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    You mentioned the tumblr thing but never gave a link
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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Showerthought: you could actually draw a lot of comparisons between Sigmund (father of Sigurd) and Arthur pendragon. Both had their “sword in the stone”. Both accidentally fucked their sister. Both had a nephew/son to go on adventures with. The difference between them is that Arthur had everything given to him while Sigmund suffered for his entire life and had to work for everything.
    ^ (Nine as of November 30th 2021)

    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Hey it’s more efficient than coming up with new posts!
    It’s one thing to bring up an old idea in a new conversation because these threads tend to have a cyclical nature, but to copy paste a post you had three months ago and pass it off as a new spontaneous “shower thought” just strikes me was lazy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    You mentioned the tumblr thing but never gave a link
    What the hell do you want? Proof that I have a Reddit account or proof that I posted links to this thread there?

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    I mean, if you posting our stuff elsewhere, the least you could have done was ask us first instead of stealing our content. So yeah, you should have left a link to the thread or site or server you're doing this to so we can check it out too.

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    Fine. My Reddit account is u/humble_award_4873 and I primarily post on r/tumblr. I primarily posted links to cursed by fortuna’s grand candidates, delreys abzu and baldr, bugs Odysseus and your camazotz.

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    You sure like to post my Freud whenever you can.
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    But at what cost?

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    Why r/Tumblr though? You're much more likely to get a reaction in other servers that are Fate related than posting them at random.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    Why r/Tumblr though? You're much more likely to get a reaction in other servers that are Fate related than posting them at random.
    yeah there is a reddit for fate ,fate stay night and one for Grand order.
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    Here is the end product of a very, very silly idea I had. I ended up more satisfied with the lore that I tought I would be at first, and I hope you like her too! I also experienced with including quotes in the skill descriptions, tough I'm not sure I'll repeat that.


    "You really used a lot of saint quartz for this, Senpai. I wonder what kind of servant will come to us this time..."
    A flash of light fill the room, blinding all who sees in it and preventing them from seeing the Servant for now. Until a voice rings out, a strangely familiar one...
    "I am Luperca of the Berserker class. It's a pleasure to finally meet you, master. Or should I say, Senpai~?"
    "W-W-WHAAAAAAAT?"

    Berserker of the Capitol Hill


    Class: Berserker
    Alternate Classes: Rider
    True Name: Luperca
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Origin: Roman Mythology

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: A
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: B
    NP: B

    Likes: Good men, Children, Meat
    Dislikes: Her children being hurt, Family fallout
    Talent: Child Caretaking
    Weaponry: Claws, Shield

    Class Skills
    Beast Enhancement: C
    A special variation of Mad Enhancement. All parameters are raised by one rank except Mana and Luck, but the Skill's user can remain calm, without losing their reason. However, their mind are influenced by their instinct, causing it to sometimes override their logical thinking.

    The result of the vessel's human mind merging with the wild spirit of a wolf goddess. Her nature is that of a girl who innocently go along with what her instincts tell her, and her association with the festival of Lupercalia that includes wild reveling sometime cause her to get strong, random whims out of the blue.

    "I want some chicken... I know we're on a mission right now, Master, but you need to take care of your health too! Come on, I'll hunt us some food~"

    Divine Core of the Goddess: B
    A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from changing no matter how much calories are absorbed.

    Tough she would be remembered either as a wolf messenger of Mars or an human woman who was granted divinity, Berserker was in fact a Earth Mother Goddess from the beginning. This necessisated her summoning into a mortal body as a pseudo-servant, and incarnating in a mortal body gave this skill a rank-down.

    "Uh? Why am I using Mash's appearance in the first place? Well, I think the Summoning System recognized how similar we are in protecting and taking care of her. Also, the costume she wore for Halloween was so cuute! How could I not reward such a great hommage to my species?"



    Personal Skills
    Harbinger of Victory: A
    A skill denoting one who serve as a symbol of fortune and success. In Roman culture, wolves were seend as messengers of Mars, the God of War. As such, seeing one before a battle would be a sign that the Roman soldiers would be victorious, and there is an anecdote of the army accepting a wild wolf amongst their ranks during the Battle of Sentinum.

    As the wolf recognized as the mother of the Roman people, Berserker is a goddess that bring felicity and triumph to her children. She project an aura of fortune around her, with any ally who stays in it recieving a bonus to their Luck as well as a boost in morale from her comforting presence.

    "No matter what, I'll be there for you and my children... As long as I'm here, you won't have anything to fear, my darlings..."

    Pheromones: A
    The general term for substances secreted/emitted from inside an animal's body, and that has an effect on the conduct and physiologic state of a different specimen of the same race.

    The nature of a
    prostitute
    she-wolf
    who tempts men into giving her gifts. Her charm can make people want to try to earn her favor and desire, and she accompanies it with a naturally lewd appeal. Tough the costume help, admitedly.

    "What kind people you have here, always helping others and showing niceness. I'm sure doing 'that' with them would be really good too. "
    "Stop thiiiis, it's so embarassing...! And you better not get any ideas, Senpai!"

    Seven Crowns: C
    A strange smell come from Berserker, owing to her 'potential for a certain future'. Indeed, as both the symbol of the conquering Rome and recognized in a number of legends as a lascivious prostitute, Berserker as a chance, albeit small, to be called as a certain Beast from the Apocalypse...

    That fragrance thickens her shield along with sharpening her fangs and claws. Its whereabouts are vague, and it renders class disadvantages as something meaningless.

    "...it's better for us both if we don't talk about it."

    Shapeshifting: B
    A Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change. As a Goddess, Berserker naturally possess the ability to change her appearance, tough it has been limited when she took a mortal body. The only forms she can access to are ones based on the fragmented aspects the Roman civlization came to know her as.

    She can shift into the completely human-looking Acca Larentia known as a lascivious woman, the wolf who took care of the twin founders, and she can even change her gender to male by becoming Lupercus, the god which came to be associated with the Lupercalia festival.

    "My children had a lot of misconceptions about me, but they kept loving me no matter the name they gave me. So I do not mind at all taking the forms they gave me. Oh, you want to see one, Master? Alright..."

    Lupercus

    "GYAAAAAH! TURN BACK, TURN BACK!"


    Noble Phantasm

    "Come in my embrace, and be blessed, my children. Grow, and conquer the world! Lupercal!"
    Blessing of the Wolf mother
    Lupercal

    Rank: B
    Barrier

    The sacred cave in which Berserker nursed the divine twins Romulus and Remus, taking care of them and blessing them with the drive and fierce attitude of wolves through the act. It would thereafter be the scene of the Lupercalia festival, so that Rome's crops and women would be blessed with her fertility and that the city would be purified. In fact, after the ritual's abolishment during christian times, many began to blame natural incident on not having its protection. As a Servant, the cave and its associated ritual are manifested as large and rocky shield, influenced by, Mash Kyrielight's, her vessel, abilities.

    By calling upon the name of a Noble Phantasm, she can call up on the blessing she gave to her children the Roman, in the form of a barrier that cover her allies. The barrier's durability is rather weak since it's not its true function. Rather, what it does is imbibe them with the same vitality and drive that the twins demigod inherited, repleneshing their energy and also purge the body of taints such as curses or sicknesses, leaving any 'charge' hale and hearty. It also give the combative drive that led to the founding of Rome, emboldening their spirits to the limit and even giving them a slight boost to their attacks for a short time. However, as it is this same ambition that led to Romulus killing his brother and the agressive expansion of Rome, her allies may become out of control as their desires overflow.


    Description
    Berserker is Luperca, the wolf goddess who took care of the legendary founders of Rome when they were infant, incarnated in a copy of the body of the Demi-Servant Mash Kyrielight. Much like our beloved kouhai, she is a girl who help people and give them kindness without thinking much about it with a sweet smile. Unique to her however is a maternal caring along with that, giving her a nature to take care and guide those she finds vulnerable, especially younger people. In fact, as the adoptive mother of Romulus, she sees every Roman as her children and her role as taking care of them.

    However, a part of her nature is also being a wild beast. She tends to have a rather simple way of thinking about most things, to the point she follows her whims and instinct without much thinking about it. If she wants to eat something, she eats it. If she want to take care of a child, she'll grab and cajole them without asking for permission. And should she like someone, she will proposition them without any shame. This last fact tends to make a certain eggplant yell in horror.

    If she has one regret, is that she couldn't have done anything from stopping two of her children from going into a deadly conflict. While she knew that neither would have accepted anything else, she still wish there was a way for Romulus and Remus to both survive their dispute, and to accomplish their dream both. Tough she knows this is but a pipe dream, she just doesn't like the thought of her family being torn apart so.


    Lore
    In ancient times, before the advent of the great city of Rome, the primitive communities around the Palentine Hill worshipped a certain deity. She was a Earth Mother Goddess named Luperca who nurtured and defended her people as her kind does. She could take the form of a noble wolf or a beautiful woman, and she liked to use the later form to service and lay with men in exchange for their offerings. This would be the root for the word Lupa meaning both she-wolf and prostitute in latin. Her favored mate was a shepherd by the name of Faustulus, with whom she had twelve children. However, the youngest one died in childbirth, leaving her with much sorrow.

    One day, while she was hunting in the form of a wolf, she happened to stumble unto the odd scene of two toddlers carried by the waters of the Tiber Rivr towards her. Those were Romulus an Remus, the sons of Mars who had been left to die in the wilderness by order of their maternal granduncle Amulius, who feared that they would take the throne of Alba Longa. Tiberinus, the compassionate God of the river, asked that Luperca take care of the demigods.

    Seeing her youngs in the vulnerable, crying babies, she gladly accepted and thus took back the twins to her cave to take care of them along with her litter. Tough greatly surprised to see the new children when he came to check on his family, but he gladly helped her raise them. And so, the half-divine children would be given both the wildness of beasts and the education of humanity.

    After Romulus founded the City of Rome with her biological children amongst his first subjects, her worship would continue amongst the city and the cave in which she took care of her youth would be the site of the Lupercalia ceremony. However, through the ages, the particular of her nature became forgotten in the mind of the citizens as they came to remember in different fragments: the wolf who nursed the twins after she lost her youngs, the woman Acca Larentia who adopted them then was deified after her death, and the male god Lupercus who was an aspect of Faunus and blessed the city through the rites of Lupercalia.


    Relationships
    Romulus:
    "It still warms my heart to see how much you've grown, sweetie. You even became a god through your own merits! Good boy! I just wish you two could have stood together..."

    Nero:
    "Hello there, dearie! We never met, but you're so cute just from a look. You can call me mother if you want! Tough, it's odd, but you feel somewhat familiar"

    Other Romans
    "You are all my children too, so don't be afraid to come to to me with your problems. A mom's here to hemp with troubles, after all."

    Heracles
    "W-wow. You say there's a legend where I was with him? No way, I would have defintiely remember being with someone like that! Too bad he doesn't have any rationality right now..."

    Bartholomew Roberts
    "...I didn't even say anything, and he just knelt and swore his loyalty to me."

    Mash
    "Why does she seems always so upset when I do things in front of her? One would think she would be flattered with a goddess choosing her form. Tough she's so cute you can't hold it against her, right, 'Senpai'?"

    Lancelot
    "Jeesh, what an annoying guy! Anytime he sees me, he tries to cover me up with the stubborness of a bull! I can dress however I want!"
    Last edited by Alexcoene; January 4th, 2022 at 03:37 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    Why r/Tumblr though? You're much more likely to get a reaction in other servers that are Fate related than posting them at random.
    Because I can and because it exposes beast lair to a wider audience

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    Looking forward to more gatekeeping.

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    Gatekeeping is pathetic. Gatekkeping an online forum that’s meant for everyone is extra pathetic.

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    I mean sometimes there are certain kinds of people you don't want. Like if I make a forum for, let's say, Jewish people and then let literal nazi's join that's kinda fucked. So I have to gatekeep. The same logic applies to literally every other forum. Why would you want people that hate everything about type-moon on a forum about loving type moon even if at times there are criticisms valid or not?
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    So, unrelated to exposure on Reddit or debate about gatekeeping, can I ask what people here think of my sheet?

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    I like it. The best kind of servants are crack servants taken seriously. or as you say servants that start as a joke and become good, well-written servants.
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    Thomas Monstery :well made servant i would say ,an interesting servant and you managed to give him some good Noblephantasm i must say ,his personality is also good though i have two Questions first what would he say if on told him about the risks of tobac consume ? And second what does the Merlin beside him?

    Yamato Takeru : At first a belated heartly welcome here from my side always nice to greet new Servant creator in our club ! A well made servant the scetches are also good and better as when i would try to draw one as i am bad at that hm well okay good skills and Noblephantasm as well nice personality though the bbcode didn't get what you mean with that you mean spoiler or collapse function?
    Luperca:Well i like my Wolfgirls nice *cough* really well made must i say good nobpephantask and skills though at the Lupercus i said just one thing ! My Eyes !

    Well now would i be grateful if someone could comment kindly onmy first servant of the year please
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    What the hell are you saying?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    Thomas Monstery :well made servant i would say ,an interesting servant and you managed to give him some good Noblephantasm i must say ,his personality is also good though i have two Questions first what would he say if on told him about the risks of tobac consume ? And second what does the Merlin beside him?
    He probably would cop to being wrong on tobacco consumption, but would still continue to smoke himself since it's not like he has to worry about health-problems as a Servant. And the Marlin (I presume that's what you meant) is just because his FC was meant to be the anthropomorphic personification of one. I chose it because it otherwise had the vibe I was looking for.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    What the hell are you saying?
    I commented on the works of the other her.
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