Who do you think would be better host for Altrouge if not Raikou?
What do skills do I guess should be obvious from lore? Contracts is reference to contract with Zepia in MB, and Luminous Body shows in Tsukihime Remake.
Who do you think would be better host for Altrouge if not Raikou?
What do skills do I guess should be obvious from lore? Contracts is reference to contract with Zepia in MB, and Luminous Body shows in Tsukihime Remake.
It's Altrouge, my bad for misreading. The point still stands that Raikou is hardly the ideal candidate for a Pseudo (unlike Lakshmibai). Why not just make an actual Altrouge Servant? (Assuming that's the goal.) With a more well written sheet overall? You haven't really made much of an effort to make a proper connection between the 2 and the rest of the profile is not very interesting.
Top-level creator's note
Lancer of Untainted Chivalry
-- The Noblest of the Round --
"Greetings, you must be my Master, yes? Servant Lancer, Sir Lancelot du Lac, at your service. Rejoice, for you have summoned the most skilled and most virtuous knight among the Round Table! In the name of my compatriots, and the Once and Future King, I vow to lend my lance to your-"
"..."
"Oh? What's with the confused look? Eh? Out of character? Me? ...I have no idea what you're talking about, but if that's what you think, allow me to start over from the beginning."
"..."
"Right, from the top now, ahem... GRRRR... AAAARRRTHUUUUUU- Cough, cough, hack! Ahem, my apologies, my Madness Enhancement does not seem to function properly in this particular summoning. Let's turn it off, shall we? For the sake of my poor throat."
Source
"Do I regret my actions from back then? No, why would I? The fall of Camelot was a terrible thing, but it's not something I would endlessly torture myself over. Er, I mean, not under this particular Class, at least! The fleetingness of life is something to be celebrated, not mourned over!"
Ascension 2
Ascension 3
Final Ascension
Class: Lancer
Other Classes: Saber, Berserker, Rider
True Name: Lancelot (Alter)
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Arthurian mythos, the Matter of France
Parameters:
STR: B
END: B
AGI: A
MGI: B
LCK: E
NP: A
Likes: His King
Dislikes: Himself
Talent: Jousting, swordmanship
Natural Enemy: Arthur Pendragon, Guinevere
Armament: Horse, jousting lance, Arondight(?)
Catalyst: Shard of the round table (small chance)
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Description
Lore
Relationships
Bond CE
Extra
Creator's Note
Last edited by BnEl15; September 4th, 2021 at 04:06 PM.
Sir Lancelot (Alter)(Lily)(Summer) next pls
great use of LorenzChamp. Typical BnEl Servant, nice. I started reading on a bus and when I got the final ascension i let out a loud "pppfffttt" and had to look away in shame from the weird looks. Laughing in Germany is frowned upon as you know.
also Sir Lance-A-Lot-Of-Woman, nice. let the group of penis=lance jokers grow. Athena will gladly bonk them
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
I owe the Lances-a-Lot-of-women joke to FGO's writing/localization team. Cleopatra said it in a Halloween event iirc
Speaking of FE3H, he also has a bit of Felix edge in him, though I'm holding back the rest of the edge for later
Also summer Lanzelet, huh... not a bad idea.
Last edited by BnEl15; September 4th, 2021 at 04:05 PM.
DID YOU FUCKERS MISS ME
Name: Bleda
Class: Rider
Origin: Hun Historical Record
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
STR: D
END: C
AGI: B
MAG: D
LCK: C
Ruler of Huns and elder sibling of the famed Atilla, at the death of their uncle Rugila, the siblings united the tribes and engaged war against Rome, after a treaty they turned against the Persian Empire for the next 5 years. Defeated in Armenia they returned to Roman soil and rampaged there accusing the Empire of sacking the Royal Hun Grave by Danube's North Bank, their defeat by the Persian Empire did little to blunt their fangs for again they were unmatched and the Roman Empire only survived by agreeing to extremely harsh demands. After such event it is said that Bleda died on a hunting trip, either by accident or Attila's hands and the rampaging on the Huns would only grow worse as if without Bleda's guidance they became nothing but starving wolves endlessly consuming everything without thought and control
In truth Atilla is not a human but a being spawned from a giant's corpse found by the huns, although she possessed a human appearance her emotionless personality that only gave way to destructive impulses was both a boon and curse to the Huns who used her against their enemies but always feared her. Bleda seeking to prove herself approached Altera and began to speak endlessly, as Altera did not lash out and simply listened, without understanding, the elders decided to make her Altera's 'sibling' (caretaker). Inclined to Bleda's words and emotions for some mysterious reason Altera backed Bleda's dreams of kingship and thus the tribes knelled.
Bleda can be said to be an individual who possess all the attributes for kingship except overwhelming strength, in exchange she possesses great ability in 'wielding' people understanding their goals, personalities and dreams and slightly changing her plans to make them go along with it better, but ultimately she only acts for 'herself'. Understanding that eventually the ways of the Huns would be destroyed if they did not change she began to speak of treaties and deals with foreign kingdoms, such thing was seen as cowardice and the elders acted behind her back by talking to Altera how Bleda was limiting her destruction and that one day Altera would be discarded as well, like the many warriors that died at the fight against Persia.
Altera killed Bleda, became 'King' (Puppet) and not even 5 years later she would die and the empire collapsed via in-fighting for inheritance
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Bleda: I was mostly observing passively throughout the day. But this sheet caught my attention, especially since I made a Bleda quite some time ago. This Bleda seems more like a sibling to Altera than mine ever was. And I like the noble phantasms, specifically T'angri Khan. Loved the symbolism it presents, and the function of it.
Sir Lanzelet: You are not forgiven, for you have offended me on fundamental level. You have committed the crime of doing something I never would have thought to. You make me sick.
This guy's kinda a pathetic tool, isn't he? He knows nothing of real struggle, it's his world and he has to share it with everyone else, and it's exactly this self-centered nature that makes him such a background character. I can't even really buy some of the slightly more emotional lines in Relationships or implications in Craft Essence because of how his story unfolds and is described in, well, Description. The emotional depth implied in them doesn't feel genuine from the character, even if it can be argued to have a basis.
Some fun joke Skills. Kinda makes me thing of the TAIGA Servant I had an idea for a long while ago. Gen has gone on record saying she has EX Luck, so that was a fun idea to play around with. Saw the Graham Chapman dialog, and remembered loving that Servant when I first saw it.
I like him. I just kinda wish you had gone full bore on making him a complete egotist, though I'm one to talk with Edern.
Oh, and for anyone wondering where I've been, just slowly dying inside. Thing about that is I'll eventually rise from the grave, but, until then, the dirt is comforting.
Do you likejazzshort stories? Do you want something to distract from making Servants? Do you wish the idea of Shirou Kotomine didn't immediately bring edgelords to mind? Well, I can't promise it's good, but some would disagree with me.
Fate/Without Justice
The greatest scourge Rome faced were not the Barbarians at its gates -- but the ones within.
Class: Saber
True Name: Flavius Aetius
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Origin: Historical Facts and Rumors
Attribute: Man
A military commander considered to be the most powerful man in the Western Roman Empire during the last phase of its decline and fall. He was most famously known for defeating Attila the Hun at the Battle of Catalaunian Fields, significantly slowing down the rampage of the destruction incarnate, and spared Rome from another sack -- if only for a few more years.
His achievements almost saved the collapsing empire from much of its existential threats, but in the end he was only rewarded with the most anticlimactic demise -- executed by an envious Emperor. With his death, Rome once again, for the last time, spiralled down into decay.
Parameters:
STR: B
END: A
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: B
Class Skills:
Riding: A
Can ride any and all mounts and vehicles, with the exception of Phantasmal Species and Divine Beasts. This is the skill Saber learned from his father, a Scythian who was the Magister Equitum (Master of the Cavalry) of the Roman army, and the fact that he grew up among the Huns, the world’s best horsemen of the time.
Magic Resistance: B
Cancel spells with chants below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected. It seems that this rank is received not from Saber’s natural resilience, but a charm provided by Pope Leo the Great, whose intercession caused Attila to retreat from Italy.
Personal Skills:
Civilization Reinforcement: A
A subconscious instinct which imbues oneself and allies with a unique Anti-Purge defense, which can only display its true value when facing opponents that threaten the very concept of civilization itself. It is a blessing obtained for such achievements as “defending Rome from the Barbarian hordes”, and “defeating the Scourge of God”.
Taming of Destruction: A
A highly specific version of Hero Creation, devised for discipling and civilizing an entity known as destruction incarnate. It is a careful guidance and development meant to lessen the danger posed by a “threat to humanity”. It is a proof of an unique bond shared between Aetius and Attila, both outsiders raised within the Hunnic tribe.
Exemplifying the unique circumstances of the period, Aetius was sent at a young age as hostage to the court of Alaric the Visigoth, who had sacked Rome a few years earlier. Later, he was brought further east, to live with the Huns, and soon became close as family to them. That was when Aetius met her -- a woman wielding the Sword of the War God, a monster that knew only of destruction and combat.
For much of Aetius’ military career, there were little battles and campaigns where his Hunnic allies and friends did not take part. Throughout these wars, the young Attila was put to use as a weapon of mass destruction under the Roman banner. She was tempered to control her destructive urges and most importantly -- she was trained to become more human.
Noble Phantasms:
Ultimus Romanorum - Bellum
Twilight Soldiers of the Eternal Empire
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: C
The Last of the Romans. A title bestowed to various individuals throughout the later stages of Roman history. It signifies an individual who embodies the core concepts that represents “Roman values and strength”. It is said that with their death, it’s as if Rome lost a part of itself.
As a Noble Phantasm, these Roman values become conceptually embedded in their Saint Graph, and whatever object one grasps will be enhanced with such concept. In this case, what Aetius embodies as the last great military general of the Empire is the concept of “War” itself. While this Noble Phantasm is active, Aetius can access skill related to warfare at B or A rank proficiency. In addition --
Romae Photon Ray
Light of Civilization, War God’s Sword
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A+
The Sword of Mars. Having become the embodiment of the concept of “War”, Aetius also receives access to the Authority of the War God. An identical Noble Phantasm as Teardrop Photon Ray. In essence, Aetius uses his own Saint Graph as a beacon to invoke an orbital strike from Mars to decimate an area. It is a recreation of the events that happened at the Battle of the Catalaunian Plains. By establishing a connection with Mars, Aetius turned Altera’s Photon Ray against herself, bringing down Mars’ light of authority to incapacitate the Scourge of God herself.
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That's Archer and Caster left before I'm finally free from this stupid self imposed Faceclaim challenge
Last edited by Kamera; September 5th, 2021 at 10:58 AM.
"Oi, oi. Show some respect, ya here? You summoned the charioteer of Cu Chulainn himself!"
True Name: Laeg
Class: Rider
Alt. Class: Faker, Lancer
Region: Ireland
Source: Celtic Mythology
Alignment: True Neutral
Armament: Chariot, Blades
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: D+
Luck: B
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance C
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Riding -
This skill has been subsumed into King Of Charioteers.
Personal Skills:
Derisive Encouragement B+
A skill that acts as the crystallisation of the mocking words said to Cu Chulainn that spurred him into a berserker rage. When used it has a charisma-like effect on the target increasing morale but also has the chance of inputting the effects, both positive and negative, of Madness Enhancement so it can be a double edged sword. It is particularly effective towards individuals that have qualifications for the Berserker class.
King of Charioteers EX
Dubbed this as she was struck by the spear prophesied to kill a king. Serving as the personal charioteer to Cu Chulainn, she drove the Sickle Chariot that was harnessed to the two divine beasts, Liath Macha and Dub Sainglend. This skill combines both the effects of Riding and Territory Creation to allow Rider exceptional dominion over any vehicle or steed she puts herself upon. It is this skill that gives incredible synergy with The Sickle Chariot.
Battle Continuation C-
A Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. A spear meant to kill kings was taken to the chest but even then she was able to get her final words even if that was all that could be done.
Noble Phantasms:
The Sickle Chariot: Blades At All Corners Of The Wheel
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Army
The chariot driven by Rider. The noble phantasm that is the bread and butter of her legend. A chariot that holds blades upon blades within itself, connected to all corners of itself. This is due to the chariot, in truth, existing as a mobile armoury imbued with the concept of Hosting. Used across many battlefields, it has taken in all weapons of the users it had rendered deceased through being run over. Such weapons are added to the collective mass of blades and relocated to be among the many other weapons of fallen warriors. This includes Noble Phantasms that take form as weapons though their ranks will be degraded by two. Rider holds a special connection with the chariot, enabled through her King of Charioteers skill, that partially fuses her Saint Graph with it. This allows her to summon the various parts of the chariot including the taken blades due to being a host for them as well. This does create backlash when the chariot is destroyed, risking significant damage to her spirit origin.
Capaill Linn Liath: Blazing Mares Of The Morrigan
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Army
Divine beasts given to Cu Chulainn by the goddess Macha (or Morrigan). The two horses are more akin to war machines with their ability to breath fire and cause up great clouds of debris by only trampling. Liath Macha, in particular, is said to have gone on a rampage, killing many warriors with his teeth and legs, after the death of his master before disappearing. It is a noble phantasm automatically invoked when the Sickle Chariot is summoned, for they are hosted by the vehicles, bound to it until its destruction.
Lore
Personality
Last edited by Vance; September 5th, 2021 at 05:37 PM.
Laeg: I've heard several people talk of doing a sheet for this figure but always thought it'd end up too similar to Cu to be interesting. You've done a pretty good job fleshing her out though. I like that Derisive Encouragement is basically "tsundere: the Skill" where she insults her allies to motivate them to fight harder and her main NP is a cool twist on the "bladed chariot" concept.
Bleda, Aetius.. Is it Attila's birthday or something?
"Oh, Nice to meet you! I am his Majesty's Royal Wife, hope we get along together."
Class: Rider
Alignment: Lawful/Good
Region: Egypt
Height: 184cm
Weight: 68kg
Likes: Sunlight, flowers, her husband
Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, traitors, people who don't believe in love
Talent: Protecting, smiling
Armaments: Boat, claws
Natural Enemy: Her husband's enemies
Stats
Str: D
End: C
Agi: B
Mna: A
Lck: A
NP: A+
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
Personality
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
There they walk. The many thousand
leaving homes, towards dear land's end.
On their path to their destination;
It is their duty, their determination.
The sand is dry, the sun burns in gleam,
a cooling shadow nowhere seen.
Their gait is heavy, their brow is shining,
eyes glaring towards a bright horizon.
With bricks and dust in their possession,
towards the Holy City walks the procession.
But all carried smiles, or so was it told…
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Appearance
Class: Saber
True Name: Chrysaor
Title: Prince of Demonic Beasts
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Region: Greece - Greek Mythology
Trait: Earth, Demonic, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Parameters
STR: C
EDR: C
AGI: A+
MAG: D
LCK: E
NP: B
Magic Resistance: C
Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Riding: B
Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
Personal Skills
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Noble Phantasm
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Character
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Keywords
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A/N
Mansa Musa was, I think, one of the very first sheets I ever did, maybe the actual first, and I do like to see him again.
very interesting figure from history and deserves to be more well known
Chrysaor: Interesting sheet with a well fleshed-out personality. I like how you hinted at other characters' personalities/natures through his like Callirhoe and Geryon. Out of curiosity, is "Mysterious Maid M" meant to be some other character of yours? I can't find anyone with that name in TM...
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The image isn't showing up for me so that question might be more mysterious than intended. That said, having given it a little thought my only guess is that she might be Mordred, using Chrysaor as a test-run to resolving her own mother-issues/sympathizing with him because they share similar issues. The forceful way of speaking could fit Mor and I have seen art of her in a maid-costume, though I don't know if it's ever been official.
Fucking wikia- okay, replaced it with a discord image, hopefully it shows up now.
Funny enough, I did consider that Chrysaor and Mordred would probably get along because of their parental issues, though I feel like that'd be something I'd actually have to write out instead of just leaving as a blurb in a sheet.