Create-a-Servant

[Funderfullness]

Class: Caster

STR: E
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: A
LCK: C

Class Skills

Territory Creation (B): Creation of a high-quality Workshop is possible. Once
established, Caster is quite adept at processing stone and metal in his factory.

Item Construction (B+): Caster can manufacture virtually any mundane item with the aid of his Workshop.

Personal Skills

Sculpture (A): An offshoot of Caster's Item Construction, it allows for the creation of golems and
familiars from stone and metal. Caster's familiars gather raw material from the surrounding area
and use his Workshop, producing foot soldiers with machine-like efficiency.

Eye For Art (C): A skill picked up from being a pupil of the famous sculptor, Lysippos. If a
Servant shows any sign of artistic significance, Caster can discern their identity much more easily.

Noble Phantasm

Colossus Helios~Titan of Rhodes (Anti-World, EX)

Caster's magnum opus, one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. By stocking up materials in his
Workshop, he can construct this ultimate golem. The number he can make is limited only by the raw
materials available, although the amount required and the capabilities of his workforce means that
a medium-sized city such as Fuyuki will yield enough to make two or three giants. The Colossus is
a 30-meter tall statue of the Titan Helios, and though it's physical weapons are devastating, it's
true power is being able to mimic the powers of the sun god. Beams of the sun can be launched from his
eyes and hands, incinerating everything in his path and giving Caster's familiars more material to be
gathered from the slag. Regardless of the materials used to build the Colossi, they are extremely tough
to destroy and have some degree of Magic Resistance. Unlike the Wise Queen of Assyria, Caster is confirmed
to have built the Colossus of Rhodes; his connection to it is no anecdote. Because of this, by pouring a
truly immense amount of prana into the giant, he can even cause Helios himself to sublimate the statue's
existence and allow a true Divine Spirit to descend on the world. However, this can only be done if only
one statue currently exists, and the strain of trying to keep the World from destroying this violation
will only keep Helios on the mortal place for a short time, if the strain does not kill Caster first.
Still, the assistance of the Titan of the Sun for even a minute is worth it.

Background

Chares of Lindos was a Greek sculptor born on the island of Rhodes. He was a pupil of Lysippus. Chares constructed
the Colossus of Rhodes in 282 BC, an enormous bronze statue of the sun god Helios and also the patron god of Rhodes.
The statue was built to commemorate Rhodes' victory over the invading Macedonians in 305 BC, led by Demetrius I, son
of Antigonus, a general under Alexander the Great. The Colossus of Rhodes is one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient
World, and was considered Chares's greatest accomplishment, until its destruction in an earthquake in 226 BC.

[Arkanian]

Ah, what the hell. Here's the cleaned up version of my take on Captain Nemo:


Class: Caster
True Name: Prince Dakkar/Captain Nemo

Parameters:
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: E
Prana: E (Lowered from the default by one of Caster's personal skills)
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: B+


Class Skills:

Territory Creation: B-
The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. At this Rank, Caster is capable of creating a “Workshop.” However, due to not being a Magus, he is unable to give it proper magical defenses.

Item Creation: X
The skill to create magical Items. It has been supplanted in the Caster Class by one of Caster's personal skills.


Details:
While he is almost solely known by the name of Captain Nemo, Caster's name of birth was Dakkar. Son of the Raja of Bundelkund, he was a true prince -- until India's war for independence stripped him of his title, saw his family dead, and otherwise destroyed all that he held dear. Disgusted by both the actions of his countrymen and those they opposed, he resolved to leave the world behind him entirely, departing to the one world within reach that remained unexplored: the ocean.

For years he researched the ways to make his wish possible, gathering those of like mind along with the materials and funding that he needed. Finally he created his first true Marvel: the Nautilus, a vessel which could indefinitely sustain its inhabitants in a life beneath the sea.

For many years he voyaged, taking up the name "Nemo" to leave all trappings of his former life behind. In spite of his efforts however, he could not entirely leave the surface world behind. This was both out of necessity -- as wondrous as its workings were, the Nautilus still needed to surface to resupply its air -- and out of Dakakr's personality: no matter how much he claimed otherwise, Dakkar's history still had a claim on him. Whenever the Nautilus needed to surface, he would often take action, striking at those who voyaged the sea. No matter how much he desired to leave the surface world behind, his heart still reached out to those who had lost like he had, and hated those who might cause such tragedy -- and those of the latter would oft find their ships mysteriously lost, effortlessly destroyed by a mysterious metal monster.

But Captain Nemo and his Nautilus still remained an urban legend -- until, that is, he took pity on a trio of men who unwittingly hitched a ride on his vessel's hull. These three men eventually escaped, and while Nemo's subsequent departure through the famed Maelstrom known as the Moskenstraumen made pursuit of his vessel an impossibility, the three spread the story far and wide, eventually resulting in a novel of worldwide fame. And thus was Captain Nemo cemented as a legend.

Eventually however, enough of Nemo's crew were gone that he was unable to continue his life upon the sea, and he retired to a workshop of his own creation in the south pacific. He defended his newfound home with devices both marvelous and mundane, and ultimately passed away there from old age rather than any violent end.


Personal Skills:
Rider on the Storm: B+
The talent to sail vessels recognized as ships. Because the ability as a group leader is also necessary, this unique Skill also has the effects of both Charisma and Military Tactics. Due to the difficulty inherent in piloting his chosen vessel in comparison to normal ships, Caster's rank in this skill is increased when it is used for that purpose.

Expert of Many Specializations: B
A skill governing access to and use of many expert skills. Biology, history, language, medicine, and sixteen other skills can be used with proficiency Rank D or above. These skills are largely derived from both Caster's former life as the son of an Indian Raja, and the extensive research and study necessary on Caster's part to make an indefinite life under the sea possible.

Golden Rule: D
A skill that measures ones ability to acquire wealth. While Caster is unable to simply acquire large amounts of money without effort, he is highly familiar with money-making ventures, and can easily obtain what is required should no unforeseen difficulty present itself. Due to the particular way that Caster applied this skill in life, it is of especial use in obtaining materials for his personal use, whether directly or by purchasing it with funds acquired through this skill.

Maker of Marvels: C++
A skill governing the ability to achieve feats of engineering ahead of one's own time. At this rank, fantastic engines and electrical devices can be created, and Caster may replicate almost any modern technology for his own use.

Due to not being a Magus, this skill has replaced the Item Creation Skill and the higher base ranking in Prana normally inherent in the Caster class; the grail has greatly increased the strength of this skill order to make him more suitable to serve as a Caster. As a result, the machines that Caster can create with this skill are far more efficient and quicker to construct than they would normally be, and have normal efficacy against servants despite being mundane machines whose workings involve no Prana to speak of.


Noble Phantasms:

Moskenstraumen
Rebellious Wrath of the Tides
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 5-99
Targets: 800 People
Description: The Moskenstraumen is the great Maelstrom that Nemo navigated and vanished into at the end of his first tale, but as a Noble Phantasm it is more than that: it embodies Nemo’s relationship with the sea itself.

When its name is invoked, this Phantasm turns the surroundings into a raging ocean, Caster’s perfect battleground. The phantasm functions by transforming the ground into water rather than conjuring it from nowhere; technically, its function is "creation of a radius where ground is instead water." As a result, it allows the Nautilus to move through the ground by creating a pocket of water that moves along with it, though this is such a relatively minor use of the phantasm that it cannot be said to have been "activated" at such a point. Indeed, the rate of mana consumption when used at this level is sufficiently small that less mana is needed to preserve Caster's existence in the world than normal, due to Caster's connection with the sea lessening the force of the world's rejection.

When truly activated, the full effects can be modulated dependent on the amount of mana put into it. The radius of the effect, for example, is only truly limited by how much mana Caster's master can provide. The ferocity of the water is also dependent on such, varying from a near-placid calm or a whirling monsoon with a ferocity even greater than the maelstrom it is named after. Lastly, what and how much is turned into water can be effected by the amount of mana Caster chooses to direct towards that aspect of the Phantasm; while it defaults to simply transforming earth and stone while leaving things such as buildings untouched, with enough mana any nonliving thing connected to the ground can be turned to water. With the use of a Command Seal or the presence of a unreasonably exceptional master, even air may be thus transformed.

While Servants with insufficient strength may be swept away by the currents this phantasm creates, Caster may travel through its waters as easily as if it were air. Furthermore, as Nemo entered the sea to disappear from the world of the surface, this phantasm conceals his location while he is completely submerged, and does the same for the Nautilus and any within it. For the purposes of detection, this ability is equivalent to an A-Rank in the Presence Concealment skill (including the effect dispersing when Caster takes aggressive action).
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Nautilus
The Masterpiece Containing Masterpieces
Rank: B+
Type: Fortress/Anti-Fortress
Range: 1-???
Targets: 1-???
Description: The wonder of engineering that Caster is most famous for, a submarine of exceptionally impressive construction even by modern standards. Seventy meters long, its relatively small size belies an astonishing level of force: The spike on its prow is designed for ramming and can do so with great force. As this feature was intended for use against ships, it gains a bonus to damage when utilized against vehicles or structures, giving such a tactic the Anti-Fortress quality. Its speed and maneuverability are similarly deceptive, possessing a base speed of ninety-three kilometers per hour and the ability to turn sharp corners at such a speed.

However, this Phantasm's main strength lies in Caster's ability to improve these statistics. As something Caster personally designed, any machines Caster creates, or even parts of machines, can be integrated into its structure with a minimum of effort on his part. As a result, not only may its base parameters be improved over the course of the war, but entirely new features may be added -- such as weapons or defenses intended to counter specific Servants that Caster has fought.

[Sherrinford]

@Fancy Face the First: :P oh, but his overall power as a Caster isn't much more than Medea. THe only true advantage it has is that his stats and militar mentality are better suited to fight face-to-face, compensating for being in the "weakest" class.

@Fonderfullness: now we only need a counterpart for a true Japanese-style fight between giant mechas or kaiju!

@Arkanian: original! Makes me want to tackle Robur for a profile.

Btw, guys, I need help. What wold you call a skill for someone who is used to or famous for having facing alone an outnumbering army and won?

Also, if any of you knows how to edit and replace colors in photoshop, all for the everlasting glory of being thanked in a servant profile and help me, PM me. And if you do not, then to hell with you! /Conan

[Vagrant]

Overwhelming Odds, Champion, Army of One?

I quite like the last one.

[Sherrinford]

Mh, those are actually valid suggestions. *goes back to finish the sheet*

[Arashi_Leonhart]

Btw, guys, I need help. What wold you call a skill for someone who is used to or famous for having facing alone an outnumbering army and won?

Battle Continuation, Disengage, and Protection from Arrows?

[Vagrant]

But the army didn't use arrows, Arashi.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

Who cares, you give it to them anyway.

[Christemo]

It's been over a month since the last one so I felt I should finally deliver!


Class: Saber (Alternatively Archer)
True Name: Rhadamanthys
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Birth: Greece
Original Lifetime: One generation before the Time of Herakles, 1400~BC

STR: B AGI: B

END: A MGI: B

LCK: C NP: A

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: B+

Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected. Due to his association with the Wyvern Phantasmal Species, which boasts powerful Magic Resistance from their relation to Dragons, Rhadamanthys' Magic Resistance is treated as Rank-Up unless he is facing an opponent that has fought draconic Phantasmal Species and lived to tell the tale in their lifetime.

Riding: B

Mundane vehicles and animals can be handled with above-average skill, but this rank is not high enough for Saber to utilize Phantasmal Species as mounts.

Personal Skills:

Divinity: A

Said to be the second son between Zeus and Europa, and in some myths also said to be related to the God of the Forge Hephaestus, Rhadamanthys was additionally made one of the Three Judges of Hell by the gods in the afterlife, for his flawless justice and great wisdom, granting him the highest normally achievable rank in Divinity.

Charisma: B+

The natural talent to lead. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent. At this rank, one may even sway the people away from a charismatic king. Though the people's hearts belonged to Minos, Rhadamanthys was yet so popular among the people of Crete that Minos had him exiled in paranoid fear of Rhadamanthys swaying the masses away from him with his great sense of justice that rivaled or even exceeded the king's. Though each of the Three Judges were saints in life who were loved by all, they could never agree on anything until after their deaths, where they no longer had a people to protect first and foremost.

Mental Disorder: B

The mind of the user has long since fallen ill. It functions partially as a form of protection against Mental Interference, but it also causes great warping of the afflicted's mind. For Rhadamanthys, this represents his complete obsession with putting justice above all, even morality, love or friendship. No dilemma or problem of Rhadamanthys' can be solved if it is not "justly done so", and he can approve of no action that does not adhere utterly to justice. The fanaticism that his mind craved for justice made him known for having temper issues.

Pathway to The Blissful Lands: N/A

The ability to move oneself between the layers of the world and enter the Underside of the World, where Phantasmal Species, Faeries and some of those blessed by the old gods still roam. Rhadamanthys was the right hand of the ruler of the Isles of the Blest during his mortal life, and after his death he was to watch over the equally paradise-like Fields of Elysium, both of which are now behaving as subsectors of the Underside. Rhadamanthys can freely cross into these realms without difficulty, and though the Underside contains such choking mana that it would kill all humans of the Modern age, it is technically possible to bring others with him.

Noble Phantasms:

Sickle of Kronos

Harpe: A

Anti-Unit

A Demonic Sword given to Cronus as to sever Uranus from the Earth by castration. The Titan of the Sky produced a countless number of children with Gaia, but in fear of having one of them overthrow him, he never once let her give birth. Swelling with children and in constant pain, Gaia fashioned a sword of rock and gave it to the one son she in secret gave birth to: Cronus. Using this blade, he severed Uranus from his mother and drove him back, killed him, and instructed Atlas to forever hold up his corpse, the Sky, so that the Earth may prosper beneath it. This sword later made it into the hands of Rhadamanthys when he became Cronus' right-hand man, as the ruler of the Isles of the Blest.

Contrary to the god-slaying sword that Hermes stole from the vaults of the earth, which was one of the weapons the Giants used for themselves when they attacked Olympus to bring down the gods, this Harpe is instead a sword of "severance", made for the specific purposes of parting things. Hence, this sword severs the space it resides in whenever it is out of it's sheath, effectively acting as a permanent "hole" in the Grand Reality Marble of the World. Naturally, this is also effective on any kind of similar "field of space", allowing the sword to part it like air, no matter how resilient it might be. As the sword is effectively coated in a miniature gravity-less black hole, it completely destroys everything that is not a Mystery on physical contact. By activating the Noble Phantasm through naming, this "black hole" is expanded five times, manifesting as a massive pure black aura that covers the sword, dwarfing it's length at least three times over.

Self Defense

Greatest Caution: B+

Anti-Unit

A power developed from combining his aspect of the Wyvern and the legend of his invention of the law of self defense: If a person strikes out against someone who has already initiated violence, he shall suffer no penalty nor be pursued by law. It is only able to be activated after someone has initiated combat with Rhadamanthys, with or without prior provocation, when someone is about to strike him. By then declaring the Noble Phantasm's name, a piercing sound that disrupts the body on a cellular level erupts in a wave from Rhadamanthys' body in all directions, stunning any attackers at the time in their tracks and temporarily deadening all the nerves that let the limbs of the body move. If the enemy does not pass a Luck check followed by an Endurance check in this moment, their body is attacked under their skin by three-clawed strikes from all directions, as the Wyvern of Rhadamanthys' soul conceptually tears them apart before they drop dead. If the opponent manages to avoid the Wyvern Strikes, the soundwaves emanating from Rhadamanthys is likely to still blow them away with some minor damage.

While the Noble Phantasm's effect is devastating, it conforms poorly to Rhadamanthys' zealous attitude that often leads to him taking the offensive in his pursuit of justice.

We Who Are Gods Place The Burden Of Judgement Upon You, Rhadamanthys

Unbiased Judge of The East: B

Anti-Unit

The Noble Phantasm representing Rhadamanthys' position after his death. Because of his incredible sense of justice and great piety, the Gods of Olympus took his soul and made him a Judge of those who crossed the River Styx together with his half-brothers Aeacus and Minos. Rhadamanthys judged those from the east, Aeacus judged those from Europe and Minos held the deciding vote.

As a Noble Phantasm, it is a simple trump card that can only come into play at the verge of his opponent's defeat. Once the enemy passes the point where they can only keep standing thanks to willpower and fighting spirit, Rhadamanthys can judge whether they live or die, and whichever he chooses is absolute. Only an extreme ability to change fate can possibly avert the judgement of one so just and righteous. However, this only works against an opponent Rhadamanthys knows originates from lands east of Greece.

[Lycodrake]

Right, you did Minos not too long ago, too, right?

[JetKinen]

And Aiacos!

​Hades Arc was bad

[Christemo]

Yes, they are here and here respectively

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Unfortunately this kinda marks the end of ideas I have for Saint Seiya characters I can use as Servants. I wanna do some sort of super Space mage with Saga but I don't really know anyone that fits.

[Lycodrake]

Maybe a famous astronomer or astrologer?

[Christemo]

That's what I was thinking but most of those are too modern to be the kind of Super AoG Magus that throws around miniature galaxies and comets that I'm looking for.

[Lycodrake]

That's what I was thinking but most of those are too modern to be the kind of Super AoG Magus that throws around miniature galaxies and comets.

Some demigod or lesser deity you can rework as a AoG magus?

[Christemo]

Some demigod or lesser deity you can rework as a AoG magus?

Yeah something like that, again, I'm sort of clueless. They need to probably have some relation to space tho

Anu is an obvious one but hes blatantly one of the first Divine Spirits so hes out

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Ok I solved it boys, its perfect for Saga. Look out for a future Geminus of Rhodes sheet

[Lycodrake]

Maybe one of the children of Erebus and Nyx?
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Oh, nvm.

[Fafnir]

Awwwwww yiss, more Saint Seiya. I love Rhadamanthys.

[Christemo]

He was basically DIO so theres like no way not to love him

[JetKinen]

I mean i'm sure most of the 12 zodiacal signs have some legend that allow them to become servants.

I mean you can point those to Chiron or the Nemean Lion and stuff, so with some tinkering you could transform them into servants.

Unless you're something like the Crab stomped by Hercules.

yay cancer

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A jobber in mythology and a jobber in Saint Seiya