Possibly. But remember that this is a) Nasuverse and b) manga/anime/LN Catholicism.Originally Posted by Christemo
Possibly. But remember that this is a) Nasuverse and b) manga/anime/LN Catholicism.
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Which is exactly why you shouldn't think that they're actually gonna think of that.
Bottom line, it's not Big J.C
Also you shouldn't try to apply the logic of the actual religion to the words of someone saying that praying is for the sake of the Lord.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
Had not thought of that, but you're very correct.
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There hasn't been any protag servant form the middle east...
You're kidding right? Assassin is like the most featured Servant in Heaven's Feel. And poor Zouken is trying his best to protag up and reign in the crazy granddaughter.
Localizationing stuff
Mohammad Caster when
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He needs to have a bomb in his turban
Last edited by Christemo; October 24th, 2014 at 04:21 PM.
Where do you think Uruk was?
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
The center of the world.
I hope to do justice to Five's greatness. This sheet uses both the Fragments stuff, stuff from actual history and shit I made up on the spot. Five-senpai, pls watch over me.
Class: Rider
True Name: Ramesses II
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Birth: Egypt
Original Lifetime: 1303-1213BC
STR: C MGI: A
AGI: C LCK: A++
END: A+ NP: EX
Class Skills:
Riding: A+
Creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.
Magic Resistance: B
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected. Magecraft that draws upon the power or visage of the sun is completely nullified, regardless of rank.
Personal Skills:
Pharaoh’s Decree: EX
The ability to gain additional Skills for an indefinite amount of time. Differing from Imperial Privilege, where the user’s delusional insistence allows them to take on skills they should not otherwise have, it is the ability to forcibly change oneself’s body and soul to have the Skill in question through strength of mind and the blessings of the gods.
For Ramesses, the relevant Skills are Animal Dialogue, Mystic Eyes of Heat, Divinity and Eye of the Mind (False).
Eye of the Mind (False): B
A natural talent to avoid danger on the basis of an innate 6th sense, intuition, or prescience, where accuracy of instinct has been augmented by experience -- somewhat overcoming the problem of visual obstructions that appear in the course of combat. The 'False' version is superficially similar, but in fact represents a natural instinct that cannot be obtained regardless of effort or experience -- even though experience can refine its accuracy. Though Ramesses possesses only Eye of the Mind (True) naturally from his many decades of experience with war, he achieves the natural instinct through the modification of his own body using his divine privilege.
Animal Dialogue: A
The ability to communicate with animals, creatures that do not speak a “language of words.” At this rank, very complex nuances can be conveyed without issue, and even advanced language use like wordplay can be understood by all animals and Phantasmal Beasts who do not possess higher intelligence.
Divinity: A
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude. At high ranks, one is treated as a mixed race of human and Divine Spirit. Though he possessed no Divinity from birth, his own insistence, the worship of him as the Sun God Ra given mortal form and his many Sed festivals that ritualistically transformed him into a god gave Ramesses divinity of the highest order over the course of his long life.
Golden Rule: B
Measures one’s fortune in acquiring wealth. At this rank, fortunes that could afford great luxuries can be acquired swiftly.
Charisma: A+
The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. At this rank, one can easily lead a vast empire, and can be said to have achieved the greatest level of popularity as a human being. During the anniversary of his Sed Festival, he is said to have the kind of almost curse-like charismatic appeal that could sway the world to be under one ruler.
Military Tactics: B
Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.
The Battle of Kadesh, where Ramesses clashed with Muwatalli II in the largest battle involving chariots of all time, is the oldest recorded battle where tactics and formations have taken part. His great strategic wit stayed with the King of Kings for all of his great years.
Mystic Eyes: C
The possession of Mystic Eyes that are capable of interfering with the outside world. Ramesses has given himself Mystic Eyes of Heat that can inflict severe heatstroke upon anyone who looks into his golden sun-colored eyes.
Noble Phantasms:
The Solar Ship of the Dark NightMesektet: EX
Anti-World
The greatest Noble Phantasm of Egypt, Ramesses’ ultimate weapon that marks him as Ra’s Mighty Truth who was so great as to receive onto himself the solar barge that revived the great god of the sun every night. Fittingly, this Noble Phantasm can only be activated in the hours of darkness.
It is a massive flying ship of gold that shines as bright as the midday sun, burning Ramesses’ golden visage into the eyes of all who look into the night sky. The light it radiates is so bright that none save those themselves blessed by the sun can look directly upon it and not avert their gaze in fear of burning their eyes out witnessing the most glorious of all: The King of Kings in all his splendor, representing the sun itself.
The ship exudes a sweltering heat that can burn through even great magical armor, and can channel the light of the sun through itself like a facet to unleash upon the King’s foes a colossal beam of destructive golden light that can tear down the walls of even the greatest fortress and burn great heroes and their armies to ash. Finally, the ship possesses the ability to move at speeds approaching that of light, as it can be said to be forged from sunlight itself.
The Lion-Bodied Beast Avatar of the Hot SandsThe Sphinx of Abu El-Hol: A++
Anti-Army
Divine Beast Sphinx, the “Father of Terror”.
It is the personification of the King of Kings’ power. An existence equal to that of Divine Beast-tier Dragon Kind. It is as big as a semi-trailer and can disregard the laws of physics, as it is capable of running and even dashing on air. It’s primary weapons are it’s huge talons, which can be charged with prana to become red-hot, capable of chipping mountains to dust. The Sphinx is also highly intelligent and capable of reading patterns in attacks. Similarly to how it can charge it’s talons, it can put prana into debris and use them as projectiles. It can transform into a massive tornado of fire capable of melting reinforced concrete in seconds. Finally, even if it is lethally injured and even outright decapitated, it is capable of continuing battle, as Phantasmal Species of it’s caliber have no need for vital functions to live.
The Great Shining Temple ComplexRamesseum Tentyris: A+++
Anti-Army, Reality Marble
An ability of the King of Kings that manifests as a massive temple complex, several kilometers from end to end. The two temples within it, Abu Simbel and the Ramesseum, are teeming with great Phantasmal Beasts from all three categories of power, including those of the Dragon Kind, and the great amount of prana their vital functions generate make this great Reality Marble-like Noble Phantasm capable of sustaining itself indefinitely, becoming a permanent spot upon the fabric of the world itself claimed by the physical manifestation of the Pharaoh’s will. So long as the temple stands, Ramesses can call upon the help of the many monsters that reside within it, either as full manifestations or where nothing more than their clawed limbs or fire-breathing maws manifest to tear his foes apart or burn them to cinders.
Who Is A King If Not An Army of His OwnBeit el-Wali: B
Anti-Unit (Self)/Anti-Army
A Noble Phantasm cultivated from the King of Kings’ military conquests in Nubia at only twenty-two years of age, where the impatient king, without his chariot, honor guard or even a mount marched out against the encroaching Nubian vanguard of twenty thousand men, wishing to test the extent of his great strength. By the time midnight came, even the most trusting and loyal of his followers did not place confidence in his continued safety and marched out to save their king, ready for combat in the worst case scenario that he had fallen. To their great surprise, the radiant king of the sun stood atop a fifty-meter tall mount of corpses, having slaughtered the army to the last man by himself, covered in wounds and his enemies’ blood but still standing.
In effect, for every opponent starting at two Ramesses is facing without any beasts or allies besides him, his physical strength, speed and endurance increases by a small amount, the effect stacking indefinitely until the King of Kings becomes nothing more than a whirlwind of destruction, his visage like the War God Horus himself, golden blade cleaving every enemy in sight apart.
Look Upon My Works, Ye Mighty, and Despair!Ozymandias: B
Anti-Unit
The ability that invokes Ramesses’ title as the king of all kings, a man who is also a god and stands as equal to them. It is the concept that denotes that no man, not even a king, can prevent themselves from prostrating before his golden form when he announces his name during combat. Those who have divine blood, who can be said even in part to be among the gods he stands equal to can resist the command to an extent depending on how high their Divinity is, however those with particularly low Divinity who can be said to be not a god, but a monster, is not merely commanded to the ground but thrown to it.
Last edited by Christemo; February 25th, 2015 at 02:37 PM.
Sorry Karna, Chris has new husbando in Ramesses II.
look at those 9 personal skills, ye mighty, and despair
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I just realized Ramesses probably the only Servant in the canon that could go to Cairo and see his own dead body.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Yeah, most other Servants' dead bodies probably wouldn't be in Cairo.
That's just what they want you to think. It's the last place anyone would look!
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Figured I'd mention I went back and did a little more fixing to my Davy Jones and Vlad III, such as fixing skill ranks that don't exist, changing the rank of Vlad's Dracula NP, and changing Vlad's alignment to Lawful Mad. Below is one me and a friend collaborated on for a former campaign.
The Monkey King
I decided to edit this a little bit, for a few reasons:
A: To make it more faithful
B: To adhere to the soft cap of three personal skills, I singled out the three that he would be most likely to have
C: To edit his parameters in accordance with point A
D: I added the splurge above regarding his personality and combat style, which weren't there before
Last edited by DarkWarrior; September 23rd, 2015 at 12:48 PM.
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At least it doesn't a reality marble that lets it do multi-demensional stuff.
CMIIW, but aren't more perceptive abilities like seeing through illusions and discerning evil more like pure eyes (or something like that), as opposed to mystic eyes that can exert an effect on the outside world?
Other than that, rather interesting sheet. Not nearly as bad as I immediately worry for when I see Sun Wukong's name.
I think they fall under the realm of mystic eyes, because according to the tale, his eyes in specific were (unwittingly) enchanted to do just what it says in the skill description. I also forgot to mention it in the skill, but they also have the typical visual effect of mystic eyes...well, I shouldn't say typical, since each one is unique, but Sun Wukong's irises always appear to be burning or otherwise ablaze.
Also, the first examples in TM that we ever get of Mystic Eyes is in fact supernatural observation, rather than some sort of outward effect. (MEoDP to be more specific)
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They're classified as mystic eyes specifically because they allow the user to actually interact with death and not just see it. Which is an outward effect.
Huh, I was always under the impression that they were simply able to observe that specific effect, and it was up to the user to have the ability to act upon the very specific knowledge that was imparted. I always assumed that if some bloke got stupidly lucky and managed to cut perfectly through a "line" even without seeing it, it'd still work.
But at any rate, it's still a fairly specific effect placed specifically on his eyes, and thus I don't think would fall under Eye of the Mind(True). I could simply edit his Mystic Eyes to simply dispel illusions, rather than see through them.
Last edited by DarkWarrior; October 26th, 2014 at 11:23 AM.
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