Source: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2098606
Class: Saber
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Origin: Historical
Region: America
Parameters
Strength: B+
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: B
NP: B
Height/Weight: 187cm/97kg
Gender: Male
Likes: Baseball, sex, the Yankees, alcohol, tobacco
Dislikes: Too many rules, playing the sun, not hitting homers
Talents: Power
Natural enemy: Himself
Attribute: Man, Star
Traits: Man, Servant, Human
Armament: Nothing but a bat
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: (D)
Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Born far after the time true magic had departed from this world, Saber escaped the lowest rank possible only by virtue of his class container. While rumors abounded that he sold his soul to the Devil for his ungodly baseball skill, Saber himself denies this vehemently. Not like it would have done much good in this skill’s regard anyway.
Riding: (C+)
Riding is a Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill, including airplanes, due to his multiple anecdotes surrounding barnstorming.
It’d be higher if it included his womanizing rank...
Personal Skills:
Charisma: (C)
Charisma is a composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class.
A figurehead for the entire Major League Baseball complex, Saber’s exponential rise in fame during his early years of playing ball made him the first true celebrity that crossed the boundary into the mainstream--especially during a time when major league sports weren’t the national past times back then that they’ve become today. Raises morale permanently when leading a small “team” sized force.
However, by Saber’s own standards his charisma isn’t as high as he’d like it to be. Maybe if it was they would have finally let him manage the Yankees.
Curse of the Bambino: (EX)
The Curse of the Bambino was a superstition evolving from the failure of the Boston Red Sox baseball team to win the World Series in the 86-year period from 1918 to 2004. This misfortune began after the Red Sox sold star player Saber to the New York Yankees in the off-season of 1919–1920. Before that point, the Red Sox had been one of the most successful professional baseball franchises, winning the first World Series and amassing five World Series titles. After the sale, they went without a title for decades, even while the Red Sox won four American League championships from 1946 to 1986, as the previously lackluster Yankees became one of the most successful franchises in North American professional sports. The curse became a focal point of the Yankees–Red Sox rivalry over the years.
Leaving a trail of misfortune whenever he was traded away, Saber’s curse had also gone on to affect his beloved Yankees after being traded to the Boston Braves as his baseball-playing days were winding down.
Not a skill that assists in escape from battle so much as it is one that affects the condition of the other party should a normal escape be successfully made. If Saber is able to make an escape from combat under his own power, the enemy’s Luck as well as their highest base stat will be ranked down by one until they reconvene their battle with Saber. This skill’s effects carry over even if Saber were to die before a rematch were to take place. If the enemy’s highest stat is Luck, it will be ranked down by two. EX ranked skills aren’t affected.
Anger Point: (C)
Saber’s life was rich with his passions. From having sex with anything that moved, to being thrown out of a horrendous number of games for almost beating up umpires, to smoking and drinking as much as humanly possible back in the day. While he lived as largely as possible up until the day he died, sometimes his lifestyle would catch up to him at random points.
A variation of the Berserk skill that combines the penalties of Weak Constitution. Anger Point provides the same mental pollution-eluding effects and melee bonuses that Berserk of the same rank does, but while the skill is active there’s an equal chance of a random drop in parameter rank.
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Shady's back with a brand new rap.
I honestly don't know how many more of these I have in me. It probably says something when I had to force myself to finish this one.
That said, here's Babe.
I thought Jackie Mitchell would be his natural enemy. Sheet's good and all but I always thought he'd qualify as an Archer.
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Archer Babe would focus more on his equally great pitching and have Ernie Shore as his natural enemy.
His Noble Phantasm is pretending he pitched a perfect game that one time.
"Who dares to summon me, to try and bind me to their service? The queen's judgement is swift, but merciful, 'Master'. Look into my eyes. Look upon your new mistress, Queen Omphale of Lydia!"
Rider
Queen Omphale
Source
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
STR: B
END: A+
AGI: C
MAG: C
LUCK: A+
NP: A+
Class Skills
Riding (A+): A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability. All vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. As a queen who dwelt in the Age of Gods, Omphale possesses a very high rank in this skill.
Magic Resistance (A+): Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'. Omphale’s resistance, high for a Rider, is augmented by the Hide of Nemea.
Personal Skills
Charisma (B+): A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. Having B Rank in this Skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its Monarch (King/Queen). The morale of military forces he or she commands is extremely high.
Golden Rule (Body) (A): A Skill that denotes the possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill, there is no effect on the owner's Strength parameter. Tall, slender, and flawless, Omphale delights in displaying her body as much as possible, often wearing nothing other than the Nemean Lion’s pelt.
Battle Continuation (False) (D): A Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. It is also one of the powers of a vampire. Omphale’s version of this skill is entirely reliant on the Lion’s skin.
Noble Phantasms
Goddess of WarWar God’s Twin-Headed Axe
Anti-Fortress, A+: A mighty labrys that serves as Omphale’s main weapon, it is the axe of Hippolyta and shares the same name as the great Queen’s girdle, and was gifted to Omphale by Heracles, and unlike his other confiscated possessions was kept by her after his departure. Originally a weapon belonging to a god, it is filled with power, being able to sunder the earth and is sharp enough to slice through the air. Additionally, it radiates divine energy like a beacon. Due to it being used as a symbol of royal office for no less than three countries also gives it the authority of kingship, which combined with Omphale’s own natural Charisma gives the queen an overpowering aura. The axe seethes with a divine aura and is suffused with an amount of magical energy that’s unthinkable for modern times. Releasing its energy releases a blast capable of levelling fortress walls. As an interesting sidenote, the axe was later used by Clytemnestra to murder King Agamemnon, though if the two were to clash, Omphale’s would win due to Clytemnestra’s being corrupted and blackened by his rage.
Hide of NemeaPelt of the Divine Beast
Shield, A+: The skin of the fearsome Nemean Lion, a special demonic beast that rejects human civilization, granting it and its pelt immunity to human-made weapons. Any attack that counts as human made will fail to penetrate Omphale’s skin so long as she wears the skin, in addition to it granting the Battle Continuation and Magic Resistance skills. However, it is unable to block divine treasures and attacks, and the Divinity skill can partially nullify its protection. Omphale can use witchcraft to animate it, turning it into a revenant that can serve as her mount with the Lion’s power and abilities, however she dislikes doing this as it removes its protection from her. It is not truly Omphale’s treasure, it being one of the objects confiscated by her when Heracles entered her service.
Queen's DominationSubjugation of the Great Hero
Anti-Unit, A+: The Noble Phantasm that truly belongs to Omphale, the legend of Heracles being forced into her service for a year. It activates when a hero dares to meet Omphale’s gaze: if she is able to best them in a clash of wills, they are forced to their knees and bound to unquestionably obey her every word. In addition, all their weapons and Noble Phantasms (if they are physical objects) are moved to Omphale’s possession, along with knowledge of their use. This ability has some limitations, however. She is only able to use it on men, abilties that resist mental influence such as Bravery or Mental Pollution increase the chance of a successful resistance, and if even one fails to submit to her, she permanently loses this ability. The queen is not cruel, and if one of her servants pleases her or does her a great service, she may free them from their servitude. Maybe.
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Concept: "heel, boy" type
I actually had a lot of fun writing this, so I hope you like it.
Her NPs see a bit too high ranked and powerful. There should be quantification on what it takes to overcome her gaze, for example. Sufficient bravery or divinity or something is probably gonna throw it off, or magic resistance.
Omphale is some stuff. Always pictured her wearing a suit myself.
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What is the source of Omphale and Clytemnestra sharing a weapon? There is a clear myth about this? A very underground source? Creation of yours?
Got curious.
hereIn another version, [Clytemnestra's] first husband was King of Lydia. The kings of Lydia, according to Plutarch's The Greek Questions, 45,[3] having succeeded Omphale who had received from Herakles Hippolyte's (the queen of the Amazons') axe, carried this axe (called labrys by Lydians) as one of their sacred insignia of office. In the tradition following the Sicilian lyric poet Stesichorus's Oresteia[4] Clytemnestra used such double-edged ax to assist her lover Aegisthos in the killing of Agamemnon (and later, to kill her son Orestes, as he arrived to avenge his father's death), as depicted on the mixing bowl (calyx krater) with the killing of Agamemnon (Early Classical Period – about 460 B.C.) by the Dokimasia Painter
That ain't the source, you noob.
It's this: https://www.artstation.com/artist/user-109
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Also I forgot artstation is another good source for images. Found some better Joan ones. And some creepy illustrations of her voices as nightmare fuel.
I was about to ask what would happen if Omphale met Diarmuid but her MR is too high for such shenanigans.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Following feedback from everybody, I've fixed the sheet up to standards (hopefully). Shoutout to Daneel Rush for giving me the last bit I needed here.
Also I may have taken a few liberties with the Lore here for this one.
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"Servant Ur-Nungal, King of Uruk at your service. My apologies but you must have had the worst luck in summoning me of all people. I apologise in advance for our imminent failure."
Source: (X)
Servant: Berserker
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Ur-Nungal "Queen of Ekur", "The King of Nothing"
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: Babylon, Uruk
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: A
Height: 150cm
Weight: 40kg
Likes: Sad Rock Music, Father
Dislikes: Herself, Father (It's complicated)
Talent: None
Natural Enemy: Father (It's REALLY complicated)
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Human, Divine
Armament: Sword, Axe
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement: E
The Class Skill that characterises a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it can also affect or seal away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms. She possesses a hair trigger temper. When she is insulted, a luck check is performed. Failure results in her going wild and parameters except MGI and LCK are raised. Though she had never lost her sanity in life, she was continually depressed at her lot in life and summoned into the modern world where she has been all but forgotten infuriates her. Naturally Berserker is the most fitting class despite the low rank.
Personal Skills:
Curse of the Unrecorded: A++
A curse born to one who's achievements in history were never recorded. Reserved only for obscure figures, instead of where knowledge was lost - here it was never possessed to begin with. To her opponents: all parameters appear one rank lower than what they actually are. It combines the effects of Uncrowned Arms Mastership as well as high ranking Information Erasure and Presence Concealment.
Goddess Divine Core: B
A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.
As the child of Gilgamesh, she is one third divine in nature and is descended from Gods. However she possesses a more advance version of her father's Divinity skill. She does not know why she possesses this skill instead, perhaps something to do with the goddess of a similar name. She refers her naked form as the 'AUO Cast Off' and claims it is the most splendid sight in all the world.
Golden Rule: B
A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. Due to possessing the wealth of the Golden Capital, she possesses great financial power. However due to the degradation of Uruk, she possesses less wealth than her father as the splendour of the Golden Capital had started to vanish.
Necromancy: A
The practise of communicating and controlling the dead. Commonly associated with witchcraft, sorcery and black magic in general. This skill allows Berserker to command dead souls as familiars, however the cost of removing them from the underworld is immense it is far more efficient to kill a target and dominate the soul before it enters reincarnation. Due to already being dead, the spirits cannot be killed by an outside force as you can't kill what's already dead. However should the pressure become too great, she can release the souls from her command and allow them to pass on. In addition she can summon corpses to act as familiars too to consume the living, however she cannot command high level Dead, just those a step under the level of Dead Apostles.
Although she does not remember, it is highly unlikely she obtained this skill in life. Although she makes up plenty of false stories as to the deeds of how she obtained the skill - the true reason is outside the realm of her comprehension.
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Last edited by Bird of Hermes; February 22nd, 2017 at 07:44 PM. Reason: Complete
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I like it. I thought about doing one for Ur-Nungal before but never thought of enough to put down.
The Curse of the Unrecorded is like one of the skills I made up for those obscure, non-existent people from history so that's cool. I feel like Dust of Uruk should have a penalty associated with it, but that's just me.
My Esarhaddon would bully the shit out of her.
This Ur-Nungal sheet feels extremely similar to one Constructman (I think?) wrote up a while back. The inferiority complex with Gilgamesh, inferior version of the Gate Of Babylon and an NP based around degradation of civilization all remind me very much of that sheet. The main difference is that yours is a genderbend.
It's not a bad sheet per-se, but I can't help but regard it as a little unoriginal.
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Found the original post. It's about as similar as I remembered...
Originality? Pffft.