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    Source: Animesher

    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: "Lady Mondegreen" / Mondegreen
    Alignment: Neutral
    Place of Origin: America (20th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: D
    AGI: B
    MGI: D
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 198cm
    Weight: 130lbs
    Likes: Language, kind people
    Dislikes: Unkind people
    Talent: Causing words to be misheard
    Natural Enemy: "That King"/James VI?
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: N/A
    Catalyst: The definition of the word "Mondegreen"

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment B: As a mondegreen is able to sneak in in a lot of places where you wouldn't expect it, she gains a high rank in this skill, allowing her to conceal her presence very effectively.

    Personal Skills:

    Confirmation Bias A: One of the main causes of Mondegreens are confirmation biases, expecting to hear one thing so much that you actually hear it in this case. As a skill, this allows her to force a "Confirmation Bias" onto her target, causing them to only hear and see what they expect to hear and see. But this only lasts for a short time.

    Cognitive Dissonance B: Another main cause is cognitive dissonance: Particularly in this case, the dissonance that the brain refuses to not hear and understand the words, so they become heard as something different then they really are. As a skill, this causes her to be able to force her target to hear anything as speech, but this lasts for only a short time.

    Reverse Mondegreen D: A reverse mondegreen is when someone writes garbled words which sound absolutely right when they're read aloud. This skill permits her to "allow garbled words to be heard", although she will try anything instead of it until she is sure there are no other options. Esssentially, it permits beings within a small area to be heard perfectly clearly through anything.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    And Laid Him On The Green
    The Mondegreen Effect


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 100 targets

    The full sublimation of this servant's core, the idea of a Mondegreen. When its true name is activated, Lady Mondegreen raises a finger to her lips, creating an area where within "communication becomes garbled". Language becomes nonsensical and ununderstandable, though this can be gotten through by large amounts of perseverance. Assassin's only noble phantasm. Right?

    I shall never unseal this, not until the hubris of humanity has built up and up and up and up, not until the tower is ready to be built. Then and only then, shall I unseal this noble phantasm.


    Source:Eggar919

    Class: Pretender
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Curse of Babel
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: Biblical

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: A+

    Height: 198cm
    Weight: 130lbs
    Likes: The punishment of humanity, the will of Heaven
    Dislikes: Humanity being seen as "Good"
    Talent: Making humanity unable to understand each other
    Natural Enemy: "That King"/Nimrod, Tower of Babel
    Attribute: Sky
    Traits: Female, Divine
    Armament: A spear made out of the shards of the Tower of Babel
    Catalyst: A shard of the Tower of Babel

    Class Skills:

    Anti-Human Order C: As an entity truly created and working on the very idea of "Destroying human order" by destroying human understanding of each other and language, she has a fairly powerful version of this skill which would normally only belong to the Beast Class, enabling her to "constantly spread madness" through human society.

    Madness Enhancement EX: She utterly and fully believes that all humans must be destroyed, and as such despite her seeming utter sanity, she gains this extreme rank which makes her incapable of coming to an understanding with.

    Self-Replenishment (Mana) C: Her mana constantly surges until humanity has been suitably punished, which to her is never.

    Magic Resistance A: As an entity created by a heavenly body, she gains a very high rank in this skill, allowing her to nullify most modern magic.

    Personal Skills:

    The Mondegreen Effect A: The Curse would not normally be anywhere near summonable as a standard servant, so she utilized a fusion with The Mondegreen Effect to make itself summonable, passing under that identity of "Lady Mondegreen", though she is now enjoying being her true self. This permits her to utilize the skills and Noble Phantasm of Lady Mondegreen.

    Wrath of the Angry God EX: As an entire entity created out of the wrath of a divine being, the Curse gains this skill which includes Divinity. In addition, as humanity performs actions that are hubristic, gluttonous, lazy, cruel..., she gains more and more power. Once she hits a certain threshold, her Noble Phantasm becomes unsealed.

    The United Language EX: The United Language. The Original Language created, which she was sent to destroy. Naturally, she knows it entirely, for she was sent to destroy it, utilizing an immensely powerful language capable of wielding Divine Words. In addition, every word she says can be understood by everyone within earshot, though she dislikes this feature.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Babel
    And They Built A Tower To Heaven


    Type: Anti-City
    Rank: A+
    Range: 6 Miles
    Max Targets: 10000 targets

    This noble phantasm is the sublimation of the very core of this Servant's existence. When it is unsealed after reaching a certain threshhold in her Wrath of the Angry God skill, it materializes as a spear forged out of the remanants of the Tower of Babel. When its true name is called, she launches it forward, causing it to spin more and more and more. As it spins, it destroys language, rending it and tearing it apart and making each being speak a single language that no other being speaks and speak no other. It also deals hefty damage, as it strikes with the force of an "Inverted Tower of Babel" utilized against humanity.

    Lore: Mondegreen is a term used for when something is misheard as a different set of words, named after a famous mondegreen in a poem which goes: Ye Highlands and Ye Lowlands, Oh, where hae ye been? They hae slain the Earl o' Moray and laid him on the green. The Mondegreen is in the fourth line which is often misheard as "And Lady Mondegreen." But of course, she wouldn't qualify as a servant. This servant is actually The Curse of Babel, the Curse placed by YHWH on humanity when they tried to build the Tower of Babel to save themselves from the Great Flood.

    Personality: A cruel person, she constantly believes that All Humanity Must Be Destroyed in the name of YHWH. But she doesn't wish to attack without his wrath. So what she does is tempt others, break others, cause them to fall into sin... And then, only then, she strikes with Babel. Her wish for the grail is to destroy all of humanity.

    Relationships:

    James VI: "Pathetic, oh king, not merely capable of even trying to stand at the level of the rest of the miserable humans."

    Nimrod: "Your efforts merely lead to the ruin of your people, oh vile King."

    Tower of Babel: "You can never protect them, no matter how much you try."

    Sessyoin Kiara: "Your strategies are approved of by YHWH, and in his name I thank you for your collection of sin."

    Angra Mainyu: "A soul possessed by sin. I shall absorb that, and wipe you off the earth."

    BB: "A virtual entity? What is that? A sin, no doubt."

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    "Lady Mondegreen": So... is it "party rock is in the house", or "party rockers in the house"?

    Nice. Compared to your last Pretender, you've definitely gotten much better at building up the reveal. It's interesting how you managed to create a Servant out of little tidbits like the Mondegreen effect and connect them to something as big as... that, though the connection is actually pretty obvious in hindsight. Good job.

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    I agree. You recently carved a niche by making weird concepts their standalone servants.
    This pretender is fine, but i wouldve liked if you attached these ideas to an actual person and use the concept itself als their ability. In this case perhaps whoever wrote the poem and perhaps some random woman from babylon who opposed the tower. But then idk if it would qualify for the contest
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Thanks so much for your comments BnEl and DelRey!

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    "Ah, is it…time for another adventure? Well then, yahaha!"


    True Name: Tom Thumb
    Class: Rider/Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Region: Britain
    Source: Arthurian Legend

    Parameters:
    Strength: D
    Endurance: D
    Agility: B
    Mana: B
    Luck: C

    Class Skills:

    Double Summon A
    A rare Personal Skill possessed only by a few select Servants, permitting them to simultaneously possess Class Skills from two distinct classes. Manifesting as both the Rider and Assassin class, Tom possesses the class skill of both.

    Presence Concealment D (A+)
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class. The child whose size measures to that of a thumb bears the power to accidentally disappear from sight as quickly as he appears. Though, it is only like that while he is that small.

    Magic Resistance B
    The ability to resist magical effects. Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by greater magecraft and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.

    Riding B (EX)
    A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. A unique case in his particular legend, being that he more or less can "ride" all sorts of creatures from mice to humans due to his regular size. It isn't standard but its effective rank measures around B when Miniscule Size is not in play.

    Personal Skills:

    Gifts on a Rosebud EX
    Taken from an anecdote of one of his many legends. At one point in his story, he is visited once more by the Queen of the Fairies, his supposed godmother, and is given several items. These items are not quite significant enough to be called Noble Phantasms but they are nonetheless useful as support.

    Miniscule Size - (A)
    The skill that denotes the physical existence of one being exponentially smaller than other life forms. While it causes one's presence to be very difficult to discern, it also forcefully causes one's physical parameters to become equal to that of E. However, due to an interaction with Llyncu Tom, Tom has manifested at a normal height with the standard physical parameters of the Rider class.

    Attendant to White Lilies B
    The personal skill to those who witness the journey of the knight princess on her path to maturing as a king. An on-and-off again companion who provided many merry times to the girl when they met. Was he ever in her court? Maybe so, maybe not. The bells of laughter that lifts up spirits say nothing of the matter.

    Noble Phantasm

    Llyncu Tom: Possession of a Swallowed Tom
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C+

    The noble phantasm of Tom Thumb. The cycle of swallowing that Tom Thumb found himself in. The catalyst that pulled him into many fantastical situations throughout his different stories. It is by this noble phantasm that Tom can integrate himself into something's form, evading detection, mimicking a possession which calls one story of him being swallowed. Tom's existence will register as being no different from the existence he is possessing unless he exposes himself by talking. It is a noble phantasm only able to be used by Tom in his miniscule state.

    It is also by this noble phantasm that Tom turns this ability onto his own Saint Graph, possessing it and granting himself the standard parameters of the Rider class at the expense of limiting his skills. This form of possession can be undone by Tom taking enough damage that he ends the possession himself.

    Bawd Tom: The World Viewed Through A Thumbling's Eyes
    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Army

    The second Noble Phantasm of Tom Thumb. The tales of Tom Thumb as told by Tom himself. A talkative and narrator by heart, this noble phantasm is made to put one in the shoes of Tom Thumb by copying and engraving his skill Miniscule Size into the World as a bounded field, letting individuals experience the World from his own perspective. The bounded field itself is rather unnoticeable in where its foundations lie as one would notice things getting bigger rather than themselves becoming smaller.

    Being as small as Tom would be, servants affected by this would have the effects of Miniscule Size including the presence dampening and parameter drop.


    Lore

    Tom Thumb is one of many fantastical entities that exist within Arthurian Lore. The child that sizes to his father's thumb whose birth was facilitated by the Magus of Flowers and was attended by the Queen of Fairies, Tom Thumb lived a very hectic life. And a notable part of his life was his time as the court dwarf of King Arthur, becoming a favorite among many until his death to a spider's venom. This is the life of a Tom Thumb that only existed in the tales of England. A life that never happened.

    The Tom Thumb summoned here never lived that amazing life. In another world, he was a homunculus creation of Merlin with the support of a fairy, made for the purpose of serving as a temporary companion, a friend. He was made to be the friend who would make the princess who would be king laugh without fail. A preparation and gentle reminder for the days where the Once and Future King wouldn't be able to laugh so easily ever again.


    Personality

    Tom is very childish. That much can be discerned without fail. Yet he is mature in his own way. The thumbling is dutifully aware of the purpose of his creation as a preparatory piece for Princess of White Lilies' ascension. He acts childishly to have her remember the moment where she herself could act this way, encouraging the trait in his own Master even.

    Adopting traits from those who had a hand in his creation, Tom is a very witty boy almost to the infuriation of others and has a deep love of pranks. He also bears a talent in magecraft but he uses the bare minimum of it except in important occasions.


    Creator's Note: When I heard that Tom was someone who could make even Artoria laugh I called bull but then I had an idea that it didn't have be Classic Artoria hence I made him a fictional existence in her timeline but an existing entity in Lily's timeline.

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    Tom Thumb: Cute sheet but why does he qualify for the prompt? Because of his first NP? Also I thought Lily was just the younger self of "our" Arturia, not one from a different timeline.

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    Top Level Notes
    This one is for pinetree, lol.


    II

    The night is a time when the impossible can become real, even if just inside dreams. But when all are asleep, who is left to confirm the impossible indeed happened?
    Only the stars are witnesses to the wonders that were thought fantastical.
    But so is the story of this starry-eyed couple.

    A man who observed the stars and charted the moon, becoming the one who forged a chain that connected the moon's texture to the Age of Men. He imposed his own imaginations into the night and created new beasts that roam the stars as constellations. With his eyes and imagination as his brush, he painted the cerulean dome like a canvas. As a Servant, he was honored with leading the manifestations of the stars itself.
    A woman observed a gallant observer of the stars and fell in love with his wisdom and glamour. Before he became a man of renown, she saw potential in him. She walked with him through the night itself and became his light in the dark, his little butterfly. Her support made him greater and she continued his work to guarantee the world would not forget him. After his death, she traversed the stars in the hope of meeting him again and became a guardian of the night sky.

    Their story is impossible and wonderful. Almost as if dictated by the celestial bodies that govern fate itself.
    But death parted them and they went different ways. To reunite seemed as insurmountable as the river of stars in heaven.
    Yet…

    "A promise was made, a vow uphelt. The heavens arranged the celestial bodies like seeds in a field. Now they yield fruits of fate, ready to be plucked. Harvest your love, my dear. Enjoy this summer night dream. Let your souls become one again. Leave the star cocoon. Wield your wings with pride."
    ...
    "Hevelius, I...I feel like I had to see you tonight..."
    The goddess she attuned to promised her they would meet again. And so they did, in a time of bleached peril.
    She could only manifest as a spirit inside the Master's dreams, but through her Divine Garments, a gift to denote her as worthy, she was able to manifest properly and embrace the man of her dreams.

    During Summer, wonders do happen, and their Saint Graphs united into one. But this…yes this is a wonder beyond comprehension.
    'Fate is written in the Stars', some say.
    The whole night sky is their love story.




    < ─ ⪻ ─ ⋘ ─ ⪡ - ⫷ ─ ♅ ─ ⫸ ─ ⪢ ─ ⋙ ─ ⪼ ─ >< ─ ⪻ ─ ⋘ ─ ⪡ ─ ⫷ ─ ♅ ─ ⫸ ─ ⪢ ─ ⋙ ─ ⪼ ─ >

    "Finally we meet in the waking world, Master."
    "Thank you for taking care of her, friend. But now it is time for us alone."

    ~ ♬ ~

    _B_I_N_D_E_R_
    Honeymoon under a Starlit Night

    = Elisabetha Hevelius & Johannes Hevelius =




    First Ascension
    Second Ascension
    Third Ascension
    Final Ascension

    Class
    Binder
    Alternative Classes
    Gatekeeper, MoonCancer
    True Name
    Elisabetha & Johannes Hevelius
    Aliases
    The Stars' and Moon's Wings
    Origin
    Poland, Historical Fact, Greek and Slavic Mythology
    Height/Weight
    173cm/66kg
    Alignment
    Lawful Good
    Attribute
    Sky

    STR END AGI MAN LCK
    D D D A A

    Likes
    the night, Vivaldi's cuisine, art
    Dislikes
    Threats to the Stars, hot days
    Talent
    fashion advice, drawing, measurements
    Natural Enemy
    Vivaldi, the performer down the street
    Armament
    chains, butterflies, astromancy, Astra Planeta
    Catalyst
    the alignment of the planets


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    Background

    Elisabetha's existence as a Servant is defined as an Artifical Bunrei. A being brought forth through an event called

    【 Divine Spirit Synchronization 】

    A phenomenon in which someone or something gains the aspects of a Divine Spirit through the sheer likeness of their essences.
    She connected with the Divine Butterfly Zorya, the Goddess of the Stars, Lights and Mystery of the Nights, and a pact was forged.
    But here the wonder starts again.
    Becoming one as a Servant created a chain reaction.

    When she reunited with her love, she defined her husband as the moon. In her thaumaturgical foundationt, it is the astronomical body closest to her physically and spiritually. This triggered the impossible.
    The man who brought the moon to the Earth, the gallant moth clad in silver, the man of juvenile mind and aging body, who fathered many stars together with his second wife. The one who commands the stars itself as his soldiers.
    Johannes Hevelius syncronized with the Slavic Moon God.

    Zorya belongs to the「 Triple Goddess 」Archetype. This type of goddess represents the life cycle of women.
    Her aspect as
    Morning Star
    Utrennyaya
    is depicted as a young maiden, while
    Evening Star
    Vechernyaya
    was imagined as a crone. Depending on the region,
    Midday Star
    Poludenyaya
    or
    Midnight Star
    Polunochnyaya
    are her prime manifestations as a great shieldmaiden or powerful sorceress.

    The Slavic Moon God had various names. Menulis, Meness, Myesyats, Khors
    From the remnants we could gather nowadays, he was depicted differently across many regions.
    Sometimes a lazy youth, sometimes a beautiful winged man associated with fecundity and sexuality, or a weakened and emaciated warrior. The Slavs believed that his power increased and decreased according to the lunar cycle.
    They are one of the few people in the world that view the moon as male and as such, he represents the life cycle of a man.
    The night itself is a depiction of the male and female soul as they both walk across space and time.
    And did you know?
    Male and female souls were symbolized as moths and butterflies.

    But we would not talk about the Hevelius couple if that was all.
    As a Gatekeeper, Elisabetha's enemies are MoonCancer's, the threats towards the stars. Seeing her husband in such a Class…she did what she had to do.
    Quickly moving this definition into a far corner of their Saint Graph by using her magecraft, of course. Even better, she decided to just blame Gustav Holst as the perpetrator of this Class. This musical fiend.
    But manifesting inside the world, all accomplishments as a Caster were absorbed and rendered useless inside their shared Noble Phantasm Prodromus Astronomiae.
    But what was left of their legends?
    As an Artificial Bunrei of Zorya, she was an aspect that fettered the star-devouring beast Simargl.
    As a man he forged a connection between the terrestrial and lunar texture and as MoonCancer, he holds the reins of the planets.
    Together, they bound the stars in chains and created new constellations.
    The date in which they reunited: June 24th 2022. A rare planetary conjunction of the five visible planets and the moon.

    And suddenly…they classified as a rare Extra Class.


    _B_I_N_D_E_R_
    The Hero of Chains

    The Class that wields literal or conceptual 'chains' as their weapon. They represent restriction and sealing but also connection.
    That which binds a human to another being are chains, connecting them in one way or another. But are they made of silk or thorns?
    The Binder is either one that bonded together that which was separate to the benefit of both or to the detriment of the other.
    Unifiers of people, faith, and wisdom use bonds as their weapon. The bonds forged between these aspects. They built bridges, made friends, and enriched the world.
    Wardens that incarcerated, enslaved, and sealed. They made enemies and made the world smaller and a worse place.
    This Class is used by those who either never wielded weapons properly or specifically used chains or chain-like weapons. They also fail to properly classify as other Classes such as Lancer or Rider.
    Their weapons are 'that which connects', rather than 'what they connected'.
    Due to that, their Parameter are often on the lower spectrum but they possess skills to raise their own abilities and lower their opponent's.

    Keywords: chaining, binding, connecting, restricting, sealing

    Class Skills

    Independent Action

    Unchained.
    The Binder took 'Independence' away, be it through subjugation or unification. They have various means to extend their autarky once summoned.

    Binding and Fettering

    Forged chains.
    They establish a network of connections with them as a focal point.
    Attacks from Binder create tethers that drain Magical Energy and lower Parameters from the opponent. This adds cumulatively but the lower the rank, the less range, and duration these links will have.
    The bounty is then shared with Binder's allies. Boons and Blessings are distributed among them.
    The higher the rank, the higher the efficiency, and the more Parameter can be stolen from opponents.

    The use of this skill may vary. Binders who search for allies are team players and are a valuable asset for alliances.
    They make support abilities more efficient but they barely benefit from their own draining effect because it is immediately shared with many. They rely on their team to become stronger.
    Binders who disregard mutually beneficial alliances may have no support from others but they benefit from combat alone and become more threatening with each successful hit.

    Additional Notes:
    Ranks of Binding and Fettering (BaF): E steals minor parameters like resistances, crit chances, these FGO things, etc. D steals one Parameter and each rank adds one more Parameter. Positive modifiers acknowledge when not only Parameter, but also the mentioned 'FGO things' are stolen too. Additional positive modifiers may display extra damage against certain kinds of enemies. A++ enters the realm of Counter Hero. What Parameters is up to the Binder's legend.

    Due to the Class design they can be seen as opposing Archers ('taking independence away'), Avengers ('the chainers vs. the enchained'), and (if you wish) Monster Class or Animalistic Servants in general. Perhaps in a certain way Casters too ('unifying fields of knowledge or sharing it may have decreased mystery').
    One can stretch the idea of 'making connections to the benefit of both or the detriment of the other' to make a Binder that made connection 'to the detriment of themselves'. Absolutely selfless people who destroyed themselves for the benefit of others. As such the class offers the exploration of wholesomeness and despair. Forming connections can make the world bigger or smaller.

    Candidates:

    Skirnir (who brought the fetter of Fenrir)
    Yuè Lǎo (god residing over the red string of fate)
    The Pallanides (Chains of Prometheus)
    Harmonia (her cursed necklace)
    James A. Johnston (First warden of Alcatraz), other wardens
    Captain of The White Lion (start of slavery in North America)
    Narmer/Menes (First Unifier of Egypt)
    Darwin (Alter) (Social Darwinism)
    Gregor Mendel (Merging Genetics and Botanics)
    St. Thomas Aquinas, Popes who are associated with the Great Chain of Being

    Possible Chain-like weapons:
    chains, ropes, whips, flails, hair, roots, veils, threads, strings, etc.

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    Class Skills

    Divine Spirit Synchronization EX
    A rare kind of Divinity. Binder is synchronized with two Slavic Deities and they control the Astra Planeta.
    Their standing is lower to that of proper Divine Spirits possessing a Divine Core, but higher than those who only possess the regular Divinity skill.
    With their limited authority they can control the Astra Planeta on their own without the help of Holst.

    Independent Action -
    This skill was replaced with Veil of Stars.

    Binding and Fettering C++
    The chains the Hevelius couple forged together with the lights of the moon and stars. Johannes connected the Moon's Texture with the Age of Men and together they have drawn lines of imagination in the night sky, connecting mere dots of light in darkness into celestial paintings that awe humanity still today. As Heroic Spirits they continued to create chains around the night. He holds the Astra Planeta on a leash and she holds the fetters to the Noctural Beast Simargl. As if blessed by the stars itself, this summer is special. The planets that the nanomachines represent align and form a chain, increasing the Astra Planeta's damage while serving a hero of the chain, just for this year.



    Despite their generous nature, Binder can hardly form proper beneficial connections with others, and if only temporarily. In her magecraft, she can form a bond attributed to one of the celestial objects she knew at the time. She is the Earth, her husband the Moon, the Master the Sun and the five planets (Venus, Jupiter, Saturn, Mars & Mercury) are reserved for the Astra Planeta.
    And besides…she only has eyes for him…
    Rank C+ denotes that each one can lower two Parameters. Both lower the opponent's Luck. She lowers Agility and he lowers Mana.
    The potency is increased against those that are classified as 'from the Stars' or 'Threats to the Stars'.


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    ═════════╣ Commitment ╠═════════
    Personal Skills

    Circling Soul A++
    The magecraft of Elisabetha. Her own style of Astromancy with Slavic Oneiromancy as foundation. Integrating Roman Astromancy into the Slavic conceptualization of the soul, she is able to manipulate her soul and under certain conditions those of others. If applied to someone that holds several souls in one body, she can force one of them to take control for a limited amount of time. This aspect was strengthened further in this Class Container. She constantly uses it on the Phantom fused with her husband. Exploiting her newfound independence from her Master, she could attribute the moon to her husband instead. This resulted in their new Class, the 'absence' of Gustav Holst, and the resonance of her husband with the Moon God.

    Veil of Stars B
    Reunited again. A gift from the goddess of the Stars Zorya. One of her aspects is similar to a Valkyrie, riding with the warriors into battle. With her, she carries a veil which protects her favored men. It denotes someone as a proper 'hero' and grants them blessings. In Elisabetha's case, it denotes her as a 'proper Heroic Spirit which can manifest in corporal form'.
    She is no longer trapped inside the Stellaburgum, communicating with the Master through dreams, and is allowed to live her Summer Dream with her husband. Still, she is contracted to the night and needs to stay connected to it. But as fate wills it, her dear love is right besides her. A composite Skill of Independent Action and Combination. As long as they are together, they are free.

    Fabric of the Night Appreciation C
    They saw art in the light of the stars and potential in humanity. They painted the night sky with new constellations and created a book of astronomical and artistic beauty. The works of Hevelius were precise and the illustrations stunning. His Pure Eyes of Astronomical Perception and her caring gaze at people create this personal Skill. A variation of Appreciation of Beauty that is targetted at works of astronomical origin. But with Elisabetha's own interests…also a good comprehension of fashion and style.
    She gained her nickname 'Papilio Minor', the little butterfly, because she was very concerned with her outfits. Her dresses are her colorful wings. Instead of using her keen eyes to find the potential in people like she did as a Gatekeeper, she uses it to evaluate what style would best suit them. This skill is also the reason why she can change her outfit daily. She redefines the gift of Zorya because it has the properties of both 'stars' and 'fabric'.
    This divine garment was not meant to be used like that…



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    ════════╣ Vows ╠════════
    Noble Phantasm



    Prodromus Astronomiae
    Phoenix from Nocturnal Ashes, A Stargazer's Life


    The anchor of their existence. It is their life's work and binds them together for eternity. Both use their own book and can invoke their own interpretations of magecraft. They conjure their ethereal chains from it and the physical chain that hangs from this book can extend.
    They are divided into chapters.

    Prodromus
    Keyhole to the Cosmos


    The first chapter consists of knowledge necessary for the skills Territory Creation and Item Construction. This allows them to create an observatory, astronomical items and mystic codes. This chapter sees no use, because both have exceptional vision and controlling the stars and planets themselves, even if just in miniature form, outperforms any mystic code they could create.

    Catalogus Stellarum
    Painting the Night with Starlight Dots


    The catalogue of stars added new constellations and hundreds of new stars. It is the basis for Johannes' Constellation Astromancy. Astral winds of blue erupt from the black pages of the book and sweep the enemy away. He is more proficient in it than Elisabetha, but she concentrates on her style that is more support oriented. Their spells increased in power due to their synchonizations.

    Uranographia, totum coelum stellatum
    Forging Fetters between the Stars


    The book of constellations. It consisted of the plates of over seventy constellations, including the twelve Binder found together. They hold the conceptual chains that bind 'random stars' into a constellation as their weapons. With this chapter they can manifest the sextant, the shield and the triangle as objects of solid star light and in theory the Mount Maenalus too. The Astra Planeta can take the shape of these animalistic constellations they have found like the lizard or little fox. They can also join and imitate the large Cerberus constellation. Previously, Johannes had problems giving them the right commands to form proper beasts, but with Elisabetha's experience as a teaching Gatekeeper, they understand much better. Other forms, inspired by the gods, are now in their repertoire as well.
    When not in combat, the nanomachines stay mostly on standby in their 'star lamps'. But once in a while, one part of them comes out and shapes into the preference of Elisabetha…which is fluffy owl, fitting for their usual cloud-like appearance. And they are nocturnal creatures just like the couple.
    She also renamed them on her own accord to Aušrinė and Vakarinė or short
    Venus
    Riné
    ,
    Jupiter
    Indraja
    ,
    Saturn
    Selija
    ,
    Mars
    Ziezdrė
    and
    Mercury
    Vaivora
    .



    The additional chapters in Johannes' MoonCancer manifestation are omitted as a Binder.
    Selenographia, sive Lunae descriptio: O' Moonlight, you are the Chain between Heaven and Earth is integrated into their Class Skill and second Noble Phantasm
    Without the proper presence of Gustav Holst, the chapter Stellae Errantes: Shining Lights, let us play the Night away is inaccessible but also unneeded.




    Stellaburgum Motyl Buyan
    Paradise among the Stars


    Through their unique circumstances, the inner world of Elisabetha, their home the Stellaburgum, merged with the starry abode of their deities, the mythical island of Buyan. It should be impossible for mages of their standing, but with the aid of the gods, both can manifest a reflection of this mythical island as a Reality Marble.

    Both open their Astronomiae and release the true names. From their books spring purple butterflies and constellations of light which block the view of the targets. When they open their eyes, they see it.
    The Paradise of the Night. The island in which the Zorya and her husband, the moon god, are said to reside. Because its also the place to which the sun goes to spend the night, the island itself is nothing short of a miniature texture of the Slavic Heaven. A beautiful place in the middle of an ocean that shines with each wave. The water itself is a mere reflection of the sea of stars that twinkles up above. Each flower glows with moonlight and the sand at the beach shines in a soothing pale hue. The wind on it feels alive and plays around each visitor.
    Each breeze flows and dances through the countless silvery chains hanging from the sky, making it seem as if the island rests underneath an enormous willow tree, playing a calming metallic sound like a gigantic wind play. On and between these chains flutter thousands of ethereal butterflies, illuminating the silver in a lavender tone.



    A supportive Noble Phantasm that grants Binder access to Magecraft that may be classified as stronger than that of the Age of Gods itself. In it, they have control over every star that rests in their celestial beds. It is a place "where the sun goes to rest" and lowers skills and parameters of Servants associated with the Sun. It makes them sleepy and without proper resistance, they may even fall asleep.
    Because the stars and winds are Binder's companions, magecraft utilizing them peaks for their allies while enemies see their effectiveness reduced tremendously because 'they will not follow their orders'.

    "It is like a dream come true, is it not?"
    "No, not yet."
    "Dear, what are you doing?"





    "Noble Phantasm Release.
    I make my dream come true. Fpr you.
    Will you please hold my hand, my dear…"


    (Noble Phantasm release after 3rd Ascension)

    Amabilia Papilio Minor
    Beloved Butterfly of the Night, Soar with Planets and Stars as your Wings


    Johannes' dream before his death was to finally find a constellation he could name after her - his beloved little butterfly. But he could never accomplish that feat.
    But now, in the Island of Stars, he can align the lights of the night. He makes full use out of the authority he has in this place.

    The Astra Planeta burst out of their 'star lamps' in form of countless white moths and together with the lavender butterflies of the isle, they carry the couple to the heavens. Behind them, the starry insects and the stars in the night sky align to form an enourmous pair of wings, casting a colorful shadow across the island. A silver moth wing behind him, and a lavender butterfly wing behind her.

    "My beloved, I…"

    Before their lips touch, the giant wings flap and send a colorful swarm of moths and butterflies across the field, sending a wave of Mana filled with their love for each other across the island. Allies receive large amounts of boons and blessings but at the cost of them being incapable of fighting for some rounds, because they are weaved inside a cocoon of light. In it, they dream of their life together. But as what will they emerge?




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    ══════════╣ Talks ╠══════════
    Quotes & Relationships

    "Our existence is truly a wonder. Who knows if we could've joined as one in a Class, have the planets not aligned in our favor."
    "Yes, it is all thanks to our cloudy friends here. Thank you."
    *happy mechanical humming noises*

    "Darling, you said they are machines, or am I mistaken? Then why do we see them inside the water all the time? Is it not dangerous for them?"
    "I am not sure, but even they deserve fun from time to time. In myths it was said they took the form of boys swimming and playing in Okeanos, the sea of stars. Perhaps it reminds them of home?"

    "And that is why I was summoned in Chaldea. To help our Italian friend over here. I could not have done it without Gustav. By the way…how is he doing?"
    "Oh…I…He is fine! Totally fine. He enjoys the time alone composing again. He sends his regards and that you should not worry about him!"
    "Ah, I am glad."
    ...
    "Hello? Can I see the sun please? The moon is great and all but it is summer! And sometimes I hear a terrifying growl…And how do I feed these butterflies? Elisabetha? Johannes?
    Oh man…I guess I read this book again…"

    *Gustav Holst is trapped inside the regular Stellaburgum.*


    Vivaldi-Hippotades:
    "Nope, absolutely not."
    "I fail to see the problem."
    "Me too, it does look fine in my opinion."
    "Shush, dear. You only wear this one outfit, even in another Class. What are you? A Welfare Servant? I am sorry Vivaldi, but I have to intervene here."
    *activates spell*
    "I sealed this outfit. You can not wear this as a Spiritron Dress now."
    "Fine."
    takes away her plate. "And I seal away the Gnocchi from the menu today."
    "No, wait, I was not done with them yet! Uuuughh Johannes, say something! He takes away my Italian Pieroggi!"
    "What did you just call them?!"
    "You did this to yourself, my love."



    Spiritron Dress sealed: Piccola Fragola
    Spiritron Dress added: Elisabetha's Secret
    Alcyone&Ceyx (Summer):
    "Okay you two, we got complains about loud and lewd noises coming from your room 169. Could you please keep your sexy time to a minimum during the day?"
    "We are 170."
    "And we don't do it in our room anymore. Thats too boring."
    "But our neighbors are..." *devilish smirk towards Elisabetha*

    *Her head turns red and begins smoking. Walks away, leaving a dust cloud behind her.*


    Gordolf - Sobieski:
    "Is he really our King?"
    "He is. He is a...very unique kind of Pseudo-Servant. But he is still the same at heart."
    "I can see that."

    *They observe how Shielder eats his 7th large plate of Spaghetti on another table.*

    Super Saver Twinkle Star:
    "And the one next to him is the mysterious boy you were talking about?"
    "Yes, he is said to be an embodiment of the wishes upon shooting stars. I tried many times to get something out of him, but to no avail. Only our King can understand him in a way. But only when it comes to food."

    They observe how Super Saver is stunned from eating half of the same large plate of Spaghetti Shielder is eating.
    "Waahaaaahaaa. You should know, you should not eat too much! What if someone needs to be rescued? Now you have to wait for an hour before going into the water.
    By the way, are you still eating the rest?"

    "Blehhh..."
    *passes out*

    Veles:
    "Young Lady. I heard you are an aspect of the goddess Zorya. Which one?"
    "All three of them, of course. Without her grace and this gift I would not be able to sit here."
    "Ah. I see. Please send her my regards. Excuse my intrusion. And please enjoy the toe-mah-toes in your dish. They were grown in my farm. I take my leave."



    ╣╠

    ═════════╣ Evanescence ╠═════════
    Craft Essence

    Fleeting Wings



    This Summer Dream...
    will not last.
    They know it. The color of their wings is fading. The night may become longer again, but the waltz of the planets drifts apart as the sound of cicadas grows silent.
    And with them, their connection.
    When this Summer ends, so will they part.
    A wonder, a miracle in the first place, brought them together. But even they can not bind the stars in the Age of Man together.
    So they dance in the night while their wings dim with the waning moon.
    Will they ever meet again?
    When the impossible happens, it henceforth is known as the possible. So let us hope they meet again.
    But...
    aren't they known for the impossible?


    ╣╠

    ═════════╣ Vacation ╠═════════
    Starlit Dinner

    "Welcome to Vivaldi's Italian Restaurant. I assume you wish to get the usual?"
    "Yes, please"
    both answer in unison.

    After they finish eating, Rider brings them a digestive drink to close their delicious meal.
    "Vivaldi, remember what you promised yesterday?"
    "And the day before?"
    "We won’t accept a no for an answer this time."

    Rider gives them a look.
    "...Fine. I'll be right back."
    They return with three fine wine glasses and a beautiful wine bottle.
    "The finest wine in my cellar. And like I
    was forced to promise
    ’promised’
    , I will enjoy it with you."

    "Haha, it was easier fighting than convincing you to dine with your customers."
    "A chef needs to be ready to cook a meal at any moment. I still had hope they would return, but now the entertainer has garnered all the attention. But when a customer enters the shop, I will return to the kitchen."
    "Hmm, I feel conflicted. I wish that your other customers returned, but I also wish to enjoy our time with a friend."

    Rider blushes but hides it while skillfully decanting the exquisite wine.
    ...
    "I do not understand it. Your dishes are delicious, and this small alley gives us a perfect Mediterranean atmosphere to enjoy our meal, but they seem to avoid you now. Were you mean to them?"
    "Not to them, no."

    Rider remembers the times he threw out new customers with unreasonable, un-Italian requests.
    "As Servants, eating is just a form of entertainment for them. If another event seems more fun to them, of course they choose to enjoy it instead."
    "Ah. You blame the young one at the beach, huh? But don’t worry! Out of loyalty, we will not fall under his spell! Especially not with their weird fashion trend nowadays."
    "Dear, I think we three are the only ones by now that do not participate in this strange trend."

    Rider’s mind wanders to the two upstairs, but decides mentioning them is pointless.
    “I just think it looks strange. It is subtle, but noticeable when you have an eye for how they dress.”
    As they talk, an elegant man in an expensive suit walks by.
    "Ah. Look, dear. Someone without this strange ▋▋▋▋ ▋▋▋▋▋▋▋to them. See? We are not the only ones here!"


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    ═════════╣ Notes ╠═════════Notes:

    Spiritron Dress: Summertime Butterfly


    Please appreciate how much effort went into the pictures :smolvinci:
    Special thanks to Wyvern, pinetree and Morg for giving me feedback on this new Class I came up with. I always liked users of chains as weapons but categorizing them in the class system always depended on their legend. So I added the twist of connections to it to actually narrow it down. Its not really a class you should force someone in, rather it would feel like you would force them into something else in a way. I hope to get some opinions on the class idea, even if it doesnt pop off like Lover. So far it feels like those who like Lover, dislike Binder and vice versa. I already have some other potential Binders in my list.

    I see them as great BBAAQ supporter with an NP that needs them to be unable to act for a bit, similar to that one Oberon skill.

    This sheet was pretty much done since around the time the actual conjunction happened. There is a third part, but you have to wait for them a bit longer, because they could change as things develop. And currently they develop slowly :isntitsad:
    Last edited by DelRey; December 29th, 2023 at 10:14 AM. Reason: Added new Spiritron Dress for Johannes, erased the Nelson Mandela Effect
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
    University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings

    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Tom Thumb: Cute sheet but why does he qualify for the prompt? Because of his first NP? Also I thought Lily was just the younger self of "our" Arturia, not one from a different timeline.
    Its a combination of things. First, he has Double Summon, a canonically rare personal skill few servants possess. Second, this particular Tom Thumb doesn't exist in timelines with a classic Artoria, specifically timelines where he isn't needed. This is also a timeline where Titania, or rather a queen of fairies, exists when she actually doesn't, or at least I think she doesn't. To summarize, this version of Tom Thumb need specific conditions to even exist and also manifests with Double Summon. So, that's unusual.

    By the way, I count the two Artoria as being from different timelines due to a. Classic Saber was being constantly trained, even in her dreams so there is literally no way Lily should be that amateurish and b. Arturia was raised as a boy and a knight by Ector due to king aura bullshit so no chance for feminity to seen there. Hence my conclusion adn personal view that the divergence of Lily's timeline being that she was not raised as a boy or knight but was still trained by Merlin, leading to her being the way she is.

    Edit: Wow I did not mean to write this much.
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    《 ~~ ★ ~~ ★ ~~ ★ ~~ 》

    Silence. Darkness.

    The only things they were all aware of now. The only things that still existed around them all.
    Their lives were short and cruel, none of their lives worth the breath of a storyteller or ink of a historian.

    But occasionally they saw over them, oh so seldom, a bright, hideous light.
    It swept through the darkness like blades until it reached the souls of the long-deceased heroes resting on their shoulders.

    Some of these long dead souls answered the light, and ascended to the hideous, glaring crack in the darkness.
    But they always came back. Always came back.
    Every time the disgusting light called upon them, the stench of blood and war became stronger on the souls.

    As time crawled by, they found that the world was slowly forgetting their deaths. Time corroded the memories of all their fates.
    Some of them were already used to being forgotten, others not.
    Nevertheless, hate and anger grew within them. With every bit that the world let them fall into oblivion, the thirst for revenge grew in all of their hearts.

    Then the hideous light appeared.

    They knew the light wasn't meant for them.

    But when they saw seven of the souls move towards the light, the anger boiled over in all of them.

    As one, they clawed and fought their way up. Up the thrones that rested on their backs, past the long dead legends that built their stories on their shoulders.
    Up toward the light. They reached out and grasped the seventh soul that ascended and devoured it.
    That spirit's legend would become forgotten in the world, and they would take its place.
    They would be part of the world once again, to remind them.
    Never forget.

    They reached the Light, finally…

    Once more unto the breach.



    《 ~~ ★ ~~ ★ ~~ ★ ~~ 》


    B E R S E R K E R
    Of Lost Souls

    《- Unknown Soldiers -》




    Class Berserker
    True Name ???
    Alias The Unknown Soldiers, Foundation of the Throne of Heroes
    Alternate Classes Beast
    Origin War
    Alignment Mad
    Armaments -
    Catalyst War
    Attribute Beast
    Height/Weight 249 cm / 8'2"
    188 kg / 141 lbs

    STR END AGI
    D EX D
    MAN LCK NP
    E E--- E

    《 ~~ ★ ~~ Class Skills ~~ ★ ~~ 》《 ~~ ★ ~~ Class Skills ~~ ★ ~~ 》
    Mad Enhancement EX
    The class skill of the Berserker class that drastically raises physical parameters in exchange for the Servant’s sanity and mental strength. In Berserker’s case, their collective hatred and rage seems to have entirely eroded away any and all reason any of them may have had. Even with the use of command seals, controlling Berserker is difficult and given the strength of their Mad Enhancement, they may actually be able to refuse commands given to them through Command Seals if the command would somehow anger them further or hinder them in achieving their goal at that time.

    Berserker’s Mad Enhancement can temporarily be stopped. When brought to a war grave, particularly those reserved to commemorate nameless soldiers, they calm down immensely. Sometimes, a single soul will take control over the physical form in this case and it even becomes possible to hold normal conversation with Berserker. It is unclear whether this is an involuntary response to being at such a location or if Berserker actively chooses to calm down.

    Apparently, even while not summoned, just existing as the foundation of the Throne of Heroes, Berserker’s rage at the
    Alaya
    World
    can grow. The more they are forgotten and the more war exists within the
    Alaya
    World
    the more their fury grows until it eventually becomes great enough to break free.
    Anti-Human Order (Dignity) B
    A skill typically possessed by the
    Beast
    Evils of the World
    , also known as Authority of the Beast. Berserker seems to intrinsically possess this skill, regardless of how they manifest, implying that they qualify for the position of Beast, given the high rank of the skill even while summoned in a different Class it could be possible that their primary position is in the Beast Class and that their manifestation in another class is an anomaly.

    The skill itself slowly erodes away humanity’s concept of dignity simply by being in the general vicinity of Berserker. People are driven to treat each other like animals and their hearts are directed towards violence and anger. Being physically far away from Berserker does not stop the effects of this skill either, it merely halts the gradual corruption which will resume where it had left off once the affected person gets close enough to Berserker again.

    Even Servants don’t seem to be immune to this ability, though powerful skills that shield against Mental Interference seem to be able to slow the erosion of human dignity. A high ranking enough skill could slow it down far enough that it becomes barely noticeable.


    《 ~~ ★ ~~ Personal Skills ~~ ★ ~~ 》《 ~~ ★ ~~ Personal Skills ~~ ★ ~~ 》
    Battle Continuation A
    A skill denoting a Servant’s ability to continue fighting despite receiving otherwise mortal wounds, also grants protection against such injuries.

    Berserker cannot comprehend the idea of stopping to fight. Regardless of any sustained injuries, they will keep fighting with complete reckless abandon. The only way to keep them from fighting on is to injure them to a point where it becomes physically impossible to continue the fight. Only once they were given such a decisive blow would they ever stop.
    Independent Manifestation EX
    Another Skill seemingly granted to Berserker due to their normal position as Beast. A special Skill that permits unsupported manifestation into reality, without necessity of energy cost or of summoning by a Master and grants immunity to instant death inducing and time-controlling attacks.

    Berserker specifically should not be able to manifest at all, especially not as part of a Holy Grail War. The only condition under which Berserker could feasibly manifest is as a Beast. However, due to their special position as the foundation of the Throne of Heroes, they are almost directly connected with the
    Alaya
    World
    and, should their rage grow strong enough they can, basically, force the
    Alaya
    World
    itself to materialise them. Because of the threat they pose on the
    Alaya
    World
    , they can, in essence, threaten and brute force it to give them a physical form of their choosing. The fact that they generally stand in opposition to the
    Alaya
    World
    , who wishes to forget Berserker, means that it can attempt to actively destroy it. This could possibly lead to the summoning of a Counter Guardian or Grand Servant, even within the constraints of a Holy Grail War.
    Knowledge of War C
    All the spirits within Berserker, despite their Mad Enhancement and rage still retain all the knowledge they had during their time and first and foremost, this knowledge included military tactics, first aid and any weapon or piece of war machinery ever used on the battlefield. As such, there is no weapon, no vehicle, in the water, on land, or in the sky, that Berserker is not able to use to its greatest effectiveness. The only exceptions to this may be Noble Phantasms, as they were often only used by a single hero and never passed through the hands of common foot soldiers. Additionally, this skill grants similar benefits to the Tactics skill, particularly a raised defence against Anti-Army Noble Phantasms.
    You Will know Our Names B
    A skill somewhat similar to the Avenger Class’ Oblivion Correction skill. It increases Berserker’s defensive parameters the more their enemy cannot, or refuses to acknowledge Berserker’s nature, all unknown soldiers that died during war. A sufficiently ignorant opponent may mean that Berserker could become nearly invulnerable to most conventional attacks.

    A proud king or a ruthless general, for example, who didn’t care much for the people he sent to die in battle, seeing them only as pieces on a chess board and because of that doesn’t acknowledge Berserker’s true nature would greatly empower Berserker. A regretful king, meanwhile, who mourns the loss of the warriors they sent to die on the battlefield would not grant Berserker this benefit.



    《 ~~ ★ ~~ Noble Phantasm ~~ ★ ~~ 》《 ~~ ★ ~~ Noble Phantasm ~~ ★ ~~ 》
    Charge into Battle one Last Time
    Only the Dead can see the End of War

    Anti-Unit (Self) | E

    A very simple Noble Phantasm that allows Berserker to duplicate their physical body. Splitting the innumerable souls within between the two bodies. Each body possesses the exact same parameters and abilities as the original body and is functionally the same. Should the original body be destroyed, the double created by this Noble Phantasm essentially becomes the original body for Berserker. Because of this simple effect that, in theory, does nothing more than clone to using Servant a single time, it has been assigned such a low rank.

    Because each body shares the exact same abilities, this means that each individual body also possesses this Noble Phantasm, meaning that each body is able to make an exact copy of itself as well. This would allow Berserker to create an entire army of themselves within a few seconds. As each body is also considered the primary body for Berserker, to actually fully defeat Berserker it would be necessary to destroy every single body created in this way without fail.

    Technically, there are two limits on this Noble Phantasm. The first being that each body created by it must be supplied at least a single of the souls that comprise Berserker to be able to function. However, as the number of souls that make up Berserker is indeterminable, when summoned the
    Alaya
    World
    itself assigns Berserker a number so close to infinity that making the distinction between them is unnecessary. While there is a theoretical limit, the amount of souls contained within Berserker is functionally infinite.

    The other limit placed on this Noble Phantasm is the amount of Mana available to Berserker. Typically, as a Beast, this restriction, much like the first, becomes functionally null. However, when summoned under a Master, they can only use this Noble Phantasm so long as their Master can supply them with Mana. Luckily, due to the low ranking of this Noble Phantasm, the amount of Mana consumed by its use is relatively low. The actual Mana required to fuel this Noble Phantasm in such a case becomes closer to the Mana required for the use of an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

    There the Heroes build their Legends
    With our Blood on their Hands
    On our Backs
    With our Blood

    Anti-World | A

    A passively active Noble Phantasm materialising due to Berserker being the literal foundation of the Throne of Heroes. They are the foundation of all the legends and stories that grant the Heroic Spirits their power and Mystery, it is by their grace and patience that these heroes are remembered and revered, and if they choose they can crumble that foundation, turn the legend built on into dust and its Mystery into nothing. A legend often loses its lustre when the bloody cost it asked stands before one’s eyes, that is what Berserker is.

    The Noble Phantasm continuously and quickly degrades any and all mysteries that come into contact with Berserker. Robbing other Servants in particular of the very source of their strength. Because of this, Berserker is essentially invincible to most modern Magecraft, as most ordinary Magecraft would have its Mystery degraded into nothing before it could have the chance of even reaching Berserker. Only some of the most powerful Magecraft would even have a chance of affecting Berserker.

    As the Foundation of the Throne of Heroes, Berserker is directly tied to the
    Alaya
    World
    itself and through sheer force of will and rage is able to brute force it to do what they command. This includes an ability this Noble Phantasm can attain when its True Name is released. Normally, doing so would simply lead to the Mystery degradation effect being supercharged for a brief time. However, Berserker can also channel the power of the Noble Phantasm into an attack, that, if the Mystery of the target is sufficiently weakened could lead to Berserker being able to brute force the
    Alaya
    World
    into expelling the Spirit from the Throne of Heroes, making them a Phantom. Possibly permanently barring that particular Spirit from ever being summoned as a Heroic Spirit again, unless they are somehow restored to the Throne of Heroes. However, doing so requires an inredible amount of Mana, making it risky and possibly even impossible to use when Berserker is summoned by a Master or otherwise tied to a finite Mana source. As a Beast, this would likely not be a problem.

    The classification of Anti-World does not describe the effective range of Berserker's Mystery eroding ability. Rather, it is given to this Noble Phantasm due to its ability to make the
    Alaya
    World
    itself bend to Berserker's wishes.



    《 ~~ ★ ~~ Background ~~ ★ ~~ 》《 ~~ ★ ~~ Background ~~ ★ ~~ 》
    The Throne of Heroes. The place outside the normal flow of time, where the souls of dead legendary Heroic Spirits lie in wait until the time of their summoning. At the foot of the Throne of Heroes lies its Foundation. Berserker. The souls of every soldier whose name has ever and will ever be forgotten is what quite literally makes up the Foundation of the Throne of Heroes.

    Technically Berserker is never allowed to be summoned, as the souls from the Foundation of the Throne of Heroes are not Heroic Spirits, not even Phantoms. Their legends are so weak that, even if multiples of them were to bind together, a Servant would not manifest.

    However, because they are the Foundation of the Throne of Heroes, they are tied directly to the World itself. With all their united rage and hatred, they can brute force the
    Alaya
    World
    to grant them form. To allow them to be summoned. Normally, they would manifest as a Beast. Soldiers deeply loving humanity to the point that they would lay their lives down a second time for it, but so blinded by rage at being forgotten that they would destroy humanity as a reminder.

    Here, for an unknown reason, they chose to manifest as a Berserker Servant. Maybe, if only, to prevent the summoning of a Counter Guardian or Grand Servant to oppose them, so that they may remind the
    Alaya
    World
    without hindrance.


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    Likes
    "The likes of Berserker are difficult to define, since they are an innumerable amount of souls wrapped into one being. What they like can change from moment to moment. There is no one thing that Berserker truly seems to enjoy, some parts of them always seem to reject the things the other parts like."

    Dislikes
    "Similar to their likes, defining Berserker’s dislikes is practically impossible. It may be expected that they dislike war and fighting, but while that is true for some parts of Berserker, many others revel in the fight and thoroughly enjoy war."

    Wish for the Grail
    "Seemingly the only thing that Berserker can agree on with themselves. They all seem to share the one wish that they are never forgotten and that the memories of their nameless graves will forever weigh heavy on the hearts and minds of any who would even consider starting war for whichever reason."


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    War Hero Servants
    "Berserker seems to take an unsurprisingly strong dislike to them. Though, depending on who Berserker is presented with, certain parts of them respond positively to the Heroic Spirit before them, likely because they were comrades in life."
    Iskandar
    "Berserker has a strange reaction to Iskandar. A large part of them react positively, another reacts incredibly badly to his presence. They are stuck somewhere between wanting to celebrate and kill Rider."
    Gilgamesh
    "Berserker seems to be generally opposed to him. Though, strangely, despite at least some of Berserker very likely being familiar with Gilgamesh, they are entirely unintimidated, even defiant to him."
    "Kilroy"
    "They seem irritated by him, if slightly humoured. They seem to feel he should be one of them, yet he isn’t. It angers Berserker."
    Soviet Space Programme
    "It seems some small parts of Berserker are somewhat afraid of Voyager. The rest however seems to calm slightly in their presence. It would seem that the majority of Berserker take a liking to dogs."
    Adolf Hitler
    "The largest part of Berserker has a volatile reaction to his presence, they wish nothing more than to destroy him the second they lay their eyes on him. Disturbingly, a small part of Berserker still seems loyal to him. It is likely best to keep the two separated."



    Author's Note
    I return after a two week vacation and an unknown amount of time I spent working on this sheet. A bit different from what I normally do, given that there is not that much personality to turn into quotes in the sheet. Or rather, there are so many personalities that we're experiencing stack overflow and are looping back around to zero.

    After this the word "World" has lost all meaning to me for the time being.

    The general idea for this Servant has been hanging around in my head for a while. I figured this would be a fine place for them.


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    Berserker: This is the "nameless" sheet to end all "nameless" sheets. You did a damn good job with this one.

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    As a foreword, I just wanna say that this statement is not only limited to these 4, but extends to all the other servants created thus far for this month’s contest. Also, appologies if this is poorly written, I’m a few drinks deep in Margaritaville rn and working on mobile.

    I’m afraid I can’t say if it’s the natural creativity fucking gushing from y’all, the necessity to fulfill the prompt with the most wild, beautifully realized insane ideas for funky servants out there, but man, this is some GOOD FUCKIN SHIT right here. I know that this is probably just me cumming over nothing because it’s first contest for me or whatever, but fuck do y’all all make good shit. It’s honestly got me wishing there was like a fuckin really good Territory creation fucker who could just make a world for these shits to adventure into and do whatever or simthing. If itstill seems like a good idea tomorrow morning, I’m doing fanart of em when I get home. Love you fuckers

    Updated Hassan’s reactions too, sorry if the Arabic is fucked, I used google translate on stuck, should be ok. It’s a prayer for the dead that I think is part of funeral tradition.

    Mondegreen/Curse of Babel: Babel’s one of those cool-ass stories that I adore seeing played with in media, and this is no exception. Kinda agree with Bne and Del on the maybe it should be a person thing, but since it’s based on something that sources it’s own identity through human thinking, I think it kinda fucks as an entity. Also, big fuckoff spear? I wanna see it clash with Lartoria rongomyniad, shits sick.

    Tom Thumb: Le scrimblo has arrived. The dual class thing is I’m guessing a fan servant thing unless it’s from extra since I haven’t read those, but I don’t mind it as an excuse for contest classification because I like the fucjer. He’s a funny little guy and I fuck with that, y’know? I like his shrink powers, very Oberon, which works since they’re Arthurian fairies. Funny little midget

    Elisabetha and Johannes Hevelius:
    Gonna have to read all this again in the morning, because shit that’s a fucklosd of words and links and shit. But from what I can tell, a couple who decided the constellations ave become a special class to control the stars and eat Italian food? Fuuuuuuck yes brother, that’s cute as shit. I really really like how they’re being cute all across the sheet and working together to demonstrate powers and skills and everything, it’s just kinda fuckin perfect. In the create a servant thread, there was the lady from the desert who had the big white celestial behemoth thing, dunno if she was yours, but it’s that same sorts thing that just has me kinda marveling. Like, I think I compared it to legend of the colossus or sky children of the light, but this is the same sorta lovely energy to it, despite, them no fitting that colossus/sky vibe in itself. Need these bitches to have a bitching star house or something, I want the best for them

    Unknown Soldier: my man HUNK from resident evil I love him so much. Idk if that’s the actual fc but it looks like it so fuck yeah, I’m HUNKin out baby. But anyway this shits mad cool- turbo pissed spite juggernaut from the throne itself? That goes hard dude. I can’t say as much as the other ones but idk what it is, I just like that guys are sorta unknowable and unstoppable, with the caveat of humanity when at a grave. Shits kino brother.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vididii View Post
    Tom Thumb: Le scrimblo has arrived. The dual class thing is I’m guessing a fan servant thing unless it’s from extra since I haven’t read those, but I don’t mind it as an excuse for contest classification because I like the fucjer. He’s a funny little guy and I fuck with that, y’know? I like his shrink powers, very Oberon, which works since they’re Arthurian fairies. Funny little midget

    Double Summon
    is from Semiramis in Apocrypha, actually, letting her multi-Class as Caster and Assassin.

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    Elisabetha and Johannes Hevelius-Well guess who's having diabetes again? A hell of a oc class and a hell of a servant that has combined so many things wonderfully. Someone should write a story with them.
    Unknown Soldier- A common concept which makes it execution even better as it's very good no matter how you look at it. The mood of the sheet is very well set.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vididii View Post
    Mondegreen/Curse of Babel
    Thanks for your comment dude! I get what u mean too, every contest so far I've been absolutely amazed by the incredible sheets everyone's been making!

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    Couldnt properly comment on all the entries
    sutaa, please stay and continue your work here. Your style is refreshing and unique, I wish to see more of what you do.
    Nuclear shows again that he has the skill to just be wacky in a canon-worthy sense that remains unsurpassed.
    Reploid dares to make some deep lore about alaya? The last dude who tried something like that won, so be warned.

    16 entries so far, several more were already announced. What bangers lie in waiting?
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    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Sometimes two souls meet and their fates intertwine



    Listen now to the tale of a soul whose fate reached an unnatural conclusion
    Greetings master. Servant Caster has answered your call. So please, be nice alright?... Alright, alright fine. Servant Caster, true name Xiaoqing... sorry for lyin' but it's weird wak'in up in your friends body... tsk.



    Sources
    EGGS, Typemoon.fandom.com. Weyde, anime-pictures.net.


    True Name
    Bai SuzhenXiaoqing

    Class
    Caster

    Origin
    Chinese Mythology

    Alignment
    Lawful-Good

    Likes
    Being Youthful, Her Sister, Happy Families, Dumplings, Mice, Writing, Fantasy Literature, Chinese Mythology, Archaeology, Reading Manga

    Dislikes
    Turtles, Unfaithful Spouses, Disfunctional or Unhappy Families, Chocolate, Social Media, Chinese Censorship

    Talents
    TaoismTaosim and Writing

    Natural Enemy
    Fahai

    Other Classes
    Assassin, Pretender, Berserker

    Catalyst
    Original Manuscript of 'Legend of the White Snake'

    Armaments
    Naga Claws (D-rank)
    Taoism (A-rank)


    Parameters

    Str: D End: D Agi: C
    Mna: B Lck: B NP: A+


    Lore

    Bai Suzhen is a famous tale within china. It covers the love story of Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen, one a mortal man who gained immortality thanks to the actions of the other and they are a naga who was an oddity amongst their kind and a taoist genius. Their meeting was happenstance and coincidental but their relationship blossomed from distant friends to lovers and eventually husband and wife.

    Yet it was not all happiness. They faced a serious trial in their relationship in the form of a jealous turtle named Fahai. He desired Bai Suzhen for himself initially but also found her leap in power from spilled immortality pills to be insulting. He trained for years and became a thorn in Suzhen's side for a time, before escalating to becoming antagonistic outright. He arranged for Xu Xian to accidentally reveal Bai Suzhen's real form, dying from the shock and when that was foiled by the alchemist talents Bai hid he kidnapped the now twice immortal Xu Xian and refused to let Bai see him.

    While she succeeded in saving Xu Xian and escape she killed many innocent people in the process from the floods she caused with her taoism. She swore off the power which led to her later capture by Fahai once more. Her sister, Xiaoqing, tried to rescue her but failed as her power wasn't enough to combat Fahai. So she retreated for twenty years, raised Bai's son, Xu Mengjiao in her absence, and once he was a top scholar traveled to rescue Bai so she could be in time for the celebration of this event.

    She succeeded as in the interim years Fahai had done no training. He focused instead on securing Bai and preventing her escape from the Leifong Pagoda. So when Xiaoqing appeared and challenged him his loss was inevitable. To escape he turned into a worm and hide in the stomach of a crab, but became trapped. Xiaoqing escorted Bai to Xu Xian who, after the ceremony, left the world with him and their son. Xiaoqing's own fate is unknown

    Yet that is not the entire, true story. In truth just as Fahai discovered a work-around for Xu Xian's immortality once he found a way around Bai Suzhen's. She does not know how precisely he did it but Fahai, towards the end, found a way to kill Bai Suzhen and then captured her soul inside himself as fuel. Enraged she utilize her taoist artes and killed Fahai, burning his soul as much as possible.

    However unlike Bai who was a Taoist genius she could not undo what Fahai had done completely. She could free Bai's soul but she could not return her to life. All she could do was do this and return with the sorrowful news that Bai was no long among the living. She isn't sure how but she is confident that Xu Xian and his son, Xu Mengjiao, managed to reach wherever Bai's soul went after being released.

    As penance for her inability to rescue her friend she continued to study Taoism and wrote their stories and spread it. While she is unhappy with how it has been adopted in modern times, specifically attempts to cast Fahai in a more sympathetic light, she is simply happy that modern china still remembers her dearest elder sister.

    Yet this raises an interesting question. The circumstance of her summoning. Despite carrying and operating under the identity of Xiaoqing the saint graph belongs to Bai Suzhen. Xiaoqing swears that for some reason the throne summoned her inside her sisters body for some reason. However it is unclear if that is precisely the truth.
    .


    Class Skills

    Territory Creation: C

    A skill granted to those within the Caster class containers. As a Tao Alchemist she naturally needs a workshop, which she can create efficiently and quickly utilizing this skill. She was regarded as a genius according to writings left by Xu Mengjiao and Xiaoqing and so has this skill at a high rank. The only thing holding back its power is that she was restricted for twenty years from studying Taoism or Alchemy and couldn't convert even a part of the Leifang Pagoda, lowering the quality of this skill by several degrees.

    Even so it sufficient to create a workshop. To be a proper workshop for her she must utilize a cave that has a natural leyline running near or within it. Without these she can only make a somewhat functional workshop. With a proper workshop she can utilize this skill as though it were B-rank though some of the defenses and mana collection will be somewhat degraded due to the rank of this skill not being the rank required for a proper workshop.
    Despite the difference in skill both had similar workplace practices. They generally formed shabby workshops in caves and barely cleaned them. At least when they practiced solo. When Bai Suzhen fell in love with Xu Xian and he discovered her true identity he was invited to her workshop and with his help cleaned it up. From then on Xu Xian helped her maintain the workshop. Meanwhile hers stayed in squalor.

    To this day her workshops are messy affairs. She prefers caves but will take any underground space. She will utilize talismans for practically every function even when inappropriate. She will set magical traps haphazardly and rather than build near a leyline or draw one to her workshop she will simply utilize whatever mana the area has for her needs and using other methods such as draining from humans if that is insufficient.

    As a note she will not ever fully a drain a human of their Od. At worst she will weaken their immune system and ensure a bad nights sleep with how much she is willing to drain.


    Item Construction: BC

    A skill normally held by caster servants, she is no exception. As the one who created immortality pills to revive Xu Xian after he died in spite of his immortality she has this skill at a fairly high rank. This skill allows her to attempt to remake any of her famous mythological items that she made or simply create items for rituals or mystic codes.

    At her rank she cannot recreate her famous immortality pill but she can certainly create a pill that highly enhances ones natural healing processes or even outright heal injuries. Further the mystic codes she makes can rival some famous items such as the Zhaoyao Jing a mirror that could reveal the true form of demonic entities reflected in it as well as the Wuhuo Qilingshan which was a fan that could make anyone flapped at by it burst into flames.
    Despite her notable talent in Taoism she has no mythical talent in the creation of items. Bai Suzhen certainly made the legendary pills of immortality for Xu Xian and her but she failed when she tried the same thing. What preserves her talent outside the caster class container is her success as a writer and taoist. She has enough skill to be considered Bai's equal through sheer practice and study while her writing career has sustained her existence for centuries after the death of her friend and loss of contact with Xu Xian and Xu Mengjing.

    At her rank she can make minor mystic codes and Tao Talismans. Generally she will use simple spells for them but sometimes she will use them to set up for her noble phantasm so all she needs is a true name release. Her most common tactic is to manipulate the battlefield with Tao magecraft and misguide her enemies on her true strength and then use her naga powers to overwhelm them in physical combat. When she acts as Bai Suzhen she will mask the lacking quality of her mystic codes with taoism and sleight of hand.

    She also uses this skill to expedite her own writing career for her own benefit.



    Personal Skills

    ShapeshiftImmortal Form of the Naga: A

    A skill held famous heroes known for altering their form for the sake of their journey or cause, as well as some species of phantasmal beasts in order to accomplish some task. While naga are not known for their extensive history of doing such things Bai Suzhen is famous as being known as 'the Great White Snake' despite her completely human appearance, only once being exposed due to a particular wine having magical properties that forcibly reverted her form.

    At her rank she cannot reclaim her Great White Snake body but she can instead induce alterations in her body to reflect her earlier naga self. She can form naga claws which act as D-rank armaments as well as manipulating her parameters. In general she can only raise one parameter by 2 ranks or two parameters by 1 rank. She can manipulate further than this by lowering other parameters on a 1-1 ratio.
    As the green snake that called itself Bai Suzhen's elder sister, she naturally held similar origins. She too was a naga that could disguise itself as a snake or could gain a humanoid form at will. Even after the tales end she apparently lived on in various disguises throughout the era's as a writer even into the modern age because rather than one pill Bai made a batch and gave her some after granting Xu Xian not only his life but his immortality back. She, naturally, ate them and gained a form of immortality as well.

    This skill, induced by those pills, grant a series of abilities. Firstly she can shapeshift between her snake, naga, and human forms. She can do half forms too. Half-forms gain a rank in either Strength, Endurance, or Agility while her naga form gains a rank in all three but can only maintain it for a maximum of 10 minutes before pulling on her masters reserves.

    However while in her Naga Form she maintains a high level of durability. Injuries are incapable of slowing her down and effects that would alter her form are rejected outright, finding it impossible. She even heals over time so long as she can maintain a connection to the land.

    In her human form she has these benefits to an extent. Minor injuries or even serious injuries do not overall impact her performance and she has a low level of regeneration to her. Additionally she has resistance to her form being manipulated against her will.

    At all times however this skill imparts a low level of divinity. Not enough to impact her capabilities but enough to grant resistance or weakness where divinity is a factor in such things (such as determining if anti-divinity properties).


    Taoist Techniques: A+

    Described as a genius Taoist, Bai Suzhen had incredible natural talent in the mystic art of Taoism, a branch of asian magecraft. In particular she could not only shapeshift but she could utilize the ultimate water elemental spell and what was used to flood the Jinshan Temple and killed so many innocent people. It also aids in allowing her to utilize noble phantasms related to Taoism if she recreates them or finds them.

    At her particular rank in addition to being able to understand and utilize Taoist implements she can also utilize most of its spells. While a few, such as the Great Fire spell, are beyond her she has access from single-action spells all the way to greater rituals or higher thaumaturgy. Indeed only the strongest spells, save the flood spell, are outside her reach.
    Xiaoqing is no natural genius. Rather she is simply one who has studied all her life to reach an equivalent level to Bai Suzhen and even in some cases surpassed. While against most foes she's equivalent to Bai Suzhen in talent she'll reveal her true potential in the face of foes she truly despises; those that adorn themselves with turtle iconography. As she was traumatized by Fahai's harrassment of her and her sister and his eventual murder of the latter she becomes stressed by their appearance and tries to ignore it if possible. If she must fight it she tries a little harder than she normally would, a bit past her normal limits.

    At her rank she has access to Tao spells from single-action up to greater ritual or high thaumaturgy. Normally she utilizes wind and fire spells of all types but is capable of some three-verse water spells. However her most common spell involves forming snakes out of the elements to attack. When faced by enemies adorned by turtle iconography or are turtle-adajecent her spells increase by a rank when used against them.


    Mystic Eyes of the Flowing River: B

    A type of mystic eye that has a somewhat straightforward effect despite its name. Rather it can be called a variation of Clairvoyance. While her legend lacks anecdotes regarding it she did have it in life. She keeps it at a high rank despite lacking mythological anecdotes as she notes most Naga did have Clairvoyance to an extent but was considered common knowledge in the day.

    Her eyes, similar to Clairvoyance, allow her to gaze somewhat into the future. According to her it is a higher grade Clairvoyance as not only does she look into the future somewhat she see's the most likely possibility that include factors she herself is unaware of. The best example she gives is if she were seeing her loss to caster and then caster was taken out by saber her mystic eyes would cease to show this future outright as Caster is no longer present.

    Rather it would show only if he survived. Likewise if saber was convinced mid-conversation that an alliance was not for the best and her swift death was for the better her mystic eyes would alert her at precisely that moment.
    A skill whose effects are different than described when she pretended to be Bai Suzhen. While it can gaze into the future as she described the fact of the matter is they are so precise only because they instead act in a way akin to a certain magic with alternative worlds but instead with the timeline she inhabits.

    When she gazes into the future whatever she see's is what occurs. Causality is changed and attempts to change it with lower-ranked skills fail completely. Skills with a higher rank or noble phantasms are entitled to a luck check but if these occur then any other set event is also dismantled and no longer protected; she must utilize this skill again to reset them.

    A favorite tactic of hers is to utilize them before a battle against a fate-defying heroic spirit and then goad them into utilizing said skills or noble phantasms in order to break the skill and grant her a chance to turn the tides without them, then use them to cement her victory utilizing her skills to hide her strategy.

    According to her these are the first of this kind of mystic eye barring users who have hide theirs. Essentially, according to her, these mystic eyes came about as a result of a fusion of her natural Clairvoyance and the Mystic Eyes her friend had. She isn't sure if this is better or worse than either of their natural mystic eyes.



    Personality

    Bai Suzhen is a very bright individual. Despite her life she doesn't regret a moment and exists now out of mere curiosity. She has few wishes for the grail but none involve incarnating or changing the past. At most she simply desires to know what became of Xiaoqing who stayed behind. Otherwise she will seek out literature about China and learn how the country developed after her days as a citizen.

    In spite of her nature as a scholar and magus she acts surprisingly airheaded. She'll often lose herself in conversation, changing topics rapidly. She'll space out quite often. She gets lost in books very easily. She can even fall asleep at the drop of a hat. However this changes when she is in battle. Her entire personality alters from an airheaded scholar into a cold assassin.

    She will analyze her opponent, engaging them in close combat relying on alterations from her Shapeshift skill as to throw them off, and then develop countermeasures with her Taoism. If these fail she'll simply adapt her strategy to analyze further and develop new techniques with her Taoism. If needed she will retreat to develop tools to fight them.

    When it comes to conversation she tends to prefer topics that stimulate the mind and avoids topics such as politics, ethics, or science. However one topic she cannot help but indulge in is conversations regarding relationships. Whether between siblings, family, or lovers she will become interested in her masters love life and help them improve it. If she finds a relationship as healthy rather than interfere directly she will simply offer small gifts to aid their master in the case of surprise bumps in the relationship and remain hands off.

    Her nature, in this regards, is surprising energetic as she seems to adore couples who are happy. Seeing couples who are unhappy causes her to seek ways to fix the relationship and causes her to become meddlesome and troublesome to control. Despite this attitude she takes little offense when, inevitably, a command spell is used to stop her from getting involved or in the worst case to stop playing matchmaker.
    Xiaoqing acts quite differently from Bai Suzhen. Whereas Bai Suzhen is a, in her words, airheaded, naive, trusting, foolish creature she is the opposite. She is focused, jaded, cold, and calculating. Yet when she says the former she says it with compassion and admiration. As if, while being said insultingly, she admires those qualities of Bai Suzhen. However when she describes her own characteristics she says it with disdain. Said as if she is saying her negative qualities and leaving out any positive.

    Yet the truth is she carries guilt over her failure to save Bai which has led to her admiring even the negative aspects of Bai while being unable to see her own good qualities. For this reason when summoned in this way she takes on the persona of 'Bai Suzhen' to correct the mistake of her summoning in Bai Suzhen's saint graph which she always believes is her fault somehow. However she has good qualities that she believes are good qualities... she simply denies them out of a sense of guilt and not having the right to acknowledge them.

    She is a creative person capable of seeing the silver lining of any situation even total defeat. She also is capable off weaving a tale out of even mundane, everyday occurences. In particular she loves writing forbidden romance stories but if particularly inspired can write tragedies, comedies, and even occassionally fantasies.

    She considers her story regarding her friend to be her best work but fully admits the ending is fabricated. She had tried to write it as what modern people would call an obituary but in her time would have been a memoir. However she couldn't bring herself to so she wrote what she wished had happened.

    That, in fact, is her wish for the grail. She wishes that she had arrived in time to save Bai Suzhen. That she hadn't been late by years. That, in essence, the fiction she wrote becomes the reality of what happened. In this another trait shows itself. That she has a level of optimism that even her guilt and jadedness cannot snuff out.

    Specifically she truely believes that she can win the grail and that her wish will come true with it. Even if she knows it is not the actual holy grail her optimism in the possibility does not diminish. Even with the knowledge that grails are merely bundles of mana she feels confident that her wish can come true if she wins.

    Once she forgives herself her true personality shines through. Her cold, calculating, focused nature remains but she is openly optimistic and creative. She allows herself to imagine things and writes them down and also is much more friendly than normal. If the master isn't careful she may even begin to develop feelings.



    Interactions

    James J. Kilroy
    ... Eh? Wait you actually... nevermind. Sorry. It's nothing. I'll just be on my way!A legendary symbol given flesh. You were quite the inspiration for me you know. I can give you a copy of that book if you like. I'll even discount it!

    Extinction
    Ahhh! Help me, master extinction's finally come for my species!!!What a terrifying concept. A concept as a servant rather than something else... I'll just steer clear of it...

    William Henry Harrison
    It's alright. You did your best. A shame fate intervened but no mortal can truly overturn fate... yes... very few in truth can do thatA living curse. How interesting. Still to think you'd target me. No... I'm not a ruler so you want something else, huh?

    Backehexe Mutter
    Ehhhh? A witch? Is that a kind of magus? Oh hey look she's feeding kids candy! She must like kids!If it wasn't for your self-awareness I'd be worried but in this form, I know there's no need to worry. Still... I'm keeping an eye out. Just in case.

    Snow Queen's Tale
    .... So wait... there are couples in there...? Are they happy?What a fascinating servant you are. A living complex... or perhaps collective? Hard to tell. Regardless... hope things go well for ya

    Arion
    ... Soooooo... uhhhhh... hmmmmm... I'm just gonna goooooo. My work here is... not needed?... Man I still dunno what to think about you. What kinda servant demands it be ridden by its master?

    Yuri
    Huh. Another interesting bundle of people. You're quite interesting with your talk of space!Huh... space. What a fascinating concept. If only we'd been born later, huh?

    Hachiko-Xolotl
    Ahhhh what an adorable doggie! Here boy, here bo-.... eh? Why are you staring at me like that? Did I say somethng wrong?... So no hard feelings about that whole thing right? I was just play'in the character... so we're good, right?

    O-O-O
    W-wait so you're... the sky itself!?... huh. The view must be great!Man even when I'm not pretending to be her I can't help but be amazed... seriously, being able to talk is great inspiration!

    Michelangelo Buonarroti
    A sculptor? What a rare talent! Could you do me sometime?... Huh? A statue...? oh god that's right while I was... fine let me dress in something nicer. I think i have a better dress somewhere.

    Hassan of the Blessed Hands
    My what a unique fighting style! I wonder if I could learn a thing or two from it...?I'm convinced. The throne is screwing with me. First a meme, then a horse, and now this. Nope. This never was a serious grail war. I'm convinced there isn't even a grail!

    Epicurus Alter
    Oh my what an interesting man! I wonder how his romantic life is!... Nope. Not getting involved. I've written this story before. Nuh-uh. Nope. I'm not falling for it. No. Not at all.

    Lady Mondgreen
    Oh... my... what an... adorable? servant you are!... Hope you keep your spirits up!Tsk! Like hell I'll let you do as you please! Language is the one thing keeping us humans sane!

    Tom Thumb
    My what an adorable little guy! and so funny too!.... hey, wait is...that my brush? Get back here you little punk!

    Elisabetha & Johannes Hevelius
    Awwwww what an adorable couple! You remind me so much of me and Xu Xian!... hmmm. Excuse me... *sigh*... Congrats on your summoning, you two... but... uhh... nevermind.

    Nameless Soldiers

    Nameless Soldiers? Those are a thing? Then again I guess we can't complain...... That's just depressing. No one wrote about you guys? Seriously? Not one person? That's such... tsk. Sorry. I find unwritten stories to be... painful. I can't imagine what I would do if she were in there with you. That said... sorry if that offends you.


    Noble Phantasm

    I have trained in Taoism for over a thousand years and uncovered over a thousand secrets. This is the culmination, the sublimination of my life. Be revealed...
    Dà Báishé de wǔ gè dà MìmìQīng shé Jiějiě de wǔ gè dà Mìmì


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    A noble phantasm that is a crystallization of the ultimate spells held by Bai SuzhenXiaoqing. Developed after years of practicing and training in Taoism as both a way of life and a system of magecraft. Covering the five elements each one is a devastating attack that cannot be underestimated by an enemy. Without a true name release they are simply A+ ranked spells. When this noble phantasms true name is spoken along with the spell's name its true effects are released onto the enemy.

    The first spell is a wood-elemental spell and it involves the spontaneous summoning of seemingly sentient tree golems. These golems become familiars of hers and follow her orders akin to how a servant obeys a master. Despite not being heroic spirits they are still fairy-class entities and so even one is capable of stalling a low-class servant. So long as she doesn't hold back she can summon and command up to three for a full hour. Further to cast the spell she need only seeds and a leyline, making it her strongest spell. The spells name is Huo Senlin.

    The second spell is a simple if effective spell. It gathers fire into a compressed ball to act as a replication and this ball is then fired at an enemy. Due to lacking proper training while this spell is strong a high enough magic resistance can indeed mitigate the damage this spell can deal. Especially if the enemy is immune to fire damage. After all it was not she that acquired True Fire Samadhi but Xiaoqing. Even so if it does any damage the burns resist attempts by others to heal it. Even a servants natural healing skill will be resisted. It's name is Taiyang Huo.True Fire Samadhi. The english translation of this spell at least. Used famously in the journey to the west, though the tale simply revealed the true name of this ancient taoist secret as well as its effects. It replicates the same spell she uses when pretending to be Bai Suzhen with a singular difference; by using the proper name she unleashes the true effect, that the fires, once caught, cannot be quenched. Only a tao master from her time would know as the famous tale failed to mention the method to quench the fires that consume those struck by this spell. It's actual name is Zhen Huo.

    The third spell is an earth elemental spell is highly complex but ultimately one of her strongest spells. It is a bounded field that requires its full ten aria's in order to be cast as well as a proper ritual setup. However once cast she creates a very complex bounded field that borders on the strength of a reality marble. It creates a space that overwrites reality by trapping all inside within a series of caverns. While there is a 'surface' all finding it does is eject the individual from the bounded field. Unlike a normal reality marble she cannot alter the interior beyond this as that involves manipulating the focal points of the ritual with alternative information. For the spell she requires items to create a perfect Feng Shui array and also speak the true name followed by the spell's name 'She de Dongxue'.

    The fourth spell is a somewhat weak spell but also her ultimate defensive spell. Essentially she can temporarily turn an object into a D-rank armament. Further this armament imparts the personal skill Mana Burst to its wielder, utilizing mana from the environment utilizing magic circuits laced into the armament rather than the wielders Od. This Mana Burst is equivalent to E-rank. Additionally anyone can utilize the armament including her but in her case she can raise the rank of the armament by 1 by supplying it with Reinforcement and its Mana Burst by 2 ranks by supplying it with her own mana instead. The spell is called 'Chóngshānjùnlǐng'.

    The final spell is the very spell sheBai Suzhen used to flood the Jingshan Temple. The spell that claimed the lived of many innocent people. When utilized it rapidly multiplies the amount of water in an area. A water bottle can contain the same volume a mile of the Nile River contains with enough prana and the right ritual. In addition if it is true name released then it gains Anti-Mana properties, smothering such elements completely. In a sense while true name released all spells cast are three ranks lower and it reduces the Mana parameters of anyone soaked by two ranks. Its name is 'Long zhi Chun'.


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    That was a hard one. I considered not submitting it for a bit because the idea is a bit... out there. A servant who identifies as someone completely different despite all evidence pointing to the contrary. The idea only started from the point of 'What if someone summoned Bai Suzhen and got Xiaoqing possessing the body of Bai instead?'. This is the end result. So I hope people enjoy this crazy idea I had.
    Last edited by Baron Magnus; August 18th, 2022 at 06:09 AM. Reason: Wrong class card for the introduction. Apologies. Also new interactions.
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    If I'm not mistaken, does that np translate to the 5 great/big secrets of the azure snake elder sister?

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    Quote Originally Posted by TQG Imaginatorious View Post
    If I'm not mistaken, does that np translate to the 5 great/big secrets of the azure snake elder sister?
    close. I ran 'five secrets of lady white snake' through google translate for traditional chinese.
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    I meant the np's name under the collapse but yeah.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vididii View Post
    Elisabetha and Johannes Hevelius:
    Gonna have to read all this again in the morning, because shit that’s a fucklosd of words and links and shit. But from what I can tell, a couple who decided the constellations ave become a special class to control the stars and eat Italian food? Fuuuuuuck yes brother, that’s cute as shit. I really really like how they’re being cute all across the sheet and working together to demonstrate powers and skills and everything, it’s just kinda fuckin perfect. In the create a servant thread, there was the lady from the desert who had the big white celestial behemoth thing, dunno if she was yours, but it’s that same sorts thing that just has me kinda marveling. Like, I think I compared it to legend of the colossus or sky children of the light, but this is the same sorta lovely energy to it, despite, them no fitting that colossus/sky vibe in itself. Need these bitches to have a bitching star house or something, I want the best for them
    I thought I hold off commenting on this one once you read it without the margaritas
    No, the desert lady sounds like one of Kamera's recent sheet, so they are unrelated except their focus on astronomy.
    Both rely on previous sheets, linked in the intro above the very first pic. It is an OC class that does not rely on the stars, rather they use their accomplishments in astronomy as weapons, hence the class.
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