I think i see the poossible Outcome of the contest already , but i will still try my best
I think i see the poossible Outcome of the contest already , but i will still try my best
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As a fan of philosopher Servants, I definitely have to give this one a hearty thumbs-up.
Caster
"Ladies and gentlemen! Coming to you live on stage, under the class of Caster is I, Harry Houdini! You may applaud!"
True Name: Harry Houdini
Epithets: King of Cards, Handcuff King, Grand Illusionist
Class: Caster
Alternate Classes: N/A
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Attribute: Man
Origin: Historical Fact — America (19th Century)
Likes: Stage magic, aviation, a roaring crowd, his wife
Dislikes: “Spiritualists”, people copying his acts, putting on only “pretty good” shows
Talent: Illusions, Escape acts
Natural Enemy: Mina Crandon, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Armament: —
Traits: Brynhildr's Beloved, Humanoid, Male, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
Catalyst: An old, rusted pair of handcuffs
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C+
MGI: B
LUK: B
NP: A+
Personality
Lore
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Voice Lines
Relationships
Creator's Notes
Houdini: I wrote up a sheet for this guy in the contest thread a while back so it's interesting to see another take. His NP is actually pretty similar to the one I gave my Houdini, what with letting him "escape" anything (even abstract situations). On the other hand, that does fit his legend so I guess it could've easily been a coincidence too. You did a good job of writing out his personality, which was something I struggled with a little for my Houdini. Also, Magician Among The Spirits is a cool name. Kinda' wish I'd used that for my Houdini's second NP now...
As a minor critique, I wonder if Halloween Liz's Performance Continuation Skill would fit better than ordinary Battle Continuation. It could represent how he carried out his last show while in pain from a ruptured appendix.
I had no idea about your version of Houdini until now, and having looked them up, I love your interpretation of them. Although now I feel really self-conscious about my version, especially with how similar the NPs are... Guess that sort of thing is bound to happen when people are using the same person as the concept for a Servant. There is bound to be some level of overlapping ideas. I do, however, appreciate your comment! As for the Battle Continuation, from what I could gather Performance Continuation is just a Battle Continuation with a different name. Didn't seem like that much of a difference so I just used the standard Battle Continuation.
https://www.deviantart.com/rogner5th/art/happy-valentines-day-516418875
Credits to rogner5th for the art.
“Promise me you’ll stay safe? I don’t want to lose you again.”
“I promise, my dear. We’ll be just fine.”
“Ruler, who are you talking to?”
“No-nothing, Master!”
RULER
True Name: Savitri
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Man
Gender: Female
Height: 155 cm
Weight: 40 kg
Source: Mahabharata
Place of Origin: India
Armament: Satyavan
Likes: Satyavan, Dharma, the Arts
Dislikes: Losing her loved ones
Talents: Music, Scholarly pursuits
Natural Enemy: Those associated with death, those who hide their evil nature
Eligible Servant Classes: Caster
Catalyst: An ancient wedding ring
PARAMETERS
STR: E | END: C | AGI: D | MGI: B | LCK: A+ | NP: A
BIOGRAPHICAL
PERSONALITY
CLASS SKILLS
PERSONAL SKILLS
NOBLE PHANTASMS
RELATIONSHIPS
NOTES
Another sheet that I feel went overboard with details, though if you feel otherwise or not, do let me know. This was a long time coming, but the prompt was pretty helpful in helping me focus on what I wanted to write, so thanks for that.
Last edited by AAM1232; August 12th, 2020 at 12:16 AM.
Savitri: I think the amount of details is fine, it fleshes out her character a lot, and god she's a lovely woman. She somehow looks like she would make a very good Disney princess, specially for the "serenading to animals" part. I'm all in for super-lovey-dovey characters but she isn't a one-dimensional character that is only about love so she has my seal of approval, and very likely my vote. Gret job!
Face Claim
Stats
Class Skills
Personal Skills
History
Character
Relationships
Noble Phantasms
Bond CE:
Creator Notes
Akhenaten: Pretty cool (or maybe "hot"?) sheet here. I love the imagery of her first NP turning sunlight into obelisks to rain down on the enemy. The personality is also a nice twist on the "arrogant ruler" model of Ozy and Gilgamesh, where she actually does harbor some regrets and insecurity over her reign beneath her proud exterior. The part about Aten being a parasite that latched on to her feels a bit extraneous to the sheet itself in that it's not really fleshed out apart from that one paragraph of her personality blurb, but it's an interesting idea nevertheless. I do wonder if Imperial Privilege could be folded under Blessings of Aten given they seem to share the same concept of granting her abilities just by desiring them (even if Blessings of Aten is divine favor while Imperial Privilege is her own insistence, the concept seems pretty similar to the point where the former pretty much includes the latter already).
Last edited by RoydGolden; August 11th, 2020 at 02:38 PM.
Fairy Artisan
Spoiler:
"Now Master, I put a lot'a work into this here weapon. I don't wanna see any scratches on it! Kapeesh?"
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Britain
Source: Arthurian Legend
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LCK: B
NP: A+
Height: 5’4’’ (163 cm)
Weight: 125 lbs (56.7 kg)
Likes: Poetry
Dislikes: Lecherous Men
Talent: Forging, Enchanting
Natural Enemy: Merlin, Sir Balin
Attribute: Earth
Armament: None
Catalyst: Shard of the Round Table
Class Skills:
Personal Skills:
Noble Phantasm(s):
Lore:
Personality:
Quotes:
Creator Notes:
Name: Flidais
Origin: Celtic Mythology
Class: Rider
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
STR: E
END: C
AGI: D
MAG: A
LCK: C
Queen of the tribe Gamhanraidh, Rider was famed for her magical cow, Maol, and cattle capable of feeding her entire tribe in one day alongside its many magical qualities. A goddess whom ruling over wealth and fertility spoiled her followers with borderline immortality and thus making them strong, nonetheless her relationship with her followers was cold, an inhuman existence whom could not find acceptance, until one day the boisterous Bricne, a servant of Medb, fancied a visit to Gamhanraidh, wary of angering Medb he was taken graciously and spoiled rotten by the wealth of Gamhanraidh. An insolent joker who spoke to king and peasant (and goddess alike) he boasted of Fergus' deeds rousing Rider's interest
Later in Connatch he boasted to Medb and Fergus of Gamhanraidh's riches and Rider's beauty thus rousing the greed of Medb and lust of Fergus. Forcefully and frankly Fergus admitted his intentions to Oilill Fionn, king of Gamhanraid and Rider's 'husband'. Yet another hero, yet another tyrant but as Fergus spoke of her beauty Caster did not detect falsehoods or the desire for her authorities, the man genuinely desired Caster for herself and not just the benefits she would bring to his people, using illusions she would meet him at night after every battle and simply talked and thus the goddess learned of friendship and thus the goddess fell in love
With her desire ignited she surrendered all of Gamhanraidh's secrets to Medb in exchange of being Fergus' wife and thus swiftly the battle was won and Caster left to live with Fergus at a forest near Connatch. A Goddess of Fertility of Celtic Mythology as such she bats no eye at massacres at such merely accepting as another part of life, warriors are born to die young after all and thus the ground is fed with blood to germinate new life. Although its not her intention she excludes a homely seductive charm and alongside her personality its easy to think 'Ah she'd be the ideal wife' but to Rider its her personality when in 'business', for her falling in love is overwhelmingly protecting and blessing her love with a immense heavy pressure that crushes like a mace and embraces like an snake, as such immense strength of will and body is needed to not be entangled in her and become a cocoon of love sealed away from the world....Geez that Fergus sure falls in love with troublesome women
One would assume she'd have nurse an immense hatred against Medb or anger at Fergus' hobbies but for the first for all that they fight each other it stays only at bickering and they work together rather well, Rider moderating Medb's greed and Medb making sure Rider won't be fooled and as for Fergus only a shrug and "Fergus will be Fergus, anything else is unacceptable"
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Last edited by BoktaiMoon; August 16th, 2020 at 04:14 PM.
"Hey, Master, wanna live forever?"
Class: Caster
Alignment: Chaotic/Neutral
Region: China
Height: 136cm
Weight: 40kg
Likes: Fame, money, idio- I mean, trusting people
Dislikes: Distrustiful people, grains, her current form
Talent: Alchemy, lying
Armaments: fan, furnace
Natural Enemy: Xu Fu
Stats
Str: E
End: C
Agi: D
Mna: A
Lck: B
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
personality
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
And as we are approaching the end of this month's prompt, I suppose I have some time to review our latest entries as well. Apologies for not keeping up, but rest assured that I'd never forget to honor your effort. <3
Bentham: I don't know what do say, actually. JK I TOTALLY DO. THIS WAS SOMETHING ELSE YOU REALLY WENT OFF THIS TIME HUH MISTER. I couldn't even in my wildest dreams think of something remotely as cool as this, so thank you for granting this awesomeness upon our unworthy mortals. A mega-rational, madly utilitarian Berserker is a wild concept in itself, and you just went and made it even more awesome with the flavor texts, the personality, and everything blending in so smoothly... (Also, that NP that is kind of a nod to our OG Avenger? Hoo boy, you weren't messing around.) I'm so saddened that this isn't an actual Servant, I'd burn the hell out of my quartz for him.
Houdini: YESSS. I love this historical figure and I also love when someone does good on him by making him into the awesome Servant he deserves to be so kudos for you man! Ahh, I love how he's such an anti-mystery individual even if his whole shtick is somehow to be enveloped in mystery in the eyes of others, it's an interesting concept. And his NP is such a hack if you stop to think about that... Not even the binding of a command seal could reign him in, in theory. It's scary. (It doesn't help that he's a showoff who's way too proud on top of that, but oh man how'd I love to see him in a game or an animation, he seems like he'd be so much fun to watch going on and on with his shenanigans.)
Savitri: My tiny-brain knowledge of the Mahabharata didn't helped me in remembering of this individual, so this was a great sheet in the sense that made me go "oh!" all over again. I loved loved this story, is so sweet, so rewarding but also so brave. This is a great Servant to have, truly the embodiment of a classic Disney Princess. I love how everything about her is to protect a beloved target, that is truly very selfless and quite a rare ability to have as a NP, when it should be a trump card that fortifies your own character, not others. I have a weakness for these types of characters, the selfless ones, so this girl truly hit that sweet spot on me. She's very cool. <3
Akhenaten: Awesome character, first of all! I love that personality, that passionate heart that lies behind the façade of a ruler. I think these sort of characrers always get the best development, so it's such a shame there's no fanfiction nor short-story where I could see this Servant in action... But at the same time, it's reliving because I'm pretty sure I'd fall in love hahaha. (EVEN WITH THE EXTREME ZEALOTRY. I KNOW I KNOW, EVEN WAIFUS CAN'T BE PERFECT.) Also, I was already gushing over her with the skills and the NP, both very well-detailed and true to her character... But that CE? You don't play fair. ;_;
Viviane: Now this is an interpretation that I didn't saw yet. Usually Viviane is shown in a much more "regal" light (is "regal" even the right word? My english is failing me today) so this more "rugged" version of her is a breath of fresh air. (But good to know that no matter what, she'll always treat the Knights of the Round Table like they are those people owning money to a loan shark. This is amazing.) I also like her ability of granting power to weapons, and I could imagine that if she even wanted to do that, she could bestow great power upon the most mundane items, like a fork or something. But anyway! The usage of Invisible Air as a NP was so good, I forgot that enchantment was a gift from her. She is a cool Servant, you did a good job!
Flidais: Fergus' wife? Now that's something I'd love to see in FGO. I like how she has these skills about nurturing and healing ailments thanks to her cattle, and yet her love is something so suffocating and deadly. Truly, she is the poster child of "don't stick your D in crazy." (But okay, okay, I know she means well.) I also love her relationship with Mebd, and truly would love to see them side by side, I can only imagine the nightmare that'd be. And even as a Servant, she has the capacity to be something else if used properly. I'd be scared of this woman hahaha. Good job on her!
Li Shaojun: What a dangerous woman... But I loved the choice for this Servant, I can see things going either very south or very right in a HGW with her. I liked very much that her brand of alchemy is the sort of changing "the inside" and not "the outside", as in, she'd rather buff herself than something else. It's a nice twist on the usual rules and it makes her even more terrifying, in a Hulk-ish manner. And on top of that an actual xiang? Talk about overpowered, if you stop to think about that. And I didn't even mentioned that NP. I could see a lot of mind-fuckery going around with an ability that makes you "undying". What a cool Servant, indeed!
w h i t e f r e n z y ' s
s e r v a n t s . | . m a s t e r s. | . p r e v i e w s
Zarathustra
(Saver)
"Servant Saver Zarathustra has answered your plea. To be honest from the start only for your caution that my appearance in this Class means either that the world approaches an Apocalypse or that you're in great danger or peril."
Ascensions
Height: 193 cm
Weight: 78~ kg
Origin: Persian-Central Asia Region
Alignment: True Neutral
Attributes: Earth, Heaven, Star
Other Qualifying Classes: Saber, Archer, Lancer, Rider, Caster, Ruler
Likes: fruitful dialogues, free will, people that seek virtues and higher things, trees and their fruits, to help others
Dislikes: needless violence and brutality, oppression, people that follow their low desires, humans who are ignorant to the nature and their environment
Talents: guidance to truth and Enlightenment
Parameter:
Strength: C
Endurance: A
Agility: B+
Luck: B+++
Mana: A+
NP: EX
Backstory and Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Notes
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; August 21st, 2020 at 11:24 AM.
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Aww @Padoru, I completely forgot to reply to your lovely review back in the 102th page BUT ALSO YES. I FEEL THAT. *latin highfive*
Thank you very much for liking her. <3
And @Koga too, thanks a lot for appreciating my girl. I'm very glad you liked her. <3
Also, since we're at this, let me give some praise to your Zarathustra too. I liked how you took care to construct him with the respect a figure like him deserves. I think Fateverse already has some notes about what sort of individual he was? But I never really care about those things, I love to see the many ways people go on about Zoroastrianism. I think you did amazing by our own King of the Prophets, as to say - his personality is endearing (and it reminds me of Saint Oniisan, which was a great adition thank you hahaha). His NPs though? Whoa. Talk about a scary power to hold. I hope he never has to use any of them.
Andddd to make everyone's lives easier, a list with our contestants for your convenience:
- Thucydides by LeadDemon
- Balaam by RoydGolden
- Hammurabi by Clyton
- Alfred Hitchcock by BnEl15
- Victor Lustig by King of Padoru
- Johnny Shiloh by Perry Ellis.
- Comet Halley by Wyvern
- Sen no Rikyu by Shiki-pon
- La Malinche by WhiteFrenzy
- Jeremy Bentham by BnEl15
- Harry Houdini by TheLordOfAwesome
- Savitri by AAM1232
- Akhenaten by GilgameshKingOfMemes
- Viviane by NittyGritty
- Flidais by BoktaiMoon
- Li Shaojun by the god of world-0
- Zarathustra by Kabalisto Koga
- Naamah by Kamerad
(And if you come by in the very last minute don't worry Imma update the list.)
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s e r v a n t s . | . m a s t e r s. | . p r e v i e w s
O brave abandoned soul,
Persisting and striving to survive in a world that's already doomed,
While those "chosen people" have left the Earth.
Come, follow me, into the abyss of the Sea of Time.
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Last edited by Kamera; September 18th, 2020 at 04:19 AM. Reason: typos
WOW
We have an amazing last-minute entry here.
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