Pretty late on the action, but Bunhelier, please change some sections of this sheet to get rid of the plagiarism issues with Spartacus's version.Faceclaim
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Stats
Class : Saber
Epithet : The Knight of the Azwar, The Fake Sword of God, The Second Khalid
Identity : Khaula bint al-Azwar
Origin : Historical Fact, Middle East
Height/Weight : 175cm/62kg
Alignment : Lawful • Good
Attribute : Man
Stats
STR : B (A+)
AGI : B (A)
LCK : A+
END : B (A+)
MP : D
NP : A+
Armament: A sword and full body armor
Class Skills
Magic Resistance A
Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".
Riding A
All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts.
MubarizunHero-Slaying Champion A
A skill that function as the one that change the tide of war by killing the enemy's top heroes. When facing "Heroes" grants her massive boost to her overall ability and conceptual advantage against them. It is essentially an Anti-Hero skill and it doesn't work against Divine Spirits (Divinity A or above).
The Hero-Slaying Champion, she is amongs the infamous Mubarizun who have the ability to change the tide of war by slaying enemy's top Heroes.
Personal Skills
Furthest Limit A
Combat arts performed to the extremes, creating a move that integrates attack and defense, complete movement in all forms of space, an attack that could severs space, a defense that can hold anything and even prevents the degradation of fighting skills in any kind of circumstances even if she loses her armaments, etc.
She knows all of that were meaningless in front of him, at the time she thinks its enough to just see from sideline but all of that change when a certain incident happened to her brother. She decide to enter the battlefield full with a mixed emotion of anger, fear, and sorrow. At that time she uncounciously performed his combat arts, albeit inferior. It was the time she realize that she could reach the pillar that was admired by everyone, even if it seemed impossible she decided to continue pursuing the pillar who pierce through even the end of the sky.
Amongs the Companions her fighting skill was the closest to the Great Sword of God as if she was the second Sword of God. She can use almost virtually anything as weapon she can even fight barehandedly by utilizing her armors and gauntlets as blunt weapons. There were also a story where she was captured and taken as prisoner, she used tents' poles as improvised weapons and kills 30 knights before successfully break free.
This is a skill that allows her to perform any combat arts to its maximum potential, however it is not possible for her to perform beyond its maximum potential that is why her combat arts were still inferior to that of Khalid's.
First Knight Role Model B+
A Skill that functions as the role model to lead fellow warriors. It can be used to return or boost their morale and fighting spirits, it can also be used on herself as some sort of self-suggestion to negates mental interference that affects her.
She employs her words to encourage the fleeing warriors to re-enter the battlefields and leads her fellow female prisoners to run away from imprisonment. The way she fight was reminiscent of the great Drawn Sword of God, giving the impression that she will never be defeated by any kind of foes, thus boost the morale of her ally.
"This warrior fights like Khalid ibn Walid, but I am sure he is not Khalid." -Shurahbil Ibn Hassana
Keen Insight A
Keen Insight is the higher development of the Mind's Eye (False) and is different than Mystic Eyes. No matter how thick the darkness, before the mysteriously shining eyes everything was meaningless.
Keen Insight also known as Eye of Wisdom, an absolute skill that would not put the owner in any danger. The deep eyes contemplate the target, every detail was dug up giving an ominous feeling to them. The destiny and life of the target is thoroughly analyzed.
With Keen Insight she can comprehend the target's strengths, abilities, techniques, and condition and acts accordingly based on them. Even if the opponent's moves were deemed 'perfect' it would collapse in front of this ability. The fraudulent nature to contemplate thoughts, actions, and dictate the fate of the target.
Every change and every possibility is one of the future paths that Keen Insight can predicts. Even in the midst of impossibility, she will finds a path she could not see before to shifts own movement in the right direction, creating a new possible path.
She can penetrate any kind of hindrance and to peek the deep of the abyss to comprehend anything inside it. This allows her to see through the enchantment and see the situation behind it, for example through the invisibility of Presence Concealment.
Khaula can easily see abilities directly to find out the target's skills and to uncover the secrets of Techniques, Magics, Skills, and Noble Phantasms, She can know exactly what is going on or how something is working and giving her the ability to interfere in order to thwart, cancel, avoid, counter, or even imitate the abilities that had been used before her.
That is as long as it's still within the realm she could reach, otherwise she could only see through everything without being able to do anything about it. This was the reason she cannot reach the same level as Khalid even after emulating Khalid's fighting skills and abilities.
Battlefield First Aid E
A basic knowledge of treating wounded people, by using her Keen Insight she can determine the condition of the target and whatever they are in grave danger or not, immediate assistance of healing given to any person suffering from serious injury, with care provided to preserve life, prevent the condition from worsening, and to promote recovery. However while it's not provides instantaneous recovery, it is still a reliable ability that can save someone's life from the greatest danger.
Noble Phantasm
Imitatation God's SwordImitate - The Drawn Sword of God
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Unit
Imitation God's Sword.
It is said that in the battlefield, she is virtually indistinguishable to Khalid Ibn Walid, a living Noble Phantasm that also doubles as a sword to help the Prophet.
By invoking the True Name, she can temporarily summon a Absolute Sword Replica from the center of her body. Passively, it raises her physical stats to be on the same level of Khalid's (the stats that shown above inside () is after this NP active) and grants her Absolute Sword (False) skill at A rank. However, because it is a constant activation, it drains a lot of Magical Energy.
She can fuse with the Absolute Sword Replica, becoming a giant blade and launch in full speed like a light of a fallen star that could decimates anything in its path, demonstrating a power equivalent of Anti-Army/Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm.
Furthermore for a more efficient use, the blade can become smaller, and be wielded by her trusted allies or her master if she wishes to, increasing their stats the same way she gains her current one.
Sayf Mutlaq Al-MahzumO'Sword, Arouse the Light of Victory
Rank: A++
Type: Anti-Country
Khalid was a Hero who is famous for his undefeated records in any battle he is in, no matter how strong or how many the enemies are, be it in large-scale war, minor skirmishes or even a single duel; human, phantasmal beast, demons or apostle, even "The Mightiest One" one of the three Chief Deity of Arabia, all are equal before his absolute force.
The full power release of Imitation God's Sword, which is originally an Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm. In order to imitate Khalid's absolute power, she poured her all into this one attack. Mustering all the effort she put into standing by his side.
As expected it's impossible for a human to imitate even a portion power of the Absolute God, but as someone who have the eye that could contemplate the sky. By utilizing her Keen Insight to the fullest, she comprehend the nature of the Absolute power that's been used before her. She forcefully expanded her Saint Graph to partially reproduce a power similar or close to the power of the Absolute God that Khalid demonstrated during his life. Albeit quite obsolete when compared to the original but for her, it was her most powerful attack, a light that symbolizes the Victory itself.
If she was fused with the Sword, after the release of this Noble Phantasm, she'll be forced to reverts into human form. If summoning the Absolute Sword Replica will constantly drain a lot of magical energy, this attack will deplete it in one sweep.
As a result of forcefully expanding her Saint Graph to imitate the power of Absolute God, using this Noble Phantasm will temporarily damaged her Saint Graph, reducing all of her parameters by 2 ranks and disabled her from using Noble Phantasm for few days, thanks to Keen Insight and Battlefield First Aid she can analyze her own condition and proceed to do coutermearsures to reduces the effects to just 1 day.
Character/Attitude/Speech/
Character:
Khaula is a strong-willed young woman who speaks truthfully and good at encouraging her allies. She is Soft-spoken, caring, courageous, determined, and lively yet dignified. A person with the best quality of a medic and a warrior.
She has a strong sense of justice. She will bring things that bring virtue and goodness closer, and will ascertain those that bring atrocity.
A brave and diligent person, upholding her mission with seriousness. She is also headstrong as she would leap into danger. This leads many to revere her as an exemplary warrior.
She has the strength to put her life on the line and fight to the end.
Motives and attitudes toward the Master:
She is the type that will help her Master no matter how dire the situation was, but she will disses them if they show a sign of weakness at the same time.
Because her character is straightforward and not a falsehood, She won’t spew lies to her Master. She places her trust towards her Master. Deception and betrayal are unthinkable.
Basically she treats the Master as the supreme commander of the army so she'll obey them, but if their strategies are poor, she'll butt in, if their bearing as a leader is bad, she'll get mad and correct them, and if they stride away from the noble path, she will be a sword of mercy that stop them from their way to evil for good.
Speech example:
"Servant Saber, Khaula bint Al Azwar. I'm not as grand as the Drawn Sword of God, but i will do my best to become your sword... Master "
"I will not give another chance for evil!"
"No matter what sort of predicament it is, there is always a way to overcome it. Even if everything is lost, the future still remains. No matter what kind of hardships, as well as pain and sorrows i will be always on your side. Remember that i, Khaula bint al Azwar am your sword! Now get up, Master! Take my hand! Let's do our best and together we will overcome every single of them!"
"What it is Master? If you have something to say just say it, don't be shy but.... I like that cute side of yours Ufufufu."
"What do I like? are you curious? Fufufu... that is a sec-ret."
"What do I hate? Stripping in public, not only it shames yourself, its shames people around you too. Eh, why do you look so disappointed?"
Dialogue
Khalid ibn Walid:
"Awawawa... Kyah! that's Khalid-sama, act natural, act natural!"
Zirrar bin Al-Azwar:
"Nii-sama please wear your clothes! we are not in a battle! And please wear the armor when we're in battle, this is for your sake!"
Chaldea female Servants:
"Eh? A-all that skin! They're exposing too much! How are you going to protect your body will all that skin being exposed!"
Musashi Miyamoto:
"A fellow female swordsman like me! moreover she seems very proud of her skill, would you like to have a lunch with me? Eh.. Udon? What it is? "The greatest food in the world"? Really?! Let's go, i would like to try it!"
Abu Ubaidah :
"That's... The Custodian of Masses, Abu Ubaidah-sama. A great and a very humble person as well as Khalid-sama's right hand and his close friend. Even though i tried my best to stand by his side, i can't help but feel a little jeaolus of him."
Overview
Khaula bint al-Azwar born sometime in the seventh century, the daughter of Malik or Tareq Bin Awse, one of the chiefs of the Banu Assad tribe, her family is amongs the first of the chieftains that converted to Islam. She was taught martial arts by her older brother, Zirrar bin al Azwar.
Khaula was well known for her bravery. She fought side by side with her brother Zirrar in many battles, including the decisive Battle of Yarmouk in 636 against the Byzantine empire. On the 4th day of the battle she led a group of women against the Byzantine army and defeated its chief commander. She has been described as one of the greatest female warriors in history and was compared to Khalid Ibn Walid by her opponents and her allies in the battlefield.
At first she served as a medic in the back of the battlefield to follow his brother Zirrar who joined the army under the leadership of Khalid Ibn Walid.
When an incident happened to her brother, in which he was taken prisoner by the Romans. Hearing the news, Khaula put on her armor and raised her weapon, then in just one round with her horse she brokes the enemy ranks and came out soaked full in blood. The way she defeats every enemies in her path makes both enemies and allies mistaken her as Khalid, only for Khalid himself appears as a reinforcement and cause confusion.
After that, Khalid also looked for the brave warrior and asked who he was because he was covered his face. At first, Khaula didn't want to answer Khalid's question. However, after being repeatedly questioned, she finally revealed her identity.
“I can't answer because I'm ashamed of you. You are the great commander and I am just a woman whose heart is on fire,” replied Khaula.
Khalid suprised that the warrior is a woman moreover she was Zirrar's younger sister! she was included to be one of the leads to rescue enemy's prisoners, saving her brother's life.
In one of the battle, due to her stubborn and brave nature, she refused to retreat and fight till the end, resulting her to be captured and taken as prisoner. When one of the commanders there trying to disgrace her, as she is a gifted orator she rouses her fellow female prisoners to break free. Using tents' poles as improvised weapons and kills 30 knights before successfully break free. And when she saw her allies retreat from a battle due to seemingly impossible odds, only berates them for being a coward and join her as their fighting spirits returned to them.
Lore
A woman who was praised for the beauty of her eyes and her shrewdness in doing all kinds of things. As a warrior her prowess was compared to Khalid due to their similar fighting styles and abilities, in truth Khaula had learned Khalid's fighting style and abilities through her special eyes.
The reason why khaula learned khalid's abilities was because like others she admired the pillar that brought countless glory to them. she wanted to stand beside him either as an aide or as a woman, but she knew that no one could be equal to khalid, in all her life she had never met anyone who could match khalid in both fighting style or pure strength. Therefore the only way to be side by side with him is to emulate Khalid's own strength.
luckily with her eyes she can see the depths of khalid's strengths, but as expected even though she can see everything she can't reproduce khalid's abilities perfectly because his powers have long surpassed the realm of humans.
but she didn't give up and kept trying to learn khalid's abilities, because of her heart of steel she can be known as the only knight who can be compared to khalid and is known as one of the greatest female knights in history.
The main problem sections are:
Originally Posted by Dialogue examples, Spartacus
"I'm not something as grand as the drawn sword of god, but as long I'm here, I will be your sword, Master."
"What do I hate? Stripping, not only it shames yourself, its shames people around you too. Eh, why do you look so disappointed?"---Originally Posted by Dialogue examples, Bunhelier
"Servant Saber, Khaula bint Al Azwar. I'm not as grand as the Drawn Sword of God, but i will do my best to become your sword... Master"
"What do I hate? Stripping in public, not only it shames yourself, its shames people around you too. Eh, why do you look so disappointed?
Originally Posted by Noble Phantasm, Spartacus
Imitation Khaleed
Imitate - The Drawn Sword of God
It is said that in the battlefield, she is virtually indistinguishable to Khalid Ibn Walid, a living Noble Phantasm that also doubles as a sword to help the Prophet.
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Passively, it raises her physical stats to be on the same level of Khalid's, the stats that shown above.
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The blade can become smaller, and be wielded by her trusted allies if she wishes to, increasing their stats the same way she gains her current one.We heard from Spartacus that your initial intention was a direct rework of his sheet and that he fully denied permission, so you don't get to use his text in your version.Originally Posted by Noble Phantasm, Bunhelier
Imitatation God's Sword
Imitate - The Drawn Sword of God
It is said that in the battlefield, she is virtually indistinguishable to Khalid Ibn Walid, a living Noble Phantasm that also doubles as a sword to help the Prophet.
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Passively, it raises her physical stats to be on the same level of Khalid's (the stats that shown above inside () is after this NP active)
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Furthermore for a more efficient use, the blade can become smaller, and be wielded by her trusted allies or her master if she wishes to, increasing their stats the same way she gains her current one.
This is not an infraction that will go on your record (decision subject to change) because it's the first time Beast's Lair is dealing with a plagiarism problem, so we still don't have set rules and standardized punishments for it, but you're subject to greater consequences if you refuse to comply.