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    Water's Domain refers to Skills that Iara would otherwise have had she been summoned in any other class. She can be summoned as an Archer, and therefore has access to the Independent Action Skill through Water's Domain. Along Magic Resistance and Presence Concealment, which reffer to the Lancer and Assassin Classes.

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    Class: Alterego (Caster, Assassin)
    True Name: Arsène Lupin
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Attribute: Man

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    STR: ** D
    END: **
    D
    AGI:
    ***** A+
    MGI:
    ***** C
    LCK:
    **
    *** A+
    NP:
    ***** B+

    Keywords


    Gentleman Burglar (Phantom Thief)

    A stereotype of fictional characters. An individual who is a member of the high-class, yet engages in theft and similar illicit activities. A character who is distinguished by the fact he leads a double life: that of a sophisticated and respectable member of society during the day and a criminal at night. Furthermore, he is also defined by the paradox of performing vulgar crimes with the elegance and refinement characteristic of someone of high social rank.

    Incidentally, since a gentleman burglar is generally a wealthy individual, the motivation behind his actions is usually not material gain. Rather, he performs crimes in order to accomplish some greater objective, follow some conviction, or even for the thrill of the act itself.

    Countess Cagliostro

    Real name (probably), Josephine Balsamo. Lupin’s archenemy. Also, his kindred soul.

    The self-styled daughter of Alessandro Cagliostro, who supposedly achieved immortality by means of magecraft. Although those claims of hers remained dubious to the very end, it seems like her skill as a magus was the real deal. A beloved of Lupin in his youth, the two had a fleeting but passionate relationship that ended due a dispute over a certain treasure.

    According to the novels, Lupin fell in love with many women and had many women fall in love with him. Still, he was never unfaithful. Although he had several romantic relationships throughout his life, that is merely a consequence of most of them turning out to be short lived due many reasons. True to the epithet of "gentleman", his stance towards love is fundamentally faithful and sincere.

    Josephine holds a special position among Lupin's many paramours. Their meeting changed the course of his fate, and her influence would linger around him even after they had long parted ways. In a sense, it wouldn't be an exaggeration to say that she was the most important woman in his life.


    CLASS SKILLS

    Independent Action: A+
    The ability to take action even without the prana supply from the Master. Convenient in cases like when the Master wants to activate a magecraft that calls up maximum prana or when he cannot supply enough prana to the Servant. On another hand, it becomes difficult for the Master to put the Servant under his complete control. At the highest rank, he is perfectly capable of maintaining himself in this world even without a Master. It is also possible to engage in battle completely independently, but back-up from the Master is still indispensable in order to bring out the full potential of the Noble Phantasm.

    Presence Concealment: B
    The technical skill to suppress one's presence as a Servant. In short, it is something like erasing one’s presence by thoroughly restraining the emission of prana coming from the Servant – who is a mass of prana. At B Rank, not only he can suppress his presence completely, but is also possible to employ this skill during battle. However, the rank of Presence Concealment drops greatly when he himself makes preparations to attack.

    Item Construction (Fake): A
    The technical skill to produce devices that carry magical power. Since he is not a magus, Lupin would not possess this skill originally, but his Noble Phantasm grants him an ability equivalent to it. All the items that he produces (retrieves from the Noble Phantasm) are things that were already present in his mansion from the beginning.

    if an Caster...
    Territory Creation: -
    This skill has been lost in exchange for the “mansion” Noble Phantasm.


    PERSONAL SKILLS

    Baritsu: C
    Also called Bartitsu. An Oriental martial art that is extremely practical combat-oriented. Originally rooted in the grappling techniques developed in the Far East, it later achieved its current form by incorporating elements from Western wrestling, kickboxing, fencing and others.

    Collector: EX
    A talent for acquiring items of even higher quality. An ability for accumulating and administrating valuables. Such a good fortune that one can even frequently obtain rare items, but because it only applies to the person himself, there are no benefits for the Master.

    Regroup: A+
    The ability to break away from combat, or possibly to reset the situation. Reverts a combat that became disadvantageous back to what it was at the battle start (1st turn). Returns the conditions of techniques to their initial values and, at the same time, forcibly cancel several bad statuses (negative conditions).

    A skill derived from his many anecdotes of performing impossible escapes.

    Secret Intel: A
    This skill does not conceal one's presence, but rather makes so that said presence itself does not feel like that of an opponent. Basically, it causes the enemy to misunderstand the user as some kind or harmless existence. However, this skill loses its effects as soon as a direct attack is made. It also denotes how much of a strong trust one can acquire after infiltrating the enemy camp. At A Rank, so long the enemy does not learn his True Name, he will have no problems at all in leaking information.

    Self-Suggestion: B+
    A mental suggestion that has oneself as target. It displays a high defensive effect against the effects of magecraftsskillsNoble Phantasms that influence the mind.

    In his case, this skill seems to play an important role during the employment of his Noble Phantasm.

    NOBLE PHANTASM

    Les Milliards – Man of a Thousand Disguises
    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)

    Formally, the True Name is “Les Milliards d’Arsène Lupin” (the billions of Arsène Lupin). A variation of disguise Noble Phantasm. The pinnacle of impersonation, also described as a limited form of Class Change. Minute modifications are applied to his Saint Graph so that he becomes “the Arsène Lupin that thoroughly mastered a given craftprofession”. Change in appearance is a matter of course, but there is also a side-effect that temporary endows him with the skills deemed indispensable for said profession. Furthermore, any information that may lead to the discovery of his True Name will be concealed while this Noble Phantasm is active.

    In modern ages, the concept of “disguise” became one of the metonyms for Lupin (phantom thief). That being said, he does not perform the full-body transformation that is often portrayed in popular culture. Originally, the physical alterations of his disguises were achieved mostly by means of make-up and costumes. Even in extreme cases, he would just employ mundane methods such as “skin inflation by means of hypodermic injections of paraffin”, “growing a beard and changing his hair by means of chemical products”, “altering his physique by means of a diet” and etc. Rather than that, Lupin placed greater emphasis on changing his gestures, way of walking, facial expressions and style of speech – the so called “skills of an actor” that are born from an exceptional power of observation. In a sense, one could say that the quintessence of Lupin’s disguises is the deed of “completely assuming a specific role”.

    L’Aiguille Creuse – Hideout of Secret Treasures
    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-World

    The trump card of Heroic Spirit Lupin when he manifests in the Caster Class. Automatically activated together with his summoning, it constructs small mansion that he can use as a hideout. Said mansion is not located anywhere in this reality, but rather exists as a pocket dimension that remains hidden in the imaginary space, isolated from the normal flow of time. Since it is virtually “nowhere in the world”, it cannot be reached by ordinary means, but Lupin can freely teleport in and out of it so long he is not in middle of combat.

    In addition, this mansion also serves as a storehouse for Lupin’s collection of treasures. Things like gold and jewels are a matter of course, but this collection also includes works of art and even magical valuables such as mystic codes and miraculous medicines. Among the magic items stored here, there are several articles imbued with the mystery of the Age of Gods that can be activated just by being charged with magic energy, casting spells almost independently from the user. By making proper use of those items, Lupin can perform as a Caster even though he is not a magus himself.

    Something derived from the “l’Aiguille Creuse” (hollow needle) that appears in the Lupin novels. Originally a treasury left behind by Julius Caesar, it would later be inherited by the French royal family, who hid it away by means of mystery and enigmas. Its whereabouts eluded adventurers and treasure hunters for a long time, and it was even deemed lost with the death of the last French king, but Lupin managed to find it thanks to clues left behind by Marie Antoinette and the alchemist Cagliostro. Upon being sublimated as a Noble Phantasm, it was merged with the many others wondrous items that also appear in the Lupin novels – such as the “god-stone of the Bohemian Kings” or the “fountain of youth”.

    Background


    Arsène Lupin. The main character of the stories written by the French novelist Maurice Leblanc. The archetype of the concept of “gentleman burglar (phantom thief)”. Supposedly, this is the individual who became the model for that character.

    A gentleman and an adventurer. An expert in disguises that possesses many aliases. An audacious thief who breaks into mansions and castles of the wealthy in order to steal jewels, works of art, valuable furniture, etc. On the other hand, he is also endowed with aspects as an heroic outlaw that helps good people in need. Furthermore, despite being a capable fighter, he avoids employing violence during his heists and feels a genuine aversion towards taking human lives.

    His long career is summarized throughout the Lupin novels, but a number of details described there contradict not only historical facts but also each other. Not even his origins can be fully ascertained. Supposedly born in Paris, on 1874, as the son of Theophraste Lupin (a common crook) and Henriette d’Andresy (a lady of minor nobility; one of her ancestors was told to have been a French general who served under Emperor Napoleon), he was originally named Raoul. With Theophraste meeting an untimely death in jail after being arrested and Henriette’s family renouncing her due having a relationship with a commoner, young Raoul was raised in poverty by his single mother. Maybe due living in hardships, or maybe due inheriting his father’s disposition, he got involved with thievery early on, stealing his first item at the age of 7-years old.

    Henriette died a few years later, leaving the orphaned Raoul to fend for himself. Details about his activities during this time are scarce and vague, but given the wide range of skills and knowledge that he would display later in life, one can assume that he was somehow able to devote himself to his studies. Then, on 1894, he would finally debut as a full-fledged burglar under the alias of “Arsène Lupin”.

    What came next was already exposed in the books. Arsène Lupin, the gentleman burglar, performed many extraordinary heists and achieved international renown. Due in part to limiting his targets to the rich and powerful, his feats turned him into a hero of the common people. Incidentally, mere monetary loss was a trivial matter for the victims of his crimes and, rather, it was the damage to their reputation which was a much more serious offense. Lupin had a penchant for making a public mockery out of those who opposed him, and there were many cases in which the resulting scandal culminated in a fatal blow to their standing in society. This aspect of his of “putting an end to someone’s social life” is one of the main factors that makes him qualified for the Assassin Class.

    Faker

    Whenever the Heroic Spirit of a character from a fictitious story appears, one question will be inevitably asked: “was the story based on his previous life, or is he an existence derived from that story?” In his case, the answer is “a little bit of both”.

    Back in his previous life, this man was a con artist that engaged in all sorts of frauds and get-rich-quick schemes. His M.O. was to thoroughly exploit all the opportunities that a given region had to offer and then move away to another location while changing to a completely new, fake identity. Originally, both the gentleman burglar Arsène Lupin and the nobleman Raoul d’Andresy were merely one among the many characters that he had impersonated during his career. Although he did had his fair share of adventures, those were mostly messy affairs with virtually none of the romantic aspects seen in the novels.

    One day, this charlatan became friends with a certain novelist. They were close enough that he would feel comfortable to tell embellished interpretations of his feats whenever they talked over drinks. The result of said novelist adding his own artistic liberties to those interpretations were the Lupin novels.

    Thanks to the great popularity of the novels, this man was sublimated into a Heroic Spirit while bearing the True Name Arsène Lupin. However, a problem arose at that point: as far as the world was concerned, the kernel of this Heroic Spirit is the fictional character, not the individual he is based on. Consequentially, the data about Arsène Lupin was given precedence over that of the con artist upon being recorded in the Throne.

    To make matters worse, this man was simply too much skilled at “impersonation”. He would spare no efforts to completely immerse himself to the role whenever he assumed a new identity, going as far as establishing a corresponding pseudo-personality by means of self-suggestion. Even though his own original personality was damaged every time he repeated the process.

    Bottom line is, the fictional character became the core and the pseudo-personalities were converted into a Noble Phantasm, but the individuality of the man who should have been the foundation of everything was so diluted that he can no longer recognize it himself. An abnormal condition that is just one step short of Innocent Monster. Should he ever be summoned in a regular Holy Grail War, this man would probably wish to “retrieve his original self”.
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    Ayy...really good to see a good Lupin sheet. One question though, what was the thought process behind giving him Baritsu, I can't remember him using it the stories.

    Seeing this really makes me really wanna go back and redo my ancient one now that I don't suck so much.
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    Indeed, the novels never specifically mention him using Baritsu. However, there are anecdotes of him being a fan of Eastern (Japanese) culture and even opening a jiu-jitsu dojo in Paris at one time. Given that Baritsu (Bartitsu) started as a variation of jiu-jitsu practiced by European gentleman, it felt appropriate for him to have it.

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    Fair play, sounds like a very Nasu-ish thing to do~
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    Should Collector be that high? Not familiar with Lupin too much but the EX rank does raise an eyebrow.

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    Actually, I'm even afraid that it may not be high enough! I'm not an expert in Lupin either, but the little I know makes me think that he is as bad as Gilgamesh in regards to hoarding rare items. Hell, he found the fountain of youth!

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    EX means its incalculable
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    Somehow I feel like Lupin pales in comparison to the guy who collected everything worthwhile on the planet.

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    Warning: Beast of Proliferation Detected - Beast VI/F7 Lilith

    Mother of All Demons
    Beast VI/F7 Lilith



    Class: Beast VI Fragment 7
    Alternate Classes: Caster, Foreigner, Rider, Lancer
    True Name: Lilith
    Origin: Biblical Scripture
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Armaments: Her Body
    Attribute: Beast
    Traits: Female, Divine, Dragon, Demonic, Servant, Threat to Humanity, Weak to Enuma Elish

    Wish if summoned as an ally servant: “To live happily with my precious children. What else would a mother wish for.”

    Sin: Often regarded as the mother of demons, when manifested as the Beast VI/F7 she comes to bear the sin of Proliferation. So long as she exists, she shall continually produce new and bizarre forms of life, and when left unchecked this will inevitably result overpopulation, and an overabundance leaving no space remaining.

    Appearance: A beautiful and mature woman with pale skin, she is technically naked but for cens-protection she has draconic scales covering her lower torso and much of her (very large) breasts. She also has draconic claws on her hands and feat a tail, horns, and black feathery wings.

    Bio
    Bio: Long ago the earth was not but magma and scorched earth unable to support life, yet in this time it would encounter a comet bearing the Babylonian deities Tiamat and Apsu. Wishing to bring life to this world Apsu summoned a drill like pillar, its winds cooled the flowing lava as its power ground the earth into soft soil. Tiamat mixed the soil with sea water born of her body, creating a mud which would give birth to new life. Eventually her water would come to cover the earth as a single sea, and at that point most of the god’s powers were exhausted, they returned to their comet, and became dormant.

    Another comet bearing another divine being arrived on earth, and much like Tiamat, Lilith would breed new life on this world. Within the seas she birthed Leviathan, as the seas gave way to land, she birthed Behemoth, and as the clouds cleared revealing a shining sun, Ziz was born. Life left the seas and evolved, and Lilith created yet more life, many which the modern day would come to now as Demons. From the garden of Eden she birthed her children, she watched over them, and loved them but it did not last.

    Within the Greater History of Man this era would end as a meteor crashed into the earth but unlike before it carried nothing but destruction, blanketing the world with its debris and bringing death to much of its life. The meteor woke from their slumber Tiamat and Apsu whom took this opportunity to fill the world with the first humans. Lilith knew not of this, nor did she care as before her, many of her precious children perished. However time heals all wound, even ones such as these and again Lilith began to fill the world with her elk.

    From her were born demons, monsters, even dragons, and gods which brought both blessings and destruction upon humanity. The mighty Tarasque, the mother of monsters Echidna, the father of Merlin Belial, all of these entities were birthed of Lilith within this Age of Gods. However the Age of Gods would eventually come to an end, forcing Lilith like many gods to live within the Reverse side of the world.

    Despite being trapped within the Reverse Side of the World, she still birthed demons some of whom were able to exit and affect the world of man. For this reason the Counter Force deemed her a danger to humanity, at the same time however to kill her could spell disaster her garden perishing along with her and potentially taking much of the layer above with it. Thus instead the Counter Force transformed her garden paradise, into a prison forever sealing both Lilith and all others within the garden.

    At first, she was content, simply enjoying her time with the children still living with her, but over time she began to miss the others left outside her cage. Her precious Leviathan, dearest Behemoth, dutiful Ziz and many others were forever out of her reach. Longing and bitterness soon creeped its way into the mother’s heart, as did a great evil. A fragment of the original Beast VI, the 7th of 666, slipped through the preverbal bars of the cage, intensifying her bitterness into hatred until finally she became a great evil of mankind. Thus is the sad fate of Lilith the Mother of Demons.


    Parameters

    -Strength: C+
    -Endurance: EX
    -Agility: A
    -Mana: A+
    -Luck: D
    -NP: A++

    Skills
    Class Skills:

    Independent Manifestation EX (A as a Servant): A skill which allows the unsupported manifestation into the reality. While normally trapped within her Garden of Eden certain unique circumstances has allowed her to not only manifest herself but also the entirety of said garden, giving her this skill at its highest rank, if only because of said unique circumstances. Even without these circumstances Beast has been attempting to find ways around her imprisonment so as to manifest within the world of man, being right at the cusp of a solution before current events.

    Existence Outside the Domain B+: A unique skill of the Foreigner class, it allows Beast to alter reality in a manner advantageous to her. As an entity which arrived upon earth on a meteor Beast has earned this skill at D rank, further increasing it to B+ due to her inhuman nature and the Counter Forces rejection of her exitance. At this rank Beast is able to alter reality on a large enough scale to make any battlefield she is on helpful towards her goals.

    Authority of the Beast A+: A skill unique to the Beast Class, it identifies Beast as an enemy and evil of mankind. Specifically her distinction as the “Mother of all Demons” has given her a certain amount of authority over demons and other threats to humanity.

    Nega-Messiah C+: A skill born of Beast’s nature as a fragment of the original Beast VI, it makes the attacks of enemies considered Good, Saintly, or a Savior less effective against Beast, as well as making her own abilities against such foes more effective. Those considered Evil however gain a boon, their defenses and attacks greater than before, for by their nature they are opposed to Good. By simply having a fragment of Beast VI within her automatically gives her this skill at D rank, her demonic nature and the evils wrought by her children further increases its rank to its current state.

    Nega-Decay A: A skill Beast created as a result of both of her innate capacity as an Evil of humanity, as well as her absorption of Beast VI’s fragment, this skill opposes the concept of decay and death. This skill prevents all things within Beast’s presence, including herself, from dying or even simply declining. All life constantly flourishes and grows, as well as continually proliferating, of course eventually the resources for such proliferation eventually runs out, presenting a hurdle that even this skill cannot overcome.

    Personal Skills:

    Species Creation A-: A skill born of one’s capacity for creating new species, as a mother whom birthed many new creature into the world Beast has earned this skill at a high rank. While true she has given birth to everything from demons to dragons and even gods, Beast was the origin of only demons, with anything beyond that distinction being little more than a sub-species of an already existing species marginally decreasing this skill to its current rank. At this rank Beast can create any kind of new life, even ones which do not adhere to the laws of physics, so long as it has a physical body. Any new species she creates is automatically considered demonic, unless specifically made not to be though even this is not guaranteed to prevent it from becoming demonic.

    Womb of Evolution EX: A skill born of one’s capacity to alter and evolve genetic material, Beast has earned this skill from her ability to take genetic material of others to create almost anything she can think of. At this rank Beast is able to alter any living matter she comes into contact with, or absorbs, evolving it into a new more powerful species, one she was able to control down to the molecular level. Spectral entities cannot be altered unless they are in a state which closely mimics a living being with genetic material, I.E. a servant. Even in such scenario’s Beast will find it difficult to do so and those she is attempting to alter will have a greater degree of resistance.


    Noble Phantasms
    Noble Phantasms:

    Li Sheyaledah Haresha'Ott Shel Ha'olam: My Children Shall Spread Out to Eternity A++:

    Born of her status as “The Mother of all Demons” this Noble Phantasm allows her to birth and endless hoard of demonic monsters to destroy her enemies. Due to the rushed nature of these monster’s birth they are mindless creature incapable of thought and reason, and in most cases would die without the power of their mother. Even with their mother’s power these demons cannot leave the confines of the Garden of Eden (a recreation in the form of a Reality Marble can act as a substitute), as they shall be rejected by the Counter Force, killing them. More than this this Noble Phantasm also allows to control all things which are descended from her, completely superseding the free will of those with low intelligence and forcing those of higher intelligence to fight for dominance of their own body.


    Interactions
    Interactions with others:

    -Merlin: “You seam to love humans, don’t you child of my child, just like your father.”

    -Altera: “You remind me of her… Oh poor Sefar.”

    -Siegfried: “My, my, my dragon man your quiet a looker. Want a few children? I’d be happy to provide if you do.”

    -Emiya: “C-Counter Force?!?! *Hides*”

    -The members of the Mothers Squad (except Emiya): “To be a mother is the greatest joy, don’t you agree.”

    -Martha: “Stern but caring, tough but fair, I’m glad to see your taking good of my son.”

    -Martha Summer: “I take back what I said.”

    -Meltlilith Summer: “Such a love for penguins, not unlike your father.”

    -Most Foreigners: “I remember having good times with tentacles.”

    -Kiara: “I’m sure the two of us could have a lot of fun.”

    Other’s interactions with them:

    -Altera: “M-Mother?!?!”

    -Siegfried: “N-no thanks mam.”

    -Emiya (Archer): “So long as master has no issue with your, neither do I.”

    -Emiya (Assassin): “So long as you are no threat to humanity, I’ve no reason to harm you.”

    -The members of the Mothers Squad (Except Emiya): “How true.”

    -Kiara: “I’m sure the two of us could have a lot of fun.”


    Authors Notes: If you read the bio and thought “Wait isn’t the Tarasque the child of the Leviathan” and to that I say, yes, yes, he is… don’t worry, much like with gods, demons face no issues with such matters. A couple of things I never put in the Bio either because I couldn’t find a way to naturally fit it in or isn’t as relevant as everything else. I wanted to add Sefar (the white titan that spawned Attila) to be one of Lilith’s children, being born while she was still traveling the stars. All the parts that mention the “Fragment of Beast VI” refer to a head cannon of mine (actually made an entire post about it and other head cannon’s here).

    Interesting fact, I don’t remember what the NP says. I tend to leave servant sheets and come back to them, the end result in this case me forgetting what the NP Means. It supposed to mean something along the line of “I who art the mother of all demons” or “I who art the womb of darkness.” If anyone know Hebrew and can figure it out for me, feel free to. And in case your curious, if you were to summon Lilith would be Foreigner class.
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    Berserker of Sharp claws

    "hey-oh, Master! I am Berserker, here to get rid of all your monster raleted problems"



    Class: Berserker
    Alignment: Neutral good
    Region: Croatia
    Height: 160cm
    Weight: 65kg
    Likes: meat, hunting, good people
    Dislikes: vegetables, bad people, monsters
    Talent: hunting, fishing
    Armaments: claws
    Natural Enemy: Vampires

    stats

    Str: B
    End: A
    Agi: B
    Mna: B
    Lck: E
    NP: A

    Skills


    class skills
    Mad Enhancement(E+): Normally does not receive the benefits of Mad Enhancement. In exchange, one retains a normal capacity to think. However, when in the presence of a creature of the night, all reason is lost.

    personal skills

    Night Slayer(EX): A skill that denotes one as an specialist in dealing with the creatures of the night. It gives Lancer an advantage when fighting those with the demonic or vampire trait.

    Instinct(B): Refined sixth sense, but still not in the league of true precognition. While direct observation is no longer required at this rank, where danger or an enemies presence/movement can simply be "felt", things outside of a Servant's own knowledge cannot be deduced.

    Animal Dialogue(B): communication of intention with animals that don't speak a "language of words". A side-effect of Berserkers Noble phantasm, she is perfectly capable of conveying her intentions. However, communication is not control, and she still has to convince the animals to do her biding.



    Noble phantasm


    Soul - predator of predators
    Krst Vile

    rank: Anti-unit(self), EX
    Berserker's Noble phantasm, her version of her order's signature technique.
    To achieve the highest level on the order Berserker is part of, one must achieve mastery of a art that approaches the level of the
    Heaven&apos;s feel
    Third magic

    It allows for a physical projection of the users soul. In Berserker's case, it takes the shape of a spectral black cat that constantly follows her and can be used for spying or terrain recognition. However this is merely a restrain form.
    When Berserker call it's name, this Noble phantasm true function is revealed. It creates a dark energy silhouette around Berserker with the head of a panther and massive claws on her arms and legs. This spiritual armor grants her great deffensive and offensive bonuses, but also reduces her cognitive abilities to that of a wild, frenzied animal, only focused on killing it's prey: the creatures of the night.



    Background


    Berserker identify herself as the "Kresnik of the Hunt", Her original name was something that was lost in becoming a Heroic spirit.
    Those called Kresnik (after the Croatian god of fire) where the members of an Order from Pre-Christian Slovenia and Croatia that would hunt evil beings, most commonly those identified as "Vampires", and help villages by providing resources and treating diseases.
    Unlike in a certain order of Assassins, several people could hold the title of Kresnik at the same time. However, the only way to receive the title was to Master the Order's ultimate art. Because it so hard to do it, there was rarely more than one or two active during the same period.

    Berserker was the daughter of a previous Kresnik, already born with the natural disposition to hunt the creatures of the night. She advanced through the ranks very quickly and became a Kresnik very early in her live.



    personality


    Berserker is a energetic and charismatic person. She has a strong sense of justice and can get pretty angry when people take advantage of the weak. She sees herself as a hero and strive to always do the right thing with a smile.
    However, it all disappears when confronted with a vampire. Berserker becomes a killing machine filled only with hatred and a desire to kill the creature. While it is very much impossible to communicate with her in this state, one can rest assure that she will only purposefully attack the monsters.



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    Assassin of Bohemia:
    A Lady of Mystery



    My. Quite the unfortunate turn of events - - for you, that is.
    Indeed, I am no Hero of Legend; if anything, I am nothing but a ordina-well, extra-ordinary lady.
    Rest assured, however, as I am a woman of many, many talents.
    Hmhmm....Tsk-tsk, I will not be referred under such an unrefined title, Master; for the time being, you may refer to me as `Rosalind.`”

    True Name: Irene Adler, The Woman who Outwitted Truth

    Alignment: Lawful Neutral

    Place of Origins: America (19th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR - E
    END - E
    AGI - E
    MGI - E
    LUK - A++
    NP - D


    Pardon the garrote wire, it was awfully perfect for the situation.

    Info

    Height/Weight: 171cm/60kg

    Likes: Cigars, “Genuinity,” “Noble” Character

    Dislikes: Conflicts of interest, Obsessions, Uncivilized behavior

    Talents: Acting, Blackmail

    Natural Enemy: “The World’s Greatest Detective,” “The Opera Ghost”

    Attribute: Man

    Traits: Servant, Humanoid, Female

    Armaments: Unknown

    Catalyst: Faded Photo

    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment - C
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant.

    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. Thought its rank drops considerably when preparing to attack. Rather low for an Assassin, the Servant nevertheless earned it for obscuring her “True” presence before a Seeker of Truth.

    "Didn't believe I was tailing you? My word, what a careless Master you are. Thank heavens I filled in as this War's Assassin."

    Personal Skills:

    Femme Fatale (False) - EX
    A Skill that allows the user to slip naturally into the target’s vicinity. This shows the proficiency of the preliminary investigation required for theft and sabotage, and other skills such as analysis, intelligence, pheromone, disguise, and covert behavior.

    An adventuress of fair renown, Assassin is a lady with a great many tricks up her sleeves. Befitting her nature as an “Dangerous Woman,” she utilizes an alluring combination of warmth, beauty and wit to draw people towards her. With such an unnatural ranking, all will find themselves hopelessly drawn in by Assassin before it’s too late. Males have zero hope in escaping her grasp, as her acclaimed beauty and voice enthralled many of various standings.

    - - However, Assassin’s clear hesitation when requested to take a life does bring her standing as a Fatal Woman into question.

    ---

    Lady of the Blackened Lily - D++
    A woman of peril and mystique, an ever-shifting enigma. A Skill embodying Assassin’s current nature, no more apparent than the raiment which she wears. To all, Assassin’s True Name and Parameters appears to be a jumbled mess of nonsensical lettering - - not even the Master can discern Assassin’s capabilities unless given permission to do so. This veil seeps to the foundation of her very “Face,” concealing her true emotions. In essence, Assassin can swap between different personalities at a whim; whether it is an elegant broad, a stern lady, a passionate seductress, or even a wild tomboy. Within this mass of interchangeable personas, those without divine means of discernment will find themselves unable to peer into the “Truth” behind Assassin.

    As a side effect, Assassin is cursed with the inherent “Distrust” of others; that “There is no way a woman like her has no secrets to hide,” or “This woman must be hiding a nefarious plot behind her smile.” As the mistrust against her builds, the proficiency of the Skill also escalates. Such a cruel irony, that the world itself paints her as the “Antagonist,” the “Self-serving adventuress,” the “Sly broad whose machinations threatens livelihoods.” A pure flower tainted by a supposedly black heart.
    Only one of the three is the truth, but they care not.

    "Trust is such a precious thing, Master, pray that you don't squander it."

    ---

    Natural Insight - C
    The ability to grasp the essence of things - - perceptive eyes for observation that will not overlook any information.

    At this rank, Assassin can predict future events not unlike Clairvoyance, but at a limited scale. Should a Luck Check be passed, however, she is capable of seeing through the truth, with only Noble Phantasms of great Mysteries capable of barring her vision. True to her character, Assassin is no amateur in the art of observation; for there are few who could boast in unraveling the plans of Britain’s Greatest Detective. In any case, it makes gathering information for blackmail a much easier task.

    "Hmhmm. Who knew being all clever and intrusive can be so enjoyable?"

    ---

    Virago’s Charisma - C
    The Skill representing a heroine as an example to all other women, for her perseverance and glory in a field dominated by men, and an inspiration to all those women who would follow her footsteps. Perhaps the most famous and celebrated example of a true, magnificent virago would be the Maid of Orléans.

    This Skills grants morale bonuses both in and outside of battle to all female allies, boosting both physical and mental capabilities. Although nowhere near the likes of the aforementioned Saint, Assassin was merely an innocent soul pursued by a selfish paramour, who enlisted a certain Great Detective in unveiling her as the “Wily Adventress.” However, the proportion of her fame only yields the Skill at a C-rank. Were it not for her circumstances of birth, she would have made a fine queen - -

    "My, quite the prestigious designation, I say; though a surprise, it is not unpleasant."

    Noble Phantasm

    Her Last Bow
    Falser than Vows Made in Wine

    Anti-Unit/Anti-Truth
    Rank: D (B)
    Range: 1-15
    Max Targets: 1 Person

    "Hmhmm. Delightful as it may be, it is time to end this farce. With my final bow, I bid thee goodnight: Falser than Vows Made in Wine: Her Last Bow - -"

    Her Last Bow.
    A wronged woman who went against the Greatest Detective in the World, Assassin not only outsmarted said Detective, but managed to get away with everything she wanted with no repercussions whatsoever. Though initially “Defeated” by Holmes’ scheme, her wits quickly circumvented the situation, turning the board against the detective and left the stage with victorious grace.

    A “Finale-esque” Noble Phantasm, the enigmatic mists flows down and surrounds Assassin’s feet. With a curtsy, mist spins outward like a shifting abyss. The churning vortex allows Assassin to “Rebound” any hostile actions back towards their source. Be it physical or conceptual, the attacks revert to their origin point, proving Assassin to be but an innocent victim of an unfair lot.

    Though, that explanation is faulty as Rosalind’s shepherd robes.

    Indeed, Her Last Bow is less of a reflection than a “Paradigm Shift.” In this moment, Assassin is more than a “Victim” of the “Perpetrator’s Aggression” - - rather, it forces the World (“The Audience”) to recognize Assassin as the “Righteous” while the subject as the “Antagonist” or more specifically, and “Unjust.” As the “Righteous” cannot be undermined, Assassin effectively alters perception itself, turning her into the one "Above injustice." In a way, corrupting the existing truth and replace it with her own.

    How sly. How devious. For a “Righteous Heroine” to distort perceptions - - to deny the “truth” of others. Whether said “Truths” are genuine or not, they are all irrelevant to Assassin’s pursuit of her own happiness - - for as long as she strives for something, others will never arrive at their “Truth.” Indeed, Her Last Bow is the Origin of “Obscuration” distilled in its purest form.

    On another note, the excess of “Distrust” built up by Assassin is reset upon the use of Her Last Bow. It is as if upon “Recognizing Assassin’s truth,” the world lifts the shadows of doubt from her shoulders.

    Lore

    The one and only woman who outsmarted the Greatest Detective.
    The one who denied the Pursuer of Truth the very "Truth" he desired.
    “The Woman” herself. Irene Adler.

    Irene began life at an insignificant corner of New Jersey in the United States. Wishing to make more of her life, she left the States and embarked on a journey to Europe. Remodeling herself through her years, It was in Europe that she achieved fame and wealth as a prominent opera singer, with countless suites from high and low professing their undying love to her. It was only through a passing paramour that led Irene to encounter the Greatest Detective, tasked to retrieve a simple photo - - a photo that can make or break a nation. Although initially duped, Irene shifted the investigation to her favor, her wits and disguises outsmarting the Great Sherlock Holmes and retreating away with all she could ask for.

    Such defeat affected Sherlock that "When he speaks of Irene Adler, it is always under the honorable title of The Woman." Within only a single appearance, the woman left a profound impact onto the Detective and the ensuing novels.

    A single tale, whose charisma and wit inspired many; surpassing that of an Evil Genius - -

    However, this does not explain her appearance as Assassin.
    Perhaps the root cause lies within that same encounter. The very same impact has left the audience of the books spellbound. Of all the criminals and murderers Holmes had bested, only her and her alone had him, the Greatest Detective, at awe.

    "Surely, she must be a genius of equal peer!"

    "She must have myriad tricks up her sleeves!"

    "This Irene Adler must've been a woman of great experience, for only someone of equal prestige can hope to clash with Holmes!"


    And so, the falsities grew. Spreading enough to overshadow most of her original feats, a simple lady whose happiness was obstructed by Sherlock Holmes. In its place was a dashing "Femme Fatale," capable of manipulating prominent figures of the government and law. A "Perfect" match against the Great Detective.

    Now summoned as the Heroic Spirit of Assassination, Irene seems unfazed. To fret is to dawdle, after all. With the Holy Grail in sight, she will pursue her wish, whatever it may be.

    Personality

    "A Femme Fatale? Me? Bold claim, to a lady who shirks at the prospect of murder."

    An elegant lady radiating a sense of intrigue and danger. Though her smile, jokes and propensity for cigars paint a lady who lived a colorful life, it does little to shake off the horrible gut feeling - - The feeling that this isn’t who she truly is. A despicable broad is she, a manipulative vixen is she, an untrustworthy woman is she- -
    Not. Of course, because of the dramatization of her stories, "that" Irene is a false exterior. Peeling back the layers of personas and half-truths, what was the Heroic Spirit Irene Adler is a far simpler than what most realized.

    Broadly speaking, Irene is very much a "Selfish Person." She abandoned her family in New Jersey in order to find success beyond the States. Using her looks and voice, she mingled with many heartthrob nobles not only as insurance, but also as a means to elevate herself further beyond. Even a simple conflict of interest will immediately mark you as her enemy. For in the pursuit of her dreams of comfort and happiness, not even the gods can deny Irene that luxury. In this manner of impetuousness, she is not dissimilar to a certain ancient Goddess.

    Though mired in a self-serving attitude, Irene is never an aggressor in the situation. Holding herself to a high bar, the lady will never lash out against others - - even if she truly despises them. Even if she were beset by thugs or detectives, she will always hold her ground. For it is "The way of uncivilized men," those who partake in the taking of lives. She will not stain her hands with blood, nor will she dirty her conscience with the thoughts of crime. As ridiculous as it may, the Assassin will honor it to the bitter end. Her very Legend, life and Saint Graph may be tainted, Irene will not let her morals be corrupted as well.

    What is this dream she's seeking? Well, perhaps it's left better unsaid - - for her wish is riddled with too many half-truths.
    Amidst the sea of falsities, however, perhaps the truth can be glimpsed just once.

    "'Adler.' that is a surname of a woman who cannot find happiness amidst fame and fortune. Those days are far behind me - - and through this vessel, perhaps I can reclaim my 'True Name - -'"

    Extras:

    (If Irene's acting career wasn't any more apparent, she does take a great liking to costuming. A dashing gentleman's suit or a dancer's dress, she delights in taking upon the roles of others. Like the Rosalind of a certain play, Irene tends to get carried away with the multiple personas. Though troublesome, it is difficult to get mad at such a smile.)

    (It is assumed Irene should have obtained the Alluring Nightingale Skill given her background as an Opera singer. Due to the nature of her current existence, it has been corrupted and melded with Femme Fatale (False). On the bright side, however, this makes listening to her singing a far simpler undertaking.)

    ("The bond between you and I? Think nothing of it. We are merely fellow pursuers of a dream. But for both our sake, pray that yours do not risk mine, Master."
    A cordial, but somewhat tentative bond. It is a contract through mutual benefit, nothing more. Should the bond be cultivated, however, Irene would fill in for certain position that the Master lacked in his life - - a mentor-figure, an older sibling-figure, etc. For a woman has difficulties forming true connections, it's the least she could do.)

    Craft Essence/Relations

    A Token of Gratitude

    I left two things to him. Two mundane, worthless things.
    Even then, only one is kept as a memento, a "Check" against his ever-growing ego.
    The other may not have much, it is given with the most sincere feelings of all.

    To have finally found a sense of happiness, a "Fairy Tale" initially thought impossible.
    No fake smiles, no strings attached. Where a word like "Love" is spoken with the truest passion.
    As a witness to this conclusion, that coin was the least I could offer.

    That said, I never requested anything from him.
    Hmhmm, Perhaps an afternoon of tea while being serenaded with a violin would do...
    No no, maybe I shouldn't be too choosy; he had already paid those in full.

    It's settled, then; a simple stroll should suffice - -

    Relations:

    Sherlock Holmes:"My dear Mister Sherlock Holmes... I suppose seeing him again was inevitable. He is a hopeless addict with his head in the clouds, but a brilliant one nonetheless. In any case, I owe it to him for protecting my protege from that abhorrent monster."

    The legendary Detective who chased after her under the King of Bohemia's request. Although beset by with deception and arson, she did not resent him - - if anything, she was flattered the King would send the esteemed Detective after her. In spite of everything, the two held each other in high regard; the Woman for being the living proof that he can indeed fail, and the Detective for being another "Genuine" person she has met.

    "A surprise, I'd admit. Whether it was a pleasant one or not remains to be seen. In any case, however, there's finally a chance to have a pleasant chat with The Woman. Assuming she doesn't implicate me in a scandal again, that is."
    ~Sherlock Holmes

    ---

    James Moriarty: "...You again. Given I've met our dear Detective at Paris meant you failed, yes? - - I refuse. ...Ah, I thought you were trying to recruit me again. Pardon my impulsiveness."

    A blatant villain, true and true. A man who schemed a way to destroy the world on a whim. On principles and interests alone, Assassin loathes to associate herself with him. She had refused him once back in Milan's La Scala, and she will refuse him again.
    Meanwhile, the professor sighs in disappointment. Such a talent for crime, squandered.

    ---

    Phantom of the Opera: "What a beautiful voice. Christine... That face... Ah... Christine..."
    ~Erik

    The same abhorrent monster, responsible for the woes suffered by her protege. It was with the help with the Detective Holmes that this "Opera Ghost" was revealed and brought to justice. Should they meet once more, a disaster will surely ensue. Though Assassin can impersonate her student to a flawless level, she is still at the mercy of the Phantom's grasp.

    ---

    Mata Hari/Charlotte Corday: A nod of understanding. They are victims of dire circumstance, whose chance for personal happiness as slim as hers. Though they had given up on their dreams and wishes, however, Assassin refuses to let hers go - - she had achieved happiness before, she will do so again.
    Perhaps, this is why she cannot truly sympathize - -

    ---

    Alexandre Dumas: "Oh. Here I was expecting someone on the caliber of Mister Wilde or Mister Stoker. Though disappointing, could you direct me to where Sir Shakespeare is? The original far surpasses that of derivatives, after all - - "

    In a nonsensical fashion, the age-old rivalry between two nations reignited.

    A/N

    (The opposite of Mata Hari and Charlotte Corday: The Most Suspicious-Looking Assassin Ever, but you can't help but have tea with her while gut instincts are going overdrive telling you to run away but can't)

    (Irene's personality is based on her first appearance in "A Scandal in Bohemia." Not a least bit like the Femme Fatale she's seen as.)

    (She unintentionally became my personal favorite Servant to write. A victim of overhype, poor Irene.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bugs View Post
    O-oh dear
    (Side trivia, this was also meant for the recent Monthly CaS Contest, but College was hell.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    for as long as she strives for something, others will never arrive at their “Truth.”


    Gold Experience Requiem says hi.

    Seriously though, this is a very good sheet. I've always wanted to see Adler written up as a Servant and this take certainly doesn't disappoint. Love how you made her more than just a typical "femme fatale".

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    Spoiler:
    The Holy Grail War was a simple matter for Rider. Saber and Lancer thought to team up against him but all they had managed to do was die together to Rider’s own sword and spear. Berserker had been a joke, nothing but a mindless brute that took less than a second to destroy.

    Assassin had tried to assassinate his master, key word being tried. That had annoyed Rider enough to leave a crater where he had once stood. Even Archer who had been a difficult opponent with how his attacks seemed to come from all angles at once was easy prey after he found the servant of the bow.

    He had defeated his enemies, and he had come to the spot where the Greater Grail was to manifest, he had preformed all of the proper actions. So why was this thing standing before him! He fired a volley of electricity filled arrows but they simply bounced off of his opponent’s rocky shell.

    How was a damned Caster keeping him from his goal. Caster’s monstrous form roared and charged at Rider. This was nothing, the creature that Caster had turned into did not have anything approaching the speed of a Rider. His keen eyes ran over the caprice to find a single opening to his flesh, a hole to allow the servant to breath through the indestructible shell, and drew his bow. The arrow flew right into the hole, only to be deflected by a sudden exhaust of air. The hole was then covered by the caprice forming layers to allow air to get out without exposing Caster’s skin.

    “Aiming for my exposed blow hole? How quaint. Unfortunately you were just a step too late Rider.

    This had been happening the entire fight, every time Rider had managed to find a weakness right before he could exploit it the attack was reflected and the flaw was fixed. This wasn’t fair, fight were not supposed to be this way. When you attack an enemies weakness they are supposed to die that is the natural order of things.

    He had enough of this, this, this cheater. He called upon the power of the Trimutri. Shiva the destroyer would end this servant. Mana gathered around Rider as the power of the destruction god gathered in his hand.

    “Holy Ground Expansion, Space Fixation, Divine Punishment Enforcement Period Establishment... All Clear. By Shiva's wrath, your life ends here..."
    “Pashupata!”

    The energy was released all at once, not as an explosion but as a vacuum. The light of destruction washed over the monstrous Caster. His soul was being judged and there was no doubt that it would be found wanting. Rider could almost see the soul being sucked out.

    Then the impossible happened. A counter light began to shine keeping back the Pashupata. A powerful red light shot out keeping the power of Shiva at bay. Eventually the judging light of destruction vanished and all that was left was Caster completely unharmed. He looked at Rider and once more he felt that mocking gaze like in life. The glare of somebody who flaunted the idea of a fair fight in his face. Who refused to accept that Rider was the strongest. His blood was boiling, his rage building greater than ever before.

    “A great attempt Rider, but I’m afraid my body emitted the proper counter radiation to stop the Pashupata right in its tracks. A side effect of this bodies new internal organs.”

    He was going to utterly destroy this insignificant stain off the face of the Earth. He powered up the next power of the Trimutri, Brahmada, to create the ultimate phantasmal beast and destroy this beast.

    “Invert Space, The Reverse Becomes the Upside…”

    “Rider! We should retreat.” Rider’s master spoke through their connection interrupting the Brahmada.

    “What?! I am about to destroy this worthless piece of trash!”

    “No! I am almost out of Mana to give you. Any more and I die! We are leaving.”

    That was why this was happening of course. If he could be at full power nothing would be able to stop him, but as he was now his master was holding him back. “Very well, I shall retreat for now.”

    Break

    Rider’s master was pacing. “What are we supposed to do? Caster seems invincible-” Rider glared at him. “as long as I can’t fully power you.” He amended. “Plus his master is nowhere to be found so we can’t win that way. We may have to use your Noble Phantasm.”

    Rider scoffed. “I am invincible and my Noble Phantasm isn’t necessary to defeat any opponent, even a cheater like Caster.”

    Rider’s master looked like he wanted to speak against Rider’s words so he brought up his Rakasha Charisma to make him submit.

    “S-sorry Rider.” His master spoke through pained breath. “I know you are the strongest servant of them all; it is just that I don’t know why we have to treat a cheater like a regular opponent?”

    Rider released the pressure off of his master. “Explain.”

    “W-well, I agree that if Caster was a regular opponent that I had held you back from defeating you should just use your overwhelming strength to destroy him. However Caster is a cheater right?”

    “Correct.”

    “Well then why should we allow him to continue breaking the rules? I mean you truly are the most honorable heroic spirit as well as the strongest but shouldn’t there be a limit? Why don’t we just finish this cheater off before he can insult you any further?”

    Rider smiled at his maser finally seeing things his way. Of course it only made logical sense that he would, after all Rider was the ultimate being so all would see his truth eventually.

    Break

    The fire worship was a simple thing, in fact it was completely anticlimactic. After giving the proper sacrifices and respect to Prathyangira the chariot simply appeared in the arsenal that Rider could summon. What would not be anticlimactic, Rider thought, would be the look on Caster’s face when the invincible chariot destroyed him so completely he would refuse to ever be summoned from the throne of heroes again.

    He stood before the Caster, who now had shed his stoney armor. “There you are you cheater.” Rider started. “Now that I am here at full power your tricks won’t work.”

    Caster grinned. “Cheating this, cheating that, wow that’s pretentious don’t you think.”

    Rider growled a little. “Cheating is cheating, and anyone that can stand up to me is obviously cheating.”

    “Nature doesn’t know word’s like cheating or fairness. All that matters in the end is survival of the fittest.” Caster raised his arms up and laughed maniacally. “And some pathetic wretch like you who goes crying to the gods for more power isn’t fit to become the dominant species on this planet.”

    “Shut up you cheater!” And Rider sent a blast of lightening towards the servant. However as the electricity neared him Caster’s body turned into a rubber material and dispersed it into the ground.

    “Well,” the rubber Caster spoke, “it seems out time for conversation is over. I do hope you brought something new to the table.”

    “I do have something new! You will have the pleasure of being the first and last being to see this! Come forth my Chariot of Promised Victory!”

    To call what happened next a boom would be to call an atomic bomb a fire cracker. It was as if the very boundaries of reality cracked to allow for the massive energy of the chariot to come forth. The air around the chariot bent and warped as if it was straining to even be near the power. The chariot itself was unassuming, it was rather small, barely enough for Rider to stand in, which he did as if he had been born to ride such a divine vehicle. It was pulled by two brilliant stallions, one pure white shinning like the sun, the other black as pitch seemingly sucking in the light.

    “This chariot changes forms to become most suited to defeat the enemy in front of me, let us see what form it decides is necessary to destroy you!” The two horses began to shift, growing larger and having scales erupt from their bodies. Soon enough it was two dragons pulling the chariot which had grown to accommodate them. One of the dragons breathed a gout of flame and the other one of ice.

    “I see!” Rider shouted. “The mixture of heat and cold will instantly shatter your rubber body before it can shift into a different form! Now go my dragon’s destroy him!” The twin dragons shot out their breath weapons.

    The resulting explosion forced Rider to look away but when he looked back Caster was still standing there. This time his body seemed to be made out of an infinite amount of infinitesimally small creatures. “W-what is that!?”

    “The Tardigrade, or water bear as they are more commonly known as can survive in almost any possible environment and in insane temperatures. Not only that but they are the only known animal that can survive in outer space.” The collection of uncountable water bears laughed. “My body has now become a hive of Tardigrades able to easily survive your dragon’s breath attacks.”

    “Well let’s see if you can survive this!” The chariot began to change again. The dragon’s reverted back to horses and the shape of the chariot body became taller eventually forming into a giant speaker. “I see! Your body must communicate with itself through sonics. Therefore by sending a counter signal your body will fall apart! Go my sonic chariot!” Anybody who is familiar with the Blood Countess of Hungary would know what happened next. A large scale sonic attack that shook the foundations of the area. It was a destructive force that rivaled that of the strongest anti army Noble-Phantasms. When the attack was finished Caster was nowhere to be seen.

    “Finally the cheater got what he deserved, and I get my Holy Grail.”

    “Not so fast Rider.” Rider turned to see Caster standing there. “Right before that sonic attack could work this body of mine it changed to create a neural link between the different bodies that lies beyond simple sonics. I’m now running on Radio Waves.”

    “YOU BASTARD!” The chariot began another change.

    Break

    The chariot had gone through dozens of variations, dozens of different power each strong enough to take down several servant; yet for some reason Caster just adapted to each of the new abilities before they could even land.

    “Come on Rider, we’re almost there.” At this point caster was simply a nebulous cloud of radiation in the form of a man. “I’m sure you have a mother few variations in you.”

    Rider could hardly breath. His master had already spent all three command seals to give him energy but it was running out fast and his master himself was being drained too dry to even move.

    But Rider was the strongest in history, the greatest hero who’s name would echo throughout the ages with the help of the Holy Grail. He mustered up the last of his energy.

    This time the Chariot got smaller, small enough to the point it wasn’t even a chariot anymore. It was a small crystal that fit in the palm of Rider’s hand. “I see. This is the only way to defeat a cheater. To break the entire system!” He raised the crystal up into the sky. “When I destroy this crystal all spiritual being in the area will be disconnected from their power source! Even a cheater like you cannot survive without help from the Grail!”

    “Willing to kill yourself to destroy your enemy! This is why I love you hero types so much! Just try it!”

    “Diiiiiieeeeee!!!” Rider threw the crystal onto the ground and a bright white light surrounded both of them.

    Rider laid on the ground barely able to move. All of his magical energy was gone and he had no way to regain it. However could disappear in solace knowing that he was the strongest of them all.

    “Wow. That was quite the performance.” Rider turned and saw Caster standing there unharmed.

    “W-what?”

    “I have to say that you really did act just as I needed you too. The moment I found out your true name I knew that you would be the one to psh my evolution to the limits. To cause me to evolve to a point beyond human understanding.”

    “C-Caster!”

    “No no no. I am no longer Caster. You see to survive that last attack of yours I had to change into something stronger, something with the ability to Manifest Independently. Call me Beast V, the Beast of Evolution.” Beast laughed and walked away, no longer caring for Rider now that his own gains had been realized.

    “Y-you fucking cheater.” And Rider returned to the throne of heroes.



    Class: Rider
    Other Classes: Archer, Lancer, Saber
    True Name: Indrajit
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Place of Origin: Indian Mythology

    Parameters:

    STR: B+
    END: A
    AGI: A+
    MGI: B
    LCK: E
    NP: EX

    Likes: Honoring his Father, Fair Combat
    Dislikes: Unfair Situations, Failure
    Talent: Fighting
    Natural Enemy: Lakshmana
    Attribute: Earth
    Armament: His Bow and Arrows

    Class Skills:
    Spoiler:

    Riding
    Rank: A++
    All vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. Even members of the Dragon Kind, which are normally not included in the riding skill, can be ridden.

    Magic Resistance
    Rank: A+++
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer”. When faced with spells of divine origin the rank if this skill skyrockets making Indrajit completely immune to even EX ranked true magic.


    Personal Skills:
    Spoiler:

    Divinity
    Rank: E-
    Despite being descended from the creator Brahma and the celestial architect Mayasura Indrajit’s assistance with his father’s war against the god has lowered his rank in divinity to abysmal levels.

    Heavenly Privilege
    Rank: A-
    A skill denoting the position of the heavens during ones birth. When Indrajit was born all the heavens were bullied by his father into the position that would give him the greatest karmic destiny. As a servant it acts as a sort of cheat skill to give Indrajit the right skill for the situation he faces. A variant of Imperial Privilege that activates unconsciously and covers a wider range of skills. Due to Saturn disobeying the commands of Ravana to enter the right horoscope this skill has received a minus modifier and will fail when Indrajit needs it the most.

    Rakasha Charisma
    Rank: B
    The skill denoting the ability to lead demons into battle. Differing from normal charisma in that it is not based on strength of character or popularity but through sheer force. A mental attack that forces others to recognize the superiority of Indrajit and submit themselves to him. Rakasha Charisma can be resisted with either a high enough level of Magic/Mental Resistance or if the target has higher stats in three different parameters.

    Trimutri’s Blessing
    Rank: EX
    The cosmic functions of creation, maintenance, and destruction are personified as a triad of deities, typically Brahma the creator, Vishnu the preserver, and Shiva the destroyer. Their blessings come as the three greatest Astra, Brahmada, Vaishnav, and Pashupata. Noble Phantasms that create a phantasmal capable of destroying the world, restore any object or person to its peak condition, and deliver instant death to those in the surrounding area respectively.

    The mere idea that three of the most powerful Noble Phantasms becoming a single skill defies all logic. Is this just a way to present all three of this Noble Phantasms an efficient manner? Or perhaps it is a testament to the strength surpassing the gods that Indrajit possesses.


    Noble Phantasm(s):
    Spoiler:

    Nikumbhila Yagna
    Chariot of Promised Victory

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: EX
    Range: 1-99
    Max Targets: 99

    When Meghanada conquered Indra and gained the name Indrajit the creator Brahma came to him and offered him a single boon. Indrajit wished for immortality, so that he may serve his father for all eternityAs true immortality was against the laws of nature Brahma gave him instead a celestial chariot that would guarantee victory over any foe. This chariot can only be accessed though the fire worship of Indrajit’s native goddess Prathyangira. However if anybody interrupted the fire worship then they will be the one to kill him.

    As Indrajit never used the celestial chariot in life it does not have any true form. As a result the concept has shifted from ‘a chariot that can defeat any enemy’ plural to ‘a chariot that can defeat any enemy’ singular. The celestial chariot will change forms to become the perfect counter to Indrajit’s enemies. Against an enemy like SIegfired or Achilles it becomes fast enough to get Indrajit a shot at their weak points from behind, against powerful sabers like Artoria or Altera it becomes a heavy defensive tank that can withstand multiple sword beams. It will even become capable to countering certain attacks. When faced with Gae Bulg it becomes an existence out of time that cannot be influenced by cause or effect.

    The only constant in all its possible forms is the overwhelming strength that rivals that of the Gods.


    Lore:
    Spoiler:

    Meghanada was the eldest son of the great demon Ravana and his wife Mandodari. When he was born Ravana forced the heavens to enter the proper position to give his son the strongest karmic destiny. However Saturn refused to be bullied by the demon king and entered the wrong position for Ravana’s plan. As a result while being given strength that rivaled and surpassed that of the gods the strength would fail him when he needed it most.

    However until the time of his death Meghanada was invincible. When Ravana was conquering the heavens Meghanada took on the storm god Indra and won capturing him. Before the warrior could kill the god through Lord Brahma intervened and offered a boon in exchange for Indra’s life. Meghanada’s first instinct was to ask for immortality, true immortality that not even the gods had; however that boon went against the laws of nature and Brahma could not grant it.

    Lord Braham instead offered Meghanada his own celestial chariot, with which he would never lose a battle. In order to summon the chariot Meghanada would have to perform a fire worship, or Yagna, to his goddess Prathyangira. When the worship is complete the chariot will be given to Meghanada. Brahma warned Meghanada though that if anybody interrupts the fire worship is destined to kill him. As a last gift Brahma gave Meghanada a new name; Indrajit, or the one who conquered Indra.

    The newly named Indrajit assisted his father in his conquest of all of heaven and earth not giving any quarter. His overwhelming strength is what allowed his father to have near complete control over existence. The demonic empire was so infallible that the gods begged the preserver Vishnu to save them.

    Vishnu incarnated as Rama who ended up in conflict with Indrajit’s father Ravana. During the war between the two forces Indrajit personally fought Rama and his brother Lakshama. For the first two days he overwhelmed the heroes and brought them to the brink of death only for them to be rescued at the last minute. After having his enemies escape death twice over Indrajit decided to perform the fire worship to give him his invincible chariot. However his uncle Vibhisana had betrayed his father and joined Rama in his quest to reclaim his wife.

    Knowing that during the Yagna Indrajit would not only be at his weakest but also be unable to touch any weapons Vibhisana led Lakshama to attack his nephew. When he saw that his uncle had betrayed him and attacked him against the rules of engagement he flew into a rage. Even weakened he fought off Vibhisana and Lakshama and returned to his father Ravana. He spoke to his brother of the unfair actions taken against him and how he could no longer fight now that the prophecy of his death was being fulfilled.

    Ravana refused to listen to his son and told him that even being destined to die running away from the battlefield would be shameful. In response Indrajit snapped and yelled at his father for the first time in his life. However in the end he went back onto the battlefield and faced Lakshama. In an effort to stop his death he unleashed Brahmada, Vaishnav, and Pashupata the three strongest Astra but none of them even scratched Lakshama due to his existence as a pat of Vishnu the Preserver. With his enemies attacks not being able to touch him Lakshama easily did what countless warriors, demons, and gods had failed to do.

    Unable to escape his demise despite his great power Indrajit died cursing fate.


    Personality:
    Spoiler:

    Indrajit is a spoiled brat. That is the core basis of his personality. He had been raised being told that he was the greatest in existence and none could even touch him to he ended up believing it. He is sure that the natural order of the world is himself at the top and that any form of resistance that he cannot easily crush is cheating.

    Unfortunately for existence in general his temper tantrums can cause serious damage to the universe. While many of the heroes of Indian Epics show restraint to unleashing even lower level astra for fear of damaging the land unless they fight a truly superior opponent. For Indrajit if a foe manages to survive long enough against him, even if it is obvious that they could be defeated with a weaker astra, will unleash members of the Trimutri’s astra at will.

    In the end unless you have a surefire way to defeat him it is best to just bow down to this monster for the sake of all those around you.


    Bond:
    Spoiler:

    On Summoning:
    “The strongest Rider is here. Indrajit!”

    If you have summoned Rama:
    “So that cheater is here? Unsummon that servant or you will lose my assistance.”

    If you have summoned Arjuna Alter:
    “No, I am a god."

    If you have summoned Gilgamesh:
    "I see, you have decided to play what they call in the modern era a prank. Get this trash out of my sight and I won't be angry with you."

    About the Holy Grail:
    “Why do I need something like that? I already am the being that stands above all. Although maybe going back wouldn’t be so bad.”

    About their Likes:
    “Winning. Of course with me that answer is the same as if a weakling had said breathing.”

    About their Dislikes:
    “Cheaters. People should just accept their place below me and die.”

    Bond 1:
    “Why are you talking to me?”

    Bond 2:
    “Good. Continue on your current path.”

    Bond 3:
    “You have made the right choice deciding to focus on me.”

    Bond 4:
    “You expect thanks? Or maybe praise for your actions? Why would I when all you did was what you should in my presence?”

    Bond 5:
    “I always thought that I would be alone. That my perfect existence would never meet anybody that could keep up with me. Thank you for showing me I was right.”


    Creator Notes:

    Here’s the sheet that took me way to long to finish so I couldn’t enter the contest.

    Wow that story really got away from me. Kind of wish I had done something less extreme and more character based but I have a hard time not overreaching when it comes to writing. Other than that I’m happy with my beyond overpowered sheet. Indrajit is actually invincible unless he’s fighting Rama or Lakshmana. You know Arjuna’s ultimate weapon? Indrajit has it as a skill, and it is only a third of the skill’s true power. Originally he had Mana Burst (Lightening) but I switched it with Heavenly Privilege to make him even more broken. I wanted to make him a little more broken with EX ranked stats but this isn’t completely a joke sheet so I just gave him very high level ones.

    Personality wise he was originally going to be a very honorable person and a good person who didn’t hold any hard feeling towards Rama and his forces but when I chose to use him in the contest I changed it to make his personality more ‘villainous’. Now he’s just a complete brat that nobody really respects but is forced to pretend they do due to his strength.
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    who was the caster and other servants

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    Quote Originally Posted by Areop-Enap View Post
    who was the caster and other servants
    Don't know about the others, but Caster is obviously Charles Darwin going by all the references to "evolution" and "survival of the fittest".

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    Indrajit's faceclaim doesn't seem to work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bugs View Post
    Indrajit's faceclaim doesn't seem to work.
    That's odd because it is working on my end and Royd is right Caster was Charles Darwin while the others were just nameless servants I didn't bother filling in. Does any have any advice. This is my first purposefully super overpowered servant but I tried to not let quality drop because of that.


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