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Hm. Lightbulb on the Lancer front: Archimedes with Archimedes' Lever as the weapon?
An oddball idea, but I suppose it could work. Any takers?
Lancer Chandragupta II with the Iron Pillar of Delhi lol
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How would it be with Seth because he is known for usind a spear ?
bythe way You made a good Elizabeth Alter sheet/profile Lambda ,although i think there is lacking a reaction towards Alter Jeanne (because shes calle Dragon witch and her swimsuit Version ) and in her personality iif someone wants to befriend with her or do you think not ?
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Bathory Alter: Not loving this one, personally.
She just feels like regular Liz except with the edginess cranked up to eleven, without much interesting variation in her Skills and NPs. I guess that pretty much describes Arturia Alter too, but she had an entire VN route to flesh her out, and I fully believe she would've been boring in a pure stat sheet as well. The loudspeakers in her wings are a cool visual (though I can't really credit you with that since it's taken entirely from the FC), but other than that there's just nothing here that stands out. Frankly, I don't think there's really a point writing up an Alter version of a canon Servant here unless there's as much variation from the original as Cu Alter from regular Cu.
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I don't know, man. I think it's funny to see in which way the Alters are/try to be edgy. Sure, a completely new moveset is always cool to see, and even more when you can't flesh out the character much, but I feel that the personality should be the most interesting part of Alter sheets
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That's the thing though. Her personality just isn't that interesting. She doesn't want to kill but does it anyway, hates herself and self-harms despite not feeling any pain. It's just about the most obvious interpretation of an Elizabeth Alter that anyone could've come up with after five minutes of thought. There's none of the contrast between an innocent girl and a sadistic monster that made mainline Liz such a fascinating character.
If the whole sheet is going to hang on the personality, then you'd better at least make that personality unique and memorable, which this frankly is not. I don't mean to sound overly harsh since I don't actually hate the sheet. It's just really bland and boring, and makes me think that a lot more has to be done either to the personality or abilities to make the concept of an Alter Servant interesting.
What would be a good take on her as an Alter then, if you allow me the question? And please, don't say "willingly summoning herself like this to become a Goth idol" because that's what I've thought up right now and is probably the silliest reason to make an Alter
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I'm honestly not sure, but I'm not the one trying to write up an Elizabeth Alter sheet.
I think canon Liz already does a good job of acknowledging her dark side without needing to spin it off into a separate character. Alters really only work for me when they show a side of the character that's mostly unacknowledged in their normal self. We already know about Liz's conflict and buried self-hatred, so an Alter version just doesn't add anything new to the table IMO.
Hm. Then I suppose that this was just an interesting opportunity that didn’t work out as well as I thought it did. Might have to delay the Kiyohime Alter sheet then.
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C A S T E RAlternate Class: Rider
Epithet: The Standing One
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Origin: Christianity and Judaism
Parameters
Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: A
Luck: C
NP: EX
Class Skills
Item Construction: A
Item Construction is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.
Her mass-production ability is first-rate, as she was constantly called on by Nero to create strange things at any odd hour of the day. Caster is capable of creating phylacteries of the soul, as well the production of Holy Shrouds.
Territory Creation: B+
Territory Creation is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
Large-scale territories don’t fit with Caster’s personality and history, however the concentrated power of the land available is comparable to a Temple. Creation of a Workshop becomes possible, inside which the “natural” laws of the Ten Commandments no longer hold any weight.
Personal Skills:
Supernatural Power: A
Supernatural Power is the ability to freely move and levitate nearby objects. A fragment of a power of a god.
Caster’s most famous claims to godhood revolve around levitation phenomena of herself and objects. It’s as if the mere act of doing so is saying “Here is your God, who is unfettered by the hold of the land, worship me as you please.” Though an inborn power of Caster’s, it can be interrupted with appropriately powerful magecraft. As she was sent hurtling back to the ground through the prayers of Paul and Peter, she cursed the two Apostles with the full extent of this power. Unfortunately, the protection of God interceded, so Caster was only successful at applying “terrifying gravity-like effects” on Peter and Paul, pushing them into the ground. The stone that still contains the indents of the two Apostles’ bent knees is considered a relic of both of them.
Offensively, she prefers to use it like this, as the thought of crushing those bratty Apostles is somehow nostalgic.
Undying Magus: A
Undying Magus is Magecraft that was once taught by Nero's teacher of the art, used with partial success as a part of Nero’s final anecdote.
A demonic miracle invented by Caster herself, it is a resurrective ability on the level of God Hand, but must be prepared prior to activation. When Caster was publicly humiliated in the Forum by Peter and Paul, she accepted her punishment of decapitation and eventually resurrected.
Self-Modification (Divinity): B
Self-Modification is the aptitude to remold one's own body or merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this Skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero.
The core tenet of Caster’s philosophy, crystallized as a Personal Skill. Caster is capable of introducing souls and foreign Saint Graphs into her body, in order to establish a more “complete” soul system. However, she is unable to compound on her own attributes like a High Servant, instead using the added fragments as fuel. This ability is on a level that would allow Caster to merge her existence with those beings called “angels”.
Because she has already modified her Saint Graph inside the Throne, this Skill is treated as composite with the effects of Divinity of the same rank.
Noble PhantasmA Noble Phantasm that is the full expression of Caster’s Self-Modification Skill. It is based on Gnostics, the belief system Caster is credited with inventing, as a means to achieve “gnosis” or true, infinite knowledge incarnate. Gnostics asserts that humanity was once on the level of Divine Spirits in its own right, before “falling” through a series of conceptual heavenly floors, arriving at the point where it resides today. However, there are practices that might allow a human to regain one’s inherent divinity, Caster herself simply cuts a few corners in this regard.
Gnosis EnnoiaDivine Emanation of the Twisted Human Spirit
(Anti-Unit (Self), A+)
Ennoia, the First Thought of the Gnostic God-Above-God, was a female concept given form that has “reincarnated” throughout the centuries as various women of high importance, including gods like Athena. As the self-proclaimed remaining Male Thought, Caster descended and reincarnated along with the Ennoia in order to someday become whole again. While living, Caster claimed that Helen of Troy, who he was intimately involved with, was a manifestation of Ennoia. To complete herself, the then-male Caster plundered Helen’s soul--along with aspects of her Saint Graph, inadvertently, as Helen herself had by then qualified as a Heroic Spirit in her own right--which is the reason why Caster appears in her current form.
It is a technique similar to Blood Excitation. The dual conceptual existences of Caster and Helen temporarily form a “closed loop”, achieving a falsity of true gnosis. The peak ancestral concept to humans according to Gnosticism is the Demiurge, an almighty creator entity distinct from the Supreme Unknowable God.
The Demiurge is a being similar to True Ancestors and other Elementals, being a fragment of a dream given shape through belief and purpose. Caster’s body metamorphoses into a glowing, golden, divine and shining angelic figure. As the Demiurge, Caster’s supernatural manipulation is able to enter fully into the realm of Marble Phantasm.
However, because the weight of Helen’s soul continued to grow within the Throne, the “feminine” aspect of the Demiurge now positively outweighs the “masculine”. In order to power the ritual for extended periods of time, Caster must cannibalize the essences of males to make up for the difference.
History
Probably the coolest justification for a genderbend I've seen in a while.
Berserker of Arcadia
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Alternate Classes: Foreigner
True Name: Damarchus
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Origin: Classical Mythology
Armament: Fists
Parameters:
STR: A
END: B
AGI: D
MANA: C
LUCK: B
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Notes
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Servant Lancer:
Appearance:
Source is here
True Name: Sarpedon
Alignment: Lawful Good
Strength- B
Agility- B
Endurance- C
Mana- B
Luck- E
NP- C
Personality
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance- C
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, spells with a chant below two verses are nullified. Cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals.
Personal Skills:
Divinity- C
A Skill qualifying one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. Son of Zeus and the mortal woman Laodamia, Lancer would normally boast a high level of divinity. However, as he doesn't consider himself worthy of being Zeus's son, Lancer has forcibly sealed a portion of his godly affinity, lowering the rank of this Skill to C.
Bulwark Breaker- B
A Skill held by those famous for breaking through barriers whether physical or magical. Allows Lancer to pass unimpeded through any ward or barrier as long as it's equal or below this Skill's own ranking. At this rank, no wards set up by modern Magecraft are capable of stopping Lancer, and he can even pass through Reality Marbles if they're ranked B or lower.
Lancer was the first Trojan to successfully enter the Greek encampment. His attack gave Hector enough time to break through the Greek wall.
Over The Royal Road- C
A self-admonition type Skill that displays benefits as long as the Servant emulates their perceived ideal. In Lancer's case, his parameters receive a plus correction while acting in a manner he considers fitting for a Greek hero. Should he ever commit an "unheroic" action like retreating from a battle or failing to protect his Master Lancer's parameters suffer a severe demerit.
This penalty can be cleansed if Lancer manages to atone from his "disgrace" by performing a similarly heroic action.
Noble Phantasm
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So, I've finally got back into making Servants. I've been meaning to do this guy for a while, but I never had a good idea for his personality and NP until now. I had to read between the lines a lot to come up with an interesting personality for him, since his actual legend is pretty generic "honorable warrior" stuff. Probably could've given him a Skill like Robust Health or Natural Body to represent how Zeus blessed him to live for three generations as well, but in the end it didn't really fit with how I envisioned the character. Also, many thanks to NMR-3 for giving me the inspiration for his Bulwark Breaker Skill.
As always, comments and criticisms are welcome. Thanks for reading!
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