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Berserker!Loki: A pretty cool take on the guy. You definitely succeeded in setting him apart from his Lancer and Assassin incarnations. I do have two critiques though. First, Mad Enhancement seems a bit too highly ranked. A-ranked Mad Enhancement means the Servant is basically an angry robot following their Master's orders. Given Loki can still think and speak, I'd say giving him C or even D-ranked Mad Enhancement would be enough, but keeping the caveat that it ranks up when his first NP is invoked. Speaking of said NP, EX-rank is way too high for it. You could keep the exact same effects and easily have it A or A+ ranked.
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Pretty dang OP I'd imagine. Also it'd be an ideal team-up thematically given the historical ties between Rome and Troy. Romulus would definitely merit a mention in the hypothetical relationships section.
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He'd almost certainly be able to absorb it. Milstilteinn Atganga's way of attacking is growing roots through the victim's body, which is Polydorus's default state anyways, so he'd just shrug it off. Mistilteinn Kunnandi would result in more of a conceptual clash if it hit him, since they both have an "absorption" attribute.
Since Mistilteinn is an NP while Self-Modification is only a Skill though, the former would likely win out and consume Polydorus's plant-essence, severely crippling or killing him.
I specifically mentioned Hyde because Jekyll isn't mad due to Powerless Shell. And well, being a mindless monster is kinda the opposite of robotic. Anyways, I was thinking of FGO (kill me for it if you want) Hyde, who just goes "DIEDIEDIEDIE!!!"
Biggest chances of winning at what? I presume you mean the Grail War, since you didn't specify any particular opponent.
It's actually pretty hard to quantify since you balanced out their Skillsets quite well. Assassin Loki has better Skills and a more powerful version of Mistilteinn, but lacks the trump card tree NP his Lancer incarnation has. Berserker Loki is obviously the greatest threat physically, but lacks the planning and manipulative prowess that normally makes Loki so dangerous.
Overall I'd say it's a rough tie between Assassin and Berserker, since the tree is probably too impractical to set up in most Grail Wars.
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Not bad, but Royd has said pretty much the same to what I think. The idea of chaining people with his guts deserves my approval
The Great Plague
Assassin Black Death
Class: Assassin
Alternate Classes: Ruler, Caster, Berserker
True Name: Black Death (Bubonic Plague)
Alignment: True Neutral
Armaments: Medical bag and associated, and outdated equipment
Appearance: A plague doctor
Bio: 1946, trade ships have been coming and going, from China, to Europe, caring spices, fruits, and rats infested with fleas. As these diseased pest spread from town to town, they made their way inland, and infected all in their path with the bubonic plague, what was then know, as the Black Death. For years, thousands, died daily to this horrible plague, and forever changed the world.
This great and terrible day would be recorded into the Throne of Heroes, as an Anti-Hero, representing the disease itself, and thus has taken the form of those born from the tragedy. The Plague Doctor.
Parameters
Strength: D
Endurance: B+
Agility: C
Mana: C+
Luck: B+
NP: B++
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment C: No disease may be found, only their effect on others, as such it is very difficult to find Assassin, however, being the most famous plague in history, in addition to modern technology making it easier to find diseases, this skill is demarked.
Personal Skills:
Evolution B: A skill similar to Self-Modification, it allows Assassin to alter and change his body. Unlike Self-Modification however, Assassin has no control over his changes. The occur either at random, or in response to something that happened to Assassin.
Disease A++: A unique skill that gives Assassin qualities similar to a disease. It allows Assassin to survive in conditions that even servants may not be able to, and allows Assassin to survive and heal from any wound, so long as a single fragment of his body survives, no matter how small it may be. It also gives him all the same weakness of diseases as well, such as heat, and medicine. It also allows him to infect others with minor illnesses.
Absence of Conscience EX: Being created from an unthinking, unfeeling disease, Assassin cannot be effected by skills or magic that affect the mind, no matter how strong. Even EX rank Charisma or mind altering magic, can only mildly inconvenience him.
Noble Phantasms:
The Great Plague: My True Face B+
To activate this Noble Phantasm Assassin removes his mask stating "We all Fall down." afterwards, his body transforms into a black cloud. Any whom breath in this cloud is infected with the Bubonic Plague, even servants aren't immune. This plague cannot cured by ordinary medicine, and even magic can do nothing if it is below B+ rank. Only servants with a specialty in healing may supersede such restrictions. If none infected dies, than Assassin is died, but if one victim dies, than Assassin can reform.
Invocation of Death: He Who Walks Where I Walk A+
Many of the modern depictions of death have come as a result of the Great Plague, and as such this Noble Phantasm allows Assassin to summon, the Grim Reaper. This servant has no real strength, being weaker that an E class servant, however it comes with the advantage of being intangible. This false servant cannot attack in the conventional manner, but it is capable of inflecting maladies and illness onto others, as well as draining their life.
Interaction with other servants
Other servants I've done, Mary Seacole, Artoria Pendragon Shilder, Artoria Pendragon Caster, Gilgamesh Brawler, Louis Cyr, and Fairy Tale
Last edited by DracoFay; November 23rd, 2018 at 04:44 PM.
As I promised...
True Name: Menelaus
Class: Rider
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Attribute: Man
STR: A
END: B
AGI: D
MAG: D
LCK: E
NP: A++
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore & Personality
Last edited by Zork Knight; November 23rd, 2018 at 06:54 PM.
A little surprised Menelaus doesn't have any kind of wrestling/Pankration Skill, given his feat of grappling Proteus into submission no matter what form the god took. Great sheet otherwise though.
cool sheet otherwise, though