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Thread: Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days (FSN x Nanoha Crossover)

  1. July 1st, 2012, 07:05 PM #8381
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    Quote Originally Posted by EnkiduTRAP! View Post
    Okay so....Hucklebein
    That virus fucks up stuff pretty bad....and they are a bunch of killing maniacs
    So....ummm...no idea
    I mean Shirou has that save everyone even the villains thing still going on so he would stall for time or try to knock them out or something
    Force is something that most would prefer to deny the existence of.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Megaolix View Post
    Force is something that most would prefer to deny the existence of.
    Agreed.
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  3. July 1st, 2012, 08:18 PM #8383
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    I don't mind it, to be honest.
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    Great snippets, Daneel! Though I would offer my reasons for liking it, they have pretty much been spoken. Thanks!
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  5. July 1st, 2012, 10:55 PM #8385
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    Dude, that snippet made me smile so hard it hurts! Great job man.
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  6. July 2nd, 2012, 02:06 AM #8386
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    Daneel, that snip was EPIC. Awesome enough that though you sunk fraggle's redhead lemon I don't mind one bit

    Though I've been reading Aces + Shirou for all this time this snip almost felt like Vita just NTR'd the 'default' pairing of the thread ^^;
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  7. July 2nd, 2012, 05:33 AM #8387
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    Quote Originally Posted by Flere821 View Post
    Daneel, that snip was EPIC. Awesome enough that though you sunk fraggle's redhead lemon I don't mind one bit

    Though I've been reading Aces + Shirou for all this time this snip almost felt like Vita just NTR'd the 'default' pairing of the thread ^^;

    Even though she forcefully friendzoned herself?


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  8. July 2nd, 2012, 08:07 AM #8388
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    Daneel, I have just printed your snippet in paper. I must have this in physical form so I can re-read it even if the internet stops working, this is simply too valuable.

    I'm going to store it along my printed version of Naruto Genkyouien.

    You are fucking awesome, thanks for writting.
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  9. July 2nd, 2012, 11:24 AM #8389
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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    “Trace. Fucking. On.”
    Oh god this! Totally made my day.
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Even though she forcefully friendzoned herself?
    They had a chemistry together that's far better than anything the Aces had with him (eg, the dates with Hayate and Fate). What was I supposed to think?
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  11. July 3rd, 2012, 12:15 AM #8391
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Even though she forcefully friendzoned herself?
    That is the beauty of it if she just gone to the romance route, I felt it would have degraded it and besides she still won.


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  12. July 3rd, 2012, 01:32 AM #8392
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    Quote Originally Posted by Flere821 View Post
    They had a chemistry together that's far better than anything the Aces had with him (eg, the dates with Hayate and Fate). What was I supposed to think?
    That every route is the Vita route?
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    Time to go to the holodeck! *Rams head up Sakura's vagina*
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  13. July 3rd, 2012, 10:12 AM #8393
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kuradora View Post
    That every route is the Vita route?
    ...that...that isn't how it works.
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    *whining* Don't crush my dreams.
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    Time to go to the holodeck! *Rams head up Sakura's vagina*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kuradora View Post
    *whining* Don't crush my dreams.
    Isn't it sad Vita-chan?


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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Isn't it sad Vita-chan?
    The friendship could have benefits. Just saying.

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    It always had benefits: Shirou fed Vita.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gwonbush View Post
    It always had benefits: Shirou fed Vita.
    That. And Vita gave his pack one more "Bro" in return, in form of herself.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

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    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

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    It makes sense. Equivalent exchange is the basis of magic isn't it?
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    Time to go to the holodeck! *Rams head up Sakura's vagina*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kuradora View Post
    It makes sense. Equivalent exchange is the basis of magic isn't it?
    You're thinking alchemy. ^^;;;
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