Telegonus:
Hokuto Ujou Hagan Ken
Anyways, sheet updated with feedback.
I also added Lore, Personality etc
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Huh, a Catherine sheet-
*rereads*
There's.... something wrong.....
oh.
I know.
Russian Winter NP isn't called General Winter, 0/10.
Im going to try to write a General Winter sheet on top of my load now.
Changed Gudrún's theme to Blood and Guts and Guts and Blood from the Berserk 2016 OST because after doing Grímhild's sheet and re-doing Helgi's I've found that, yeah, Berserk is the only way to go with these tales.
Grímhild is so evil, I love it.
Also I went through most of the completed sheets and corrected some spellings and alignments and whatnot. Small stuff.
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Wise UP
Class: Banner (can also be summoned as Saber)
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Female
Source: Biblical
Place of Origin: France
Rarity: ★★★★
Height & Weight: 148 cm, 33 kg
Likes: The LORD, her friends, fishes.
Dislikes: N/A
Talents: Being a Disney Princess (Fake)
Natural Enemy: N/A
Attribute: Star
Element Affinity: Earth
Personality: Banner is quiet and meek, preferring not to raise hands against even those who meant her harm. Nevertheless, she possesses the attribute of a lioness, courageously encouraging them to.martyrdomvictory
Parameters:
STR: E
END: B
AGI: D
MGI: B
LUK: A
Noble Phantasm: A
Skills:Spoiler:
Noble Phantasm:
Spoiler:
Legend:Spoiler:
Note:Spoiler:
Blandina is interesting, but I don't think any Heroic Spirit no matter how weak should really have no Personal Skills at all. I'd suggest giving her either Saint or Soul Of A Martyr, some beast-taming related Skill and maybe even Weak Constitution (since you described her with those exact words in the lore section).
Servant Assassin:
True Name: Tokoyo "The Daddy's Girl Dragon Slayer"
Alignment: Neutral Good
Strength- D
Agility- A+
Endurance- C+
Mana- E
Luck- B
NP- C+
Equipment: A simple and elegant Tanto dagger that Assassin carries concealed in her clothing. Though not a true Noble Phantasm, having tasted the blood of a dragon- the strongest of the Phantasmal Races- it deals greatly increased damage against monstrously aligned foes, especially the Dragon-Kind. This dagger is also an heirloom from Assassin's beloved father, and one she treasures close to her heart as proof of their familial bond.
Appearance:
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Personality: Wild, cheerful and adventurous. A true "daddy's girl", she idolizes her father from the bottom of her heart and would undergo nearly any hardship for his sake. Incredibly determined; once Assassin sets her mind on an objective then nothing, come Hell or high water, will make her turn her back on its completion. She also has a very strong, uncompromising sense of justice that belies her carefree manner and abhors those who'd sacrifice others for any supposed "greater good".
In the Grail War, Assassin will almost surely come to view any older male Master as a substitute father-figure and adore them similarly. She enjoys swimming and deep-sea diving particularly, finding it immensely relaxing to dive under the waters and let all her earthly cares float away. Assassin also picks up a notable fondness bordering on obsession for Eastern martial arts flicks in the modern day. In her spare time, she can often be caught trying to come up with overly dramatic names for her attacks in the style of such movies.
Because of her past experiences, Assassin's animosity with those who fought against their father figures in life (such as Mordred) and those who believed in(such as Kiritsugu Emiya) is particularly great. If she encounters such people, Assassin will assuredly come to blows with them sooner or later.Utilitarianismsacrificing the few for the many
Assassin's wish on the Holy Grail is to be able to bring her father up into the Throne Of Heroes with her, so they can truly be together forever.
Likes: her father, martial arts movies
Dislikes: sacrificing the few for the many, being separated from her father
Talents: deep-sea diving, dragon-slaying
Natural Enemy: Yofune-Nushi, Mordred, Kiritsugu Emiya
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment- N/A
Ability to cut off one's presence as a Heroic Spirit. However, the efficacy of this Skill declines sharply the moment one prepares to attack. As Assassin's talent for subterfuge is instead expressed through her Personal Skill- Sacrificial Maiden (False), she lacks the Presence Concealment that her Class would normally possess.
Personal Skills:
Sacrificial Maiden (False)- C
A Skill held by those who were intended as sacrifices to appease the gods or ravenous beasts. In Assassin's case, she possesses only an imposter's variant of this Skill, due to having willingly offered herself up in place of the true sacrifice and in fact slaying the very monster she was intended as tribute to.
This Skill dilutes her true presence as a warrior, insuring that those around her view Assassin as no more than a delicate and frail maiden unable to defend herself. Furthermore, her maidenly allure is nigh-irresistible to those of a monstrous alignment, who are naturally driven to obsession over the prospects of ravaging and devouring her fair form. All monsters in the vicinity become fixated on attacking only Assassin, to the point of neglecting their surroundings and other combatants.
While most normal people would find this Skill to be a horrible curse, for Assassin it simply makes the task of slaying her bestial foes all the easier. Too enamored with her waifish exterior to even consider the possibility that their "helpless prey" could fight back, they fall easily before Assassin's trusty dagger.
Just like the analogous ability normally held by the Assassin Class, the effectiveness of her ruse is nullified the moment she reveals her true nature and attacks. Any semblance of a demure and vulnerable lady is instantly dispelled and replaced by that of a ferocious warrior-maiden.
Aquatic Affinity- B
A Skill that denotes an increase in performance while fighting or manuevering underwater. At this rank, Assassin gains a notable increase in battle performance while in an aquatic environment, as well as being able to hold her breath for up to several minutes at a time even in pitched combat. Her natural fighting style compliments this affinity, taking advantage of her vastly increased mobility underwater to twist gracefully out of the path of enemy attacks and counter from unexpected angles.
Practically since she was old enough to walk, Assassin was a perfect swimmer who frequently practiced diving alongside the other woman of her village, gathering up pearls and other valuable trinkets from the sea-floor. In the most famous moment of her legend, Assassin's battle with the serpent-god Yofune-Nushi took place entirely in the depths of the beast's undersea cavern.
Outmaneuvering and slaying a Divine Beast of the seas in its native territory is truly a feat worthy of this Skill.
Bravery- A
Ability to negate- through sheer fortitude of will- mental interference such as fear, confusion and despair. Also provides bonuses to melee damage.
Assassin was an astonishingly valiant girl who set off on a journey to find her exiled father all on her lonesome. No matter how many locals cautioned Assassin against her path and advised her to turn back from her dangerous journey, she continued to stubbornly venture ahead. When she came across a young maiden about to be thrown into the sea to satiate the local serpent-god Yofune-Nushi, Assassin begged the priest carrying out the ghoulish ritual to allow her to offer herself up in the girl's stead.
Assenting, both priest and girl could only look on in awe as Assassin donned the maiden's ceremonial dress and dove headlong off the cliff herself, plunging into the watery depths with only her trusty dagger clenched between her teeth. Once confronted face-to-face with the ravenous seadragon itself, Assassin forced herself to remain calm until it drew within range of her dagger, at which point she lashed out with a ferocious slash that blinded the beast in its right eye.
Showing both the bravery to offer up her own life for the sake of another, and the sheer audacity to confront a vicious dragon-god with nothing more than a flimsy dagger. Assassin truly is a warrior maiden to be both respected and feared.
Independent Action- B
Ability to sustain oneself without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank, Assassin can linger in the world for up to two days in the absence of an active contract. Furthermore, she can also survive and keep fighting after extensive damage to her spiritual core.
Assassin travelled far and wide in search of her father, never giving up in the face of harsh terrain or unhelpful locals. Even as her heart was wracked with despair, Assassin persisted in pushing her body forward with an ironclad will, refusing to let her search come to an end until her beloved father was returned safely home.
Noble Phantasms:
Dragon-Slaying Peerless Art- Spiral Blade Of The Water Lotus (C+, Anti-Unit): A Noble Phantasm crystallizing Assassin's defeat of the terrifying dragon-god Yofune-Nushi. Luring the monster up close by pretending to be a sacrifice, Assassin blinded Yofune-Nushi with a swift slash from her dagger. The two then engaged in furious combat, twisting and writhing around each other in the depths of the beast's undersea cavern, Yofune-Nushi lashing out with its claws and fangs and Assassin with her trusty dagger. Finally, Assassin slew the seadragon with a fateful slash to its throat, ending the struggle just before running out of breath and dragging its carcess to the surface.
This anecdote has been sublimated into the form of a technique-based Noble Phantasm that imitates the motions of her famous battle. Invoking its true name, Assassin unleashes an omnidirectional barrage of twisting, spiralling slashes with her dagger. With each slice, a shimmering blade of condensed water trails behind her blade, until Assassin appears to be at the center of a vicious raging whirlpool that sucks in and shreds apart anything unlucky enough to be caught nearby.
Every few strikes Assassin switches her grip on the dagger, alternating between wielding it in her hands, feet or even clenched between her teeth. While Assassin claims this is necessary to vary up the angle and direction of her attacks, in fact she really just does it to show off.
The motions are as elegant as they are deadly, evoking the imagery of a beautiful water lotus flowering on the battlefield. Reflecting how Assassin's initial blow against Yofune-Nushi blinded the dragon, the first of these strikes has a high chance of stunning the enemy and leaving them helpless to defend against the following barrage.
Though powerful on land, this Noble Phantasm's true potential can only be shown underwater. Combined with her greatly increased mobility while submerged, the technique becomes nearly impossible to block or evade by all but the most agile opponents, bombarding them with dozens of watery slashes from every angle and direction. Also, for obvious reasons it deals greater damage against foes with a draconic or divine attribute.
While her technique went nameless in life, as a Heroic Spirit Assassin has chosen to bestow it with this rather grandiose title. "Every Heroic Spirit has to have a named special move of their own, right? That's just how it works..." she says with a beaming smile. Really, she just watches too many cheesy martial arts flicks...
Takatoki No Zo- Curse-Breaking Idol (C, Anti-Curse): In the depths of Yofune-Nushi's cavern, Assassin came across an unusual sight- a small statue of the emperor Takatoki who banished her father tucked into a crevice. Angered at his visage, Assassin considered smashing the statue out of pique, but thought better of it. Instead, she hoisted the statue across her back and took it with her to the surface after defeating the wicked dragon.
Upon doing so, the illness afflicting the emperor was immediately dispelled. He realized that somebody had carved a statue bearing his image, cursed it and dropped it into the sea to be guarded over by the monstrous serpent. By finding the statue and returning it to the surface, Assassin had broken the curse and freed the emperor from his baffling sickness. Grateful, he reunited Assassin with her father and bestowed them both with great wealth and honor in regret for banishing his most loyal samurai.
Assassin still carries the statue of the emperor on her person, endowed with the conceptual attribute of dispelling curses. Radiating a gentle golden aura, any who touch the blessed statue are instantly cleansed of all illness or curses afflicting them. However, this Noble Phantasm is only effective on curses and similar maladies, not physical injuries the likes of broken bones or severed limbs. In RPG terms, it only cancels status ailments rather than restoring HP.
Upon invoking its true name, the statue emanates a shimmering golden Bounded Field that dispels all curses in the vicinity. Furthermore, curse-based sorceries below this Noble Phantasm's own rank are rendered impotent within the Bounded Field's area-of-effect, completely depriving those who rely on such arts of their malefic power. A manifestation of the divine authority held by the emperor in Japanese culture, extending his grace to all his subjects and outlawing curses by imperial mandate.
Ever after he made amends for his foolish acts, Assassin still holds some unresolved animosity towards the emperor and hardly approves of having to lug his statue around with her. Nonetheless, she is wise enough to appreciate the value of this Noble Phantasm's effects. That said, it doesn't mean she can't indulge in a little fun at the dead emperor's expense, such as doodling a mustache or other goofy imagery across the statue's face. Defiling the sanctity of a holy artifact is one way to put it, but on the other hand, isn't this childish behavior of hers terribly endearing?
Key Words/Craft Essence
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A sheet for a lesser known Japanese heroine this time around. I actually came across her legend from browsing Tumblr, and was intrigued enough as to look up her legend as a potential Heroic Spirit. Once I got the idea for her Sacrificial Maiden (False) Skill, the rest came out pretty easily altogether. Second Bond CE turned out quite a bit longer then intended, but it has enough flavor that I didn't want to trim it down too much.
As always, be sure to drop by with comments and criticisms! Thanks.
Last edited by RoydGolden; August 15th, 2019 at 05:07 PM. Reason: Clarified a bit of wording
Tokoyo:... Is it me or did you forget to add the Lore section?
Regarding the sheet; it's very well-done; two detailed NPs, an nicely written False Sacrifice Skill, making a surprisingly offensive Assassin.
The Bond Craft Essences are usually my favorite parts of Servant Sheets, and both of them are all well done - so good job for the extra effort!
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"After my flames burn your twigs-for-arms to ash, let's see if you wanna try calling me 'Little Kid' again!"
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Servant Class: Lancer
True Name: Hong Hai’er, Boy-King of Flame
Place of Origin: China (Literature)
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral/Evil
Attribute: Earth
Alternate Classes: Rider, Berserker
Armaments: The Hongzhang Fire Spear (Noble Phantasm)
Catalyst: A rock from the Flaming Mountains of Xinjiang
Likes: “Mom and Pops,” Nezha, Sweets
Dislikes: Cold weathers, “Mom and Pops arguing,” Mantras
Talents: Pyrotechnics
Natural Enemy: Sun Wukong, Xuanzang
Parameters:
Strength - B (A+)
Endurance - B
Agility - C+
Mana - B
Luck - E
N.
Phantasm - B
Background
Personal Traits
Craft Essence/Reactions
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Last edited by SleepMode; June 11th, 2017 at 10:51 PM. Reason: Major changes to Skills, and added Background and Personal Traits
I'd actually considered doing a Red Boy sheet for quite a while, but never felt inspired enough to actually write it up. In any case, I don't regret that you beat me to it, since your take is pretty damn good. Obviously it lacks much in the way of lore and characterization, but I presume that's do to being a WIP. I imagine Red Boy as being essentially a more aggressive/selfish Astolfo personality-wise, but of course you're free to come up with your own take on the character. Along those lines, I wonder if Evaporation Of Sanity might work better then Mad Enhancement as a Skill to represent to his wild and temperamental nature. That's what I'd have done for my own sheet, anyways.
True Name: Bass Reeves
Class: Archer
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Man
Strength: D+
Endurance: D
Agility: A
Mana: B
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: B
Likes: Justice
Dislikes: Crime, his disappointing son
Natural Enemy: Billy the Kid, Criminals,
Natural Ally: Anyone who enforces the Law.
Armament: A battered Colt revolver.
Skills
NP
Need to add Lore and Personality.
Redoing my old Bass Reeves sheet, obviously.
Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; March 25th, 2017 at 10:42 AM.
Shouldn't Red Boy have Dual Summon if he has Mad Enhancement as a Class Skill?
Reeves: Aw, no mention of how he allegedly inspired the Lone Ranger? I'd expect some reference, even if only as a flavor tidbit...
@Tokoko: Been ages since you made an Assassin, refreshing from the steady stream of Riders and Casters. There's good flavour with a lot of personality written into the sheet with good detail on the skills and NP's.
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Also, I'm kinda suprised no one has made a sheet for Lucius Tiberius after his cameo in Fragments. I should probably do it at some point if no one else will now I'm reading Malory's rendition.
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She here.
Source: (X)
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: Caster, Saber, Berserker
True Name: Gudrun
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Iceland (Volsung Saga)
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: B
MGI: B+
LCK: E
NP: C
Height: 171cm
Weight: 56kg
Likes: Sigurd, Herself
Dislikes: Brynhildr, Herself
Talent: Homewrecker
Natural Enemy: Brynhildr
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Human, Draconic
Armament: Sword, Armour
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment (False): A (D)
Capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. Hides one's presence as a Servant. Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. It is possible to disappear and become almost impossible to be detected. If not for the ability of her Noble Phantasm, her natural rank would be far lower.
Personal Skills:
Breath of the Dragon: C
The ability to release a torrent of mana like the breath of Dragons, the strongest race of the Phantasmal Species. After consuming the heart of a dragon, it resulted in the change of her origin to 'Dragon'. One whose presence alone invites destruction. The use of the dragon breath puts massive strain on the body but due to her high END and MGI, her body can withstand the violent magnitude. At this rank, it is considered a C-Rank attack as she unleashed a cone of blazing fire from her mouth.
The use of the dragon breath puts massive strain on the body but due to her high MGI, her body can withstand the violent magnitude.
Clairvoyance: B
A visual ability that is also called 'Eagle Eye'. This is generally a must-have ability of the Archer class. It is also frequently used during scouting. Simply looking from a high location is sufficient to fully survey a town and search for enemies. In addition, Clairvoyance will affect the accuracy of bows. It connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this Skill have acquired abilities such as precognition ('future vision') and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight (X-ray vision and so forth).
At her rank, Assassin possesses prophetic powers and is capable of future sight. By means of dreams, she can divine the future.
Item Creation: B+
It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.
She is capable of brewing powerful concoctions and potions. However her speciality is making potions of amnesia that can make those who drink it lose either specific memories or their entirety.
Magecraft: C
Knowledge about modern Thaumaturgy. She was tutored by her mother in the art, a famous and powerful witch. Although she possesses a great deal of magical power, she was not a particularly learned student and is quite unremarkable compared to other Magi of her time. She does hold a particularly strong affinity for the Fire element which was enhanced by consuming the heart of a dragon.
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Lore
Personality
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Reeves: Props to the Warrant of Arrest, for it was nicely-written compared to the second one. Funnily enough, the Warrant of Arrest feels like a JJBA Stand due to its function and listed methods to make the target look at the paper...
Honestly, I think the NP should have a higher rank of power, given the effect it has on other Servants is fairly powerful. However, that may be just me, since Reeves does have to make the target look at the paper first...