Belongs in the "Modern Fiction Servants" thread in the fanfic section, read the bloody OP.
Belongs in the "Modern Fiction Servants" thread in the fanfic section, read the bloody OP.
You know e- independent action is like what the servants in alex's reality marble have. It's like 30 seconds.
also, yeah, this it the wrong thread.
Originally Posted by Vagrant
30 Turns actually, for however long that is.
Almost certantly a very short time.
Probably about 180 seconds, depending on how heavily based it is on D&D or D&D-derivatives.
<NEW FIC!> Revolution #9: Somewhere out there, there's a universe in which your mistakes and failures never happened, and all you wished for is true. How hard would you fight to make that real?
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But how long is it in real time? There are a LOT of fucking guys in that army. Alexander must be a godlike DM to handle a game that big.
Mass Combat rules and NPC's are a thing you know.
THEY ARE ALL HIS TRUSTED PLAYERS.
Last edited by aldeayeah; July 16th, 2014 at 09:51 AM.
don't quote me on this
Spirit: Odysseus
Class: Archer
Strength: C(++)
Mana: C(++)
Endurance: B(++)
Luck: D++(++)
Agility: A(++)
N. Phantasm: A+
Skills:
Eye of Mind True: B
Independent Action: A+
Divinity: D
Magic Resistance: C
Voyager of the Storm: A+
Noble Phantasms:
Vélos: B
Odysseus's bow, he is the only one who is able to string it. It does not have any concepts attached to it, and deals average damage for a noble phantasm.
The Oddessy: A Great and Arduous Journey- A+
Whenever Archer participates in what can be called "a great journey" he gets 2 Ranks Up in each of his stats.
UBW and I created this guy.
Boring.
Please try at least.
-1/10
thanks for the enlightening commentary
I think I put in about as much effort as you, tbh.
Lets see you give this a shot think you can do better
I already have.
Perhaps you should look at the front page.
1) Add detail lines to his skills, like the game does. It makes it look like you cared.
2) Spell Odyssey correctly. You have his name for guidance.
3) His NP is a cheap excuse to give him random pluses in his stats, not an extension of his legend.
I guess 3 points of improvement is about how much he deserves with the amount of effort he put in, but for it to be up to par I think it needs at least 10.
To be fair, I almost agree with his evaluation. I don't mostly because I don't believe in negative points.
It literally looks like you just wanted to try to realize Nasu's "Average Servant" idea, and completely marginalized everything about Odysseus's legend in doing so.
Basically, do more research on the actual legend, and give him skills and NPs based on that actually relevant stuff.
Last edited by Megas; July 16th, 2014 at 11:51 AM.
This is the worst argument ever to use when defending a poor effort. Other people's efforts have no bearing on the quality of your own.
Also, a bunch of people have already made better Odysseus sheets - see Vagrant's for example.
Ok, back to the drawing board
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