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    The Iron Chemist

    Name: Artephius
    Class: Caster
    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Parameters:
    Strength: D
    Endurance: D
    Agility: D
    Magic: B
    Luck: C

    Appearance

    Hailing from the Moorish region of Al-Andalus, Caster looks like quite the scholar. Exceptionally tall and lean, he is clad in robes of multiple colors, with various triangular swatches of cloth layered and sewn together to create an almost sacred appearance reminiscent of high-ranked monks or holymen. He has a large hood that he can wear to shadow his dark-skinned face, but with it down his hair can be seen to be a very tightly-cropped fuzz of black hair, his ears studded with multiple earrings and his lobes stretched and long from heavy metallic bolts worn through them. He often wears rimless spectacles when he is stockpiling his senses for later use. His feet are bare save for simple sandals and hidden under the robes he wears nothing but a simple loincloth. Aside from the earrings, Caster also wears a great variety of other jewelry including several torcs, neckbands and many bracelets of varying design and fit, as well as rings on every digit of his hands. Further up his arms, hidden under his robes, are larger armlets. All of the jewelry worn by Caster is made from various metals, and serve a purpose beyond decoration as they are vital for his particular brand of metallochemistry.

    Background

    Caster was a child of fortune, born into a relatively average Moorish family in the Córdoba region sometime around the dawn of the twelfth century, a family of farmers posessing a fairly sizable herd of cattle and other livestock. His family was one secretly devoted to the study of Alchemy and at the time of his birth had been extant as a magus family for a great many generations, selectively breeding for magical circuits specialised for the family’s brand of alchemical magic for over a thousand years. Caster himself was born with an ordinary number of circuits, but they were of abnormal quality, having an as-yet unseen quality of metallic circuitry.

    He studied under his family’s head magus for many years and eventually inherited the family’s Thaumaturgical Crest, but after a series of disagreeable encounters with other alchemists from within the family Caster decided to abandon the family and become an independent freelance alchemist. He researched whatever he wanted whenever he wanted, occasionally working for a patron lord who was in need of an alchemist or medical man, and it was during this freelance period that Caster first identified the unique nature of his magical circuits. His family’s brand of alchemy had always focused on imbuing metals with spiritual properties, but he discovered that his circuits, metalized through generations of focus on this speciality, allowed him to transmute consumed metals for other uses.

    Though all that is known of Caster in the modern day lies in Latin translations of some of his alchemical books, what is not known to history is that after learning of his ability to burn metals for additional uses Caster became apprenticed to a wandering warrior, and began to train his body as well as his mind. He became a mercenary of conscience, working alongside his warrior mentor in combat and developing his metallochemistry into a suitable battle style, becoming a feared battlemage. His renown in the area of Al-Andalus by the time of his middle years was great, and his mystique even greater because of his ostensibly unique style of magic, creating a secret legend within the ranks of the magical community that have not leaked into common knowledge at this point thanks to the razing of much magical knowledge by the Inquisition that followed soon after his death.

    As a person, Caster was an inquisitive man, always looking for more knowledge to record and investigate, as was common for alchemists of the era. His desire was not eternal life or the production of gold, contrary to many other alchemists, but rather simply to hone his unique craft and to further study his own metallic circuits and perhaps to pass his knowledge on to an apprentice. Whilst inquisitive and friendly for the most part, in battle Caster is a pragmatist and a quick thinker, doing exactly as necessary to achieve his goals.

    Class Skills

    Item Construction (D+): As a mage primarily focused on the use of metals for combat and other such avenues, Caster does not have a high level of skill in creation of magical items. However, his Alchemical knowledge is vast and so he receives a significant modifier to the creation of alchemical items, particularly in the realm of alchemically-altered metals.

    Territory Creation (C): Caster is not a traditional magus in terms of being able to wave a hand, mutter some self-hypnotic words and alter reality around him. His focus is strictly on alchemical research and as such he is capable only through the Grail’s own contribution of being able to magic up a workshop for his studies through enhancement of an existing space. Metals within his workshop are self-generating, though they develop at different rates, allowing him a reliable place to stockpile the materials needed for his combat metallochemistry. Though Caster lacks many Personal skills naturally he is able to emulate a great variety of skills through keen application of his metallochemistry.

    Personal Skills

    Magecraft (B): Within the realm of alchemy, Caster’s knowledge of thaumaturgy is quite vast. He knows all the general principles of alchemy and has even written tomes regarding the creation of the Elixir of Life, as well as demonstrating a surprisingly advanced understanding of the nature of the body and soul which, with further investigation could well have led to acquiring the Third Magic. His true skill, however, lies in the art of metallochemistry, an alchemical subset where metals are alchemically altered to be used as storage units for spiritual or metaphysical concepts. This is the reason why he wears such a great assortment of accessories, as each individual item is a storehouse for some trait or another. Additionally, he has learned how to actually use the metals as alchemical fuels, burning away metal he has consumed to grant him enhanced physical and mental abilities, as well as generating magical effects that would be otherwise unobtainable by a normal person, such as remote manipulation of metal and the ability to see and react to immediate future events.

    Enchant (C+): This is the skill of alteration, creating enhancements to items that Caster can obtain. It is a skill in the same vein as Reinforcement, but lasts far longer and can be done more delicately than most magi could perform Reinforcement because of its subtle alchemical basis. At this rank Caster is able to somewhat enhance others physically, but mainly excels in the enhancement of metallic items, as per his speciality, allowing him to transform regular swords into alchemical talismans on par with Noble Phantasms.

    Galvanism (B): The unrestricted conversion of immaterial energies into other forms of energy. One of the central tenets of alchemy, the art of galvanism allows Caster to partially transform immaterial attacks against him, whether it be magical attacks, light beams, wind and so on, into electricity that is discharged into the environment around him, or else store it within one of his metallic storage items for use as a supplemental source of prana or for reconstitution as an attack.

    Noble Phantasms

    Caster does not bear any Noble Phantasms as the destruction of much of the information about him by the Inquisition means that any chance for any of his legends to become crystallised mysteries has been lost. Had the information not been wiped from the memory of humanity it is likely that some of the enhanced weapons he utilised as a battlemage would have become Phantasms, but alas that is not the case. It is fortunate then that his aggressively combative metallochemistry and his ability to enchant regular weapons effectively bridge the gap that would normally be left by a lack of Phantasms.

    Metallochemistry

    Significant enough a divergence from regular magecraft that it requires a section to describe it in detail. The art of metallochemistry revolves around storing bodily concepts within metal storage houses, quite simply. Each metallochemical metal can be attuned for a certain type of concept, but all of them share the standard alchemical law of equivalence. The process of storage is simple enough, as it is a matter of someone who knows metallochemistry simply touching a metallochemical metal and willing the transfer of concept from his body to the metal. Pewter, for example, stores strength. By transferring strength into a pewter ring, the metallochemist spends a period of time weaker and without that fraction of strength stored in the ring, and can then later draw out that same amount of strength on top of what he has at that point in time.

    The advantage to this sort of metallochemistry is that it can be drawn upon as quickly or as slowly as needed, so an armlet containing a year’s worth of stored strength can be used to supplement natural strength for another year at an equivalent level, or compressed into a singular explosive burst of strength utilising it all within a single moment, or anywhere in between. There are eighteen known metals or metal alloys that can be used as metallochemical stores, and they must be pure or very precisely mixed to be able to be used as stores. Additionally, because bodily concepts vary ever so slightly from person to person a metallochemical store that hold’s a person’s concept within it can only be retrieved by that same magus. As a Servant Caster starts off with a few stores of basic concepts but not a very noticable amount. Someone summoning him is best served summoning him well in advance of the War and utilising the spare time to stock up his stores of metallochemical traits.

    Caster’s unique style of combat metallochemistry operates in a similar manner, using equivalence of consumption by burning up the physical existence of metallochemical metals within his system through use of the alchemical furnace he's transformed his stomach into. To this end he must consume the metals before use and then can burn them at two varying rates to get the benefits from the metals. Some of them act similarly to the concepts they can store normally, such as pewter enhancing strength, but it also enhances durability, healing rates and speed and balance. Others operate entirely differently when burnt to when storing concepts, such as steel allowing Caster to detect metals in his area and push them away from himself, either using small pieces as projectiles or large metal sources as anchors to propel himself through the air. Other relatively easily achievable effects include the ability to mask his magical presence completely, or to detect magical presences at great range and with great detail, toy with mental states or even to be able to see a person’s immediate future actions, allowing him to react before they happen. This is all done by utilizing his metallised circuits as conduits for the metallic-tainted prana that is released from the metals as he burns them in the alchemical furnace, circumventing a need for self-hypnotic spells or extended prep-time, as everything is essentially hard coded into his circuits.

    The advantage of this combat metallochemistry is that unlike regular metallochemistry he doesn’t need to store attributes beforehand and so as long as he has the metal he can burn it for its effects, but the downside is that unlike regular metallochemistry he is unable to draw upon the power at anything beyond the two rates of burn, so he cannot create such instantly explosive effects by this method. In either case however, it is foolish to judge Caster by his base parameters as at any moment he might be drawing upon the metallochemistry needed to enhance those parameters by a variable Rank Up.

    Metallochemistry forms the core of Caster’s magical talents, but is supplemented to a reasonable degree by regular alchemical abilities, as well as a very small array of basic thaumaturgical spells that most regular magi might learn. The big thing about Caster is that because each type of resonant metal creates a distinct effect he has access to a far less varied pool of effects than a regular magus might, but this is compensated for by his ability to draw upon such effects effectively instantly as long as he has the metals to fuel him. Thus while he may not be able to create a Bounded Field of of Life Draining or summon dragon-bone golems whilst spamming light beams willy-nilly over his targets, Caster’s physical capability is more honed than most other Casters because of this, as most of his magic creates physical effects or reinforcements that he mixes with regular physical combat as a fluid and deadly style.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Petrikow View Post
    The index is updated now. It covers 40 more pages of this thread now, up to the latest one.
    Thank you, good sir, for all your efforts!

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    Patron Saint of Kicking Ass

    Accounts may vary, but I hope to do this guy justice. This thread is part of the reason I joined. I can't believe nobody made one for him.

    Class: Saber
    True Name: מִיכָאֵל (most commonly pronounced Michael)
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Appearance: Changes, but prefers Caucasian male, 190 cm tall, with blond hair and emerald eyes. Tends to wear whatever his master gives him.

    Stats:
    Strength: A
    Endurance: B
    Agility: C
    Magical Energy: A+/A+++
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: B
    Class abilities:
    Magical Resistance: A++.
    Flight: [N/A] He doesn't need to ride anything. What are the wings for?

    Details: Michael. Field Commander of the Army of God, One of the Chief Princes, Advocate of Israel, One Who is Like God, Angel of the Presence, Chief of the Virtues and Archangels, Angel of Truth, the Warrior, Defender of Christians, Patron Saint of Chivalry, Patron Saint of Warriors, Captain of the Host of the Lord, Prince of Light, Viceroy of Heaven, Prince of Israel, King of Battles, First of the Seven Who Stand Before the Lord, Archistratege of God, Prince of Primordial Fire, the Expeller, Supreme Commander of the Heavenly Host, Prince of the Seraphim, the Right Hand of the Lord, Conqueror of Satan, Saint Michael Mikha'el the Archangel, and overall Patron Saint of Ass-Kicking. A great many stories have been attributed to him, so I leave it up to you to decide which version you will follow.

    Skills:
    Instinct: A
    Prana Burst: A (usually used for adding extra fire to attacks a la Nero's sword from DMC4)
    Charisma: B
    Feather Storm: A+. Before Michael started using this, the only use of wings in combat were for maneuvering by flight, extra Magic Circuits for casting spells, defending, and for looking good. At this level the feathers from his wings are enough to deflect (but not destroy) the Noble Phantasms fired from the Gate of Babylon, but he loses his flight when he uses this.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Sword of Eden

    Rank B
    Anti-Personnel Noble Phantasm
    Range 1-2
    Max. Target 1 object at a time

    The sword used to prevent Adam and Eve from going back into Eden. A sword made of fire fit for the Child of Fire. The flames from the sword can be used as a long range-attack several times over. Some say that it even conceals a greater sword, much like Invisible Air.


    Quis Ut Deus?
    The legend goes that Michael yelled this at Satan as Satan was cast into Hell for his arrogance. This Noble Phantasm's properties are completely unknown, even to Michael - if it even exists.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Petrikow View Post
    Someone has.

    It would be in the index, but the current version of that thing is too big for the forum or something, so I can't update it.
    I approve so much~ <3

    What about Harry Potter?

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    Archangel Michael? Seems serioulsy underpowered ... it´s Archangel Michael, after all ...
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    Is linking to TVTropes pages for non-pop culture things an acceptable thing now?
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    Not that you should ever link TVTropes, but especially ​not for stuff like that.
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear View Post
    Not that you should ever link TVTropes, but especially ​not for stuff like that.
    Hello, voice of sanity. How nice to meet you.
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    The Bible is, like, the most pop-cultural thing in the world, though.
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    Could´ve linked something other but didn´t feel like it. Thing is, it´s Michael this Servant is about ... questionable if he, as divine being whose place in cosmology is not that far from the monotheistic god, would even qualify as regular heroric spirit, as he seems to whield - depending on the writer, of course - more power than many polytheistic gods and his origin cannot be really called "human".
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    Is it, though? People know about it, but do they read it, out of digest, out of half-remembered stories from childhood? Asimov's aphorism is a not uncommon atheist talking point: "Properly read, the Bible is the most potent force for atheism ever conceived".
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Is it, though? People know about it, but do they read it, out of digest, out of half-remembered stories from childhood? Asimov's aphorism is a not uncommon atheist talking point: "Properly read, the Bible is the most potent force for atheism ever conceived".
    Eh? Who are you responding to?
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    You. just that the rest of them got in the way.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    You. just that the rest of them got in the way.
    Ah. But anyhow, the Bible is totally pop culture. It's very widespread, it's a common interest of billions of people across the planet, and a large number of other people regardless of religious views at least know the stories within the Bible. When it comes to popular culture, "genuine interest" has no real meaning, since most of contemporary popular culture is very transient.
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    Michael is very much like Heracles, in that putting him into a Servant container would only nerf him considerably, and I doubt he'd even be eligible for the whole summoning process considering he's an unfallen angel.

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    If you were going with a particular interpretation of Michael it'd be easier to judge, but as an entity of the Nasuverse, since we don't even know exactly where on the sliding scale of Spirits angels fall on, it's very hard to judge him.


    I don't get why the Magic parameter needs to be A+ and especially not A+++ when there appears to be nothing that modifies it up to that level, since my vague conceptions of Nasuverse angels doesn't indicate a particular proclivity towards magic, but that's just my own feelings on the matter since there's nothing hard and fast about Nasuverse angels.


    Also, the Prana Burst skill should really be Karna's Prana Burst (Flames) skill, but that's really neither here nor there. As for the sword that Michael uses, it's not overly interesting to be honest. Normally a flaming sword would seem like it could be an NP by virtue of it being a flaming sword, but since he can make any sword he wants burst into flames I feel like you should leave that as an attribute of the Prana Burst (Flames) skill and give the sword something else unique to do.

    Also, for the sake of consistency I would personally add the Riding skill back in with an X or - Rank, and describe how it's not needed, then rename the Feather Storm skill (which I personally think sounds horribly unwieldy) to Flight, and wrap the description of Feather Storm into the skill, stating that at such a high Rank of Flight Michael has developed his own offensive technique using the feathers. It just looks and feels neater, in my opinion.

    I should work on my next bio too, actually. I was thinking of doing either the Bloody Benders or the Servant Girl Annihilator as Assassin class instead of the dreadfully more common Jack the Ripper, since I think they sound plenty interesting.
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    I left a lot of the interpretation very vague because again, I don't feel I could do him justice, and also for sensitivity to the Judeochristian faiths who may or may not have a vastly different image of him. I prefer to think of Michael as a smite-happy sort of guy, myself, given his portrayal in Manchester Lost.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TypeWannabe View Post
    Michael is very much like Heracles, in that putting him into a Servant container would only nerf him considerably, and I doubt he'd even be eligible for the whole summoning process considering he's an unfallen angel.
    Just wank him being a Saint into him having an aspect that is like a Heroic Spirit to humans since being a Saint is fundamentally a human concept or something.
    Inject some more Nasuspeak in there and voila, Servant.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LilyasAvalon View Post
    I approve so much~ <3

    What about Harry Potter?
    Thank you and I don't think they put it on this site but this writer over at FF.net has a sheet for him that goes with their. probably dead but still awesome, fic.
    See me wasting my life on fanfics here.

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