Black Blooded Watcher: Uh, what did I just read. I mean, I saw words and read them to myself but I couldn't find a way to just comprehend. Which is par for the course of what Lovecraftian things are at their core.
Black Blooded Watcher: Uh, what did I just read. I mean, I saw words and read them to myself but I couldn't find a way to just comprehend. Which is par for the course of what Lovecraftian things are at their core.
Is it legitimately confusing? I was actualyl worried about the layout.
I fucking bow to pinetree, holy shit. Sorry, BnEl15, I simp for a new sheetmaster now.
Current FGO setup
Vanatos noooo~!
Also, Pine, what.
Just... what.
For the record, I'm saying "what" as a praise here. I kinda get what you're going for, but still...
What.
Edit: Layout is fine, it's the contents that feel so high-concept that it took several tries for my brain to register the words. And I'm saying this as someone unfamiliar to Lovecraftian lore, so maybe someone more familiar with the world can understand it better.
Last edited by BnEl15; April 4th, 2022 at 01:16 AM.
Source: TheSmoog78
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Class: Foreigner
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Aylith
Alignment: Chaotic Insane
Place of Origin: Evil God
Parameters:
STR: C
END: A
AGI: D
MGI: C
LCK: D
NP: A+
Height: 170cm
Weight: 180 lbs
Likes: Nature, the Black Goat, ...
Dislikes: Pollution, Humanity, ...
Talent: Terrifying Travelers, serving the Outer God, ...
Natural Enemy: Paul Bunyan
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Divine, Female, Humanoid, ...
Armament: No weapons
Catalyst: An ancient, rotted twig from an old Greek forest
Class Skills:
Core Of The Goddess A: The nature as a perfected goddess since birth. Grants absoluteness of mind and body, repels mental interference, prevents growth, and includes the status as a divinity. It is unknown why Aylith has this instead of Divinity.
Existence Outside The Domain EX: The nature denotating an existence from the void of space. As an Evil God, she naturally has a very high rank.
Insanity EX: The nature denonating an existence shattered with anxiety and despair, then put back together by the Black Goat. However, for some reason, Aylith seems to have a mental schism as well.
Personal Skills:
Verdant Growth B: The ability to grow tainted plants. This allows Foreigner to grow a tree which radiates an aura of fear.
Murderer Under The Misty Night C: Aylith murdered several people who entered the woods at night. In a foggy or dark environment, has a high chance to strike first.
The Ones You Love Most B: Aylith is able to manifest shades of the people who her target loves most. However, they are completely intangible, thus this is mostly useful for psychological warfare.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Aylith
The Widow Of The Woods
Type: Reality Marble
Rank: A+
Range: 20 Meters
Max Targets: Infinity
This noble phantasm is the sublimation of the legend of Aylith. When invoked, she begins to rend the veil as she steps forward, unleashing a titanic grove of trees as she does, shrouded in fog. This grove is completely controlled by her own will. She uses this to trap her prey and hunt them, controlling the entire forest. But, it seems that the trees are moving far more then should happen through only that, and occasionally one of the trees appears to start walking. There seems to be a bit more to this noble phantasm then just this.
Lore:
Aylith was a minor Evil God known as a servitor of the Black Goat of A Thousand Young. She was also known as the Widow of the Woods, and as a danger to any travelers. But is that truly the original identity of who you've summoned?
Personality:
A cruel and savage entity, she doesn't particularly care for almost anything. However, She occasionally cries over a chopped-down tree for some odd reason.
Relationships:
Molay: "Hm, interesting to meet another servitor. Would you like to discuss it?"
Van Gogh: "Vulthoom!!? No, Clytie? What has happened to you, my dear nymph? You were merged by Vulthoom? That traitorous rat. Don't worry, I will destroy him and try to fix you. What, me? No, I'm not broken. Why would you think that? Merged? No, no, I'm just me."
Paul Bunyan: "Don't you dare try to chop down that tree. If you do, I will slaughter you so brutally that it will take weeks for them to fully find you."
Creator Notes: The first in a new series, expanding on assorted minor Lovecraftian gods. Does it sound interesting?
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 11:12 AM.
Source: Yoton Kyu
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Aillen
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Place of Origin: Irish Mythology
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 170cm
Weight: 150lbs
Likes: Fire, singing
Dislikes: Haters, water
Talent: Lullabies, breathing fire
Natural Enemy: Fionn Mac Cumnhail
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A small lyre
Catalyst: An ancient charred stone from Tara
Class Skills:
Item Creation D: He is barely capable of creating any items at all, only having this due to his status as from the Age of Gods
Territory Creation (Charred) B: He is able to designate a territory by burning a circle around it. This territory is on par with a workshop.
Personal Skills:
Lullaby A: The ability to lace his words with a sleep spell, causing every word to cause sleep in whomever hears it. This is granted to him because of him lulling the citizens of Tara to sleep before burning it down.
High-Speed Divine Words C: As a powerful Tuatha De Danann during the Age Of Gods and an effective Mage, he is capable of using quick Divine Words, powerful tools.
Divinity C: As a semi-divine Tuatha De Danann, he gains a low rank of this.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Incineration
Tara To Ashes
Type: Anti-Fortress
Rank: C
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 2000
This noble phantasm is the sublimation of his burning down the city of Tara every Samhain after lulling the people asleep with a song. When it's activated, he starts to sing. Normally his song would be a crooning lullaby that soothes his targets to sleep, but as an Idol he has forced this into another form, saying thus: "My big show shouldn't make people fall asleep!" Now, his song is instead an intense rock song that wakes everyone up. He then breathes a wave of fire, which he normally uses as a special effect in his concerts.
Lore:
Aillen is a member of the Tuatha De Danann, and resided in the underworld. He would burn Tara down to the ground every year during Samhain, after lulling the people to sleep. This ended with the arrival of Fionn Mac Cumhaill, who ignored the sleep effect by poisoning himself and then killed Aillen.
Personality:
Aillen is a flashy and showboating man, always trying to make himself seem more incredible. He does this as an idol, though he is annoyed he is competing with other idols in Chaldea. However, don't underestimate him and his fire: He is still a very evil person. His wish for the grail would be that he managed to put Fionn Mac Cumnhail to sleep.
Relationships:
Fionn Mac Cumhaill: "Hello! Have you heard of me? The great idol Aillen? Well, I'm having an exclusive conc-oh, it's you. Well then, I shall burn you to ashes like I wished all those years ago. Prepare for my glorious song. Tara To Ash-what Master, what did you think I was doing? I'm just practicing for the concert. Not unleashing my Noble Phantasm against this insolent brat, no, no no.
Elizabeth: "Huh? She says she is capable of being an Idol? Well the master will show her how it's done."
Nero: "Unlike your competitor, you seem to be ready to sing with me, the great Idol King Aillen!"
Creator Notes: How's he?
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 12:01 PM.
Watcher: I bow before thee. A KINO sheet in all matters. A creative take on that thing. You went all in with the HPL aesthetic, i love it. Childish as I am I giggled at "pustulent nipples".
There is so much to praise. The formatting and style, the little face icons are something I always liked about your sheets. skills are vague, but enough for your imagination. Just like its supposed to be.
There were some mistakes tho. The Watcher skill in the Rev Foreigner part has the black milk description. There are times when the names of the ghosts are revealed but they still carry their codename, flamel and lilith were obvious but the name reveals came pretty late for some reason.
so the aspects they represent are past and future, small and large, and the unknown here and outside. It is a really creative take on the whole idea of watchers and foreigners in general.
A milestone in several ways.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Thanks VanatosOriginally Posted by Lady Vanatos
Lmao get owned Bnel
Uh I mean thanks a ton BnEl15 you're great
Glad to hear it was only the text being suitably confusing.
Oh thanks for the corrections, I'll change them after work.
Which codename reveals did I miss updating? I actually can't find it.
Flamel and Lilith's names came this late on purpose. It was less about the mystery of who they are and more about how distant they are from Master. Lilith just didn't think their decision mattered at all and Flamel simply believed they'd do the right thing regardless of who they were.
That's why Picard and Norgay are immediately revealed as they are emotionally invested in the discussion from the start.
It's a pretty meta reason since it's not even the characters themselves who reveal their real name, and it's not something I tried make clear through the sheet, but yeah, that was the intention.
pinetree: Beautiful, simply beautiful. The absolute creativity to write this sheet is astonishing. The formatting is just the cherry on the top. I loved the dialogue moments and how you formatted it. Honestly, this is probably one of the best works I've seen in this site so far.
Pine, wow! I absolutely adore this sheet. You combine interesting base characters and an interesting entity to form an extremely creative sheet. What do you think of my Aillen and Aylith?
I like your aillen Sheet. The idea of aillen being an idol is extremely creative and sound exactly like something Fgo would do. Can’t say much about your aylith sheet tho. It’s competent but feels very dry and empty.
Oh. Did you click the spoilers and reveal the true identity of Aylith?
Still feels very dry and empty.
Thanks for the comments. I've updated it. How does it feel now?
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 11:14 AM.
Thank you so much!
Allen has nice ideas, him being an idol is interesting but is totally restricted to a single section and isn't reflected on his skills and Noble Phantasm.
Also, while your Noble Phantasms are functional, I personally prefer them to be more thematically relevant. They're the crystallization of their legend after all.
In fact, forcing people to sleep seems to be the exact opposite of what he should do as an idol, even if has to do with his background.
Updated. How's that? And what do you think of Aylith?
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 11:47 AM.
Then you have an arsonist idol. Is that who he is?
You have to try and mesh the two ideas, or prioritize one over the other. It depends on who you want him to be.
A good official example is Liz, who's a messy mish-mash of 5 different concepts but still works remarkably well, even if there are some questionable choices.
Liz is interesting because they mixed her family dragon crest, her legend and her solitude in her house confinment into an attention starved idol who walks between vampire and dragon and whose voice becomes a weapon due to her dragon lungs.
Thanks for the advice. Edited the fire aspect so that it is clearly more used as a special effect in the performance, making it centered on Idol. What do you think of Aylith?
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 12:21 PM.
Source: Nasaki
Class: Foreigner
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Bianca Sforza
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Italy
Parameters:
STR: B
END: E
AGI: E
MGI: B
LCK: E
NP: A
Height: 190cm
Weight: 170 lbs
Likes: Peace, her family, Cynothoglys
Dislikes: Violence, misery, hopelessness, despair.
Talent: Mercy kills
Natural Enemy: Koyanskaya of Darkness
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Divine, Female, Humanoid
Armament: Gloves that she wears
Catalyst: La Belle Principessa
Class Skills:
Insanity E: Bianca has completely clung on to all of her sanity, and Cynothoglys isn't a god who drives people to insanity. She only gains this rank due to her class.
Divinity C: Due to having bound to Cynothoglys, she has this rank as a minor deity.
Existence Outside The Domain C: Normally a class skill Foreigners have at a high rank, designating an entity from the void of space. However, as Cynothoglys is not immensely from outside the domain, she instead gains a low rank.
Personal Skills:
Knowledge Of Death B: As the Mortician God, Cynothoglys has granted some of her knowledge to Bianca. This allows her to be able to know how to kill gently, and how to preserve corpses.
God-Slayer D: Due to Cynothoglys being the mortician to gods, Bianca has a weak version of this, enhancing her Strength and Endurance against Divine entities.
Eye For Art B: As a member of the Sforza family and a commissioner of Da Vinci, she gains this skill, allowing her to figure out the identities of people with art anecdotes in their noble phantasms.
Black Sheep: A skill denonating the odd person out in a family. Bianca was the only member of her family to worship an Evil God. This grants her this skill, giving her a chance to dodge attacks which hit more then one person.
Noble Phantasm(s):
La Belle Principessa Morte
A Gentle Death For The Princess
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 1
This noble phantasm is the sublimation of the power of the goddess she worships, Cynothoglys. When invoked, a hand grows out of her chest, reaching out at her command to touch a targeted enemy. The enemy is intensely poisoned and killed on the spot, while they barely feel anything, only feeling a phantom warmth as they fade away.
Lore:
Bianca Sforza was a member of the Sforza family, an illegitimate child. She is mainly only known for the painting that was done of her, La Belle Principessa, supposedly done by Da Vinci. However, she has far more secrets that haven't gone down. For example, she was the high priestess of Cynothoglys, the Mortician God, who she had heard of long ago, and worshipped her in hopes that eventually all conflict would be ended as existence died a gentle death. Now, summoned as a servant and having finally met her god, she utilizes the powers granted to her by Cynothoglys to calm conflict.
Personality: A kind and helpful woman, always trying to assist her allies and everyone. If she was summoned for the grail war, she would likely not fight and just try to help. However, her meaning of help has a darker side. If she comes across violence, misery, or suffering, she will try to peacefully kill to stop it, eg killing the attacker for violence, killing the depressed person for despair... Her wish for the grail would be that all humanity have peace and happiness, and if someone can't, they be gently destroyed.
Relationships:
Van Gogh: "You are extremely miserable, poor dear. Don't worry. You'll be at peace soon. La Bella Principessa Morte."
Voyager: "A pure and innocent soul. A pleasure to meet you. Please let me know if you see anyone unhappy."
Koyanskaya Of Darkness: "You savage, destroying death like this. It is a mercy, a peace, not a tool for destruction. Well then, since you won't stop, La Bella Principessa Morte."
Creator Notes: Number 2 in my Expansion Series. This one is Cynothoglys, the Mortician God.
Last edited by jishara; April 4th, 2022 at 06:19 PM.
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