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Man, I got the idea for a cool Sheet but I just can't decide whether to put him in the Berserker class or the Avenger class.
He could really fit in either...
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Yeah, I think I have, like 5 persons in my "Unfinished Sheets" list which fit the prompt.
"It exists, yet formless. It theoretically possible, yet unattainable. We focused so much on humanity's progress, but ignorant of what we can't achieve. Yes, you Mages call it the 'Root' or 'Universal Truth,' but we thermo-physicians knows it on a different name━━━━━━━━ Absolute Zero."
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Don't think I'll come close to winning, but I'm definitely willing to give this a shot.
Do pirates come under the theme?
How about raiders, people who move through the sea to attack land?
Let's cut to the chase, I'm talking about vikings and their kings. Are those allowed?
So, yeah, I guess.Originally Posted by prompt
As far as the past contest goes, nobody has disqualified because their entry didn't fit the prompt as long as it's not borderline different (ex: an Archer entry in Saber contest, a fire character in water prompt, etc). Either people will judge your entry as not fitting the prompt, criticize that part or didn't vote.
Personally, how fit with the prompt the sheet is another factor I use to judge an entry. But each person has a different value and may disagree, I guess that's another fun part of this.
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Final Comments: Finally started finishing the character sheets for the servants in my fate fanfic(which will probably never finish because writing is hard XD) and decided to post it to the public. Any and all constructive criticism is much appreciated and welcomed.
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Queen of Hearts: Hate to say it, but I really don't see how she fits the "water" theme. I guess her first NP being likened to a typhoon could fit if you stretch things, but since it lets her manipulate wind- not water- I still don't really see it. Overall, this is a pretty cool and creative sheet, but it definitely feels like you decided to polish up a pre-existing idea and post it here rather than writing something up specifically for the prompt.
Sorry but i may have missed the part about the contest being "water" themed.....
Class: Saber
Alternate Class: Rider
Title: The Drowned Emperor
True Name: Emperor Antoku
Source: Japan - Historical Facts
Alignment: True Neutral
Gender: Male
Height: 128cm
Weight: 25kg
Attribute: Heaven
Traits: Divine, King, Male, Riding
Armament: Sword
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: B
MGI: A
LCK: D
NP: A+
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I was trying to save him for an RP or something but figured 'may as well', can always recycle him later.
He was originally a Rider but his NP's were an army summon (god forbid) and a giant crab which wasn't anything special. Even now I had a wild idea of summoning a being of water equipped with the true Kusanagi as the NP but what i came up with was messy to I scrapped it. A better writer could probably do better but I'll save that for another time. Ah well, gonna give it a shot anyways.
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Antoku: I can't freaking believe we both chose the exact same Servant for this contest. Though I'm still going to post up my take when I get it done, since they're otherwise very different despite sharing a similar conceptual starting ground. For instance, my Antoku is going to be a Foreigner connected to the crab god Basatan, and have a variant of the sunken city R'lyeh as an NP. (Combined with the legend where he was taken to an undersea palace after death)
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Servant Lancer:
Appearance:
(Official art of Rance from the titular series)
True Name: Ajax the Lesser
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Alternate Class: Berserker
Armament: A thick bronze spear carved with ornate images depicting man's triumph over the gods.
Strength- B
Agility- A
Endurance- A
Mana- C
Luck- C
NP- A+
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Magic Resistance- C-
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, spells with a chant below two verses are nullified. Cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. Having met his end from a divine curse, Lancer's magical defenses suffer a penalty against spells that are divine in origin.
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Vigilance- B
Denotes a heightened ability to sense danger. Differing from the Instinct Skill, it works through subconscious analysis of one's environment rather than an inherent "sixth sense". By attuning himself to his surroundings, Lancer can negate most visual and auditory obstructions.
At the funeral games of Patroclus, Lancer was described by the sophist Philostratus as exhibiting an unwavering sense of alertness.
Enmity Of The Goddess- B
A Skill for those were hated and cursed by the divine. Enmity is from the goddess of wisdom Athena, who cursed Lancer after he raped the Trojan priestess Cassandra in one of her temples. Increases damage from Lancer's attacks against people, objects and structures affiliated with Athena. As a side-effect, this Skill ranks down his Luck parameter in the presence of those selfsame divinities.
Battle Continuation- C
The ability to continue combat while injured. At this rank, Lancer can keep fighting through any wound short of a decisive killing blow, but will still perish in the end from amassed battle damage. This Skill represents Lancer's indomitable will to survive, stubbornly clinging to life even when his demise was decreed by the gods. Philostratus described Lancer's final moments as such- "The rocks rising out of the water and the boiling sea about them, and on the rocks a hero glaring fiercely and with a certain proud defiance toward the sea."
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I hit a bit of writer's block on my Foreigner Antoku sheet, so I decided to cobble together another sheet to post here until that one is finished. This guy is basically the biggest asshole "hero" of Greek Myth (even worse than Jason probably). I may've exaggerated his worst traits a tad but he's a freaking rapist. Aside from a very particular kind of eroge, it's pretty much impossible to play that sort of character sympathetically for a modern audience.
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