Originally Posted by
Pool 26
Fanmade Classes
Create a Servant of a fanmade class (Lover, Binder, Stranger, Hammer, etc.)
As an alternative, make a canon Class that was influenced by a Bleast Lair creator. (pinetree's or NMR-3's Gatekeeper interpretation, metaphysical journey Voyager and 'threat toward the stars' MoonCancer from DelRey)
Ignored Myths
It is not a secret that FGO and modern media have a bias towards certain mythologies. Show them how it is done! Give us a mytholigical figure from a rarely utilized pantheon! Give us Brazil, Yoruba, Slavic, North-American, Inuit, Australian or whatever!
Colors!
Dive into the history of colors! Painters are an obvious choice, but ever considered how their paint was created? The cultural consequences of them? Colors also express someone's standing. Some were called "The Red" or "Golden King". As long the focus of the sheet is involved with colors, it is cool.
Class: Stranger
Other Class: Ruler, Berserker, Assassin
True Name: Judas Iscariot
Titles: The Traitorous Apostle
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Region of Origin: Middle East
Height: 5'8
Weight: 72kg
Gender: Male
Likes: Israel, Jesus, The Poor
Dislikes: Abrahamic Religion, Rome, Scholars
Talents: Bookkeeping, Preaching, Lying
Armaments: A dagger, moneybox
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: B
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: EX
Who am I?Who am I?
My fellow apostles… some called me possessed. That I knew nothing of my actions and that the control of my life was ripped from me by a demon. The greatest of hell himself. I wasn’t a greedy man, just a puppet on strings that was guided by malevolence itself. That I was no more sane than any other we'd met with such an affliction, like Legion or Lilith. A raving beast whose erratic actions led to our saviour's death. A Berserker, if you will…
Cassandra's Fate: B
Judas first personal skill that represents one's ability to prevent future sight and clairvoyance from saving someone from a fate induced by the wielder. The higher one's level in this skill, the harder it is for one to produce enough ripples to eliminate the outcome. At this level, it requires a large number of luck checks with difficulty equal to this skill rank, and substantial action, to be able to avoid anything shown by precognition.
Judas, despite being known that he would betray the Christ, was not impeded in any way from doing so. This eventually led to the death of Jesus, despite the apostles' hopes to avoid such a fate. Judas might have a higher rank of this skill, if the prevailing theory that he was able to betray Jesus because it was required, and so no action was attempted to counter it, did not exist. As it does, this skill has this rank.
Stone Heart: A-
Judas second personal skill, and a skill that shows the difficulty to change one's perception. It essentially works as an anti-mental interference skill that increases this difficulty of inducing effects that would fall under that category. At this rank, it is incredibly difficult to induce any such effect on Judas, although his resistance is significantly weaker when faced with such effects coming from a Christianity aligned source.
This skill comes from the perception of Judas as a hard headed, unyielding person who did not take any of the Christ's teaching upon him. Instead, he continued to walk his path without self reflection, going so far as to sell out his teacher. Whilst this idea is not completely correct, it's popularity has induces an extremely high level of this skill. It's only weakness is the recorded guilt Judas felt after the results of his actions that lead to his suicide. This has induced a weakness to mental changed from Christian aligned sources, as they have the concept of affecting him, even if at a delayed rate.
Judas Price: Thirty Pieces of Silver, an Eternal Redemption for All
Anti-Redemption: E-EX
Targets: Variable
Range: Variable
A noble phantasm that Judas can never part with, much to his regret. Iscariot's first noble phantasm is the thirty silver coins that he received for betraying the Christ, a party of his legend that is present no matter the interpretation of it you take.
Whilst not physically stained by Jesus's blood like the main holy relics of the crucifixion, these coins are just as conceptually tied to it as those other items. This gives the thirty coins that make up Judas Price a weak regenerative effect that increases the more of them a person owns. However, this effect would barely equate to an E rank phantasm when all thirty are gathered, and is not the true use of this phantasm.
Just like any currency, this phantasm's true use is when a coin is spent, or to be more accurate, used like a broken phantasm.
By breaking each coin, Judas is able to echo that which the Christ paid for, that being all the sins of mankind. By breaking the coin, aka paying part of the price, Judas is able to bring forth an effect ranging from E to EX rank in strength, one for each coin. However, there is a risk to this.
One interpretation of Judas's death has him cursed and afflicted by God.
So, as each coin is broken, the act of Judas selling out Jesus is reenacted. This conceptual reenactment comes with the chance of Judas being cursed and dying. At E rank, the chance is negligible, however it exponentially grows until it is a certainty if he uses an EX rank effect.
In the end, the greatest power only comes to pass with Judas death, just as it was when he was alive.
But that isn't right.But that isn't right.
Some of my other fellows called me the archetypical Jew. An old wineskin who was bursting from the new Gospel being poured into me. A stiffnecked man whose heart probably gives coal a run on how black it was, and who stole from our ministry for his own purposes under the guise of charity. Was my greed so great I sold out the son of man for a bag of coins?... nonetheless a traitor, and an Assassin, in function, if not in name.
Golden Rule(Treachery): D
Judas third personal skill, a variant of the golden rule skill that ensures that one will profit from treacherous actions. While it does not protect the wielder from other consequences of betraying someone, such as grudges or loss of other allies, it ensures that such acts will never be financially harmful to the user, and instead increase their coffers. At this rank this skill will ensure that Judas would always gain a sizable amount of money in terms of a small group of people.
Whilst most famously Judas gained thirty pieces of silver in exchange for betraying Jesus to the religious leaders of the Jews, he is also noted to have been the keeper of the Apostles moneybox. It is also recorded that he would occasionally steal from it under the guise of charitable actions. However, whilst the funds he gained were sizable for a single person, it was never on the scale of some users of this skill.
Traitor in Yellow: EX
Traitor in yellow is both a skill unique to Judas, and his fourth personal skill. Based off of the tendency for renaissance painters to depict Judas in yellow garb to signal him as the traitor, it grants Judas a shape-shifting skill, which at this rank is capable of achieving literally any form, including other people, demons, and other inhuman forms. The restriction of course being that a significant and notable feature of the form be yellow.
However, the reason that this is not simply classified as the Shapeshifting(Yellow) skill is its secondary aspect. Whilst transformed, Judas gives off a constant aura that causes everyone in a fair area around himself to think that everyone in the area has traitorous intentions of them, causing a fair amount of havoc. It requires a very high level of resistance to mental interferences interferences resist.
Eayn Yahudha: The World Captured in the Yellow Traitors Eyes
Anti-Unit(Self): C
Targets: 1
Range: Variable
An odd phantasm that, whilst its effects are present in all forms of Judas, is only truly crystalised in this summoning. Eayn Yahudha is the second noble phantasm of Judas, and is a crystallisation of scholarly efforts to figure out why one of the apostles would betray christ.
It manifests as a pair of yellow mystic eyes that grant two main features to Judas. This first, and most valuable, is the ability to look at any situation with a countless number of viewpoints simultaneously, an interpretation of the many explanations and reasonings applied to try to explain Judas’s actions. This allows him to easily break down any situation and figure out the best way to go forward. However, all these viewpoints are tainted by a malicious intention, limiting the overall applicability of this phantasm.
The second, and more restrictive use, is that if Judas focuses down to a single other viewpoint, he can gain the circumstances required to make that viewpoint valid, such as skills that would affect his viewpoint. However, using it this way can temporarily distort his personality, an event that can be dangerous to his allies.
Yet that doesn't hit the mark either.Yet that doesn't hit the mark either.
I… don't know if any of my fellows thought this… but could I have been faithful? The son was meant to to die, and yet non understood but I. I did his will, trying to help bring about his purpose in the only way I knew how. Maybe even how he instructed me too. I was no traitor, no mad man. I was a visionary! The only student who truly understood, and my actions were just as God directed as any Saint, any Ruler could ever hope for!
Apostle of the Christ(Fake): B
A skill that can be called an upgraded form of the Saint skill, and Judas's fifth personal skill. Under normal circumstances, this skill would grant all the benefits of the Saint skill, alongside all its benefits, as well as the revelation skill. However, as Judas holds the fake form of the skill, the revelation skill is replaced by the clairvoyance skill.
Judas is unique in his possession of this skill due to his position. Due to having been an apostle, and later being removed from the twelve, he possesses the fake variation of the skill. Normally, if one claimed to be an apostle and never was one, they would have this skill with the False classification, which would cause it to grant different benefits.
Miracle: C
Judas sixth and final personal skill, one that acts in the function in making the impossible into the realisable. While similar in function to other skills, such as Pioneer of the Stars, it has a very different set of requirements around what it can be applied to.
As an apostle, even if former, Judas was given the authority by the Christ to perform miracles in his name during his ministry and mission. However, as there is a lack of notable records of Judas doing so, the rank of this skill has been severely lowered compared to most other apostles.
Akeldama: Blood Money Graveyard of the Archetypal Suicide
Anti-Unit: B+
Targets: Variable
Range: 1-500
Akeldama, the death place of Judas and that which was bought by Judas with the coins he was given. This third and final phantasm of Judas is an oft forgotten part of his legend, and so it is unsurprising that it only appears in this form. The phantasm is an expandable bounded field that acts as a crystallisation of that location.
Whilst in life, Judas would first die here before he became a simple archetype, as a phantasm the effect is reversed. When someone enters the area, they suffer a combination of conceptual and mental interference that slowly pushes them towards a single character archetype. This archetype depends on what the person has done in their life.
This is useful as, due to the conceptual nature of the change, those affected by the phantasm can lose access to abilities or skills they have that no longer mesh with the character archetype they are fulfilling. For servants, this can go so far as to even lock access to skills and noble phantasms. However, there is a secondary effect that activates once the individual has been completely reduced to a caricature.
This second part is an instant death effect that requires those within the field to make constant luck checks that scale in difficulty the longer one remains. On failure, the victim will swell until their own body bursts at the seams.
However, if one escapes the field they will gradually return to normal, meaning that the will need to undergo the conceptual change again to be applicable to the second aspect. This is also where the phantasm bonus applies, as the phantasm is more effective on those who are already caricatures, such as a certain French Emperor.
There is one other thing to note on this phantasm. While normally Judas is immune to its effects, this is because, as he still has the thirty coins of Judas Price, he has not yet purchased it, which is required for it to affect him. If he were ever to lose access to Judas Price, it would act on him normally and he would no longer be able to turn it off, subsequently leading to his death.
But that's a lie too.But that's a lie too.
No… I'm… just me. I'm just a man, who did what he could and made a single, stupid mistake. I… I… I was naive, thought I knew better, thought I knew anything at all. But it turns out my master, my beloved teacher was just a stranger to me. I did not really know him at all. And as such, the same has been done to me. The rogue apostle, the thieving traitor in yellow, the greatest suicide of the Bible. Fitting, I think, that for my mistake of thinking I knew him so well that I knew better, that others have done the same to me?
Dissecting the how and why so thoroughly, that they've reduced me to archetypes, forever remaining a Stranger to the true me.
Sorry for my rambling master. Servant Stranger is ready as can be. I guess…