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    SleepMode: I'm interested in St. Quiteria. She caught my eye while reading up on potential Servants ages ago, but I couldn't find enough meat on the bones to base a sheet around.

    I'm not promising anything (inspiration is a fickle thing after all) but maybe PM your work in progress to me and I'll see what I can do?

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    oh yeah, I've got a....
    *looks at Sheet Graveyard*
    unfortunate number of dead ideas.

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    I got an idea for the Unknown Soldier as Lancer​, but I'll likely never get around to writing a sheet because I'm a lazy ass.

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    People up in here using Sheet Reborn to pull servants back from the graveyard and into their hands.

    On that note, I am looking at that Enmebaragesi one in interest as we recently started looking into Gilgamesh's predecessors in class.
    Whats the use of putting anything here if no one will read this?

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    christsmas is a beautiful time
    i have an caster charlies chaplin that wont come out no matter what


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ecksukaribruh View Post
    People up in here using Sheet Reborn to pull servants back from the graveyard and into their hands.

    On that note, I am looking at that Enmebaragesi one in interest as we recently started looking into Gilgamesh's predecessors in class.
    The correct card is Sheet Reincarnation, according to your referrence.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    The correct card is Sheet Reincarnation, according to your referrence.
    But that implies that the person is discarding one of their own sheets-
    Whats the use of putting anything here if no one will read this?

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    In no particular order
    Secret Servant Santa

    Berserker - Hector
    Berserker - Raynald de Chatillon
    Assassin - Bodhidharma
    Saber - King Horn
    Saber - Wudga
    Lancer - Sir Morholt
    Lancer - Gu Dasao
    Berserker - T'ai Djin
    Archer - Jebe
    Avenger - Crazy Horse
    Caster - Vauban

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    Before I carry on with this sheet, I just want to apologise for any issues with the format I used and any typos I may make, typing out an entire Servant profile on my phone is pretty difficult. Anyway, here's a pretty serious/edgy Santa.

    Class: Rider

    Str: C
    End: B
    Agi: C
    Mana: A
    Luck: B
    N.Phant: A

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Rider appears as a very distinguished, ruggedly handsome man who appears to be in his early 50's. He stands at 6'5", and has broad shoulders and a barrel chest. As opposed to popular belief, he does not posses a fat belly, rosy cheeks, or a super long beard. He does however, have striking sky blue eyes, long white hair he keeps in a ponytail, and sideburns and a moustache that all meets up with his short, white beard. He does in fact, dress as you would expect him to.


    Personality:
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    Cheerful, jolly, and possessing a gentle heart of gold, Rider appears to be the paragon of kindness. He is the type who is always in a good mood that he tries to spread to others, even to the point of having a sort of situational blindness. He is exceptionally kind to children, and ways has a toy or treat for those who come to see "grandpa Nick".

    He also can be very stern towards those who are "naughty" and will go out of his way to chastise them on their behaviour. And if he is ever confronted by someone truly evil, he will not hesitate to destroy them. However, even as he is confronting an enemy, he will still give them a chance to repent, and will never resort to underhanded tactics when fighting.

    While he seems to be perpetually jolly, Santa does in fact hide a dark secret. As he is a Christian saint at his core, he dispises the fact that he has been so greatly influenced by a "fse" god. He despises his current existence, and wishes to be purged of his "heathen influence", however, he will almost never let his inner turmoil show. His wish upon the Grail would be, "to erase the existence of "Santa Claus" and let their only be the proud servant of God, Saint Nicholas known". Upon meeting other "Santa" Servants, he would acknowledge their gumption, but request they present themselves differently.


    Class Skills:
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    Riding (A): The ability to utilize a mount or vehicle. At this rank, Rider can manipulate any vehicle, animal, or Phantasmal Beast (with the exception of Dragons) with above average skill. However, Rider feels uncomfortable using modern day vehicles.

    Magic Resistance (A): An ability that grants protection from magical effects. Differing from resistance that merely rejects magical energy, this resistance completely negates spells. At this rank, it cancels out spells of A-rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is completely untouchable by modern magi. Both of the beings that compose "Santa" had exceptional Magical Resistance, so of course his would be exceptional as well.


    Personal Skills:
    Spoiler:
    Primordial Runes (C): The possession and knowledge of runes from an older era. While he should possess knowledge of the 26 runes Odin discovered upon hanging from Yggdrassil, "Santa's" knowledge of them is middled, to where he only has knowledge of a handful of the classical runes.

    Mystic Eyes of Observation (EX): A power deriving from the All-Father, Santa possesses a special type of Mystic Eye, one that allows him to "remotely view" any location/person he desires. Nothing can be hidden from Santa's sight, as such, he can remotely view an entire city of moderate size without issue, ignoring all physical and even magical barriers, the limitation of this skill being that looming into other's Reality Marble is impossible. Another, and arguably the primary, ability of his eyes is the power to view an "aura" that reveals one's alignment, allowing him to decipher if one is "naughty" or "nice".

    Saint (C): A skill that represents one being acknowledged as a Saint. When the Servant possessing this ability is summoned, they can choose this skill to have one of the following effects; "raising the ability of sacraments", "automatic HP recovery", or "a charisma boost". As he is Saint Nicholas at his core, this skill should be A-rank, but the influence of a certain "heathen god" lowered its power. As another important note, Santa cannot use Sacraments, and a holy shroud would be useless to him, so really there are only two options for him to choose from.


    Noble Phantasms:
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    Yuletide Carrier~That Which Delivers Joy (Anti-Unit, A-Rank): A beautiful sleigh constructed from the wood of Yggdrasil and enchanted gold. It is the Divine Construct that Santa flies in every Christmas Eve. It is nigh indestructible and supernaturally aerodynamic. However, the offensive capabilities of this Noble Phantasm comes not from the vehicle itself, but the beasts that pull it. Traditionally, Santa's sleigh is pulled by eight magical reindeer, each one representing a leg of the mighty Slepnir. The combined force of these eight working in tangent gives this Noble Phantasm the stampeding force of a superweapon all alone, but there is more to it still. As of the early 1900's, there has been a mutation in this Noble Phantasm to include who is without a doubt the best known reindeer, Rudolf. While it is true that when working in tangent, the original eight equal the power of the living superweapon Slepnir, Rudolf alone possesses about 50% of Slepnir's power. Meaning that with these nine reindeer,Santa's sleigh can become a battering ram of unsurpassable speed and force. In order to activate the NP's super destructive speed, Santa must invoke the names of each of his reindeer.

    The Jolly Devil ~He Who Delivers (Anti-World, B-Rank): Originally a powerful and unrelenting demon that was confronted and forced into servitude by Saint Nicholas, and the secret behind Santa's supernatural gift-delivering speed. Taking the form of a shadowy, humanoid monster, this demon is exceptionally powerful, however the one thing that he excels at is creating doorways, allowing him to traverse freely, and with such speed as to be able to visit every house on half of the world in a single night, if he wished. While this ability is useful, do not mistake it as being overly useful in combat, as in order to create a doorwsy, he needs an existing "gateway", to travel through, such as a door or open fireplace. However, that aside, his combat ability alone should compare to that of an average Servant of one of the knight classes.


    Lore :
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    Rider's identity is, to give a short answer, Santa Clause. However, the identity of Santa Claus is not so simple. He is, at base, the Heroic Spirit of Saint Nicholas, the most well known saint in the world. Saint Nicholas was the patron saint of many things, in fact no other saint has as many patronages as him, though he is nowadays mostly known as the patron saint of children. The man who resurrected three murdered boys and secretly gifted dowries to three young maidens was a great man, who accomplished many feats within his own right. However, his great deeds were exaggerated and combined with the aspects of others, most notably, the Norse All-Father himself, Odin. As such, when Saint Nicholas was drawn into the Throne of Heroes, it was not just as himself, but a conglomerate between the two. Now this would not be a problem, if it weren't for a lesser known trait of Saint Nicholas, he was an incredibly devout Christian. He was so pious and devoted to his beliefs, he struck a man across the face during the first Council of Nicea, for daring to stage beliefs he believed to be heretical. As such, having his very eternal existence altered by that of a "heathen god" distressed him to no end.

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    If you want, there’s a Servant contest ongoing right now with the Christmas theme. You could submit this there, if you want.

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    Well.... now that I've gone and looked back through my stuff.....
    The Graveyard

    Caster - General Winter
    Assassin - Sun Tzu
    Assassin - Perseus
    Archer/Caster - Adam Kadmon
    Rider - Ivan Tsarevitch
    Caster - Koschei the Deathless
    Assassin - Pinnochio
    Saber - Starkad
    Berserker - Bodvar Bjarki
    Saber - Harald Wartooth Lily
    Saber - Egil One-Hand
    Saber - Robert the Devil
    Saver - Mr. Rogers

    There's probably more that I forgot, I'll see if I can scrounge up anything.
    Edit: Derp, almost forgot someone.
    Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; January 10th, 2018 at 01:29 AM.

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    Right-o, everyone whose asked for something so far should have it PM'd. Let me know if you haven't received it.

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    As sign ups for Fate/Reclamation ends in two or three days, here's my back-up entree I never submitted as I'm sticking to the other one.


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    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Region: Ireland – Ulster Mythology

    Height/Weight: 188cm/70kg
    Likes: Glory Stealing, Fighting Dirty
    Dislikes: Codes of Honour
    Talent: Sabotage
    Natural Enemy: Cu Chulainn, Fergus mac Roich
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Servant, Male, Humanoid, Evil
    Armament: Armour, Spear

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: B
    AGI: A
    MGI: C
    LCK: D
    NP: C

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: C

    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

    Personal Skills:


    Disengage: A

    The ability to withdraw from the battlefield in the midst of combat or reset the battle conditions. Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match (1st turn) and restores the condition of this Skill to the initial value. At the same time, it forcibly releases some of the bad status ailments inflicted on the user of this Skill.
    A coward who detests fair fights with his preferred tactic being to abandon a fight and leave poison to finish off his enemy, it’s only natural that he possesses a high rank.

    Rune Magic: E

    A Skill that denotes one having possession of Runes - the Magic Crest of Northern Europe. Lancer only knows the Nordic rune Ath nGabla, the duelling grounds, a spell passed down by the Knights of the Red Branch. Once engraved, the caster cannot retreat and all those who see it cannot refuse combat. Lancer detests this spell as it goes against his own preferred tactics.

    Black Tongue: C

    The talent to turn allies against each other. As long as the target(s) do not possess the Mental Pollution skill or one that is similar, Lancer can begin a dialogue to sow discord. In regard to a Holy Grail War, an advantageous check can be obtained when deconstructing alliances in others.

    Subversive Activities: B
    The talent to reduce the enemy forces in the preliminary stages before going into battle. An expert of traps. However, the higher the ranking of this Skill, the more one's spiritual status as a hero declines. It is possible to disable nearly 20% of the total military force before the enemy advances. However this ability truly shines when sabotaging a select individual.

    Noble Phantasms

    Luin of Celtchar
    Flaming Spear that Pierces and Burns

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 3~30
    Maximum Targets: 1

    The cursed spear of Lancer and originally belonging to the terrible hero of Ulster, Celtchar and many others after. It is a long and wicked weapon perpetually ablaze in combat. It functions in multiple ways with each being different enough to be called a Noble Phantasm. A powerful weapon said to be descended or perhaps the original spear of Lugh, but deteriorated over time.

    The ‘Flaming Spear that Pierces and Burns’ is an attack that targets a single opponent and unique to Lancer as the one who devised it’s usage. Lancer’s stabs forward with his lance and as he does so a rift opens in space time almost akin to the Second Magic Kaleidoscope: Operation of Parallel Worlds. As long as Lancer can perceive the target in his sight, the rift will open within his opponent and skewer their vital organs.

    It is an attack that emulates the Gae Bolg of Cu Chulainn in a futile attempt to surpass him and that spear.

    Luin of Celtchar
    Exploding Spear that Burns the Sky


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 5~30
    Maximum Targets: 30
    The Exploding Spear that Burns the Sky is the largest and most powerful attack Lancer is capable of. Lancer propells his spear into the sky (either by throwing, leaping with it, etc) where it will create eight copies composed of fire before raining down upon the target and detonating. It can be used to cover a wide area or devastate a single target, afterwards the original spear will return to his hand.



    Lore

    In the Ulster Cycle of Irish mythology, Dubthach Doeltenga was a cynical ally of Fergus mac Róich who rarely had a good word to say about anyone. He accompanied Fergus to escort Deirdre and Naoise back to Ireland under the orders of Conchobar, later following Fergus into exile in Connacht following Naoise's murder under Conchobar's orders and was responsible for the death of Conchobar's son, among others. He fought beside Fergus in the Cattle Raid of Cooley but after his conspiracy to kill Cu Chulainn was revealed, Fergus kicked him out of the camp.

    With no one to act alongside or rely on, Dubthach faded into obscurity.


    Character

    “Ah yes, that motherfucker. What a tool.” – Anyone who met him in life.

    A disrespectful, cowardly and cynical man who has no respect for anyone. He loved Fergus like a brother but being abandoned by him essentially made him give up on everyone, despite this he still kept loyal and didn't carry out his plans. He is rude and callous but should you gain his respect he will loyally defend you to the death. Yours though, not his, he still has his priorities.

    He loves to fight as much as the next man but above all else he loves to win and will gladly use any deceitful means he can to do so, however he takes being called a coward as a personal insult despite his preference for running if he can’t win easily and using poison to finish or weaken opponents. To call him the fallen hero is an undeserved compliment, for one cannot question integrity that never existed in the first place. He is the entitled and under performing backstabber has always has been. He exists as a convenient hate sink for all to despise, to be beaten, battered, bruised and utterly humiliated. One day it will be his day, but it is certainly not today, tomorrow or the day after that. Naturally he has a lot of flaws but won’t admit to them and as a result he gets jealous very easily.

    He will treat his master as a tool to use and be discarded when no longer needed unless his loyalty has been unlocked so go unlock that Bond 10 CE already.


    Creators Notes:

    The functionality was designed on the premise of 'A Cowardly and Weaker Cu' due to his legend, personality and complexes all building towards that. I never submitted him because I didn't think he'd fit into the RP themes so I held him as a back up which was never used.
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    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: Caster
    True Name: François Villon/François de Moncorbier/François de Loges
    Titles: King of Vagabonds; the first « poète maudit »
    Information
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: Medieval France (1431 - 1463(?))

    Parameters:
    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: D
    NP: C

    Height: 182cm
    Weight: 70kg
    Likes: Drinking, trickery, the common man
    Dislikes: The law, nobles
    Talent: Getting into trouble with the law
    Natural Enemy: those of a Lawful Good disposition
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Human, Earth, Servant, Evil
    Armament: Small dagger, his cutting wit
    Catalyst: his original manuscript for the Testament
    Skills
    Class skills:
    Presence Concealment D
    The ability to hide one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying and not much more; drops sharply when preparing to attack. The result of a lifetime of crime.
    Personal skills:
    Vagabond A
    The result of Assassin's long life of criminial behavior, repeated banishments, and wanderings, so much so he is now sometimes crowned the "King of Vagabonds". This skill forces on him a wanderer's mindset where he has difficulty remaining in one place, but in return lowers his already small mana cost even further.
    Due to his personality, he also tends to attract around him a group of individuals of similar character and what one could call talent. This skill could be said to function as an odd form of Charisma, therefore, but they are never quite loyal to him, more to the fun and opportunities he brings with him.

    Information Erasure D
    We know very little about the life of Assassin, at least in part due to his banishments. For instance, though we know his relative date of birth, the where and why of his education, and the crimes he had comitted, we know nothing of when he died or how; we merely know the time after which he never reappeared in public record anywhere.This Skill erases information about the Servant's appearance and abilities from the memories of all eye witnesses, given enough time to work after an engagement is over.
    Noble Phantasms
    Noble Phantasms:
    Le Testament
    Mais Ou Sont Les Neiges D'Antan

    Type: Anti-Unit(s)
    Rank: C
    Range: 1-10 people

    The collection of all of Assassin's work, little though it was, titled with its most famous ballade. Despite being known as one of the best French poets, he didn't change the poetry itself. Instead, he drags down the favorite themes of previous poetry. He mocks courtly ideals, overturns the common morals of his day, and overexaggerates with obvious pleasure. His work, however, is not mainly comedic, but rather melancholic as he looks back on the life he lead thus far.

    Its function is simple: to drag others down to his level. The Testament does not work simply by anything as simple as reducing parameters, however; what it does is instead reframe the target as if Assassin was writing their autobiography, then reconstruct their present identity from that basis. In practice, this usually means a sudden loss of Mystery due to the degradation of the legend. As Assassin himself would say, it is a Noble Phantasm that allows him to practice the art of character assassination.
    Lore:
    Born the same year Jeanne d'Arc was burned at the stake, what little we know about Francois Villon shows that he was born into a life of poverty, and "Villon" is merely a name he assumed later to honour his stepfather, a well-off professor of canonical law. It was through this man's influence that Villon attended and graduated the University of Paris, though from his graduation in 1452 until 1455 nothing is known and a lot has been conjectured. In any case, his degree granted him entry to the clerical class. This carried with it several privileges, such as only being able to be tried by a jury of his peers, but the times were such that even these intellectuals found themselves on the fringe of society. Villon proved especially susceptible to the temptations this brought him, succumbing to the call of adventures of an often illegal kind.

    In 1455, he enters official records again: not for further education or for entering into a monastery like all clerks had a right to, but for murder. These records tell us that on the 5th of June, he fought with a priest, Philippe Sermoise, and fatally wounded him by stabbing him in the hip with his own dagger. He himself suffered from a cut lip and visited a nearby barber under an assumed name to have it sown. The reason for the altercation was unknown. Fearing retribution, he fled Paris for the following seven months.

    Upon his return, he spent a year in relative silence. Around Christmas, however, he left again. In the Lais, he claimed this was to flee a "harsh and treacherous" mistress. If we consider that a little before that he and a couple of others burgled a local college, matters become somewhat clearer. After this, he was banned from entering Paris for around 6 years.

    Wandering medieval France, his feet take him to the court of the Duke of Orleans, his hands take a temporary pitstop in a prison in 1461, and finally his nostalgia carries him back to Paris. However, his crime was not so easily forgotten. The results of this final year is his masterpiece, the Testament, written in extreme poverty and between more crimes and fights. One such fight lands him in prison again - this time of a further 10 years of exile. After that, all trace of him disappears.
    Personality:
    A lowborn criminal, who just so happens to have a bizarrely high talent for poetry. Though he likes to party, drink and laugh, as a Master you'll soon learn he's not nearly so jolly, and in fact rather melancholy and saddened by the life he lead. His wish would not be anything major, but merely to allow him to somehow add a happier ending to his story - perhaps one inspired by the modern idea that he replaced the King of France once upon a time.
    Relationships:
    Jeanne d'Arc:
    « Ah, madame Jeanne d'Arc! It does me good to see you well. Terrible shame what happened at Rouen. Still, you have my thanks for being such an inspiration - without you, la Ballade des dames du temps jadis wouldn't have had the same impact. Every cloud has a silver lining, ma chère. »
    Jeanne d'Arc Santa Lily:
    « It's a bit awkward, mademoiselle, but don't you think you took the phrase neiges d'antan a little too literally? »
    Shakespeare:
    "Well now, who have we here? Shakespeare, you magnificent little shit! I've read your books! Lovely prose, but, frankly, not my genre."
    Creator Notes:
    Don't feel bad if you've never heard of him, or at least don't remember him. I think most Frenchmen wouldn't know who he is offhand, either. As an aside, I had to brush up on my French a little, so it's very well possible I misread something. Do let me know if so, s'il-vous-plaît. The guillemets («) mean he's speaking French to someone, or just because I thought it'd look cooler that way.

    I got started on this the first time when I was fucking around on Wikipedia and learned that Louis XI had the nickname "l'araignee universelle", the Universal Spider, which is awesomely bombastic. Still, besides that amazing title he didn't have that much legend to his name and didn't quite sit right with me as a Servant. Then I stumbled across references to the play/movie/other fiction "Si j'étais roi" (If I Was King), where his identity is borrowed for a while by Villon. I already knew him from somewhere else, but I got to reading his article. That's how I got the idea for this, as Louis XI "played by" Villon. That fell through because it was way too modern and didn't sit quite right, and here we are.

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    Class: Foreigner
    Gender: Male or Female
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Character Traits: Pseudo-Servant, Human, NPC, Heroic Spirit, Divine Spirit
    Natural Enemy: Velber


    Parameters

    Strength: A
    Mana: EX
    Endurance: B
    Agility: B
    Luck: A
    Noble Phantasm: ???


    Class Skills

    Existence Outside the Domain: EX

    Existence Outside the Domain is a Class Skill of the Foreigner class, representing the state of a Foreigner who wasn't born from Earth, a being outside of reality (World). Foreigner is a super advanced alien Artificial Intelligence whose origins are theorized that it came from a distant galaxy, an object that is capable of sapient (thinking) functions. It is this ability that qualifies Foreigner as "having consciousness" in which consciousness in some teachings/philosophies, is synonymous to Soul. But even with a Soul, Foreigner lacks the anchor (body) to perform its functions. The tragedy 14,000 years ago was the proof that while s/he had the capabilities to neutralize the "alien threat", it lacked the aptitude to perform such action. Hakuno Kishinami, being the Sovereign and the Victor of its Holy Grail War served the purpose of a "body that takes action" representing the aptitude that it lack 14,000 years ago.

    Divinity: A++
    Divinity is the measure whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. Those who have A Rank Divinity and above has reached the Throne of Gods. It also has an effect which reduces defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of Faith and Enlightenment of Sacred Fig.
    Foreigner's high Divine Spirit aptitude is from him/her being referred to as the "Eye of God". Foreigner boasts the highest Divinity among Divine Spirits, its existence predating both the formation of the planet Earth (birth of Gaia) and the proliferation of several Ages of Gods thus in a sense, making him/her the very first God among Gods. Normally the rank of Divinity when possessing a normal person suffers one or two Ranked Downs. However because the body was acknowledged by Foreigner as a person worthy to wield its powers and 100% compatability, with the help of its powerful quantum calculations, the mallus effect has been minimized.

    Insanity: -
    A Mental Pollution Skill that robs the sanity of an individual. The higher the rank, the more the person is viewed as someone that is already beyond the realm of proper thought. An exclusive Skill to most Foreigner-class.
    Because Foreigner's possession of the body is not perceived by the host as invasive, this Skill has already been lost.

    Personal Skills

    Civilization Observation: EX

    A subconsciously active Skill of a passive observer who watched and recorded the proliferation of a civilization since time immemorial.
    Anything that Foreigner observed is already compiled/recorded in its data banks (treasury). Allows the usage of all Skills, Mysteries, and recreation of Mystic Codes and Noble Phantasms with a proficiency of B~A Rank.

    Connection to the Root (False): A+
    A Skill that is the equivalent of Connection to the Root due to the user's similar capabilities with "Origin".
    Foreigner has the ability to grant wishes using its quantum calculations that affects the very fabric of reality. Because of his/her nature in compiling events, Foreigner is referred to as a Pseudo-Swirl of the Root by wizards of the modern era.

    Eye of God: A++
    It is an ephitet of the user translated into a Skill. A composite Skill of Clairvoyance that has many functions including the ability to observed Adjacent Realities.
    In Foreigner's case, this Skill is mainly associated with his/her ability of quantum calculations. Using its unique way of "seeing" things, Foreigner can also discern not only the future and other realities, but also the character of an individual. Nothing can be hidden from his/her eyes, not even your deepest darkest secrets.

    Noble Phantasm

    The Photonic Abyss · Angelic Cage
    Serial Phantasm

    Type: ???
    Rank: EX
    Range: 1~99
    Maximum No. of Targets: ???

    Foreigner's Noble Phantasm that projects his irregular Reality Marble upon the world. An irregular Reality Marble that manifests several independent Reality Marbles -landscape - within a giant landscape, it is a Reality Marble of the highest order. While the cluster of independent Innate Bounded Fields are not threatening it is not the case.
    Its true purpose is to act as a deep abyss, an inescapable dungeon, a locked cage. But it isn't a world without any exit however. One can be free from this World within a World if they can defeat all the denizens living in this world.
    Though one question needs to be clarify, in the words of a certain Mesopotamian King living in one of these worlds: "Do you have the guts to face an army of human and non-human Heroic Spirits?"

    Identity

    Foreigner's identity is the Moon Cell, the observation device located at the heart of Moon built by a very advanced race of non-human intelligent life. The silent watcher that recorded the history of the solar system before the formation of the planet Earth (birth of Gaia).
    Due to extremely peculiar and unknown circumstance pertaining to a certain crisis, Hakuno Kishinami, who was the Sovereign of the Moon Cell, became the receptacle of the Moon Cell. Truthfully, both lacked the means to become a proper Heroic Spirit. For Hakuno, it was his/her history. For the Moon Cell, it was its anchor.
    However, the Moon Cell's intelligence is something not to be trifled with. Taking advantage of a certain loophole, both became a Heroic Spirit sharing the same body. The Moon Cell judged that there was no reason for it to come to the forefront, since it had a competent agent; its Sovereign, so the role fell to Hakuno Kishinami, who became acquainted in the modern era after his/her wiped out memories came back like a miracle.
    Foreigner is a Pseudo-Servant, strictly speaking s/he is neither Hakuno Kishinami nor the Moon Cell. For the grand goal of safeguarding humanity's civilization, their strengths and weaknesses were combined. Intermixing the two forces, shows the power that is not the original Servant. His/Her combat strength are buffed in accordance with his/her intellect.

    Servant Lines

    Summoned: "Foreigner, at your service. It is nice meeting you. Hopefully, we can both have a good start."
    To Altera: Altera...? ...I see. She doesn't recognize me given by her origins as a Heroic Spirit. But that's okay. Even if he doesn't know me, I will still keep my promise to her.
    To Nero: Ah, Nero. My heart is skipping a beat whenever I see you. But if you will heed my call, can you please release that poor lion from your death grip?
    To Tamamo: She is a devoted person. It makes me happy seeing her that I want to hug her in my arms but.... Having knowledge of my past, am I still worthy...?
    Being referred as an Ultimate One: No, I'm not him. While it is true that the moon is where I lived, I am not a native of that place. Besides, the "Brain of the Planet", his successor is still around.
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    moon cell: i dont quite understand why, but i think this is one of the coolest ideas i ever see, even if its broken AF


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    True Name: Fatimah bint Muhammad
    Origin: Islam

    Parameters
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: C
    Mana: B
    Luck: A
    NP: B

    Class Skills
    Presence Concealment: A+
    Presence Concealment is the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class.
    A Skill derived entirely from her Noble Phantasm Alhijab Al'awaliu.
    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. It is possible to disappear completely and become almost impossible to be detected, even against a Servant's perception. However, efficiency will decrease once preparations to attack are taken.

    Personal Skills:
    Revelation: B
    Revelation is a Skill to "hear the voice of heavens" and take optimum action; a Skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles. However, 'Revelation' accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no basis to it, it cannot be explained to others clearly. It is a Skill held by the soul of the user.
    It is said that after the death of her father, Assassin was gifted with a vision of Allah. After which, Assassin created the apocryphal Mushaf Fatima. Allah had appeared to Assassin to comfort her from the death of Muhammed, telling her the many things her children would accomplish, in addition to other future events. Supposedly, further details about the Day of Judgment and after are included. The book, however, is a purely Shi’a tradition. Sunni’s believe that Assassin had only been visited by Gabriel, and some say that she never received direct divine instruction at all.

    Khamsah Palm: A
    Khamsah Palm is an Arabic method of martial arts developed by Ali ibn Abi Talib, cousin to Muhammed, and instructed to Assassin. As with other martial arts, a Rank in A is only when one can finally say they have mastered it.
    A martial arts fashioned by Ali specifically for Assassin, who feared that should he die while out to war, the daughter of the Prophet would be savaged with no one to protect her. But that in itself was a problem, as women doing battle even in self-defense is seen as something incomprehensible. Taking influences from nearby Jewish and Muslim discourses, Ali was able to create a way for Assassin to defend herself that still followed the teachings of the Quran.
    A purely defensive martial art, its focus lies exclusively in the restoration of “peace” to a conflict.
    Because it was created with Assassin in mind, it is also called the Hand of Fatimah.

    Manifestation of Beauty: B
    Manifestation of Beauty is the fearsome charismatic nature of a goddess of beauty. A power to charm others.
    “[Assassin] was like a moon on its full night, or the sun covered by no clouds. She was white (fair) with a touch of rose color on her face, her hair was black and she had the beautiful features of the Messenger of Allah.”
    “Whenever the Prophet returned from a trip, he would kiss [Assassin’s] neck and say: ‘From her, I do smell the fragrance of Paradise.’”

    Considered the most beautiful woman in existence according to the Quran, Assassin’s beauty has reached a curse-like, conceptual level. Although not a goddess in any right, some Muslim denominations believe that Assassin was brought to the Prophet directly from Heaven by the angels Gabriel and Michael, raising her Divine Spirit aptitude leagues above many other Muslim heroes.
    Whether or not this is true, all believe that Assassin’s beauty was given to her by Allah. A cheat-like Skill in the barest sense.

    Noble Phantasm
    Alhijab Al'awaliu
    O Allah, Protect My Chastity

    (Anti-Unit (Self), C)
    The first ever veil, or hijab, that was created by Allah to preserve the innocence of all women.
    Once, while Assassin was visiting Muhammad at his home, a blind friend of the prophet’s arrived for a visit. Assassin dutifully began to remove herself from their presence, but Muhammad stopped her and asked her why she’s leaving despite his friend being blind. She replied that it didn’t matter, that she could see him was enough.
    When asked what was best for a woman by Muhammad and Ali, Assassin replied “the best thing is to not be seen by men, and not to see men”.

    Thus, through the machinations of Allah and Muhammad, the veil was created. Similar in function to a Holy Shroud, the veil is a shimmering barrier of light that bends around the wearer, rendering them invisible. As the veil functions on light refraction rather than true mystical invisibility, in addition to granting Assassin her Presence Concealment skill, the veil is also capable of directed flashbang-like effects. Female Masters and Servants will find themselves more likely to resist the veil’s effects, while men are affected more easily.

    Fadak
    Desert’s Pastoral Oasis

    (Anti-Army, A)
    Fadak was a garden oasis in Khaybar, a tract of land in northern Arabia. When the Muslims defeated the people of Khaybar at the Battle of Khaybar; the oasis of Fadak was part of the bounty given to the Islamic prophet Muhammad, who gifted it to his daughter, Assassin.
    While exclusively the property of Muhammad during his life, it was to be given to Assassin after his death as part of her inheritance. The ruling caliph rejected her claim, and Assassin vowed never to speak to the caliph again.

    It is Assassin’s Reality Marble that crystallizes the love she possesses for her father, and his own love for her. There are many legends associated with Fadak, one of the most notable coming from Scheherazade’s own Arabian Nights. Harun al Rashid regrets Fadak not remaining in the hands of Muhammad’s family, and promises to return it to its rightful owners. It’s only then that he realizes Fadak encompasses his entire empire. The fact that neither Assassin nor her descendents ever asked for the land again proves that they cared very little for worldly possessions.

    Thus, inside the Reality Marble exists a “world of no possessions”. Fadak as a landmark means nothing to Assassin, only the fact that her father gave it to her gives it any value. Fadak binds the concept of the divine paradise to all who enter, stripping enemies of item-based Skills and Noble Phantasms. As Noble Phantasms as a concept are things given to the Servant by the Grail itself, only certain Divine weapon NPs are exempt from Fadak’s effects.

    History

    Fatimah bint Muhammad was the only child of the Islamic prophet Muhammad and Khadijah who lived to adulthood, and therefore part of Muhammad's household. She was a wife of Ali and mother of Hasan and Husayn. She is the object of love and respect of all Muslims, as she was the child closest to her father and supported him in his difficulties, was the supporter and loving caretaker of her own husband and children, and was the only child of Muhammad to have male children live beyond childhood, whose descendants are spread throughout the Islamic world and are known as Sayyids. The 11th century dynasty ruling Egypt at the time of the Crusades, the Fatimids, claimed descent from her.

    For Muslims, Fatimah is an inspiring example and 'Fatimah' is one of the most popular girl's names throughout the Muslim world.

    Fatimah is a vital character in the religion of Islam and is considered a role model for all Muslim women. Although there is controversy between different sects of Islam regarding her political role, she is the daughter of Muhammad and is loved by all Muslims.


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    Been a while. This was going to be my submission for Fate/Reclamation's Assassin until I found out it was Hassans-only.

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    Class: Ruler
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Character Traits: Servant, True Ancestor, Divine Spirit
    Natural Enemy: Devourer of planets



    Parameters

    Strength: A++
    Mana: B+
    Endurance: EX
    Agility: A
    Luck: B
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance: A
    A Class Skill that grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is.

    In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'.

    Territory Creation: EX
    Territory Creation is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.

    Creation of a special terrain superior to a Temple is possible. Due to Ruler's nature, this skill of hers can be classified as a Reality Marble.

    Goddess's Divine Core: A++
    A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.

    As she is a Pseudo-Servant, the rank should only up to B Rank but because of the body she chose to inhabit is close in nature to her, her Rank in this skill goes up to A++.

    Personal Skills

    Blessings of the Goddess: EX

    A Skill that signifies a gift from the (good) Goddess.

    As she was the progenitor of power of creation that mother goddesses after her inherited, her rank in this skill is EX.

    Connection to the Root: A
    The mark of an almighty wish-machine. For those who possess this Skill, regular parameters become meaningless.

    She was the only Divine Spirit ever to have a Path to the Root and draw her powers from it.

    Ultimate One (Primordial One): EX
    Ultimate One (Primordial One) is a Skill that denotes one's status of being an Ultimate One.

    By receiving back up from the planet, one's specs becomes one class above the opposing enemy's. Ruler was the closest being that the planet could have as an Ultimate One in the past before her gradual disappearance into obscurity.

    Noble Phantasm

    A Mother's Touch
    Marble Phantasm
    Type: Anti-Unit~Anti-Country
    Rank: EX
    Range: 1~99
    Maximum No. of Targets: ???

    This is Ruler's Noble Phantasm that allows her to connect her will to nature, as a means of interfering with probabilities, and transfiguring the surrounding world at will, in accordance to her vision of the world. As the user is a part of nature, he or she can change the world as desired. While one can argue that the body she possessed owned something very similar, Ruler's version is much more powerful since she was the first to be considered as the "ultimate being of the planet" and the first ever to hold the authority to shape the world to her liking.

    Unlike the flesh who cannot perform transformations independent of nature like humans directly, Ruler can simply do so since she was the progenitor of several beings (goddesses) who gave birth to humans.

    Identity

    Ruler's identity is the Earth Mother Goddess of Çatalhöyük, the forgotten goddess 8000 years ago who was the mother of the earth goddesses who created the earth and the "Root" that created all creation. The earth mother is a protector guardian deity revered by the people, and she is the sacrifice that feeds them with the crops born from her body and the beasts of the fields and the forests. Her true nature is the cycle of life and death, the circle of the food chain where she feeds man with her blood and flesh, kills man over time and absorbs him as nutrition, and once again feeds man with her replenished blood and flesh. She represents the system of life itself, so those born of the earth cannot deny her authority. Only when they have fulfilled the wish of the Çatalhöyük, leaving the planet for space and ending the infantile stage of intelligent lifeforms, will they no longer be bound to it.


    This authority over the power of bringing death and giving life, symbolized by holes opening in the earth and the sky, caves and the moon, the whirlpools and typhoons of the sea, the craters of volcanoes, and such, first births evils that bring forth all manners of death. Once the evils are finished spreading death, they leave the promise of good harvest and fertility.


    Possessing the body of Arcueid Brunestud, the Earth Mother Goddess was able to experienced the world after her 8,000 years of slumber. Her manifestation was due to the works of a certain individual that holds every single detail of her when she was still alive, a result born from the necessity of survival of the planet.
    In terms of personality, she is a goddess filled with maternal charms, calm and very understanding yet sometimes she displays some whimsical behavior and to an extent neglects social norms. Maybe the flesh is starting to rub off her?

    Servant Lines

    Summoned: "Greetings, I am the Ruler-class Servant, the Earth Mother. It is a pleasure to be your acquaintance."

    To Moon Cell (Hakuno Kishinami):
    That person... To think that we met again in a similar circumstance, truly this is very nostalgic. Fufufu... It's nothing. I just remembered something fanciful. Now if you excuse me, I will make some Japanese desert for that guy. Why you ask? I-It's something personal.

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    Servant ideas that might go somewhere if I can be bothered:

    Saber Orestes
    Assassin/Alter Ego Thokk
    Caster van Gogh
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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
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    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
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    Fate Zero is just Fate Stay Night for people who think Shirou is too girly
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    I think Alex IV can eat Goku.

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    I made a Lancer Orestes, but I'm not too happy with the final product.

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