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    死徒(上級)Greater Dead Apostle Spammin Spiff's Avatar
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    We're half way there with the reviews! Everyone gave it their A-game, I hope the Monthly Contest in a few days has as much passion as this did.

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    Bullseye Award
    You were given very specific and narrow prompts. Most would probably despair. Yet you absolutely nailed it. Twice.
    Orcus
    Daniel Auber


    Big Feels Award
    Heartwarming, angsty or perhaps both. Your character gives off strong emotion and lasting sentiments.
    Hestia
    Dionysius
    (aka Greek Tragedy Award)


    Exquisite Visual (and Taste) Award
    Simply beautiful (delicious). You sure knows how to evoke glittering (appetizing) visuals and colorful characters.
    Mother of Gold
    Marie-Antoine Carême


    Well Researched Award
    You've put quite a lot effort in properly researching the figure you're writing and it shows.
    Hayreddin Barbarossa


    Polished to Perfection Award
    These are the quintessential ideal sheet. You've made sure that it includes everything and left none wanting.
    Pope Alexander VI
    Antoine Lavoisier


    Ideal Spouse Award
    Charismatic and endearing in their own ways. They got the maximum waifu and husbando points.
    Louhi
    Marcus Junius Brutus
    (aka Best Faceclaim Award)


    Resourceful Santa Award
    Three Wishes. Three Presents. Generous in both quality and quantity. You are undeniably the best Santa one could ask for.
    The Roswell Incident
    Van Schrodinger
    ​Carl Gustav Jung


    Unpolished Gem Award
    Your sheets has potential, but for whatever reason, it still feels rough around the edges.
    Rostam
    Shunzi Emperor
    (Also props for getting out of your comfort zone for these ones)




    That said, here are my votes:

    3 points - Pope Alexander VI
    Aside from the sheer completeness of the sheet, I'm biased to him for being a great addition to my 72 Demon God family list.

    2 points - Daniel Auber
    It's either this or Lavoisier for this spot, but gotta hand it to you for the reason I've mentioned above.

    1 point - Hayreddin Barbarossa
    Obligatory vote for nicely fulfilling my prompt, I must say I'm quite satisfied with how he turns out.

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    thats a cute way of voting
    i will steal that in the future
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    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    cringe more like; but yea, feel free.

    Also, reminder that the voting period will end tomorrow on 14:00 UTC; so get your votes in, even if you didn't participate.

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    I'm trying to think of who's made a sheet and hasn't voted. The ones that are coming to mind are Team Brazil, as well as Koga.

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    1 pt - Marie-Antoine Carême
    A great Foreigner with a very interesting choice for the entity.

    2 pt - Pope Alexander IV
    Very fleshed out and well executed character, as expected. It's great to see more Demon God Pillar hosts too.

    3 pt - Marcus Junius Brutus
    I am not biased.
    It just fulfills the prompt perfectly, managing to oppose Gawain's character in every way while also being an interesting character on its own. I expected some kind of elaborate interaction between the Natural Enemies when I wrote the prompt, but you went the hard way instead, ignoring the Round Table half completely and conveying what their relationship would be like through his appearance, methods, ideals... Just amazing work.

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    Y'all did great work btw and I wish I had the time right now to write more reviews. I loved this contest. This forum is great and you guys are great.

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    i guess these are pretty busy days, even for me, so i'll extend voting period for another 24 hours

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    So, Antoine Lavoisier and Pope Alexander VI is currently tied in the first place at 8 points.
    Please help with a tiebreaker and get a few more votes in, thanks.
    Last edited by Kamera; February 1st, 2022 at 09:36 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    So, Antoine Lavoisier and Pope Alexander III is currently tied in the first place at 8 points.
    Please help with a tiebreaker and get a few more votes in, thanks.
    Man that difficult as they are all quite good must i say .
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    3 points rodrigo Borgia.

    2 points Hegel.

    1 point hestia.

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    Honorable Mentions:
    • Hegel. He's one of the most difficult philosophers there is to translate into a Servant due to the scope of his philosophy, but you managed to do it. Wow.
    • Louhi. Nice characterization for what most legends considered as your average evil fairytale witch.
    • Marie-Antoine Careme. Cooking is another tough topic that I'm not sure I could do had I gotten your prompt. Careme herself is amazing enough, but the Foreigner reveal afterwards really took things up to eleven, in a good way.
    • Hestia. Another nice addition to the Lostbelt Olympians cast.


    1pt to Dionysus. Honestly it was a three-way tie between him, Hestia, and Careme. I may be partially biased here, but while the whole Greek mechagods idea aren't usually my thing, you actually managed to integrate most of Dionysus' lore and his identity transitions into the Fateverse setting smoothly. Nice.

    2pts to Lavoisier. That classic WF mix of angst and wholesomeness. I think you managed to write the whole Pretender-Class well in this instance, between the sort-of identity crisis and a link tying two seemingly unrelated figures together.

    3pts to Auber. An artist Innocent Monster-ed into their most famous creation isn't exactly a new concept here, but this is a particularly amazing application of the idea. I especially love his wholesome relationship with Fanella, and that reveal in the end just further cemented this sheet as my favorite here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    So, Antoine Lavoisier and Pope Alexander VI is currently tied in the first place at 8 points.
    Please help with a tiebreaker and get a few more votes in, thanks.
    I implore you to recount because i counted very differently
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    Same here. For reference, voting started with Spliff's post here and for that post you have to click 1 Point, 2 Points, 3 Points to see the actual votes.

    Here's what I'm seeing, personally:

    Marie-Antoine Carême: 3 (Spliff) + 2 (Alexcoene) + 3 (me) + 2 (Baron Magnus) + 2 (DelRey) + 1 (pinetree) = 13 points
    Rodrigo Borgia, Pope Alexander VI: 1 (me) + 3 (Bugs) + 3 (Kamera) + 2 (pinetree) + 3 (NINE-lives - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 12 points (9 before the announcement of the 'tie')
    Antoine Lavoisier: 3 (Baron Magnus) + 2 (Bugs) + 3 (Frigix) + 2 (BnEl15 - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 10 points (8 before the annoucement of the 'tie')
    Daniel Auber: 3 (Alexcoene) + 1 (Bugs) + 2 (Kamera) + 3 (BnEl15 - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 8 points (5 before the announcement of the 'tie')
    Hegel: 2 (Frigix) + 3 (DelRey) + 2 (NINE-lives - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 7 points (5 before the announcement of the 'tie')
    Louhi: 2 (me) + 1 (DelRey) = 3 points
    Marcus Junius Brutus: 3 (pinetree) = 3 points
    Mother of Gold: 2 (Spliff) + 1 (Alexcoene) = 3 points
    The Roswell Alien: 1 (Spliff) + 1 (Frigix) = 2 points
    Dionysus (Lostbelt): 1 (Baron Magnus) + 1 (BnEl15 - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 2 points (1 before the announcement of the 'tie')
    Hayreddin Barbarossa: 1 (Kamera) (btw I'm really glad you were satisfied with how his sheet turned out )
    Hestia: 1 (NINE-lives - added after the announcement of the 'tie') = 1 points (0 before the announcement of the 'tie')

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serra View Post
    I'm going to give 3 points to Marie-Antoine Carême. It came from what I would've considered a hard prompt, it defined a skewed mindset and set of priorities very well, and it took it from there and just kept escalating it to the extreme in such a satisfying way. It read perfect to me.

    I've been considering a lot of candidates, but I'd also give 2 points to Louhi and 1 to Rodrigo Borgia.
    ahh... i stand corrected, i completely missed this post (and spammin spiff's apparently), sorry!
    Last edited by Kamera; February 2nd, 2022 at 07:11 AM.

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    It's cool, no problem! I should probably get an avatar so my short posts are more noticeable lol

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    well
    now that the count is laid bare how will the voting proceed?
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    as usual, it's going to be over soon anyways

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    Without further ado, let's wrap this up.

    With 10 points
    Third Place
    Antoine Lavoisier



    With 11 points
    Second Place
    Pope Alexander VI



    [dramatic drum roll]


    And with 13 points
    First Place
    Marie-Antoine Carême




    Congrats to WhiteFrenzy, BnEl15, and (especially) Frigix!
    Also, many thanks to all who participated on this little contest, have a good year.

    See you again next time (hopefully)!

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    Gg to the three kings! All well deserved, but the overall quality was outstanding. So many great sheets.
    Also thanks to all who voted and mentioned Auber and made me 4th place
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
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    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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    I just realized Serra was calling me Spliff instead of Spiff. That had me chuckling for a couple minutes.

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