Pah, they clearly have no taste. Tifa isn't even the best FFVII girl anyways.Originally Posted by Alexcoene
It was funny though.
Pah, they clearly have no taste. Tifa isn't even the best FFVII girl anyways.
It was funny though.
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I can't believe such bad taste exist on this forum:P
And sounds like you've been struck by inspiration, Tabris.
My main thoughts while making this sheet were basically "lets not do anything too crazy here" so yeah, I can agree that there were some missed opportunities. Like recently, I just had the thought for Rahab's NP actually closing her off in a building and turning said building into the metaphorical eye of a Perfect Storm that just acts a Anti-City noble phantasm. :v
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So, this is my first post in this forum, and, as such. I'm still not very experienced with the interface. Besides that, this is a character from a fanfic I'm planning to write, the main concept being "a HGW made out of only Kings". Also, a sort of disclaimer: yes, I know he's OP, but he also requires a lot more mana than even Karna, and the other characters are similarly broken. I'd appreciate any criticism, specially as it's the first Servant I've made.
Class: Lancer
True Name: Alulim
Attribute: Star
Strength: D+
Endurance: E
Agility: E
Mana: C
Luck: B
NP: EX
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what greater magecraft it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".
Personal Skills:
Imperial Privilege: ★ (A+++)
In truth, Lancer shouldn't be on the Throne of Heroes. He is a hero from even before the White Titan, before the "heroes of humanity" existed. However, as the first king of humanity, Lancer has received the highest possible rank of Imperial Privilege, unmatched even by the king of Rome, and, as such, he was capable of using it as a way to be summoned, his catalyst simply being the concept of "only kings may be summoned". However, due to the effort necessary to retain what should be an impossible existence, Lancer not only is extremely mana-consuming, but has also lowered the effective rank of Imperial Privilege, to "only" A+++.
Even then, he's able to acquire almost any skill, even those that burden the body, for a long period of time. He is also able to heighten his physical abilities, for example, making his strength A+ for a limited period of time, or raising his endurance for a split second to A++, to tank a powerful blow.
This is, in truth, Lancer's main form of combat, as, due to being what should be an impossible existence, his physical parameters are very low, and, as a king, his fighting isn't the best.
Able to acquire temporarily NPs from other Kings, as he sees himself as their precursor, but has to "untether" the Imperial Privilege that makes him stay summoned, so his Mana cost rises drastically, all of his Parameters drop to E-, his NPs are sealed and he becomes incorporeal for a good while after use.
Affection of the Gods: C
The First King, he was chosen by the Sumerian Gods to rule the humans, and, as such, has received their blessing. In truth, in Lancer's vision, he wasn't that special as a human, only being chosen because the Gods didn't see any worthier candidate, leading to the lower rank than this skill would normally have.
Lancer's STR, END and AGL are ranked up by one.
Information Erasure: B-
Lancer was once the most important human on Earth, but, tens of thousands of years after his death, the only thing that is remembered of him is his name, and the idea that he was once the king of Sumeria. As such, this skill has been manifested, and it makes Lancer's enemies forget everything about him, from his appearance to his fighting style, with the exception of his True Name and Class. It's still possible to deduce Lancer's abilities from the aftermath of the fight, but, as Lancer is an extremely versatile Servant, this isn't a significant amount discovery.
Lancer himself dislikes the existence of this skill, and sees it as an erasure of his deeds, and will try to remember his enemies of what he did on a second encounter.
Natural Body: A
A King who reigned for millennia, Lancer stayed young for all that time, receiving a high rank in this skill. It ranks up Lancer's STR and makes him always stay in his "golden age", never losing his physical form.
Noble Phantasms:
Sons of Earth; The First Human: A
Anti-Army
Alulim is frequently conflated with Adam, the First Human, a Man created from clay, and, in fact, sometimes wonders if he really is the original person that became Adam, and, as such, he's able to replicate the original miracle.
Lancer is able to create golem-like creatures using any kind of earth, and, once they're created and infused with mana, they become self-sufficient, having the Perfect Form A skill.
This, however, takes a while, at 12 hours per "son", but is able to speed it to only 2 hours if he uses Imperial Privilege to acquire Item Construction, though this will skyrocket the mana cost to over 20 times the original cost.
Each "son" has all of their parameters ranked at E-, but have the skill of a typical trained warrior, higher than even Lancer himself, and will remain even after he is defeated, due to their Perfect Form skill.
The Spear of the King: All Things One Day Led to My Spear: EX
Anti-World
When summoned, Lancer carries a mundane spear, without any magical energy emanating from it. It is, however, an extremely ancient and powerful Noble Phantasm, and the proof of Lancer's Kingship.
When Alulim was chosen by the Sumerian Gods, he was also blessed with the greatest gift possible: a piece of their Authority, an Authority of Ruling. It was a symbol made as a way to proof that this human was superior to every other human, and that he should be obeyed.
When Lancer proclaims a something, starting with the sentence "I now decree", he creates a thing similar to a Bounded Field of variable area, in which the laws that Lancer set absolutely cannot be broken by a "human", with not even the highest level of Magic Resistance being able to ignore it.
This Noble Phantasm costs no mana, as above "magic" or "magecraft", but an Authority that comes from the Babylonian Gods, and, as such, they're the ones who support it. However, Lancer, in his belief of being a "fair ruler", will never set laws that wouldn't apply equally to him, barring him from creating laws like "I now decree, the Archer class shall die".
Pretty good for a first sheet.
And it is freaking hilarious!
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I give it a month or two until we all forget about it.
I frankly had no idea about this event. I don't even watch news or tv anymore
Yeah, so this situation with your sheet FC is one big coincidence, huh
It's a rather funny timing, especially since Vance happened to use it for a prostitute of all people.
Also, welcome, Still! As for Alulim, the 'first king' is a rather cool concept, tough I dunno why you gave him two skills who practically do the same thing with Natural Body and Affection of the Gods, especially since the later can have very different effect. And the kind of OP that's just 'he can do whatever he want' is not very interesting in my opinion. Plus, from what I see from quick search, Adam is conflated with another completely different person, so I don't get why he has that first NP, even if it's a cool concept. But it's a good first sheet.
Last edited by Alexcoene; January 23rd, 2022 at 07:53 PM.
Heeey, thinking of working on another sheet soon. Just need to settle on who to do it for, another Foreigner, another Caster, a Berserker, or an Assassin. I think I have some others I could write up too but off the top of my head those are the ones I've got most prepared.
well if you ask: go for Foreigner
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Class: Caster
True Name: Banu Musa Brothers
Origin: Umayyad Dynasty
Alignment: True Neutral
Parameters
Strength: E
Agility: D
Endurance: D
Mana: A
Luck: C
NP: A
Summoning Line:
Lore/Background:
Class Skills:
Personal Skills:
Noble Phantasm:
Misc Lines:
Bond Lines:
Relationship:
Last edited by Ismail2002; January 30th, 2022 at 06:42 PM.
There are a bunch of typoes in the Banu Musa sheet: most of them are still easy to understand, but I don't really understand what they're saying to Da Vinci. I like the sheet overall though: the brothers' different specialisation are all represented pretty well via the fact that the class skills change what they can create depending on who's in control, and that each brother is associated with a personal skill which raises in rank if he's in control, and then the Noble Phantasm helps them bring together as a Servant, since you've got a shared invention; the effects of the skills and of the Noble Phantasm are all pretty fun, too.
Unrelated, but after much deliberation I've decided to repost my old Bayajidda sheet unchanged. It's the second sheet I ever made, and initially took it down due to factors discussed on pages 141 and 143. However, while I do think there are aspects that could be reworked and/or expanded in other takes on the same character that focus more on a specific version rather than being more general ('Man on the Donkey' connection, Cain connection, etc. etc.), I honestly still like the version I ended up with at first well enough to keep it up.
Of note - due to how I'm choosing to release sheets for now, this does make it so the Saber from Southeast Asia that I had been planning to work on next will be slotted into the next batch of seven Servants instead; though it's not 100% certain, I'll probably work on an Archer next instead, to round out the three Knight classes for the current batch.
I wanna make a servant sheet or two, is there a template I can borrow?
Most everyone develops their own style but there is a template in the old contest thread OP you can use.
I though there was one on the OP but there isn't, huh.
You can copy one of mine if you want. My older ones don't have collapse tag bullshit to deal with.
Why everything is all white ?
Cant go wrong with the classics and then develop where you like it.
You could also use my older formatting like my Watcher Ra or Shielder Nekhbet
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Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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