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here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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oh, this, thats ok i not all that crazy over the NP either, but i could not find a better effect realy.
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negative feedback is fine, but please tell what you did not like só i can try to improve on my next sheets
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Marble Phantasm's are more True Ancestor territory. It would a very big stretch.
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Well, TA is a kind of Elemental
Gregor Samsa: Not a Servant you'd ever actually want to summon, but one that might make for an interesting story. I feel like you probably could've fused the effects of the his NP into his Skills and left him as an NP-less Servant, justified by the fact that he's a 'false existance' like Sasaki. That's what I would've done, anyway, but I never would've thought of making a sheet for this character, so good job anyway.
Medb Lily: Fun idea, but I feel like the execution is a little lacking. Maybe its just the messy formatting, though? Anway, I agree with Royd when they said that her NP just being a copy of Avalon is a little boring - it makes sense, but its still a bit of a let down. Maybe you could do something with the idea that its 'a reality marble representing her delusion of being a queen of faeries'? Or maybe you could have it be an 'internal reality marble connected to Avalon' which lets her absorb mana from Avalon/the Reverse Side of the World?
Nimrod: Faceclaim doesn't work for me - as in I literally can't see it. Anyway, speaking as someone whose done two different interpretations of Nimrod before, I feel like this sheet is a little... boring? I dunno, maybe try to look into the Nasuverse lore concerning the Tower of Babel to get some ideas of what he should be like?
On an unrelated note, I'm kind of surprised that a sheet for Shirou from Arashi's I Am Not There "fic" has never been done. There's definitely potential there and it would probably be very different than EMIYA.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
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i wonder what a best formating would be, i have been wondering how should i change my sheets
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
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Samsa is specifically acknowledged as being the character from a novel thought to be semi-autobiographical. Not 'the person who served as inspiration for Samsa' but literally the character from the novel who is suspiciously similar to Kafka, the author. His personality exists the way it does due to the fact that 'the reader's desired him to be that way'. He seems to be a pretty fake existance to me.
Dante and Holmes both come from GO, which is rather loose with Servant rules. Can't say much about Jekyll or Frankie, the only other fictional Heroic Spirit that doesn't come from GO (as far as I can remember, anyway). Anyway, I made my suggestion because he's specified as being a work of fiction in the sheet itself, I don't actually have a problem with non-mythical fictional characters being treated as real in the Nasuverse.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions IThough abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
maybe we are all fictional too...
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
"master, even if i am useless, will you protect me? if you will, then i will protect you to! i'll dismember anyone who tries to hurt you!"
Class: Assassin
Aligiment: Chaotic/good
region: France/japan
Height: 138cm
Weight: 33kg
Likes: sweets, open spaces, gentle people
Dislikes: agresive people, small spaces, alchohol
Talents: waiting
Armaments: blood-stained kitching knife
Natural enemies: Ayaka sajyou
stats:
Str: E
End: E
Agi: C
Mna: A
Lck: E
NP: A
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
craft essence
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Little Red Riding Hood: This formatting is much better than your previous ones, that's for sure. As for the sheet itself, it's pretty interesting. Looks of Pitifulness fits nicely with the theme, tho I'm can't say the same about her 3rd Skill. Also, her 2nd NP's effect is a bit too underwhelming for an A rank NP.