Excellent.
I love this guy
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MoonCancer
"Why, hello there! My name is Ada, MoonCancer-class, it is a pleasure to meet you."
True Name: Ada Lovelace
Epithets: Mother of All Programming, Enchantress of the Number, Lady Fairy
Class: MoonCancer
Alternate Classes: Caster
Alignment: True Neutral
Likes: Coffee, Gambling, Video games, Poetry, Charles Babbage
Dislikes: Stuffy noble balls, Strict rules, Being sick
Talent: Mathematics, Programming
Natural Enemy: Lady Byron
Attribute: Man
Origin: Historical Fact — Britain (19th Century)
Armament: Programs
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
Catalyst: Her notes on the Analytical Engine
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: C
MGI: A
LUK: E
NP: B
Personality
Lore
Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Voice Lines
Relationships
Creator Notes
would love to see this Ada replacing Archimedes' role in extraverse
First of all, Bugs and King of Padoru, thank you very much for your love for this stupid boy of mine. I was very happy to read that!he thinks you guys need help but hey no one cares about what he thinks
And now. THIS ADA.
I wish we could have something like that in FGO, you know... They had the upperhand when it came to Babbage, as in, that character could be much more than what it became. But alas, I suppose that is the curse when you have so many accomplishments tied to your name that not even the Throne knows what to do with them.
This sheet is very nice, it truly took all the great assets she had and translated them into useful abilities and overall, a cohesive Servant. I'd love to see her in a war!
"I-i'm Assassin. P-please, order me anything."
Class: Assassin
Alignment: Lawful/neutral
Region: Croatia
Height: 163cm
Weight: 52kg
Likes: Master, praise, company
Dislikes: Vampires, himself, punishment
Talent: killing
Armaments: tendrils, club
Natural Enemy: Vampires
stats
Str: D
End: C
Agi: A
Mna: B
Lck: E
NP: EX
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
Craft Essence
Last edited by the god of world-0; February 19th, 2020 at 06:44 PM.
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Replaced the note on Tommelise for a CE, and also added ones for Baphomet and Assassin!Kresnik
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Servant Caster:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Damascius "Last of the Neoplatonics"
Alignment: True Neutral
Alternate Classes: Ruler, Foreigner
Strength- E
Agility- D
Endurance- D
Mana- EX
Luck- C
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Territory Creation- A
The ability to formulate a territory advantageous to oneself as a Magus. At this rank, Caster can create an "Academy" akin to the one where he taught students in life. The Academy serves as both learning grounds and a temple for Caster, greatly boosting his Magecraft abilities as long as he remains therein.
Item Construction- D
Talent to craft magical items. As a scholar and not an inventor, Caster can only create books to inscribe his knowledge on. That much of his works were lost to history has further reduced this Skill's ranking.
Personal Skills:
Devotion To The One- A
Caster believed highly in God, who he exalted as absolutely one and beyond human knowledge. This unwavering devotion to one he recognized as [absolute] lends Caster a high degree of defense against mental influencing thaumaturgy. As well, he gains a damage boost while attacking Servants with divinity separate from his God.
High-Speed Incantation- C
The capacity to recite spells at high speeds. Being a mathematician as well as a Magus Caster achieves this rank by compressing his spells into mathematical formulae, greatly shortening their casting time.
Innocent Monster- E+
An unusual Personal Skill, in that it isn't born from the slanders directed against Caster in life but how his legend was distorted after death. This Skill stems from one of Caster's lost works, a book of paradoxes. It was alluded to in H.P Lovecraft's short story "The Nameless City", wherein he listed it amongst other "fragments of daemoniac lore". This created the misconception that Caster himself was a dabbler in the black arts. This Skill allows Caster to summon minor eldritch horrors as familiars, as well as use demonic Magecraft. However as a reasoned man of God Caster severely hates this Skill for how it twists his reputation, and will refuse to use it unless forced by a Command Seal.
Incidentally, this Skill also permits Damascius to be manifested much to his chagrin as a Foreigner-Class Servant. However in that case the being he worships wouldn't be God but rather ■■■■■■■■■■■.
Noble Phantasms
A simpler than usual sheet I cobbled together while researching another Servant. As usual, comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 25th, 2023 at 10:57 PM.
So, any thoughts on my Damascius?
His skills are cool, specially his version of innocent Monster. The Np' s are kinda boring however, you could probably elaborate on them better.
Now you comment on my Kresnik.
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His NPs are a little generic, yeah. I couldn't think of any way to make them more interesting though.
Your "Kresnik" characters are kind of hard to critique since they're OCs rather than figures from myth or history so I can't comment on how well they do justice to the original. The concept is interesting, "monster-slayer whose a monster themselves" is a pretty classic concept but you pulled it off in a fine way. His personality is woobie-ish enough I kind of want to give him a hug, which I'm pretty sure is the intent.
His NP is a little weird though. Third Magic is a pretty big deal in the Nasuverse, so just using it to make shadow tendrils or whatever seems a little underwhelming to me.
Last edited by RoydGolden; February 22nd, 2020 at 01:58 PM. Reason: Added missing word
"The King of Lions Orders their punishment!"
Class: Faker
Alignment: Lawful/Mad
Region: France
Height: 178cm
Weight: 66kg
Likes: War, his King, revenge
Dislikes: petulant boys, Archers, weakness
Talent: Punishing
Armaments: Sword
Natural Enemy: Pierre Bassile
stats
Str: A
End: B
Agi: B
Mna: D
Lck: C
NP: A
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
Last edited by the god of world-0; February 26th, 2020 at 10:36 PM.
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Yes
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Interesting concept to use. But why doesn't he have the Faker Class Skill Disguising, even at a low rank? Is it because he thinks he is Richard rather than actually disguising himself as him?
Kinda, part of it is that i couldn't find any descriptions of what the skill does exactly, and also his first NP basically nulls the need for it anyway. Maybe i put it as a annotation?
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Done
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Understandable. I know there is a translation from the mats somewhere (I've seen it, but I cannot for the life of me find it again...), but if I recall the effect of the Skill is that it makes the Servant read as though they were another class, up to including the skills? This is all from my faulty memory so don't take my word as fact. >_>
Disguising: B
The ability to camouflage paramaters and/or Class.
At B rank, it's also possible to display a different Class and different parameters to others.Yeah, she can fake Skills, but it's not because of the Class Skill.For He Was Another Iskandar (False): A
A body double's Skill to imitate Iskandar's Noble Phantasms and Skills.
The copied Skills drop down by 1 Rank, but it's also possible to change their abilities.
"I have arrived at a solution! The culprit... is YOU!"
Class: Alter ego
Alignment: Dark/Anti-hero
Region: Tohno city
Height: 156cm
Weight: 43kg
Likes: Maids, solving cases, her sister.
Dislikes: Nuns, Vampires, having her logic questioned
Talent: Solving crimes, being dark and brody
Armaments: Her sharp wits, hypnotism?
Natural Enemy: Criminals
Stats
Str: D
End: C
Agi: C
Mna: A
Lck: EX
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
personality
Last edited by the god of world-0; December 7th, 2020 at 08:32 PM.
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