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    A berserker I made for Halloween, made from a specific Boogeyman I remember reading about, I kinda rushed it cause I wanted to make it on Halloween lol, so I hope I didn’t forget to add anything.



    Berserker Under The Stairs

    Class: Berserker
    Other Qualifying Classes: Caster, Avenger, Assassin
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Attribute: Earth
    Arsenal: Claws, Fangs
    Card Setup: B/B/B/A/Q
    Traits: Demonic, Fae, Male, Demonic Beast Servant, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish

    Parameters
    Parameters
    STR: A+
    END: A+
    AGI: D
    MGI: E
    LCK: C
    NP: A


    Class Skills
    Class Skills

    Madness Enhancement D-

    A class skill raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering rational thought. Berserker’s Madness takes the form of a desire to scare children into behaving well, and stealing away those that do not change their ways. He also possesses the desire to scare adults, but to a noticeably lesser extent.

    Berserkers existence is built upon causing fear in children, without this he is nothing and believes he will quickly be completely and utterly forgotten if he does not continue. While Berserker desires frightening and sometimes even killing naughty children, he doesn’t really take pleasure in it, seeing it as just something akin to a nine to five office job.

    Thanks to his relatively low rank of madness enhancement he can be considered quite rational, although he is still quite unpredictable, especially when around children.


    Personal Skills
    Personal Skills

    Monstrous Strength C+

    A Skill that temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. It is borne from the holder's nature as a monster. With such strength, Berserker is capable of physically overpowering any opponent he comes across, excluding other berserkers and certain high powered servants.

    It is said his favourite method of attack is lurking in ponds/lakes and dragging misbehaving children into the depths. The reason this skill is relatively low is born from a mixture of primarily going after children, and his nature as not what one would call a true monster, but instead a fairy whose purpose is to be a monster.

    Boogeyman A++

    A skill denoting ones existence as a Boogeyman, also known as a Bugbear, a fae that exists to frighten children into good behaviour. This skill grants the possessor the ability to inspire fear in those that gaze upon them, especially in children, the mentally ill and the evil, the higher the rank it is, the more effective it is at causing nightmares in whomever he desires. Servants with high Magic Resistance as well as Berserkers master are both immune to this effect.

    Berserker was created by the world itself to act as a malicious spirit, meant to torment naughty children into being good, it is said that those that do not behave after being tormented by him are dragged away and are said to never be seen again.

    Morph B+

    A skill that allows one to alter their own appearance, a power commonly found in the abilities of trickster spirits as well as vampires. Berserkers shapeshifting ability allows him to turn into a variety of forms, primarily meant to scare others by turning into their greatest fear, it also has multiple combat applications. Berserker cannot use this skill to enhance his physical stats above a certain level, as his skill isn’t of high enough rank.

    As a Boogeyman, Berserker has the capacity to change into almost anything he can imagine, which means he would naturally have a very high rank in this skill, if not for the fact he dislikes shapeshifting, preferring to hold onto his more recognisable form, or more accurately, forms. One of which is a skull stripped of skin that bites its victims and its companion a dancing headless skeleton.


    Identity
    Identity

    Berserker’s True Name is Rawhead-and-Bloody-Bones, a specific, famously violent, boogeyman and fae found in both British and North American folklore.

    He is one of three brothers that were, in the olden times, known as a triumvirate which governed destruction and punishment. He specifically focuses on scaring naughty children into submissiveness, with those that do not mend their ways being taken from their homes to never be seen again.

    Berserker believes lying and spreading rumours to be two of the greatest sins mankind is capable of, and enjoys the act of decapitating those who lie, and to those that gossip he likes to rip out there tongues. He is incredibly hypocritical when it comes to his punishments, for example if someone were to behead someone else for lying, he would consider the beheader to be naughty, yet he does not consider himself naughty.

    Berserker holds a dislike of bright and open areas, instead preferring dark, damp and constricted places such as cupboards, underneath beds, cabinets and murky ponds. It helps that children are generally scared of monsters in hidden places, he loves places located under a stairway the most, as it is “the perfect place to keep his bones”.

    Towards his master, Berserker is surprisingly tame and rational, thanks to his relatively low rank of madness enhancement allowing him to keep a decent amount of his mental faculties fully functioning, although it must be noted that when around children, he is likely to ignore commands unless a command seal is used to reign him in, as he will reset back to his original nature. If his master is younger then sixteen, he will not try to scare them as he would normal children, unless he deems them “naughty”.

    His wish to the Holy Grail is to live a life where he doesn’t need to work and can just live out his days in peace.


    Biography
    Biography

    Berserker was, like most other fae, born from the inner sea of the planet, also known as the reverse side of the world. Like most fairies, he has a purpose etched deep into his heart as well as his mind, that being to spread terror and ruin throughout the land. Alongside him, two other creatures of similar purpose came into existence, his “brothers” were known as the Nuckelavee and the Erlking. The three of them creating what was referred to as a triumvirate which governed destruction and fear.

    They ravaged the land in which they roamed in their own unique ways, Nuckelavee preferring sheer destruction with his plague-ridden flesh, while Erlking enjoyed the causing the suffering of parents by stealing away their child away for little reason other then it amused him. Out of the three “brothers”, Berserker was considered the weakest, as in comparison to his brothers, who were both incredibly powerful in their own right, he wasn’t that strong, but to most other fairies he was by no means weak.

    While possessing a similar existence to his brethren, there was one noticeable difference about his existence, as unlike his destructive brothers, his end goal could be considered constructive, with his prime directive being to make those of evil leanings, especially children, turn over a new leaf. If they didn’t become a better person from his torment, he would steal them when they least expect it and rip the flesh from their bones, a very effective threat.

    As the magic of the world began to dwindle, each of the brothers refused to leave to the reverse side of the world like most other fae and phantasmal creatures, instead they sought to stay in the world. The first to fall was Nuckelavee whose plagues were destroyed and sterilised, the second to go was Erlking, who was slain by a blade of iron. Berserker did not want to wither away like his brothers, but as time passed his name began to be forgotten by time, no longer was it passed down through the generations as a creature to fear, but instead it was passed down as a tall tale no kid would ever believe.

    He should have withered away years ago, and in fact he did, many, many years ago he withered away without realising it, yet he still appears to be alive. The reason for this is while he has died, his sheer determination to not wither away had created many weak wraiths similar to himself, now known to mages as Lesser Boogeymen, which are a relatively weak Phantasmal species only capable of invoking nightmares in children and the mentally deranged.

    But his life as something more then a wraith was not over, as his existence as a creature which kidnaps and eats naughty children enshrined him into the throne of heroes as an Anti-Hero Heroic Spirit.


    Noble Phantasm
    Noble Phantasm

    Idea of Fear, Actualisation of Paranoia, Causer of Carnage: Bugbear Rawhead

    Type: Anti-Army, Anti-Imagination, Reality Marble
    Rank: C-A++
    Range: 1-500
    Maximum Targets: 1000

    As more and more children began to fear him and the nightmares he could cause, Rawhead’s power grew, and as his powers grew so too did the fear he was able to create, until not only children were affected, but so were adults, even the mentally sound ones weren’t safe. In one Cornish village, his influence was so potent it caused all those effected to rampage and massacre each other, they say it once granted him enough power to physically manifest in the world without a holy grail war, as the fear he caused was just that great.

    Without any people brought into his reality marble, it resembles a silent, dark and endless expanse, no life in sight except for the mild smell of rotting flesh in their air. Upon bringing someone into the reality marble, it will begin to warp into something his victims would find truly frightening, and from the darkness of the land deranged creatures, forsaken by all gods, are born to tear into the hapless victim.

    As one whose very existence is based on the fear and paranoia of children, Berserker has become an existence able to conjure a realm of nightmares in which those which do not exist are able to harm and even kill those who do exist. In other, simpler words it is a Reality Marble that allows for the actualisation of psychological damage into physical damage. A common mistake made is that his Noble Phantasm ends up bringing his victims nightmares to life, in actuality, without fear, his Noble phantasm is unable to cause harm even if the creatures attack, as their weapons will merely phase through the intended victim, in short he can turn the psychological damage from illusions into physical damage.

    The psychology of Berserkers victim is what determines the rank and power of his Noble Phantasm, for example, one of sound mind with little to no imagination would have a relatively decent chance of surviving the horrors they are subjected too, while say for example someone who is mentally ill as well as highly imaginative would most likely be torn limb from limb in the most extraordinarily painful ways.


    Bond Craft Essence
    Bond CE

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    Tale of the Bugbear

    From the marl pit he crawls
    A beast with deathly iron claws
    His teeth chatter with delight
    As he smells the air filled with fright

    Into the home of children he crawls
    The beast with evil jaws
    His empty eyes filled with dread
    A creature hiding under your bed

    Into the cupboard he crawls
    To catch naughty children in his claws
    Once he catches them
    They are never seen again

    And so back into the marl pit he crawls
    With bones picked clean and bloodied jaws
    In the morning the parents shriek
    They know their child’s future is bleak


    Interactions
    Interactions

    Kiyohime
    “What a naughty, naughty child, if it weren’t for Master and the fact I like your stance on liars, I would have killed you by now……..”

    Asterios
    “Holy Crap, is…….is that actually a child……..he…..he’s huge….I-I don’t think I could scare him…..and live…….”
    Uuuhhh?
    ”Oh god I think it saw me!”

    Master
    “What do I think of you Master? Well you are generally well behaved, so I probably won’t feel the need to strip your flesh from your bones…..yeah your in my good books……of course if you ever started acting naughty I’d have to…..punish…..you”
    “Uhhh…..Thanks?/By punish you mean?” (Dialogue Choice)
    “Kehehe, never mind that Master, just act like you always do and everything will be fine”

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Why do we have a throne of snippets if nobody ever uses it.

    (Sorry if this seems off topic.).
    Probably because a lot of people were busy with the contest.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Why do we have a throne of snippets if nobody ever uses it.
    I don't really have any interest in writing fanfic.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Why do we have a throne of snippets if nobody ever uses it.
    Maybe it's the way you phrase stuff and we can't hear voice intonation so it feels really demanding, but mannnn. No one owes you anything. When people feel like writing sheets or snipets of their Fate OCs, then it'll happen. Patience, my young padawan.

    ALSO. THERE'S A LOT OF BANGERS HERE THAT I'M MOST DEFINITELY WILL READ AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lady Vanatos View Post
    Really pumping them out to get to that 300 mark.
    And have you at the moments some servant n work actually ?
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    Appearance

    Official art from King's Raid
    "Fuhahahaha! To think that I, Stephen Bathory of the Saber class, would be summoned by a mere ki-- Eh? Alter Ego? You, the dopey-looking kit over there! What sort of nonsense is this!?"
    Class: Alter-Ego
    Alternate classes: Saber, Rider
    True Name: Stephen Bathory
    Gender: Male
    Height and Weight: 161 cm / 61 kg

    Source: Historical Fact
    Region: Hungary, Poland
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Attribute: Man

    Parameters
    Strength: B
    Constitution: A
    Agility: D
    Magical Energy: D
    Luck: D
    Noble Phantasm: B

    To the disbelief of everyone who meets him, he has a surprisingly pleasant singing voice.
    Biography
    Legend
    Stephen Bathory was a Hungarian noble who was Prince of Transylvania from 1571 to 1586, then King of Poland and Grand Duke of Lithuania from 1576 to 1586. He was one of Poland's most prominent rulers and an excellent military commander.

    However, rather than a Stephen Bathory more closely rooted in his historical feats, the Stephen Bathory summoned in the Alter Ego class has an image closer to "the Dragon King of the Commonwealth" as envisioned both by himself and others.

    The Bathorys as a noble house closely associated themselves with dragons. Adopting the teeth of the dragon as their heraldic symbol, being enrolled within the prestigious Order of the Dragon; these were feats that members of that house accomplished. This association was so prominent in the minds of onlookers that rumors like "the Bathorys have dragon blood in their veins" also started to spread. Stephen Bathory was no exception to this rule: wanting his authority to be perceived as equal to that of the other European powers, and his kingdom to be acknowledged as on par with that of the neighboring lands, he himself commissioned many artists, poets, and playwrights to immortalize his governance.

    These portrayals and rumors ended up being so pervasive that it became possible to summon Stephen Bathory in a state similar to that of his distant relative, Elizabeth: a high-minded noble who possesses traits of the dragon kind.

    Character
    Likes: Restaurant crawls, reading
    Dislikes: Disobedient pets, cold environments
    Talent: Budgeting, singing (for reals)

    A cool-type Servant who styles himself the "Dragon King of Poland". He loves having strong rivals, and believes he exists for the sake of fighting them. Although the historical Stephen Bathory was a generous king who assiduously attended to the welfare of his subjects, this sort of mentality is warped in his Alter Ego incarnation, perhaps due to the influence of the "dragon" that takes to the fore in this summoning.

    "The commons are filled with cattle and all manner of cute, defenseless farmland creatures, so it'd be a great stain on my honor as a dragon king if I weren't able to protect such pitiful existences"-- such is his thinking. Hunting and making sport of the livestock is also a no-no, in a marked difference from the behavior of his relative Elizabeth. All in all, despite the addition of the "dragon" attribute, he might turn out to be good king after all.

    Relationships
    Master
    Stephen refers to them as "kit (fox cub)". However, if they manage to perform a feat that impresses him, his opinion will rise considerably, and he will probably deign to address them on a first-name basis.

    Elizabeth Bathory
    Although they aren't closely related, Stephen feels responsible for her, and silently watches over her like a surrogate parent.

    Elizabeth Bathory (Caster), Elizabeth Bathory (Brave), Mecha Eli-chan (Mk. I and II), Elizabeth Bathory (Cinderella)
    --That said, her capacity to multiply so rapidly is a slight cause for concern.

    Ivan the Terrible
    "Hoh... So the Thunder Emperor has taken on a monstrous form as well. That settles it! Dragon or mammoth, let's see which is stronger here and now!"
    CLASS SKILLS
    Magic Resistance: A
    Skill that grants protection against magical effects. Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer". In the case of Stephen Báthory, this ability exists as a hidden Skill that the Servant himself is not really aware of - active due to the actual presence of draconian blood in his ancestry, rather than as a phenomenon generated by Innocent Monster as it was believed. Its source is the Bathory family's coat of arms. That family's coat of arms was a shield-shape based on the red fang, symbolizing the dragon's bravery, strength, and cruelty in never leaving an enemy alive.

    Riding: EX
    The ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Stephen possesses a rank in this Skill that is functionally equivalent to E-rank because the smell of dragon immediately sends most rideable animals into a frenzy. However, because the bearer had no small amount of pride in his ability to maneuver animals, he convinced himself that he rides "the wind itself" with his dragon wings, obtaining a non-standard rank.

    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Innocent Monster: A
    An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance.

    Because of the various rumors and legends surrounding the Bathory family, Stephen is transformed into a draconian-type existence. Being that creatures of draconian descent tend to possess Breath Weapons of their elemental orientation, the nature of Stephen's Dragon Breath is "supersonic vibrations".

    Draconic Charisma: B
    An id_es derived from the Charisma skill that became influenced by the draconic attributes added onto Stephen Bathory's Saint Graph. A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. The modifications also further boost the performance of allies who have the "dragon" attribute, and allow Stephen to control and ride dragons.

    Mana Burst (Lightning): A
    The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with Magical Energy and instantly expelling it. By swallowing the dragon's breath that should normally be expelled as thunder and lightning (as per the Hungarian legends of Sárkány), it is possible for Stephen to imbue held armaments, and even his own body, with tremendous magical energy that manifests as crackling lightning.

    Golden Rule: B++
    Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. Having an enormous territory and heritage, as well as being known for judiciously managing and even enriching the state funds of the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth, Stephen should not have any trouble with money for the rest of his life. The plus corrections are an addition from being summoned as an existence related to dragons, beings that are known to gather massive amounts of treasure.

    NOBLE PHANTASMS
    Sárkány Fogai: Dragon Teeth Sundering Bite
    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm
    Range: 1-10
    Max targets: 25 people

    The Dragon's Teeth, Alter Ego Stephen Bathory's first Noble Phantasm. Refusing to be summoned without his beloved Hungarian sabers, Stephen used them as a base for further modification, resulting in the cannon-like armament he currently wields. Like the Sárkány it takes its name from, it fires bullets and missiles of compressed air, and can even be used to emit the supersonic vibrations that is the breath weapon characteristic of the Bathory line's draconic scions.

    Kilenc Sárkány: Dragon Cry Thundering Voice
    Rank: D
    Type: Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm
    Range: 3-30
    Max targets: 500 people

    Alter Ego Stephen Bathory's second Noble Phantasm. The majesty of a roaring thunder dragon by the name of Sárkány converted into a Noble Phantasm. Instead of the ear-splitting "singing" Elizabeth devotes her lung capacity to, Stephen's usage of the dragon's breath is vastly different. By amplifying the speaker's intent up to eigthy-one times using the phenomenal lung capacity bestowed by the thunder dragon Sárkány, it is possible to bestow fear, charm, and even command effects to targets. It is even strong enough to compel even the winds and clouds to bring forth thunderstorms and torrential downpours.
    Author's Notes
    Inspired by the preponderance of Liz-adjacent Servants during Halloween and the crippling lack of dragonbois in this thread. This thing took like half a day to complete, a personal best ngl.
    Last edited by Nuclear; October 30th, 2021 at 09:54 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Why do we have a throne of snippets if nobody ever uses it.

    (Sorry if this seems off topic.).
    Tis' my domain.

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    Alright, since I'm quite frankly dying here, I apologize in advance if my comments are on the shorter side. But rest assured your sheets took my breath away, all of them.


    Trophonius: BOTH THE HALLOWEEN AND THE ACTUAL VERSION ARE SO GOOD? At this point, should we expect any less from you? Of course not. But I absolutely loved these people anyway. The way their skills work is so good, I love this type of relationship. They're a riot.

    Leviathan: JESUS CHRIST? Wyvern, this has to be one of your best works yet. It's haunting, eery and so... So strangely human. A Beast that is not a Beast is a concept I don't remember seeing a lot, so the novelty of this idea is also a great plus. Your GIF game is still strong as well.

    Raktabija: A Berserker that acts like a Berserker, you love to see it.

    Minamoto no Yorinobu: I like this sheet a lot, like, A LOT, the idea behind it is immaculate, though as others pointed out there was so much you could still do with the idea. Like, the way you fleshed her out in your comments with Koga is the perfect example of that.

    Mae Nak: Man, I want to print all your sheets and put them in my wall, you know? The way you always pulls my heartstrings with these downright melancholic characters. But then again, she's also so... Scary. Perfect for this season, and another perfect entry in your gallery.

    Veles: Like, Rachmaninoff was already SO GOOD. Both the Alter Ego and his "real" version were out of this world, they were perfect, I can't believe you could've won your own contest, but then you come and drop this bomb too? With a Erwin FC on top of that? I give up just take this crown and run with it, king. (HE'S PERFECT.)
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    Servant Ruler:

    Appearance:

    Source

    True Name: Domnina/Caren Ortensia

    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Alternate Class: Caster

    Armaments: A white version of Nero's sword she calls
    The Sacred Flame
    Sacrum Estus
    , as well as her Magdalenic Shroud.

    Strength- E
    Agility- D
    Endurance- D
    Mana- B
    Luck- C
    NP- B

    Personality
    Sweet and demure, a typical "good Christian girl" Servant whose diligent, honors God and does her best to regard all things with impartial dignity. However through integrating another famous legend tied to her name she's displayed a worrying fondness for mean-spirited pranks on those she cares for. A gentle and kind, yet sharp-tongued and mischievous girl who takes relish in teasing others without budging her placid expression. Certainly her disposition is compatible with her living host in that regard.

    Towards her father Nero, Ruler displays feelings of clear love and affection mingled with intense hatred and betrayal for how he persistently rejected her entreaties to join the faith and even sent her away to be torturously executed for apostasy against the old gods. While Ruler's love normally accepts all humans she has both love and hatred for her father. This is accentuated upon learning that her "father's" record on the Throne differs from her own memories of "him", and that the tales of Nero's persecution of Christendom were perhaps exaggerated lies. Thus if Ruler were to muster a wish on the Holy Grail it would simply to be able to meet Nero properly and clarify her mixed feelings towards "him".

    Ruler greatly looks up to Photina the woman who taught her about the Christian faith. As such she'll get along well with other female saint Servants like Jeanne and Martha and likely consider them her older sisters.

    Inherited from her mortal vessel Ruler has acquired a taste for spicy food, though much to her chagrin the pain-nullifying effects of her second Noble Phantasm keep her from savoring the full spiciness. Thus Ruler jokes her wish on the Holy Grail would be to obtain a spicy dish made with Phantasmal ingredients powerful enough to bypass her
    curse
    blessing
    ...

    Likes: playing the tease towards those she likes, God, her father, spicy food
    Dislikes: distracting material wealth, being pressured to renounce her faith, her father
    Talents: asceticism, practical jokes
    Natural Enemy: Nero, a certain silver-tongued priest?


    Class Skills:

    God's Resolution- A
    The privilege of the Ruler presiding over a Holy Grail War. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Seals for every Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War. Cannot re-appropriate the Command Seals of others.

    True Name Discernment- B
    Status information such as true name, Skills and parameters are instantly revealed to Ruler upon encountering a fellow Servant. For Servants with concealment abilities, a Luck check is required to successfully glean their true nature.

    Magic Resistance- N/A
    Confers protection against magical effects. Ruler would normally possess a high rank from her overwhelming piety but due to being overwritten by her second Noble Phantasm it's been sealed.


    Personal Skills:

    Imperial Privilege- E
    An ability where through insistence of the owner Skills normally impossible to possess can be briefly obtained. As daughter of the Imperial Household and apple of her father's eye Ruler would exert a high rank in this Skill. However upon converting to Christianity Ruler rejected the gifts of her lavish upbringing and hence chose to mostly seal this Skill. The remaining benefits are applied to low-level strengthening of her sacraments and healing Magecraft.

    Magecraft Across Worlds- C+
    A Skill held by those who are familiar with disparate styles of Magecraft unlikely to have coexisted together in actual history. It's a symbol of one whose legend is a patchwork of different eras sewn together. In Ruler's case it is an expression of her meeting and charming the poet magician Virgil as well as her mentorship under the Samaritan Apostle Photina who initiated her in the mysteries of the Christian faith. Allowing her to wield both Roman literary sorcery as well as Christianic holy sacraments.

    From Virgil she gains the ability to construct hound familiars out of bronze, divine the future to a minor degree and "write" spells onto the air itself. If questioned how she possesses this knowledge Ruler will just answer "Pillow talk" with a flirtatious expression, though she's probably joking. While Photina as the "woman at the well" in the Bible and one revered as equal to the Apostles donates Ruler an affinity for water-elemental and healing Magecraft, including recreation of a "Water of Life" that purges most lesser ailments while searing at the flesh of demons and other unholy creatures. Though in the latter case the veto of several other saint Servants from Chaldea was necessary to keep her from trying to market it as "bathwater". "I was just joking, come on. Can't a holy woman have a little fun...?" she asks while impishly grinning.

    Incidentally it might be thought odd for Ruler to be comfortable wielding Pagan magic given her pronounced Christian faith, but she herself brushes aside such things. Saying that it's okay as long as she repurposes it for the benefit of the Lord. Such openmindedness is a little worrying in a saint...

    Magdalena Shroud: Weibermacht- A+
    A Holy Shroud owned by Ruler's human vessel sublimated into a Personal Skill. A red cloth with the power to forcefully bind men. Normally stored in a basket Ruler carries when used it darts out like a snake, capable of flowing at impossible angles to grasp and bind targets. However when the man is bound no harmful (physical) attacks can be made against him or Magdalene will be rendered useless.

    As a Skill it's been bolstered by the legends of Ruler trapping her lover the poet Virgil in a basket as well as the associated literary archetype "
    Weibermacht
    Power of Women
    " symbolizing the ability of feminine craftiness to bring even the wisest men to their knees in folly. As such the Shroud displays greater binding power in proportion to the targeted man's intellect as well as the strength of his romantic or sexual feelings for Ruler. Additionally a mental interference effect is placed on the one bound that compels others in the vicinity to view them as a "subject of ridicule".


    Noble Phantasms
    Claustra Domus Aurea
    My Prison Is A House Unto The Lord


    Rank: C+

    Type: Anti-Team

    A Noble Phantasm reconstructing the prison where herself and 100 other martyrs were incarcerated on order of her father Nero. Through a theologic principle of "inversion" (the least on earth is greatest in heaven) Ruler's former prison is transformed into the Temple where she may demonstrate her greatest authority. Within the Prison/Temple Ruler can call upon spirits of the 100 martyrs imprisoned and executed alongside her, using their combined faith to fuel her own holy sacraments Magecraft and perform greater miracles. Furthermore Servants outside the Christian faith suffer a rank-down to their parameters when treading foot there. This Noble Phantasm is named in a way that ironically references the Domus Aurea of Ruler's "father" Nero, signifying that her humility has amassed a greater palace than silver or gold.


    Anthousa
    Flower Of Martyrdom


    Rank: B

    Type: Support

    A crystallization of the legends surrounding Ruler's martyrdom. Even as her father ordered her beaten with rods, burnt and poisoned the Lord stripped her ordeals of the power to inflict not only pain but even physical damage. As such this Noble Phantasm attests the concept that as God's chosen vessel Ruler is not permitted to suffer any pain or harm. Whenever any attack occurs that would cause pain to Ruler a flower-shaped barrier (alluding to
    Flower
    Anthousa
    , the new name given to her by God) appears to intercept it. The only way to kill Ruler is with an attack that doesn't inflict any pain at all. Though attacks ranked A or higher will also break through this ability.





    Had the idea of writing a sheet on this figure for a while now when I was suddenly struck with the inspiration of making her a Caren Pseudo. I know there already is one with Eros or whatever in canon but I felt this was fitting. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
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    In the realm of Chaldea he woke, Laid beneath a dying sky,
    Through the whitened walls around him, Rang a distant, desperate cry,

    In his hands he found a weapon, On his face he felt a mask,
    In his mind he heard it whisper, Whisper outlines of his task,

    "Find the meat and make it suffer, Bring their bleeding forms to me,
    Present to me a bloody scene, Cut them down before they flee.",

    Through the halls and through the chambers, To the blood scent in the air,
    Leather hands and hooded visage, Guise your true form, rip and tear,

    In the trial, he was woken, Proving worth before its eyes,
    Stalking victims in the darkness, Cries of anguish, one more dies,

    Now the last one lays below him, Cut and broken, blood astream,
    Amor fati,
    memento mori...




    < - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- ⏄ -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >< - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- ⏄ -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >

    A fitting death for the final scream...

    "Nah. Just kiddin' "


    A S S A S S I N
    of the Horror Movie Tropes
    = Dorian Gray | Edvard Munch =
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    What he thinks he looks like...
    ...what he actually looks like.

    Class
    Assassin
    Alternative Classes
    Foreigner
    True Name
    Dorian Gray | Edvard Munch
    Aliases
    The Killer, The Freak in that Movies Costume, Weirdo
    Origin
    Halloween, The Picture of Dorian Gray, Norway
    Height/Weight
    182cm/75kg
    Alignment
    Evil Halloween
    Attribute
    Human, spooky

    STR END AGI MAN LCK
    C A B D D

    Likes
    crappy, budget horror movies, Halloween, the ladies
    Dislikes
    escaping victims
    Talent
    stalking, killing in the night, shouting slangs into a telephone
    Natural Enemy
    movie tropes, child servants, logic?
    Armament
    knife
    Catalyst
    that one halloween mask, I guess


    "Excellent poem. One more."
    "Please, I can not compose so fast!"
    "Shame..." *stabs*

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Class Skills -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Class Skills

    Presence Concealment A
    He can just walk into the bathroom while you shower and walk out of the morgue after resurrecting for the i-dont-know-how-many-eth time. You look away for a moment and he is gone. He can appear out of nowhere. The only evidence of his existence is the creepy music playing in the background. The scariest things are the ones you can not see.
    Not sure if it is really his own talent or just the effect of his Noble Phantasm.

    Existence Outside the
    Domain
    Frame
    E

    Seems like the presence that fused Munch and Gray together has averted their eyes for a while? Or just watches?
    Anyways, Assassin could flee his regular Foreigner container for the duration of the Halloween season. For better or worse. With it Divinity is lost and Unstable Core was lowered in Rank.

    Unstable Movie Script B
    A variation of his Unstable Core. A skill denoting unstable character roles, because the movie script is badly written. The Servant is at threat to fall out of character and ruin the mood, because personality and role simply do not match. Basically a Mental Schism of sorts.
    The Horror Movie Trope of "The Killer" is not really fitting for Dorian at all. While there were four people that died in his story, two were killed not by him and one was himself...by accident basically. He is also someone who dislikes dirtying his hands and the look of bloodied corpses.
    It also seems that another public perception of this mask was accidentally infused inside him.
    His personality can change from the silent, stalking, gruesome Killer to a...well...

    "WAAAAZZZUUUUUUUPPP Instagram crowd! Today we are just chillin' and killin'.And later we are doing an "unboxing" of the innards of a random guy in Chaldea!"



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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Personal Skills -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Personal Skills

    Self-Realized Monstrocity C
    What can I tell you here, he became a fan of the horror movie series and discovered that their protagonist has a direct connection to "the meager painter". He used it and basically became the typical Horror Movie trope itself. As Assassin he dons the infamous mask of a popular horror movie franchise. Despite that, his character seems different than usual...
    It is actually Munchs Soul Painting skill which he used to make a very intense mask for his purposes, granting him Dread Visage (Mask).
    While it does serve him adequately, as a womanizer at heart it is not always easy to get "the chicks" with this ability. Oh the struggles of being a stealthy serial killer. Well he can just kill the women who reject him.

    "I was never rejected in my life. Show me a woman that says otherwise."

    Sequel Continuation EX
    Nothing can hurt him. Like at all. You may halt him for a moment, but he will just stand up. Like wtf. He may have been burried already, but when you least expect and even less want it, a hand can be seen to reach out of his grave.
    Until the last sequel was pressed out for the sweet sweet money, he will return, much to everyones chagrin. Ironically only writer and director type Servants can do something to end this horrible movie franchise.
    Basically just Battle Continuation with flavor text tbh.

    Man-Slayer (Trope) A
    Listen, we do not make the rules, but we all know there are certain tropes of who will die.
    So Assassin will have advantages against all who fall under that trope. Mostly teenagers, college students, the buff football player, the annoying bitch, the beloved family pet, the black guy…
    Extra points if you dare to do the sex at night in a lone cottage. You've had it coming.
    But if you are one
    with plot armor
    who is persevering his onslaught
    , you can avoid this effect for a while!
    Downside is that he can not hurt children, like at all.
    No wonder he prevents others from doing the unprotected hanky panky.

    "Man, I am bored. When do they start doing it? C'mon Master, Mash is waiting...I wanna kill some horny teens..."



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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Noble Phantasm -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Noble Phantasm

    Aura of Decay (Logic)
    Presence of the Ultimate Horror Movie Trope


    A continuosly active Noble Phantasm of Assassin. The vicinity around Assassin is imposed with the concept of "Decay of Logic". A severely toned down version of his regular Foreigner Noble Phantasm. Objects are no longer affected, but humans become…
    plain dumber.
    All the typical dumb movie decisions of the protagonists of horror movies are fulfilled. People feel the urge to move into haunted houses where dozens of people were killed, in dangerous situations they think it is best to split up, they choose the dumbest way to flee, choose the banana instead of the weapon etc. Additionally their Luck Parameter drops tremendously. They dramatically fall into mud, the car wont start, the dress gets stuck in thick vegetation and have to run half-naked through water sprinklers...needless to say for some reason women are more affected than men.
    Huh, as if the
    Nasuverse
    Universe
    itself wills such a situation. It could very well be that this NP is the reason why his Presence Concealment is so high. Because people are just too stupid to look in the right direction or do basic stuff that would prevent murderers from getting into the house in the first place.


    Ghostface
    End of a Movie Career




    Less a Noble Phantasm, more of a Mystic Code. It embodies his existence as a…self-proclaimed seriel killer? Father Death? Icon of Halloween?
    Anyways, as an effect it grants Assassin the outfit of a famous horror movie icon.
    It conceals his features completely and changes his voice so it is unrecognizable. Anyone could be "The Killer", because this outfit is just plain simple. It is the most bought Halloween costume in America, probably in the West even. Downside is that his movie career is most certainly over. The bad acting, because of Unstable Movie Script, the persisting Sequels and the overall dumb characters in the scenario just turn off the people.
    Let us hope there is no event rerun next year...or ever again.


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Quotes and Relationships -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Quotes and Relationships

    The coolest Duo ever:
    "You two stay the hell away from me!"

    * being chased by Bäckerhexe after scaring the children too much *


    Pretenders:
    "How can you do this for so long?! Who wrote your script?"

    Murasaki Shikibu (Summer), "Plot Armor Servants":
    "Damn exposition dumb roles. Damn plot armor...I will get you soon enough."

    Alfred Hitchcock, George Mellies:
    "Oh no thats not good..."

    Hans Christian Andersen:
    "Oh no that is even worse. How can I be hardcountered by a mere 2* ?!"
    *Andersen beat him to a pulp just with his words alone*
    ...
    "Assassin, you okay? He was especially...direct today, huh?"
    "I'm fine..."


    Pretty Female Servants:
    "Hello, dear ladies. May I show you my tricks with my swee--"
    "AAAAAAAAAAHHH"
    "Why are we screaming?!"
    "I dont know, I just wanna get away from here!"
    "Okay let us split up and seek help in the spooky cemetary over there!"


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Lore and Background -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Lore and Background

    You know who that is.
    Edvard Munch | Dorian Gray is usually a difficult Foreigner, that changes from one Personality to the other randomly.
    During the evening times when Gray has control, he one day started watching trashy horror movies.
    And liked it. For some reason.
    A man that is obsessed with beauty and youth liking the gory horror in which young and old are killed alike is actually a strange a weird hobby and out of character if you ask me.
    He likes that one particular series the most. Upon hearing the infamous mask is inspired by Munch's painting, he used it to devise a plan.
    Gray used Munch's Soul Painting and created a copy of the mask as a Mystic Code and with the Chaldea Shenanigans that happen Halloween it was possible to shift his Saint Graph into a Spooky Designation. Upon doing so he merged with the whole concept of Horror Movie Tropes and became Assassin. On top of that he could suppress Munch now much better, becoming the primary personality during the festival.
    Munch usually tries to keep control so Gray does no harm to Chaldea. Perhaps he saw no need for it anymore, because as Assassin he is so...different?
    For better or worse, this effect wears of as soon as the Halloween season is over. The spook will then find it's end. The Killer is then finally put to rest and Chaldea can remember his appearance as another anecdote.
    Or will he appear next Halloween again?!


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Craft Essence -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Craft Essence

    What's your favourite scary movie?



    "Hehe I love this scene...yes scare her, scare her good.
    "What's your favourite scary movie?" no, sounds different. "What's your favourite scary movie?" Yes, thats perfect.
    Nice line, I need to write that down for next time...
    Gut...you...like a...a...damn it I forgot already..."

    "Fish?"
    "Yes fish, thank you...MUNCH?!"
    "Time to get things back as they were."


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    Sorry for the lowest of low quality shitposts. I got them for easter, summer and now halloween. Fear for Christmas. Got no plans for that one yet tho.
    Bonus:

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    The true essence of Halloween, trashy horror movies, posted at last.

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    Dorian/Munch (Halloween): Huh, so this is the Servant you were asking about my Melies to include in the Relationships section. I'd been wondering for a while what an "archetypal slasher-film Servant" could look like so this was fun to see. Kind of a weird fit for Dorian in particular which you even admitted but I guess if you look at (those type of) horror films as "extravagant displays of youth and immorality" it kind of fits. I actually never thought of those Halloween masks being inspired by the famous painting so that was an informative bit of trivia. Out of curiosity any thoughts on my Domnina?

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    thanks for the reviews!
    just read it! I somehow feel that Ruler is a weird class for her. She does have wishes for the grail and while she is a saint, doesnt really act like one. It doesnt even feel justified outside of it because of the lack of flavor in the Class Skills. The second skill is really cool tho. Together with her first NP she feels more castery to me. With the cloth perhaps even Saber. But idk, Ruler bothers me somehow. And the 2nd NP is pretty strong for her i feel like.
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    Munch (Hallloween): Well then. And there you go again, shaming us with your improved format and humbling us with a GIT GUD in capital letters through this Servant. He's exactly the amount of whack and fun a Halloween alt has to be - and the trashy slasher movies references? This nice tidbit of info about the mask? The flavor in these Skills? Chef kiss this is what a Halloween Servant is about. Thank you for the good food.
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    Taking some cues I decided to expand further on personality and added some lines

    Name: Hoor
    Class: Archer
    Origin: Norse Mythology
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    STR: C
    AGI: B
    END: B
    MAG: A+
    LCK A+



    "Hmph Pseudo? As if I'd let such experience pass. I'll simply diminish this existence into something bearable"

    Younger brother of the God Baldur of Norse Mythology. Son of Odin and Freyja each a chief god in their own rights, yet as if price for Freyja's excessive blessings for Baldur, Hoor was born blind and lacking authorities, a god who alike a human was simply born without a 'fate' hanging over his head. Abandoned by the Norse Odin out of parental obligation had him raised by the Valkyrie. In Norse mythology it was better for a warrior to die upon the battlefield and become an Einherjar than return to his fellow mean cripple, the 'weak' simply had no place among them. A prince who did not struggle, a prince who did not achieve, a prince aware of the cruelty of his people, he simply kept silent and attempted to achieve any power he could by ordering the Valkyrie to pass the runes Odin entrusted upon them to him, with such came pain, but also struggle and victory, a new feeling in the previously empty life and thus Hoor pursued such strength madly eventually overcoming his blindness by mastery of other powers

    "Gaining eyes? Restoring my vision? Yes I could very well do that but by then I would just be another Asgardian. The voices and the steps of the warriors defeated by the useless Hoor. I will never forget it"

    Unwilling to accept their weakness, their complacency, their defeat, the people cried to the Shining Baldur who set out to defeat the Dark Hoor. Despite the blessings of Freyja, the best equipment and training of the realms the fight was not a casual matter at all, no matter how many time Baldur knocked Hoor down the latter stood up each time with increasing ferocity, spears, swords, axes, runes, fists, Hoor went through all of his skills in what could be said to be a futile effort

    "If it was futile then why was Baldur backing down despite his invincibility? Despite all of his power? He could have easily killed me by then yet his hand hesitated and his eyes were filled with fear. That boy didn't understand struggle, fear, hate, a brilliant star loved by all. Freyja's little darling"

    As punishment for daring to raise a hand against Baldur, Freyja deprived Hoor of all his equipment, treasures and servants. Time passed and order was made proper, Hoor stayed in the silent dark unbothered by all and the Aesir enjoyed their supremacy, one game Baldur enjoyed was the testing of his invincibility, no matter what the asgardians brought nothing could harm him

    Hödr stood outside the ring of men, because he was blind. Then spake Loki to him: 'Why dost thou not shoot at Baldr?' He answered: 'Because I see not where Baldr is; and for this also, that I am weaponless.' Then said Loki: 'Do thou also after the manner of other men, and show Baldr honor as the other men do. I will direct thee where he stands; shoot at him with this wand.'

    The trickster Loki offered a bow and arrow so that too Hoor could play the games. Silently without announcing himself Hoor stretched the bow and prepared the arrow

    "I had no vision but I could feel Loki's glee at what was about to happen....and I enjoyed it as well" A silent comradery, to tear down the strong who jeered at them, who did not recognize their efforts and sacrifice, who spoke of honor and respect while engaging in debased cowardliness, punishment for sins unchecked

    True the shaft flew.....and it pierced Baldur's heart. An immediate fatal strike that no one could have saved him from. For this Loki's children were turned into wolves and slaughtered each other and he was shackled with their intestines while a snake dripped poison unto his eyes while Hoor was slaughtered by his half-brother Vali. Before the punishment Freyja attempt to resurrect Baldur by collecting tears from all living beings, yet one hag did not cry, for she was Loki in disguise.

    "Did you cry for Hoor Freyja?"
    "That thing?!"
    "Thing? The boy worked so hard to gain acceptance and love from his parents and people but all he received in return was jeer and laughs and when he finally gathered strength your lot had Baldur break him. Couldn't stand being wrong could you?"

    The end of the Nordic Texture began as prophecy dictated. Fimbulvertr arrived and the giants began to move, Loki freed from his shackles marched towards Asgard despite Sigyn's begging, and leading the armies of Hel was Hoor armed with the Bow and Arrows of Mistletoe bathed with Baldur's blood

    Personality

    An unloved child raised by machines, due to them being unable to lie or deceive him Hoor grew to hate the hypocrisy and lies of the Aesir who spoke of the vileness of the Jotun and the foolishness of humans but not only engaged in the same behavior but had their armies formed of humans they found useful. By accident he discovered his talent with magic, his only inheritance from Odin and Freyja, and through trial and error learned of the runes imbued within the Valkyrie. Armed with this power he left the castle and showed his power in contests against fellow Aesir, who without fail accused him of cheating and drudgery, that a blind man could not have such strength, that he was simple a puppet of another. Angered he broke the spirits of those who spread such lies and rumors and continued to hone is power until Baldur intervened. One who only knew blessings and love another who only knew gain by suffering and apathy, understanding was impossible and they came to blows.

    At his core he is a child seeking acceptance as such he does not care about justice, righteousness or similar and immediately lashes out. Disdain for the strong, empathy for the weak and love for those attempting to climb out of their doomed fates and achieve power. A god of struggle who lives up to his name, Hoor meaning warrior, to spite upon the past, to dream of a future standing above all and braving the struggles of the present. For humans who are infinitely weaker than a proper god Hoor has nothing but love for their frail struggling selves


    Lines

    On Summon- Oh oh oh! Rejoice master your cry has reached the ears of a fellow struggle! Archer Hoor at your disposal. Tyrants, heroes, monsters, villlains, let us tear all those who dare to believe they are right by merit of existence alone

    Brynhildr- Father's sins....The curse upon her.....for her to let that go it would mean to stop being Brynhildr

    Valkyries- Oh have your lot become human-like with the passage of time or is this simply Odin planning another 'heroic' lineage? Giving valkyries to heroes was something he was fond off

    Gilgamesh- Irremissible! IRREMISSIBLE! IRREMISSIBLE! YOU ARE ALL THAT IS EVIL UPON THE WORLD DIE DIE

    Spartacus- Becoming a bastion of power is not enough! Those below you must stand on their two damn feet as well! All you do is give them a temporary reprieve!

    Sitonai- AHAHAHA For the wretched goddess to lose seat to a human. 'Sitonai' I look very forward to seeing your untainted self!

    *The servant identifies herself as Sitonai instead of Freyja and I feel that's like important because Nasuverse Gods all look down upon humans, sure some are 'nice' about it but it's always super condescending


    Skills

    Independent Action (A+): A lonely purposeless god who was simply alive, abandoned and left in the care of machines he had to manage his down development and growth. Attitude further enhanced by being a pariah of the Aesir and Freyja taking away little of what Odin left for him. Yet Hoor remained strong, yet he remained a living painful scar to the Aesir. A embodiment that their ways were far from perfect

    Magic Resistance (A): Son of Odin and one who pursued magic like his father whole honing his body. By lacking vision he polished what he could to its limits, this being the ability to feel the flow of energy within all beings making it trivial to counter and disrupt enemy magic of all types

    Personal Skills
    Fangs for the Swordless (EX): Divinity born without purpose, power without identity. Even the weakest of gods is born with a purpose and given the intellect and abilities to excel at it. Hoor was born with nothing, yet he drew breath. A god eerily akin to humans, that such imperfection was born from the seeds of Odin and Frejya was nothing but an ill-omen. Yet Odin was a curious god fond of the ways of humans as such he arranged for Hoor to live and grow. In that silence he made his own purpose and chose his fate, not by the Norns, not by Odin, not by the World. A anomaly within the systems of the world. Grants immunity to 'fate' and 'authority', if Hoor is to be defeated he must be destroyed with his enemy's own two hands and not simply because they are a greater existence than he is

    World Flow (A): Skill of similar nature to Mana Tuning and Walking and Breathing. By being still and remaining within that silent darkness he heard and felt the caress of the world and all those who walked upon it. An ability to perceive the truth at its utter core and touch it with his own hands. Distant connections can be destroyed, the saint graph can be meddled with, illusions and derivations fail to take hold as Hoor attacks their very base. A god that undoes the work of his ancestors. Befitting as one who brought Ragnarok.

    Mana Burst (Ice) (A): By channeling magical energy he is able to wield ice as an extension of his self and increase the damage of attacks tremendously. A reward for bringing Fimbulvertr. In another class this would be a noble phantasm but as Archer it becomes a skill and is downgraded to a simple Mana Burst

    Twilight Survivor (-): Said to find peace with Baldur in Hell and post-Ragnarok both would be revived into the new World. Such event did not come to pass, the survivors were simply sent to the other side of the world and no newborn Yggdrasil heralded a new age for the Norse. Yet the belief of the norse worshiping humans grant him this skill. Seemingly useless but....


    Noble Phantasm

    Mystelainn- Darkness Devour Light
    Anti-Unit/Anti-God/Anti-Light/Anti-World
    Rank EX
    A simple innocent bow and arrow made of mistletoe, even to the eyes of the wisest heroes there's nothing special about this bow. The weapon used by Hoor to kill Baldur. It is said in fear of prophecy Freyja demanded a promise from all beings to never harm Baldur, the mistletoe was yet too young to make oaths so it was passed over and with age Freyja simply forgot such thing and enjoyed halcyon days within Asgard....Perhaps as the planet provided Surtr with the weapon to lay down Asgard it provided Loki with a weapon to begin Ragnarok?

    Once drawn the End of the World is announced and providence exists no longer. Eternal Winter arrives, nothing grows or is born anymore, the barrier between the worlds are broken and Ragnarok begins with the dead invading the land, the giants traveling the Bifrost, Surtr leaves Muspellheim, Fenrir and Jormungandr break free and myriad other disaster. It is not evil or good, but simply the 'end' that lives within the arrow as such all things hit by it immediately reach the end of their fates and die. But Hoor's own belief in fate, that its something conquerable, taints the arrow as such it becomes possible for those hit by it to survive as long as their spirit does not break as the load begins to encroach their bodies


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    Hoor is a very sad and angry boy who just wants hugs

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    I listened to this while writing his sheet yet I come up with somewhat heroic Volk from Dragalia. My mind is really fucking weird
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    i present you one of the major Antagonist of my Requiemverse , i made the start of this profile before the server move as i tried to imitate wyverns layout but after the mentioned were it out of some reason more difficult . however i am curious about your oppinion the prologue is the start of his first appearance and if wanted can i expand the story


    Remainer of Darkness




    Appearance


    First Form






    Final Form ?








    Title
    Primordial God
    Protogenoi
    of Darkness
    Height 260 cm
    Origin Greek Mythology
    Alignment Lawfull Evil
    Attributes Primordial World ,Divine,Earth
    Weapons His Spear , the Weaponry of his Biomagitech body ,Primordial Thaumaturgy
    Other Qualifying Classes* Lancer,Caster,Shielder,Avenger,Beast
    Likes Entertainment in general, watching the amusing deeds of Humanity, loyal and pious Humen of the old Cults,his Family ,
    Dislikes Arrogance and Hubris of Men, Usurpers ,
    Abrahamitic
    rebellious and misguided Humen
    , the
    inability
    difficulty
    to eat or drink due to his Mechanic Body
    Compatible Master Kuberi Clan,Emilia Krahnich,Flavius Julianus


    Parameter:

    STR: C+~A END: D~A AGI: C~A
    MGI: A+++ LCK: C~ NP: EX


    Prologue


    In a great Hall that look like a Location out of a fantastic Science punk movie are severall Persons in Worker and Labor cloaks finished with what looks like a sort of Robot which is totally motionless though it looks quite humanoid , it shines in silver and cupper collors amongs the groups are also People which are clothed more traditionall and are looking like arcane practioners amongst them is one Man with a intricate pattern on his Handback , they are drawing a magic formel circuit on the ground after that are they with a crane position the Robot in the middle of the circle then are the most people are distancing themselves from the Robot in iddle distance , on the contrary is approaching it and stretching his hamd towards the robot s he displays the red symbols on his hand ,after he takes a concentrated cough is he starting to recite the incantation :

    “Let's silence the prayers of the new, let us go back into the memory of the miraculous old world.”
    “Let blood and the seals of contracts be the foundation.”
    “Let rise a wall against the wind that shall fall.”
    “Let us open the four closed gates of the Holy Knights.”
    “Let the three-forked path from the ancestors reaching unto the lost kingdom rotate.”
    “Let it be declared now;
    your flesh shall serve under me, and my fate shall be with your sword.
    Submit to the beckoning of the Holy Grail.
    Answer, if you would submit to this will and this truth.”
    “An oath shall be sworn here.
    I shall attain all virtues of the lost Paradise;
    I shall have dominion over all fears of Hell.”
    “Guardian of the Old World!”

    As he recite it are the markings on his hand are shinning deep Red aswell the magical circle is starting to glow aswell as the in the Robot implanted Magic Circuits .

    The Circle then is starting to erupt in a magical flash which conndence in a cloud ,after it clread was the Robot standing upright as its Magic Circuits are shining brightly but then are they return dormant and the Metallic Golem is falling to the ground so that it looks as if it would sitting on the ground .
    Everyone in the Hall are spechless and are dissapointed as the Ritual seems to be have failed and that they materials they are having used been wasted as s then around the Robot is starting to form a mist like Darkness is forming around the Robot which is glowing in the Darkest Red Violet Colornote imaginable then is the Magical Android engulfed fully in Darkness but they can hear mechanical sounds as would the Robot rais itself on the Legs until,



    out of the Blackness two deep Red Eyes are shinning out in the bright Room all in the bright Room all Persons that residing in the Hall are feeling a oppresing power aura .


    All especially the Man nearest to the Entity are in fear ,but he manages to in deference asking almost whispering "Who are you ?"

    As the Entity responding is the Darkness slowly fading as it resonds ,

    "Are you the one which called me in the World ?"

    "i see you all have contributed to my descend in this Realm ."

    "Fear not , as your prayers are having be answered "




    " I First Ruler of the Chtonians is announcing himself , my sacred name is Erebos !"

    The people are slowly collected themselves , as he is now surpressing his immense Aura .

    The Man before him is making a sweating smile and says "H..hello my name Flavius Julian its a honor to meet you ."





    Dessert


    Dialogues:


    Minnamoto no Raikou:" Come my Daughter of another Father join my side "

    Demonic Servants: "Ah there are quite many servants of my Childrenns brethrenn i see .....wonderfull ."


    Saints:"HAHAHA you should be Saints you are just some delusional Fools no heretic traitors that betrayed their Brothers and Sisters of their culture aswell specially their Gods which gave your Forefathers and Foremothers their wisdom and crafts ."




    Augustus Octavian:"You are truly a Person that is worthy to join the Ranks of the Divines."






    Skills

    Skills:

    Feast of Time:B++ (at the start)
    Classkils of the Remainer class it describe the Degree of in which form and in which the Servant has resisted the Fangs of Time,in this case its more a form of connection and stability instability which causes that from time to time malfunctions in his Biomechanic body with his Divine Core thus his hold in the Biomechanical body , so are similar to frail constitution moments of weakness ,especially at the start expectable.
    However through the workings of his third Noblephantasm are with increasing degree of transmutation are these malfunctions decreasing until this skills rank is complete at Rank E-

    Origin Manifestation:B
    Remainer Class skill ,This skill comes into the effect of the Saint-Graph foundation of he concept the servant embodies ,atleast normally in this case is instead it used to materialize the original state of the Divine spirit as the special body was made to accept as much of the Divine essence as possible.

    Magic Resistance: A++
    As already before the realization of the attraction of a Divine Spirit was lone through the used materials highly resistant against Thaumaturgies , but with the occupation of the Divine Spirit the Durability increased massively.. So are all modern Thaumaturgies negated fully , and even a high Resistance against Divine Sorceries or True Magic .


    Primordial Divine Core :A++
    Denotes one Status as primordial God ,in his case as Protogenoi the first Generation of Greek Gods ,a generation of demiurgic Gods which were the Creators of the Greco-Roman World Sphere , as each member created a part of the World Foundation amongst the World were created , in his particular case were it that he created the primordial Darkness and the Underworld . Further as in this case his host is not a Human Body function it also Energy source .

    Personal skills:

    Mechanic Constitution(Atlas):A+
    Denotes one augmentation withAlchemic Magitech of Atlas type Brand , at thisskill is almost the complete body augmented with Atlas technology , with the exception of his Diine Core ,Magic Circuits aswell some still flesh parts in the Thorax area .

    Primordial Breath of Darkness:EX

    The Authority of Erebos sublimated as skill , its his Authority as God of primordial Darkness which causes several effects namely at first that he can produce vast quantities of Darkness attributed True Ether , which he expel simply through his “breathing” , which he can use similar a Mana burst .However thats only a part of his power ,namely as his Domain lies basically between our World has he access to what Humans called “Imaginary Numbers” in a dimension what normal Human Mages or even Wizards can reach , his own description of this World is however the “World of Void and Negativity” in meaning of Repulsion which the old Greek Philosophers once discovered through the force of their Minds .

    So has he the ability to spatial teleportation like can he open portals by opening Gates in the World Texture so are Spatial interferences easily realisable , further as he is also able to use negative thaumaturgy that example wise evoke in other beings their negative Feelings like Hunger , Wrath,Anger,Jealousy Fear out of which he can use to manipulate others aswell are the negativities of Humanity for him a source of nourishment and power for him. As the globalisation and its unnatural Concurrence pressure caused great Negativity is the modern World a rich Banquet so as a side effect he gets equal Mana like a Self Replenishment skill Rank B .

    Commander of the Hordes:A+
    Unregarded from his fall of the throne of the Greek Underworld which he created does he still possess the Leader capabilities to rule and command hordes of creatures be it phantasmal Beasts , Demon kind , or even Dragons , he can command them with peerless Authority as befitting of the Father of Chthonian Deities and beings of Underworld .However under normal circumstances it isnt possible to control Humans . AS their mentality is different ,but not too different as through the usage of his Negative Thaumaturgy is it just a Challenge to evoke the dark Bestiality withhin the Light of the Mind .

    First Lord of the Underworld :C+
    Albeit were said that before Hades Tartarus where the Ruler of the Underworld ,but before that were Erebos the Ruler of it , as unknown by the mortals that tartaros was the product of what today would be called as threesome between Erebos ,Nyx and Gaia as Tartaros was meant to be the Ruler of the Realm that should bear his Name , however later was it conquered through the new Generation of the Olympic Gods and Hades took over the throne , as his Son were severally weakened and pushed deeper in the canyon grounds of the Underworld did he called his Father Erebos for help although was Erebos as one of the Primordial Gods rather amused spectating their acts then to participate although he had the opportunity to intervene earlier did he not saw a reason but as his Child plead for his help did he feeled obliged to intervene so did he lead a revolt as he unleashed the primordial Chthonian hordes aswell did attempted to free Chronos but he was strikes back by Hades coordinated counters .

    So does he has lost many Ranks in this skill however is he still a Royality and keeped many parts of his rule .








    Noblephantasm


    Void Spear of the Space Foundation
    Anti-World
    A+ (EX)

    Is the reformation of the Spaceroom "Roof" that the Primordial Darkness is building and which is forming the Foudation of the World , it is the embodiment of his Field of Authority aswell Domain of Rule , the foundation on which Heaven and Earth are lying , as Erebos were one oft he first beings that were Born from Chaos did he formed aside his Sister Ananke aswell Nyx , his Domain lies not in the Texture of Earth directly it is the border that shields our World against the others in some sense is Erebos self a being that Rules between Worlds . The Spear Looks like a solidified Spiral and is a Divine Construct that rivals the last phantasm Excaliber , the Spears true form is one of the "imaginary Pillars " that build the Roof of Reality of our world


    The Spear is looking like a Spraling Dark Vortex due to its patterns with swirl patterns through out the whole spera from end to the Blades . The Blades are three slightly in Claw like form shaped Blades .

    The Spears coloration is pitchblack with slightly night blue taint alone the gaze at it let one see one a glimpse at the Darkness before Light . The Spear possess eroding like abbillities as it is able to destroy the order of things ,this is because that this Spear is the Embodmented primordial void and Negattivity or Repulsion that existed before the positivity that all that now exists possess .

    The Spear is capable to attack and bypass spatial phenomenons like Riders Hippogriffon or similar phenomenons is he able to harm . So are Forreigner class servants highly vulnerable targets as this Spear is the embodiment of our Worlds Borders can it sever their World transcending connection to their patrons ,thus greatly reduce their powers .

    Also is he able with the Spear to create a Divine Barier through which a great Area can be completely isolated ,by partially let it transform back into its Shield form as this Weapon possess both Shield and Spear forms.

    As this Spear is functioning a anchor and foundation of the World and represent the first order of the Greek Mythosspehre would this Noblephantasm have the strenght to anchor and preserve a "Lost World" on the Texture of the Earth .

    Further after the true name release is the Spear from a solid form is emaneting intense Darkness that instead of darken the Scenery its more akin to Dark Light that blocks the natural light as normal Human find it blending and their reflects tell them to prootect their eyes ,if they fall not already unconcious as with the activation of thiis Noblephantasm the foundation of our World is shaken and true Ether is filling the area even Heroic Spirits arre feeling unease of this Darkness .

    Erebos himself describe it as the primordial truth before the existence that claim the world .

    He then is thrusting the Darkness whih form a Vortex now towards the target which is causing massive destruction as it destruction ev erything "with a existence or positivity" the power of the void incarnaqted into a Attack that shake the realiation of existence a attack which only other powers of Divine Creation or Destruction can hope to rival .


    Corpus Hephaestius type Sibill
    Anti-Unit(self)
    B+


    Is the Biomagitech body of Erebos in which he was summoned into . Although is this Body a craftwork of the modern World is its state and alone due to its parts a object worthy of the Title Noblephantasm created by humen . In its creation participated and were working on it several Masters of their craft namely a Magical craftsmen of the Sorcerious craftsmenship teachings of Hephaestus . Magical Metalurgic material for which ancient Armors were molded aswell parts of a ancient Giant . Dozens of the best parts of high quality Sibill type Homunkulus which each one would had the cappability to be a Holy Grail werer crrafftet together by Masters of Human enggineering and Necromantic Fleshsculptors and connected with the Magitch parts through Magic circuits by specialised Medic Mages , a Magic Crest of the extinct Kykrdraugmaar clan obtained by a apostatic Church Executer which stole it out of the Vaults of the Vaticans .

    Chtonian Sanctuary- Tartaros
    Anti-Territory (self)
    E~EX

    Is the sublimation of the creation of the World in this Case Tartaros as one oft the Demiurgic Gods of the first Generation it is a World which he and Nyx creaeted as such are having both access to this Noblephantasm . It is the materialisation of the Greek underworld Tartaros the original state of the underworld before Hades tamed it ,it allows Erebos a form of the highest Terrritory creation abbillity to terraforming the sournding into a image of the underworld ,atleast normaly as he is not summoned as whole or regularily but just partially with a magitech body it has another effect now namely that it transform his Biomagitech body towards his true body which cause that his mechanic body which already is a Magic cod of the highest order into a Divine Construct which cause the malfunctions inform of Feast of Time is increasingly reduced .

    Which causes that the Weapons oft he Body are now Dvine armaments be it the hidden blades , the thunder emmiters or laser blasters are bosted to divine levels the body constitutions are getting more identical to the vlues of his original body.

    Also can he use it to summon chtonian beings of the underworld towards his side aswell to create and replicate certain aspects and wares of the underworld








    Notes
    I hope that this Remainer will help to make the Remainer class more liked , aside have i in working at the moment atleast one other REmainer servant. if his Story where he encounter a Rider class version of Raikou amongst other figures of the political and militaric Government .

    If you are interested inhis personality annd not so much in the story will i addt he section . About the Background lore i planed to wait with revealing after i make the profile of my second Protogenoi servant .

    and i know i said i am and still be against the mecha aspects of the Nasu greek lore but in the contrary what is it vica versa ?

    i hope that you find him intersting .




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    I'm back. Sorry for the long disappearance. It has been a very busy semester for me so far. Not only have we transitioned back to in-person school, but I've been dealing with an English class taught by a professor who, in my opinion, should not have a teaching license. And then when I'm not dealing with classwork, I'm either dealing with work, working on my own personal projects, or playing Arknights.

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    Also, I've started to kick around the idea of a Pretender Yakub. Honestly, the entire Yakub narrative is really funny because of how stupid it is. The problem is that I've got no idea what to put as Yakub's true identity (or even any of his Skills or NP). His true identity will probably be some white supremacist, though, that way I can dump on both the Yakub narrative and white supremacy.
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    死徒二十七祖 The Twenty Seven Dead Apostle Ancestors Kabalisto Koga's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    This has to be some of your worst spelling yet koga.
    And aside that how do you find it ?
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