I think it was clarified that it doesn’t even have to be a lostbelt in the truest sense just an alternate history. That’s why I made my mordred not explicitly a lostbelt.
I think it was clarified that it doesn’t even have to be a lostbelt in the truest sense just an alternate history. That’s why I made my mordred not explicitly a lostbelt.
My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
Author's Note
Remade by the blood.
Sustained by the blood.
The eternal dragon goddess sits atop her blood-soaked throne,
And the world bleeds to perpetuate her utopia.
Learn to revere the blood.
Live in fear of the blood.
Make this the shape of your happiness.
IMMORTAL SCARLET EMPIRE: BÁTHORY
Lost Depth: WTF
Heads…...or Tails!
Last edited by Daneel Rush; August 23rd, 2019 at 03:48 PM.
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Bearer of the World’s SinsClass: Avenger
Avenger of EDEN
Source
True Name: Abel
Gender: Female
Alignment: Lawful Good
Region: EDEN Lostbelt
Source: The Bible
Parameters
Strength: E
Endurance: EX
Agility: D
Mana: EX
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: EX
Height: 160 cm
Weight: 50 kg
Likes: Peace, Kindness, Flowers, Sheep
Dislikes: ?
Attribute: Heaven
Armament: None
Talent: Meditation, Praying, Endurance
Natural Enemy: Angra Mainyu
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Noble Phantasms
Lore
Character Data
Story Role
Bond CE
Creator Notes
Hoo boy, what an absolutely amazing sheet. Blows everything else that's been posted in this round out of the water IMO. Some parts are so similar to my Avenger Abel sheet (even up to the genderbend and pseudo-curse of immortality) that I'm honestly curious if you were inspired there, but at the same time you took in such a completely different direction that it's utterly unique.
The concept of her Lostbelt is just fascinating, and its "stagnation" totally distinct from the ones we've seen thus far in canon. A world where everyone can indulge in every evil desire they want without hurting anyone. It sounds like a paradise, but once you realize that no one could ever grow from their mistakes or genuinely learn what they're doing is wrong in such a world it becomes utterly horrifying. In a way it reminds me of Ursula Le Guin's thought experiment of Omelas, an otherwise perfect utopia that depends on the horrific suffering of a single innocent person. The only difference is that Abel genuinely chooses that suffering rather than having it forced on her...
Also, I think it could be a really interesting scenario if my Assassin Cain (or at least one with a similar personality) encountered this Abel. He'd both be in awe of her but also utterly horrified and disgusted at this world being sustained by an innocent girl's neverending torment. He'd definitely try to "save" her from herself no matter what, even if meant tearing apart the perfect world she'd created...
It'd be kind of like the conflict between Madokami and Devil Homura from Rebellion Story. The person who chooses to selflessly sacrifice themselves for the good of the world, and the person who selfishly can't accept the one they love being sacrificed even if it means going against the whole world and their beloved's own wishes. In fact, something similar is the concept for one of my own WIP sheets, though it's not Lostbelt-related.
This sheet just fills me with so many different thoughts. That's a testament to how conceptually rich it is...
SaverGender: Male
Dhul-Qarnayn, Dragon-King of the Four Corners of the World
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Earth
STR: EX
CON: EX
AGI: D
MAG: A+
LUK: A
NP: A++
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Personal Skills
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Lore
Personality
Autho's note: I never realised how much Nicol Bolas and Cyrus the Great have in common.
Last edited by Zork Knight; August 10th, 2019 at 08:25 PM.
Lostbelt Intro
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Caster, Ruler, Saver, Avenger
True Name:
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: The Hebrew Bible, Canaan Lostbelt
Parameters:
STR: C
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LCK: B
NP: EX
Likes: God, long journeys, animals
Dislikes: Nephilims, tyrannical gods, being powerless
Talent: Circumnavigating
Natural Enemy: Cain (Lostbelt), Samyaza (Lostbelt)
Armament: His airship, divine beasts
Catalyst: A piece of wood from his airship
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Personality
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Creator Notes
A Warrior’s Dilemma
I wrestled victory from the jaws of defeat more times than I can recall, but this accursed body of mine would never allow me the mercy of death. ‘Tis the cruelest of fates for one such as I. A warrior must know death to truly live, and so I remain unborn in perpetuity.
Faceclaim
Class: Berserker
Alternate Classes: Saber, Rider
True Name: Haraldr Hilditǫnn
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Denmark, Lostbelt [Brávellir 770AD - The Day Where Corpses Heaped Mountain-High]
STR: A++ AGI: B
END: EX MGI: A
LCK: C NP: A
Height: 241cm
Weight: 307kg
Likes: A challenge, Maintaining his trophies of war, Mead
Dislikes: Himself
Talent: Invincibility
Natural Enemy: Odin
Attribute: Earth
Armament: Sword, Body
Theme Song
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Noble Phantasms
Lore
Personality
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
That said, that double Eli sheet is a masterstroke, and now I'm pining for it it to be canon. GG, Daneel.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Class: Ruler
Other Classes: Archer, Saber, Caster, Rider
True Name: Elizabeth I, Holy Matriarch of the Divine British Empire
Nicknames: The Virgin Queen, Gloriana, Good Queen Bess, the Archangel Uriel II
Alignment: Lawful Theocratic
Place of Origin: 16th Century Britain
Parameters
Info
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Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Lore
Personality
Creator Notes:
I know I said I had an idea for something related to Rome, but that eventually got thrown out the window when I realized it'd be entirely underwhelming. Once voting's underway I'll post a list of all the entries/Lostbelts I considered this time around but ultimately didn't go for.
Ashurbanipal
Nicknames: Asenappar
Land of Birth: Mesopotamia
Country of Origin: Assyria
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Class: Rider
Strength: A
Endurance: B
Agility: B
Mana: C-
Luck: A
Likes: Conquest, Knowledge, Power
Dislikes: Gilgamesh, Revolting Provinces
Talents: Rulership and Conquest
Natural Enemy: Gilgamesh
Class Skills-
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A Little Foreword
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Assyrian Lostbelt
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The Map and Story
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He who is the Sprćcwalda, his words hymns and his thoughts archaic.
ᛖᛏᚩᚾ ᛒᚣᛏᛏ ᚨᚾᛞ ᚳᚩᛏᛏ, ჭამა კონდახით და საშოდან, Bwyta cig a chath
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Lost Belt No. Unknown
Daemons of Wicked Fate
A.D. 2780
Lost Depth: A++
Source:https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust....st_id=68379202
Servant: Caster
True Name: ????
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Strength: B
Endurance: D
Agility: B
Mana: EX
Luck: E
NP: EX
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Role:
Bond CE:
Authors Note:
Servant Ruler:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Phidias "The Marble Tyrant"
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Alternate Class: Caster
Strength- A+
Agility- A
Endurance- EX
Mana- EX
Luck- A
NP- EX
History
Lostbelt: Eidolos- Kingdom Of Stone And Marble
Personality
Class Skills:
God's Resolution- N/A
The privilege of the Ruler presiding over a Holy Grail War. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Seals for every Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War. As Phidias's ability to compel others instead rests in his Personal Skill, Charisma Of The Sculptor King, the God's Resolution of the Ruler Class has been lost.
True Name Discernment- B
Status information such as true name, Skills and parameters are instantly revealed to Ruler upon encountering a fellow Servant. An evolution of Phidias's Eye For Art Skill gained upon him becoming Lostbelt King. If a Servant was ever depicted in sculpture, he will certainly be able to discern their identity without fail.
Magic Resistance- EX
Confers protection against magical effects. An extension of Ruler's Natural Body (Sculpture) Skill. Any Magecraft that would disrupt the perfection of Ruler's body washes off him like oil from water. However, because it's merely evading and not dispelling the Magecraft, only Ruler will be protected against a wide-scale area-of-effect spell.
Personal Skills:
Natural Body (Sculpture)- EX
A variant of the Natural Body Skill, distorted by Ruler's self-perception. His very body has been warped to match the pinnacle of beauty he pursued in life--- in other words, a marble sculpture. Ruler's physique is that of a living statue, still able to move and breath but with flesh and bone as unyielding as marble.
Ruler gains a variety of advantages and disadvantages as a result of such an existence. His marble "skin" is tough enough to resist slashing and piercing attacks and he can easily replace lost limbs by simply sculpting new ones on to himself. However, his marble body is very brittle and risks shattering if hit by a strong blunt-force attack.
Upon ascending as Lostbelt King, this Skill has been supercharged. Now his body not only won't grow or change from ingesting calories, but even physical damage that would disrupt the divine structure・integrity of his body is nullified. When injured, Ruler's body will rapidly reform, marble sculpting itself back together to undo the blemish and bringing him back to his former immaculacy. Even if his arm was severed or head blown off, Ruler would still regenerate in a matter of seconds. Only by completely exhausting his magical energy or destroying his spiritual core (which is externalized from his body) can one hope to defeat Ruler.
Charisma Of The Sculptor King- A+
An alteration of Charisma, reflecting the authority Ruler wields over his Marble Kingdom. All Ruler's sculpted creations, even ones that possess free-will and sapience, are instinctively bound to obey his commands.
Thus Ruler manages to quell all conflict and dissent in his Lostbelt, creating a utopia where none are permitted to reject his perfect ideals. His sculpted humans can still act autonomously, and Ruler delegates most of the actual work of governing his Lostbelt due to lack of interest, but he can seize manual control at any moment.
Item Construction- EX
The talent to craft magical items. Ruler can craft sculptures so perfect they're mistaken by the World for the genuine article, gaining true life. A sculpted bird could fly on clay wings, a sculpted dragon could breath fire, et cetera.
Ruler is unable to create sapient beings, so a sculpted human would merely be an automata mindlessly carrying out his orders. But Ruler can get around this restriction by transplanting the souls of regular humans into his sculpted creations. He can do this even with Heroic and Divine Spirits, trapping them in automata bodies enslaved to his beck and call. Thus Ruler has managed to form an army of enslaved Servants and Divine Spirits, including the former Greek Pantheon whom he defeated and entombed in marble. This standing army serves to defend Ruler's paradise in the rare occasion anything arises to genuinely threaten it.
Sky-Father's Sovereignty (False)- EX
Upon merging himself with his most famous creation the Zeus Statue, and plundering Zeus's divine core, Ruler has usurped the role of the King of Gods in his Lostbelt. This Skill grants Ruler a bevy of boons related to Zeus's authority. Godly Divine Core, Mana Burst (Lightning), Clairvoyance, Protection From Storms and a damage boost against other divinities (as Zeus was meant to reign over the gods) are included in this Skill.
It can be said that Ruler's very body is a Noble Phantasm of the highest order.
However, even Ruler's magnificent sculpture body is still only a mortal work, and thus unable to contain the full power of the King of Gods. Occasionally the newfound power will be too much for Ruler and temporarily overload his body, immobilizing and weakening him for several moments. If an astute opponent can notice and capitalize on this weakness, it could possibly hold the key to defeating Ruler...
Noble Phantasm
Key Words/Craft Essence
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So here's my second entry for the contest. This one's more of a proper Lostbelt King, whereas my Churchill was more from an alternate history in the broader sense. He kind of ended up a bit like a Greek Avicebron, but I still think I managed to come up with a pretty unique take on him. Had to take a lot of artistic license with his history to make the concept work, but I feel it payed off.
I imagine in a story featuring his hypothetical Lostbelt the protag's main ally would be an Achilles Lily Servant. Achilles' whole philosophy of living brilliantly yet fleetingly while fully accepting his inevitable death is the total antithesis of Phidias's worldview. Plus a younger version of him could remind Phidias of Pantarkes, which could result in lots of interesting angst.
As usual, when voting time comes if you liked both my entries about equally well and want to vote for one be sure to pick the one that has the most current votes. That way I'll have a better chance of winning something.
Last edited by RoydGolden; May 1st, 2023 at 10:09 PM. Reason: Changed FC
Update: So I swapped out Phidias's faceclaim with one that more fit my image of his character. Just use your imagination to pretend it's very well sculpted and painted marble in that image...
True Hero
Lost Depth: A
Lostbelt No. XX
The Eternal Prince
BC 190 Holy Kingdom of Hell
Class: Alter Ego
Other Classes: Avenger, Ruler
True Name: Esfandiyār
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Persian Lostbelt
Parameters:
STR: C+
END: B++
AGI: A+
MGI: B
LCK: E---
NP: EX
Likes: Rostam, The title of King, Justice
Dislikes: Himself, His Kingdom, His Father
Talent: Fighting
Natural Enemy: Goshtasp
Attribute: Sky
Armament: His Chain, Sword he Uses for Killing Blows
Class Skills:
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Personality:
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Bond:
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Creator Notes:
Esfandiyār was one of my first servants and I have wanted to redo him like I did Rostam. This lostbelt is kind of like if hell on earth was only on one part of earth and moved every so often. The way the cycle goes is that Esfandiyār will accidentally create a new chaos creature that will terrorize a part of the world that his father rules and will then go kill it and absorb its power becoming even stronger and as a result the next creature he creates is more powerful. Ironically despite Esfandiyār thinking so low of himself and unknowingly creating the attacks in the world the people revere him as a great hero and hate his father. Onto more technical stuff the whole having many chaos gods as components was just a random idea that I had and then ran away with creating the hell that is this lostbelt.
So this is my second servant in this competition. I was inspired by my Mordred not being nearly as cool as ya'll's awesome lostbelts. I love Persian mythology and so I would like more of that in FGO as well as a lostbelt or singularity about it. They have to get to Rostam and Esfandiyār eventually. Lastly a complaint about how very difficult it is to resize images then get a URL link from that image you resized to out in your servant sheet. How do ya'll do it?
Last edited by cooldownnow; April 10th, 2022 at 01:08 AM.
My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
Esfandiyar: Am I the only one who finds this guy's backstory hilarious? The imagery of Goshtasp growing more and more frustrated as he sends Esfandiyar off on ridiculous challenges that he keeps winning and coming back from, while Esfandiyar himself is totally earnest and oblivious to the shenanigans going on, is some grade-A black comedy.
Also, is the use of "Dammed" instead of "Damned" in his third NP title intentional? It'd kind of work as a pun, since Esfandiyar is keeping back (damming) the chaotic sea inside his body, but I'm not sure if you did that on purpose or not. That aside, this was a pretty cool sheet all around. He'd make for a good sympathetic/tragic antagonist character in a Lostbelt chapter...
About the Dammed/Damned thing I will say nothing except spelling is hard and silently change that. As for the rest of the feed back yeah I wanted a little bit of humor in there since the actually story is kind of tragic. It was kind of inspired by the backstory of Odin in fire emblem fates who kept on succeeding on these literally impossible missions for Leo and finding things that don't exist.
On the technical side is there anything that you think should be improved. I always feel my sheets are missing something but I don't know what.
My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
These are all very good. I would like to try to come up with a Lostbelt Servant of my own, but I'm just not able to come up with any ideas...
The joys of being a Mommy
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Had a couple ideas for Lostbelt shenanigans, really, but since I already posted the more complete one I'll have to put off the other for later and upload it to the regular thread when it's non-contest hours.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
No Lostbelt Emiya ? Hm i think i should do something against that….
Lostbelt King :
Beast of Griev VII
(Beast/Caster)
Shirou Emiya
I know it is perhaps false but i can not leave them behind...
Enemy type Servant:
Strenght:B+
Endurance:A
Agility:EX
Luck:B
Mana:EX
NP:EX
would be summonable as :Caster,Saber,Archer,Rider,Assassin,Ruler,Avenger
Natural Enemy:Parvati,Ishtar,Arthoria Pendragon(Saber)
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Personality
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Noblephantasm
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; August 24th, 2019 at 04:26 PM.
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