Native American.
Native American.
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I suggest Irish simply because I can't think of any Native Americans off my head, but it's still your call...
Anyways, they're both done, time to breathe some life back into this thread.
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Class: Lancer
True Name: Pocahontas
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: North America
Strength- C
Endurance- D
Agility- B
Mana- B
Luck- D
NP- B
Height/Weight: 170cm/62kg
Likes: Nature, Serenity
Dislikes: Needless Destruction
Talent: Obscured suffering
Natural Enemy: Christopher Columbus
Class Skills:
- Magic Resistance (D) - Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.
Personal Skills:
- Innocent Monster (B) - An attribute possessed by Servants whose history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this personal skill cannot be removed. Due to distortion in modern fiction completely rewriting her role and personality, the 'Curse of Walt' has warped her personality and form into a fusion of fact and fiction, she has been granted beneficial powers.
- Protection of Nature (A) - A blessing from nature spirits to those who fight for the natural world. In areas where nature dominates, all parameters gain a Rank-Up.
- Shamanism (C) - A practice that involves a practitioner reaching altered states of consciousness in order to perceive and interact with a spirit world and channel these transcendental energies into this world. Due to being summoned as a Lancer instead of Caster, the rank is reduced.
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And here is the other.
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Class: Lancer
True Name: Muirisc 'Irelands Pirate Queen'
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Ireland
Strength- C
Endurance- C
Agility- A
Mana- C
Luck- C
NP- B
Height/Weight: 164cm/54kg
Likes: 'Booty'
Dislikes: Law and Order
Talent: Raiding
Natural Enemy: Úgaine Mór
Class Skills:
- Magic Resistance (C) - Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Personal Skills:
- Grace of God (B) - The greatest body and good looks, a skill that denotes the "beauty of royalty".
- Information Erasure (B+) - The removal of information regarding the Servant's true name, abilities, and appearance from the records and memories of all witnesses, including the opponent, following the conclusion of an engagement. Much like how her own legend has been erased, the moment people look away for Muirisc memories of her will fade from appearance and events shared with her.
- Voyager of the Storm (C) - The talent to sail vessels recognized as ships. Because the ability as a group leader is also necessary, this unique Skill also has the effects of both Charisma and Military Tactics.
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I wanted to do a vague servant and I came across this pirate. When I looked her up, it was stated nearly all of her legends were lost so like the Hassasn, I have taken many liberties in making stuff up. She's not to be taken seriously by any stretch of the imagination.
Last edited by Bird of Hermes; June 8th, 2016 at 01:27 PM. Reason: Added additional skill
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Altogether a pretty good sheet, however, it feels like something is missing, but I don't know what it is. Vague servants can be difficult to do, just look at my Jashobeam and Co. sheets where all I really had to go with was "these guys were David's bodyguards and could kill armies by themselves". I feel like you could add more to the noble phantasm or possibly another skill to try to spice the sheet up a bit.
Last edited by ZSB1999; May 6th, 2016 at 05:30 PM.
Muirisc looks solid to me, if simple.
Pocahontas seems a tad too powerful given her real life history, but I haven't watched the Disney film, so I can't really comment.
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Before I finish and post my next sheet,
Would Kalki qualify as a Ruler?
The two conditions that have been specified are to have a "Saint" quality, and to not have any desire for the Grail (except for Amakusa Shirou, since it was the only Saint the Grail could find in Japan). Does being a figure from Hinduism automatically disqualify Kalki?
And on a general note: what's the usual procedure for making a Servant of a figure who has yet to be born, yet is extensively described in mythological or religious prophecy? How are their fame boosts handled?
Rulers don't need to be saints; they just need to be impartial.
There is no "usual procedure". Anyone who is recorded in the Throne, whether or not they exist in the current time, can be summoned.And on a general note: what's the usual procedure for making a Servant of a figure who has yet to be born, yet is extensively described in mythological or religious prophecy? How are their fame boosts handled?
OK, thank you. Impartial it is, and I'm pretty Kalki would be impartial (probably from just not caring and wanting to get it over with though).
I know they can be summoned; however, the general trend for Servants is that the older they are, the stronger they are. Servants from the modern era are generally quite weak. So how would someone like Kalki, who has yet to exist but has been described in the Puranas, fare powerwise?
Last edited by Constructman; May 6th, 2016 at 09:55 PM.
Hermes: Wasn't expecting to see a Pocahontas sheet here. Innocent Monster is a clever way to integrate the 'noble savage' part of her lore into her real-life self (and I LOLed at the 'curse of Walt' bit). Overall it seems like you took a few cues from my Squanto sheet, most notably her Protection Of Nature Skill and Columbus as her Natural Enemy. NP is more of a generic reflection of native spirituality rather then anything specific to her in particular, but I suppose that's justified by Innocent Monster. And the idea of being able to adapt the traits of various animals is certainly cool.
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Considering Hindu myth, I'm guessing pretty OP.
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Class: Berserker
Master:
True Name: Satsuki “Sachin” Yumizuka, the… um… who is she again?
Sex: Female
Height/Weight: 161cm/45kg
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
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Irish female servant and Pocahontas!
Marry me Hermes!
Also, your Pocahontas looks HOT! Your Muirisc looks... I take that back...
Oh that's it! Overpowered or not, I just have to post mine! I will just make it very clear that they aren't "real servants"...
Last edited by AsGryffynn; May 7th, 2016 at 12:09 AM.
... I was scared to make this guy overpowered, but I had to, since he's a godamn Indian hero... So I gave him high tier skills and parameters, but a simple "smash-your-face-in" Noble Phantasm.
"Um... I don't shoot beams."
Also, first time making a Ruler; this guy is probably a lot better as a Rider, but I wanted to see if he could fit the bill as an impartial moderator (if only from sheer apathy). If you guys don't think it will work, I'll make a Rider version of the profile and post that
"Whenever and wherever there is a decline in dharma, O descendant of Bharata, and a rise of adharma - at that time I manifest myself…"
I know that's a motorcycle, not a horse, but please ignore that. Also pretend that the lightning is actually fire. Credit to molee on deviantart.
Class: Ruler
- Alternate Classes: Rider
Name: Kalki
Place of Origin: India
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Parameters:
Strength: A
Agility: C
Endurance: B
Magic: B
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: B
Class Skills:
- God's Resolution (A)
If summoned to oversee a Grail War, Kalki will gain two Command Spells for each of the participating Servants- True Name Discernment (B)
If summoned as a Ruler, during a direct encounter, a Servant's true name and entire status information will be automatically revealed. In regards to Servants with concealment abilities, a luck check is required.- Magic Resistance (A)
Cancels spells of A rank or below.
Personal Skills:
- Divinity (A)
As an Avatar of Vishnu, Kalki has divinity of a very high standard, comparable to his fellow avatar Rama.- Pioneer of the Stars (EX)
Kalki is the one who will usher in the next Satya Yuga, where the good in man will reign supreme for the next 1728000 years (or so the Puranas claim). A major turning point for humanity, to say the very least.- Prana Burst (Flames) (C)
A skill that increases performance by infusing the body and weapons with magical energy and then expelling it like a jet burst. Also causes the user's weapons to burst into flames.- Riding (A+)
Kalki can ride any animal or vehicle except for dragons.
Noble Phantasm:
Spoiler:
Lore:
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Personality:
When summoned as a Servant, he will for at least a brief moment genuinely believe that the end times have come and attempt to end the Kali Yuga. Once this misconception has been cleared up, he will spend the rest of his time summoned in a state of great boredom. If summoned as Ruler, he will perform the task of making sure the Grail War does not go out of hand with unenthusiastic efficiency. If summoned by a Master, he will utterly refuse to contribute more than the minimum effort needed to keep his Master alive.
If his Master (if he has one) can get him to open up, they will find a man who is compassionate and serene, but also very fatalistic, with a belief that: "All things will happen when the time is right. I will usher in the Satya Yuga when the whole world has fallen into depravity. Until then, I stay my hand." However, if one can appeal to his sense of justice, they may be able to convince him to intervene "out of season". No matter if it is the foretold time or not, he cannot sit idle in the face of atrocities.
He has no wish for the Grail, believing himself to merely be the herald of the new age, which will certainly come in time. If presented with the opportunity to accelerate the coming of the Satya Yuga, he will decline, not wishing to upset the balance of the cycle of the Ages. It will take extraordinary circumstances for his convictions to break and for his attitude to shift to a more proactive one.
Miscellaneous:
Likes: the good in the hearts of mankind, divinity
Dislikes: the evil in the hearts of mankind, those who deny or defy divinity
Talents: sword fighting, caring for horses
Natural Enemy: other eschatological figures (he has a particular bone to pick with the Mahdi due to conflicts between Hindus and Muslims in the past).
Catalyst: a copy of the Kalki Purana in Sanskrit
Notes:
- No matter what class he is summoned in, he will always have his horse.
- Do NOT enter into a cosmological or religious debate with him. Even with updated information concerning the nature of magic and reality from the Holy Grail, his still holds fast to his Hindu viewpoint. If you get him started, you will never hear the end of it.
Last edited by Constructman; May 7th, 2016 at 11:01 AM.
I, the maker of overpowered characters in fantasy, approve of this servant!
Honestly seems underpowered. I'd give him more NPs; he's basically a Rider in Ruler's clothing, and Riders are known for having multiple.
Also, Magic Resistance should be a class skill.
As the herald for the end of times to bring forth a new Age of Gods, I was expecting an EX ranked Anti-Evil / Anti-Humanity Noble Phantasm akin to Ea. Although he is certainly powerful, honestly he should be Gilgamesh tier in my opinion. Hell, you could even put Gil as a Natural enemy as they're basically polar opposites.
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I think that's only for regular Prana Burst, not the (Flames) version.A skill that increases performance by infusing the body and weapons with magical energy and then expelling it like a jet burst.
I'm looking for ideas for a non-Asian, non-Irish and non-Greek Lancer or two.
Also, what are the qualifications and proper class skills for a Ruler and Avenger?
Ruler's qualifications are supposed to be something of a neutral, moderating stance that had no desire for the Holy Grail. They have Magic Resistance, True Name Discernment, and God's Resolution.
Avenger's used to be "be Angra Mainyu." Now it's ???VENGEANCE I GUESS??? They have Avenger, Oblivion Revision, and Mana Replenishment.
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