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"Trick or treat! Yogurt Candy? Really? Don't you have any Whiskey bonbons?"
Class: Caster
Alignment: Chaotic/Neutral
Region: Ireland
Height: 148cm
Weight: 44kg
Likes: Candy, Parties, Alcohol
Dislikes: Demons, Contracts, Killjoys
Talent: Tricks and lies
Armaments: Lanterns
Natural Enemy: The Devil
Stats
Str: E
End: D
Agi: B
Mna: B
Lck: EX
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
Personality
Dialouge
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Looks like Halloween's early this year! Honestly I used to think of Jack as a Berserker, but Caster is fitting too and it gives more things to stuff into his skillset. I love how he gets progressively more frustrated with the Halloween Elizabeths, it's hillarious.
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It's less of being connected to obscure figures and more of Jack being a quite common name.
As you've been told by others, the idea for a contest would be more fitting for... the already existing contest.
And I won't say more about your Thales than what Shiki-pon has already said. It's better to read, but it still has the same flaws as your other sheets: bloated stats and "these skills allow me to do anything".
Though I must say, "water as the origin of everything" gave me an idea that I may use in the future if I ever finish writing the sheets I want to finish first.
Last edited by King of Padoru; May 15th, 2020 at 07:00 PM.
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Class: Caster
Other Classes: Assassin
True Name: La Sayona
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Folklore
Parameters:
STR: E
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: B+
LCK: D
NP: B
Class SkillsPersonal Skills
LoreCharacter
Noble Phantasms
I do believe I like the way she came out. What do you all think?
La Sayona: Is it just your style not to give flavor-text for Skills? Her Skills aren't exactly super generic ones, so I'm curious what her unique versions of them do (well, mainly Cloaked In Death and Witchcraft). And in general, a little flavor (tying in why they have the Skill to their life/legend) can work wonders in making the sheet more fully fleshed out and memorable. Tying her second NP in to ORT's Crystal Valley is a creative idea, though I'm curious why exactly she has it, since you didn't include any mention of her meeting ORT or anything in her backstory.
You're right, it's not my style to give flavor-text, but you helped me out, so I'll add some as a token of my gratitude.
One Cloaked in Death: There is nothing in her legend that is life-giving. She killed child, husband, and mother, and went on to kill unfaithful and lustful men. However, it's always one or two or three at a time, and the disasters specifically fall under individual body horror. The low rank reflects the small disasters she creates and also powers up her abilities from life.
Witchcraft: She's not a proper Heroic Spirit in the slightest, she's a wraith who fits the legend in the same way Sasaki Kojirou is a nameless wraith who fits that legend. Were she to be summoned as Assassin, there would be a different wraith summoned. She is from South America, she is a mage, specifically from a lineage dedicated to witchcraft. These are her abilities in life powered up with the additional mystery of being One Cloaked in Death and two hundred years old. I was actually considering powering it up to rank A, but since her legend is younger than that of Faust, I was conservative and went with C.
Estantiga: The town where her specific tragedy took place is near the Crystal Valley and her family spent too much time trying to understand the Crystal Valley. The dying curse of her murdered mother, the blood sacrifice of her beloved kindred, the mad understanding that came in that fleeting moment united with the legend of La Sayona and other man-eaters to become her Noble Phantasm.
Class: Archer
Identity: Hersilia
Gender: Female
Source: Historical fact, Roman mythology
Origin: Rome
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Height: 144 cm
Weight: 36 kg
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: C
Luck: EX
NP: A+
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Character
Personal data
Concept: That thing where your couple is super-enthusiastic about something but you support them even though you don't really like it because it's what makes them happy and you love them so much. I made her a loli because the image of Romulus kneeling in front of someone half his size was amusing and kinda made the situation look more intense. I wanted to add a proper NP command card with a sprite, but my graphic tablet is broken.
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Hersilia: Romulus' waifu, huh? This sheet is super cute and I love it. Her personality is adorable and you did a good job giving her fitting Skills and NPs despite her relatively sparse legend. Making her an Archer because she uses a rainbow was also a clever and fun idea. Natural Body (Body) is kind of goofily named as a Skill, but I'm guessing that's on purpose. Overall this is definitely someone I'd like to see summoned in canon.
Out of curiosity, how do you think she'd get along with my Deianira?
Isn't Natural Body (Body) an actual canon skill? Salome has it, IIRC.
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Unfortunately, there isn't a better translation than that, but that's what happens with Japanese sometimes.
I think that regardless of their differences and how Deianira tries to deny all about Heracles, Hersilia would get along with her since at the end of the day she's a girl that followed her dream (and she'd like to get along with her possible mother-in-law). But she'd probably try to help her overcome her feelings of how marriage equals tragedy so she finds a good man or re-encounters the one she was meant to be with.
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I'm perfectly fine with Natural Body (Body) because it's a translation that sounds exactly as stupid as the Japanese original.
"Rider here! You can one hundred percent count on me! Well, I am a Youkai, so you may suffer a prank or two..."
Class: Rider
Alignment: Chaotic/good
Region: Japan
Height: 163cm
Weight: 53kg
Likes: Sake, pranks, good stories
Dislikes: Foxes, hunters, money-obsessed People
Talent: Borrowing and lending money, pranks
Armaments: Leaves, pipe, sandals
Natural Enemy: Tamamo no Mae, Kuzunoha
Stats
Str: D
End: C
Agi: B
Mna: B
Lck: A
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
Personality
Dialouge
Note
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here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Herisilla :Roma erh*cough* nice cute waifu *add to my imaginery must be put in canon pedition list" i think that she really fit in the seting ,though i must admit that i understimated the bRoman mythology as i thought that it is just Greek Mythology with swapped names as i onc sought if a seperate Herkules or NEptune sheet would be reasonable but nevermind,great Job !
OOi ! i wanted also during reading Hesilla to know how she would view my Deianira ? i think she could be a bit jealous that my Deianira is a tall strong Woman albeit would i be curious what she thinks of her atonements.hmm ..
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Last edited by Cursed by Fortuna; July 3rd, 2022 at 07:58 PM.
Ferdiad: Pretty cool sheet. Gae Bolg (False) is an unusual choice, but you justified it satisfyingly enough IMO. He definitely stands apart from the other Ferdiad sheets I've seen here. Out of curiosity, does Affection Toward Ulster do anything in mechanical terms, or is it just a "flavor" Skill?
That Gáe Bolg (Fake) is a really cool idea. I remember having toyed with a similar idea for my Ferdiad back then, but I discarded it because he already looked too much like Cú in terms of ability. Is Blessing of the Waterside based on how he fought Cú near a river, or is there any other anecdote about him fighting near water?
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