No, in archers backstory, there was a war before eh even become a counter guardian, not the holy grail war, he was betrayed and was procured and killed by hanging as the one reasonable for the war, I just ev,aced that since they never went into detail I could take liberties with that war.
Well then, maybe you should work on your English, since a "Servant" from "that war Archer was in" is going to go to the Holy Grail War, since he doesn't presumably encounter any other Servants for the remainder of his life.
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Like I meant someone created a servant who's background was involved in the that war, not the holy grail war, and I'm just going to call that war the great Mage war, if that's ok with you.
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Also could you please critique my servant Utsukushi shi? I did added some weaknesses, a little more to the background, and some more to fighting techqnueques.
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That's why for Utsukushi shi, I just called it the great Mage war.
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Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
So, why's it a mage war?
I'm not going to critique your Japanese when I don't think you even understand English.Also could you please critique my servant Utsukushi shi?
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Still not quite sure what you're talking about to be honest, but I don't think there's any reason to assume the war (lowercase w) EMIYA was involved in had anything to do with Servants at all. Far as I know, it was just like, some random war in the middle east or somesuch that he got martyred for, not even necessarily involving Magi.
Also if you care so much for feedback, then address the (fairly extensive) commentary I made for your Cain sheet first. Not to be harsh, but nobody is going to be motivated to provide feedback if you give no indication of actually taking any of it into account or acknowledging it any meaningful fashion.
I am, but I have to what for my laptop to get fixed, I can't even attempt to try and fix mistakes on my tablet, as it liiterly takes 2 hours for it process a singer word, when I go into edit, outside of edit it's fine, I really don't understand my tablet at all.
Please read the opening post before submitting a sheet.
And great Mage war, I just felt I could put my own spin on taht war, I mean it is teh future, who knows what happens, I felt that a Mage war made since, in also in taht wa slowly teh only way teh could since fully hang him, wa sof tehyw ere mages, chase I know emiya doesn't mind if he dies, but I doubt he's just going to let it happen, unless it to protect somone else.
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She a counter guardian, she ant accent fiction, and they got no creat your own counter guardian.
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And fiction can be defined as anything that is unrealistic Or never clouded in reality. Therefor not only mine modern(or furture, but it's also fiction.
Please, do enlighten me on how George Washington is considered "modern fiction".
George Washington is a famous character created by Lin-Manuel Miranda writer of the famous musical Hamilton
I keep trying to tell people this! But since Kiritsugu is a character from modern fiction, I think that particular one might be justified. Though I admit the policy does get rather muddied when you consider that the mainline CaS thread does have a designated 'Nasuverse section', and yet I have seen (much better written) Nasuverse characters here before...
People like Washington or Hou Yi should definitely be going in the main thread, though. No doubt about that.
Assuming I'm understanding--a very real possibility of being wrong, since you still have a lot of problems--you're missing the entire point of what Archer's flashbacks are for, then, because the point is that he did in fact let it happen, and Extra even implies he let it happen to protect someone else: everyone not him, from him.
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Alternave Versions of Nasuverse Characters goes in the other thread
I apologize, but someone had to do this.
Ruler
Class: Ruler
Alias: The Annoying Peasant
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Origin: Plebean
Region: Britain
STR E
END C
AGI E
MGI E
LU EX
NP EX
Gender: Male
Likes: anarcho-syndicalism, mud
Dislikes: Monarchy
Natural Enemy: Kings, Rulers, Emperors
Armament: Mud
Catalysts: Mud, Peasant garb
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: B
Grants protection against magical effects. Differently from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Magic is a weapon of kings to oppress the masses, and as such Ruler has the ability to resist any magic used by any king. This means some Casters, such as the Princess of Colchis would find it very difficult to harm Ruler. However his resistance goes down depending on social rank, so Casters from the peasantry would find Ruler an easy target for their powers.
True Name Discernment: B
Status information such as one's identity, Skills and Parameters are automatically revealed when directly encountering a Servant. If summoned as a Ruler, during a direct encounter, a Servant's true name and entire status information will be automatically revealed. In regards to Servants with concealment abilities, a luck check is required.
Gods Resolution: E
Class Skill of the Ruler class, is the privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. However Ruler hates any individual who tries to force their will over others, and thus while he technically has authority over the Holy Grail War, he will never exercise it because Authority comes from the masses, not from an individual.
Personal skills:
I didn't vote for you: Ruler is the epitmie of the lower orders, the downtrodden and oppressed. He represents their resistance against tyranny, and reminds all that though they may claim authority from the gods or their armies, supreme executive power derives from a mandate from the masses. No king, emperor or ruler has any authority over Ruler and his stats go up by one when facing any ruler, king, emperor, kaiser, tsar or other monarch. Though summoned as Ruler, he will never exert any authority over anyone and will fight anyone who does.
Strange women lyin' in ponds distributin' swords is no basis for a system of government: of all the many kings, none are more hateful to Ruler then the King of Knights, one whose power came from exploiting the workers and hanging on to outdated imperialist dogma which perpetuated the economic and social differences in society. Her rule did not improve the lot of the common men and women of Britain, and Ruler is the reflection of their anger over the King's heartlessness. In fighting the King of Knights Ruler's stats are boosted by two instead of one, and Ruler is one of the only beings that can resist the powers of Excalibur, because no King can expect to wield supreme executive power just because some watery tart threw a sword at them.
Come and see the violence inherent in the system!: Much like a similar Heroic Spirit who resist oppressors, any Heroic Spirit that is a Monarch will find that Ruler is not one to give in before any show of authority. The higher ranking the Servant, the stronger Ruler's defense against them. Great kings will find Ruler almost impossible to crack.
Noble Phantasm:
Who does he think he is?: Ruler's Phantasm is no mere mortal weapon, but rather the truth. Ruler knows more than anyone that all Monarchs rule off the backs of the common men and women, abusing them to maintain their self-perpetuating autocracies. Ruler's power comes in forcing those kings to see the truth that they ignored or shied away from, the truth of the lives of their subjects and how they truly saw the rule of those who claimed authority over them. Ruler can break any illusions or beliefs a King has over Kingship, stripping them all away to remind the individual that they are no different from those they claimed authority over. Even the semi-divine kings have their divinity shorn away to show them as just another individual. Even the greatest Egos are no match for the powers of Ruler. The realization of the horrors of their rule and the falseness of their claims to kingship can drive even the most majestic kings insane, or drive them to a killer rage that knows no bounds. This usually results in Ruler being oppressed so the King can reclaim their mantle of authority.
The scourge of all kings. I now want to see the greatest battle, Saber Arturia vs Dennis.
good post right here
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Alright look, for one you can't use extra to define fate stay night, no matter how you look at it, you just can't afte extra archer and camp are his backstory to fate stay night archer, reamber extra there isn't even magic. He used teh information he got form the moon cell to predict events before they occurred or something like that I beleave. While fate stay night archer was already a servent leval Mage do to his abilty to project phanatsm said, he just couldn't use UBW, he need a perfected version, so rather then go throu the long ways, he made deal with teh counter force to get teh perfected version sooner rather then latter.
im on the wrong hemisphere, so i didn't understand that post
1) Nothing Extra says happened to no name besides his contract with the Moon Cell is actually mutually exclusive with EMIYA.
2) This ignores the fact that it's still what he points out in UBW. He says he was a machine that forgot his original purpose and was executed for it, which is still in line with "oh by the way, I'm pretty terrible, it was a good thing."
3) What you believe is irrelevant.
4) Fix your goddamn English.
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It's like saying "King Arthur is a creation of Kinoko Nasu for the famous visual novel Fate/stay night."
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You can see Washington doing his stuff
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