father would be let free. Sadly, Ikaria underestimated the cruel nature of the King of Crete, who blamed Daedalus for the death of the Minotaur and Theseus’ escape. Daedalus saw the writing on the wall and knew Minos’ fury would come down upon him, upon them both, soon enough, and so, he went to his last desperate option. The wings, made from hot wax and seagull feathers, Daedalus had been making them for years, a crackpot plan to escape this prison. He had no way to test them and no guarantee they would work, but it was his only choice. He strapped the wings onto himself and Ikaria and launched himself first from the tower window. Ikaria watched in amazement as her father soared into the air like a bird and eagerly followed him. The rest of the story is already known.
Personality
Ikaria hates her legend. She hates that the only thing she will ever be remembered for is her failure. No one remembers her love of birds, her skill at painting, her beautiful singing, her thundering snores. Only her failure. She hates her legend and herself, becoming very withdrawn and shy, afraid she will only embarrass herself more, even changing her own name to distance herself from the legend. She rarely if ever is seen smiling, often found staring solemnly at the sky. The closest she gets is when she partakes in her favorite pastime: bird watching.
Any mention of her true name or her legend will wash away the shy girl and replace her with a being of hatred and anger more befitting of a Berserker than a Rider. To her, Icarus is the name of a failure, a foolish girl who has been shamed for centuries. Ikaria has no desire to be that person anymore or even associated with them. Only her father or Ariadne may call her Icarus. Anyone else plays with fire.
Ikaria has only one wish. To undo her mistake, to listen to her father and live with him. She knows what happened to him after she died, the curse of Athena that led to his downfall, and blames herself for it. She wants to live and be with her father so he can be happy. She also wouldn't mind seeing the princess again, just to know if she was happy.
Appearance
A teenage girl with short, curly, blonde hair and stormy grey eyes. Ikaria often wears a tattered brown cloak over her body, only discarding it for battle. Beneath it, she wears a simple white tunic with a leather belt around her waist and leather sandals on her feet. The tunic itself is open at the back, letting her wings hang out, showing the burn scars where they fused to her skin. The wings themselves are black and fragile as if they were burnt.
Last edited by Wizard; May 27th, 2018 at 03:59 PM.
Olympias: What a great sheet, I think you really managed to make her a Servant of her own despite the reliance on Alexander, I specially like how her charge attack NP works, the balance between what's actually happening and what it means conceptually is great.
I don't like the Zeus Thunder though, I like the idea of her womb being imbued with his thunder but the homunculi part seems really disconnected and just there to give it a more practical use in a HGW. I think just leaving the part about being able to birth demigods is more interesting since it ties well with her legend and wish, I don't see any reason to make it more "useful".
Last edited by pinetree; May 27th, 2018 at 03:11 PM.
Okay, that Icarus is adorable. A pity that you didn't add a cute FC but I'm aware it can be a hard task. Welcome to the group
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The Ikaria sheet is good all in all (I also found out that there's an island called Icaria, said to be where Icarus fell - go figure). Also, welcome aboard.
A few notes, however:
- As a Rider from the Age of the Gods, she ought to have Magic Resistance as a Class Skill
- The bonuses to her parameters from Skills, especially Mana Burst (Sunlight) seem a bit redundant. She might as well just have the raised parameters right away (also, most Mana Bursts don't work like that).
- As for Father's Gift, you might use an existing Skill for that one, say, Synthetic Limbs (Wings)? Then just have the Skill at B- and give it the effect of falling apart eventually (though that too seems a little odd - the wings melted due to going too close to the sun, after all).
I do wonder how she'd react if she were mistaken for someone else, though. A winged human brings to mind an angel (or at least the modern interpretations of them). Would this go along with her desire to leave her old self behind?
Thank you. I wasn't aware of the Magical Resistance for Age of Gods servants. I was a bit unsure of the bonuses as well, so I can change that easily. I also didn't know Synthetic Limbs was a skill either, though I do prefer the name as it makes it more personal to her. The reason they fall apart is because they're broken permenantly after her fall and are falling apart.
Being called an angel, huh? I think she might like that a lot. Anything is better than being known as Icarus.
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Thanks! I tried finding a facexlakm to match her but I couldn't find one that really fit how she looks in my head. I was hoping she'd come more off as sad than adorable though.
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Berserker of the Apache
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Servant Class: Berserker
Alternate Classes: Assassin
True Name: Mbu'tco'
Alignment: Chaotic Stupid
Origin: Native American Mythology
Armament: Talons
Parameters:
STR: A
END: B
AGI: C
MANA: B
LUCK: E
NP: D
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
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Here, have a faceclaim. I'm feeling a bit generous tonight.
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Also, really? A sun Sheet after Icarus?
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